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Originally Posted by Chaos2Frozen
That's not what I'm worried about- it's not as noticeable in writing, but there are a lot of 'time slow down' scenes with monologues.
Those do not translate well onto screen and necessary editing must be make to make the whole thing flow better in real time.
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One could eliminate the narration, and the time it would take, and leave only Touma's thoughts, and if you really need to explain how Touma's figuring this out, you could use instant flashbacks to his previous fights to show how he's coming to that conclusion. Not a perfecto solution, but it's an option.
And I was overthinking after all, awesome. And now I'm thinking, if Touma's fist can send Oriana dancing, what could it do to the very petite Birdy?
