Well you also gained my respect, Ayu-san
katiemirmo: 8.4/10...I agree with ganbaru, you should sharpen the focal more...and is it me, or does it looks like you made a background and slapped the render on it? o.o''....I suggest you integrate the render just a little bit more
and you should try to make the glowing spots really glow
...damn..I am doing a lot of criticizing today
