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Old 2009-03-11, 18:38   Link #242
PreSage
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Originally Posted by Evil Rick View Post
How about now?

v5


Spoiler for v4 for comparation:

Personally, I think v4 blinking is a bit more natural than v5. The closing of the eye in v5 seems a bit too slow. Maybe make v5 just a tad faster, and perhaps make the time in between the two blinks just a teeny bit longer.

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*tries*
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Agree with Bun-bun. The outlines of the mask and the character seems a bit sharp and jagged compared to the original render.

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Just one thing to add to what's already been said and that is the character seems to stand out against the background - like two pictures were overlaid. Should try to blend the girl so that it seems like she originally belonged with the background.
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