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Originally Posted by Wild Goose
@Keroko: Actually regards the Hotblooded Aniki and Tsundere Imouto, not sure where to go with them.
Probably just use it as chapter titles...
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Nonsense! The delicious crack appeals you! Search your feelings, you know it is true!
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Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon
I clean forgot that Index was being "chased" by Necessarius, that they have entered Academy City and both are enough to have Belkaneus send agents into the city. It's better to start involvement then, that Necessarius seems to be after a Lost Logia called Index, but that Index turns out to be a person. So they stand down, but don't withdraw from the city. As events progress, Anita suddenly arrests Touma then lets him go, then the rest of the arc happens.
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Yes, that works a lot better. With Index background, the confusion is understandable.
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Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon
The Tokiha family's Black Library has many weird books cataloguing the strangest things, and this girl had them for bedtime stories. I have to admit, I've cast Anita as the obligatory know-it-all top-of-the-class girl who serves as an Eureka!-type plot device in all my fics, and this is just the latest occurance. So much so that if you got a question about anything, ask Anita first. It might save you a trip to the Infinite Library.  |
Yes, but... wouldn't it be better for Anita to decide that his ability is a natural form of Rule Breaker? So far the series seems to be suggesting that Touma's Imagine Breaker is the first of its kind, so having Anita mysteriously know about it is awkward.
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Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon
It's a really long story spanning 6 years of development on Nanoverse side (its a side quest across 3 fics, and some characters have been killed in the process!), but bottomline is, by MC 0073 Anita and the Ultimarines, Kha, Artei, Arisa and other members of der Kleriker's vigilante corp, and Carym know that Jail exists and that he is the Bureau's pet. However, it is inconclusive at best, and they have no idea where he is.
As such, they are still building their case from their end by MC 0073. They don't even breathe a word to the Aces lest they become bigger target boards than they already are. This fits into the scheme of things from the Nanohaverse side, but it is not needed for the Toumaverse side, which is a lot simpler and more fun since they don't need to know everything. A new villain seems to be after Index, but the actual target will astound everyone!
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M'okay, passable.
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Originally Posted by MeisterBabylon
Stop making me giveaway plot elements! Your turning the thread into a Khegami Magazine!!! >_<
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And I will make you reveal
everything until I get a satisfactory explanation. >:3
That, or actually write it. That way you'll get less dissection (isn't that right, ATC?
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