Ok, I just uploaded it again! (THIS time on Live Video, so it won't be taken down like the LAST time!) Sorry for taking so long to do this but I had a LOT of stuff going on! The link to it is here:
http://www.livevideo.com/video/C59F5...m_tkc=13111405
So check it out (you CAN now because of the fact that it won't be TAKEN DOWN like the other one was) and just let me know, did you like it? And did I improve from the others? And how would you rate it in terms of ALL my videos I did?