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Just read your 5th chapter Redstormtrooper. Pretty good so far, especially with the way the plot seems to be going. Though I'm kinda sad about one thing:
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All, but Marina, of the original Squad 7 seems to have been eliminated. So no Juno, Edy, Vyse, even no Largo.
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Other than that, keep going.
... and I still can't make a spoiler thingy.
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