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Originally Posted by Wild Goose
....Niiiice. I like.
Only quibble is that dialogue seems a bit stilted, most obviously with Coach's wingman. I'm guessing he's not a native speaker of English, hence he's taking more pains with the language?
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Language is not his strong suit.
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Originally Posted by MrTerrorist
Very good Tempy. Keep up the good work.
Meanwhile, i'm still working on my fanfic idea. Needs more brainstorming.
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Thank ye kindly.
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Originally Posted by wellis
Tempy, are your mercenaries original or is this some sort of crossover?
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They are original characters, as is the Stray Dogs squadron.