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Originally Posted by Langus
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An interesting concept, I must say. Though it did confuse me at the end. At first I thought Orihime had commited suicide after killing Uliquorria, but then I realized that she just killed him and walked away.
The language you used was quite good, though the tone of the voice did not seems quite like Uliquorria. You made him analyze human emotions like the rest of us, but isn't he the type to use cold, hard logic instead? He is quite the unfeeling type, and has no understanding of human emotions.
Sorry if I seem negative and stuff...I just don't feel like giving all the ZOMG-IT-WAS-So-AWESOME comments because I myself prefer constructive criticism.
