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Originally Posted by NorthernFallout
Good work on the "light lines", those are usually hard to get working. I would suggest you try and blend them in a bit more. Right now they stand out a bit too much, not really being "in" the source image. Experiment with their points of origin, blurring and a little more "fluffy" light. Perhaps even give them a bit more arms that go "beyond" the character, creating more depth. I see you've tried, but it might need a little more.
However, the color balance and general light setting are really nice and they look really high quality. Keep up the good stuff.
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Thank you for the tips! I will be sure to note them
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Originally Posted by ganbaru
I have to say, Krytonis, that's some very good work here, mixing your use of lighting brushs and Patchy's light dusts.
I have to say tan, like GenjiChan, I thought than the background of the second do look like a graveyard.
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Thank you ganbaru! It was my fault for choosing a background that looks so similar ._.
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Originally Posted by ahelo
First pic is kinda flat and there needs to be a bit more blending.
The second one looks really really really great. It's like combining all your styles and making it WORK.
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Thank you
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Originally Posted by rikikai
I really love the first one with all those colours! just the borders of the render are not very nice but it's not very important ^^
The second one is nice too!
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Of course it is important! D: Haha thank you
I LOVE the gift!
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Originally Posted by Kakuseiga
nice ! i love it ! <3
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Originally Posted by Silvance
Holy ****!!! You improved so much in such a short time. These are really good. Great job.
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Thank you both! Really means so much to me
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Update:
Not really a big update but I just loved the Ending song of K-ON!
Don't say "Lazy":
