Hey that's not bad nova zeal! Not bad at all.
It's been a while since anyone else did some Kairin art so I wanted to thank you for that.
I really like how well done the hair and face are. And I think you're being too hard on yourself for the kimono. It looks fine if you ask me. The only thing that I would say is that the outermost layer looks as if it's going to fall off.
I hope that you'll color this someday and if not, then I hope you'll honour us with more Kairin art.