"Small bombs were not involved at all with the First Twilight! Think of some other weapon!"
"Okay... Big bombs were forced into Eva and Hideyoshi's mouths."
I found that hilarious. Good job.
Even so, my theories for Who Dunnit seem to have been almost entirely flawed. In fact, a lot of my theories were flawed. But at the least, I did think it suspicious that Rosa separated from the group at the beginning to "go back and get Maria." The reason why she did it was what surprised me. And, the fact that Maria is the only one she ever killed. She wasn't even an accomplice.
I actually nearly figured out what happened in Kinzo's study. I didn't know who the other person in the room was, but I knew they were there. I just thought they were using the window instead of the door, because it would be easier to trick the window seal than the door seal. It would only mean that someone has to stay inside the room and shut the window from the inside. And that's why I came up with the idea of an additional person X. Even so, since it was explained why everyone was fooled by the door seal even though the receipt couldn't have been put back in exactly the same place (Eva was the only one who knew, and she was killed because the culprit knew that), I'm quite satisfied with that. I had thought of that theory, but didn't put much thought into it.
Gohda sure was suspicious, not only because he was the only one we saw to find and observe the First Twilight corpses during the initial storytelling, but also because he was suddenly missing the keys he was given... But it turns out that he was just incompetent, and no one ever liked his cooking anyway. I usually don't feel sorry for Gohda, but lol.
My theory for the Chapel was pretty far away from the truth. I was thinking that if there were only 3 people there, and all 3 of them were dead with gunshot wounds and stabbed with stakes, then Shannon might have killed the other two in a planned lover's suicide, stabbed herself with a stake, used her own blood to write Kanon's name on the wall, and then shot herself. The idea was that if she framed Kanon, they would think that someone who no longer existed was the culprit, thereby hopefully creating a scenario where no survivor had to suspect another survivor. But that was ridiculous, I knew it was. After all, I was pretty sure that at least one other culprit was still alive, and I really shouldn't have been so quick to use the idea of a lover's suicide after reading about it in R07's interview anyway.
The thing is... Didn't you already confirm that ShKanon is being used in this game board? Because actually, this story doesn't work unless ShKanon is false. Otherwise, how did Shannon die from two gunshot wounds and the resulting blood loss and Kanon get shot in the knee and still be able to get up and leave the Chapel? If there's only one body, that's kind of... >_>;
Not to mention that Shannon left Kanon in Kinzo's study, with the keys still inside... So there shouldn't have been any way for her to get back in, unless Kanon has a body of his own.
At any rate, I was at least right that Shannon and Kanon were involved in the murders of the early twilights. But admittedly, I probably wouldn't have guessed it if I hadn't been trying to use a Yasuda culprit theory.
One of the biggest surprises for me, though, was that Rosa actually did die when Nanjo confirmed her death. That scene just screamed "she's not really dead." At least the child sedatives were hinted at, but I don't think the alcohol was... It seems it was Kinzo's alcohol, which means that someone went and prepared it in Kinzo's study first, which wasn't really hinted. But I don't really mind it, since this is a minor thing. I just wonder how Rosa didn't notice that something about the taste of that tea was weird, since I'm sure it would taste simply awful. Lol.
I thought I was wrong about my theory on how Battler died at the Eighth Twilight, but he really did fake his death just as I thought. It seems weird, but I guess it's made possible simply because Kyrie didn't see his face and was too busy crying. Though I wonder exactly how did he fake putting a stake in his leg? Speaking of which, I remember getting the idea that she might be the Detective, but it was just a passing thought, and I dismissed the idea almost immediately. I'm surprised that was really true.
I'm not sure if your Dlanor is using the Decalogue quite right. And she keeps popping up at all of the most random times. Also, Battler keeps on using theories that have already been denied in Red. I don't think these are major problems or anything though.
All in all, I can see that the difficulty is significantly higher than I had expected. And this is only EP1, so the other 3 will probably be harder. I'm going to have to really try my best...
But that's fine. I'll enjoy the challenge. Again, good work on this, I've enjoyed it a lot.