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Old 2012-08-05, 08:18   Link #65
Orange Duke
オレンジ色の王
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Join Date: Jul 2012
Age: 20
/facepalm

All you've done is repeat what you said in your last post. Not only that, but you've completely ignored our advice for you a few posts back and on top of that, made him even more OP by saying he is able to fight a king.

If you really want to learn how to write better characters, you need to start to listen to our advice properly and really deconstruct your characters and see what is wrong with them.
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