2012-01-11, 06:38
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~`Seito Kaichō`~
Join Date: Sep 2011
Location: ~`Afterlife`~
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I'm 75% complete in chapter 5, and it's 4.5k words now ._.
Now I'm really out of ideas.
Anyone could help me revise this thing XD
Spoiler for EiR:
(Normal POV)
Laura quickly dived in the middle and released a chronofield that made everyone stop their movements.
“Guys, finish them off!” Laura shouted as she was holding the field as long as she can.
“Take them down!” Ichika also shouted with Aden.
But before everything else, all of them we’re pushed back again and slammed to the wall.
“GWAAAAAAHHHHHH!”
“Nice plan you have there, but controlling time doesn’t work in this place.” Athana said as she floats above.
“Guys, are you alright?” Ichika asked his friends that were totally slammed to the wall; he’s the only one that
didn’t get an impact.
“Sort of. Ahm.” Tatenashi replied as she stood up. “I don’t think we can do this anymore.”
Ichika looked around his friends. All of them are bruised and there armors were dented already, while the enemy didn’t
get even a scratch.
“Ichika-san~, you’re our only hope now. We can only give you a little support.” Cecilia said to him.
“Don’t worry, 3 of them will be out of this in a moment. Just look at them”
“Huh? What are you saying?” Rin asked in confusion.
Ichika smirked and suddenly 3 of their enemies undeployed there IS.
“What the…” One of the Blood Crusade member said as her IS suddenly undeployed.
“Ichika, don’t tell me you used your…” Aden stopped.
“Can’t be helped.”
“But, you do already know the side effects once you did that.” Aden continued.
“Yeah I know it. But I already know a solution for it.”
“What’re you talking about guys?” Houki asked in confusion with the conversation of the two guys.
“Ichika used his One-Off Ancestral ability of Kaluva, the Wide Area Agony Rune. This rune ability corrupts the IS
of his opponents, draining its shield energy and shuts it down.” Aden explained. “Houki-san, can you use your
[Kenran Butou] for us?”
“Errmm, I’ll try.”
“Help others, don’t worry about us.” Aden said.
Later, Athana went forward to us and saying:
“Are you people ready for your death?”
“Not a chance in hell.” Ichika replied to her smirking and went in front of her.
“You’re a tough guy, Ichika-kun. So accept our special gift to you and your friends.” She said and backed off to
her companions.
Ichika released [Yukihira Nigata] and prepared for incoming attack.
“A gift, well thank you for that” Ichika smiled.
“Don’t do this Ichika.” Houki pleased.
“Ichika, we can still go back…” Rin said.
“Ichika…” Charlotte murmured.
“Don’t worry guys. I still have plans for me and Charlotte” Ichika looked back to them and smiled.
“Say your prayers, Orimura Ichika.” Athana said and fired multiple chasing missiles.
“Think back first.” Ichika said as he started and kept on dodging the missiles.
“You won’t be able to hold it for long.” Athana said as she fired a laser towards him.
“Oh shit!”
*BOOM **BOOM **BOOM **BOOM **BOOM *
“ICHIKAAAAAAAAAA!” Charlotte shouted with tears on her eyes.
“Being a hero is a stupidity.” Athana remarked.
“You…” Aden tightened his grip with his spear.
“What will you people do now?” she asked again.
“…”
“The battle still continues” a familiar voice hissed out.
The huge smoke disappeared and Ichika is floating in mid-air, but his suit changed.
“Fitting complete” a voice from his suit spoke. “Third shift success”
“About time…” Ichika murmured as he held [Yukihira Nigata] tightly.
Ichika suddenly disappeared and appeared again in one of the Blood Crusade and quickly hit it hard and made
it undeploy her IS.
“Wha..~”
“Yeah!” Ichika said and did the same thing to the others with a huge smirk in his face.
(Tatenashi’s group status)
“Woah, that was a sudden change of personality.” Tatenashi said as she saw what Ichika’s doing.
“I think that was one of the side-effects of Ichika’s One-off Ancestral Ability.” Aden said. “One-off Ancestral
Abilities really changes one’s personality instantly, makes the person reveal his true self. But it’s only temporary
as long as he himself would be able to stay on his senses.”
“I see, wait, how you knew everything about this?” Rin asked him.
Would greatly appreciate if anyone can xD
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