[QUOTE=Anyway, I didn't have time to read it all, but I think you have one hell of a tallent to write, and your vocabulary is pretty vast as well, so your work doesn't get boring, and it's pretty rich. The storyline looks very promissing and interesting, so I'm sure you're on the right track. Keep going, I'll definetly keep up.[/QUOTE]
I agree with her. I read alot of handmade Fan-Fics And i got to say that yours has a very bright future. Hope to read more!
