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Old 2011-07-25, 10:38   Link #23374
Renall
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You wouldn't have to change culprits. And yes, you'd have to rewrite some things. That doesn't mean that something that's in a book is necessary. Nor does it mean the book wouldn't be better without it.

Also now is probably a bad time to mention that Jessica is another of the characters I'd remove.
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Redaction of the Golden Witch
I submit that a murder was committed in 1996.
This murder was a "copycat" crime inspired by our tales of 1986.
This story is a redacted confession.

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