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Old 2011-11-12, 03:41   Link #7440
agetreme
Just another Idiot
 
 
Join Date: Sep 2009
Location: Delusion world
For me, a Sue that is done right is not really a Sue at all. Life is unfair and they just happen to get the best straw.

A little self-fulfillment isn't bad, the problem is it is extremely bad when done in excessive.

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A little late but....

Somehow, the latest chapter of Athéna Bouclier, make me feel that Inami is either a Sue(the bad one) or very near the Sue limit...

May be it's due to the out-of-body experience during the Sliver gospel and the fact that Tabane and Ichika is downplayed during the fic... in favor of Inami pwning.

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Current status of fic:
Still trying to determine the number of males pilot in the fic, trying to cut down the number as much as possible.

Current number: 4 (excluding Ichika).

Concept of Akito : (might combine him with Ichika or Cipher)
Balant liar
Deadpan snarker
Epic fail piloting
Taking lots of punishment in the fic....(both in-person and in IS)
Delayed First Shift resulting in more powerful 1st shift IS (Cue lots of moment of awesome when everything fall into place...literally)

Concept of Cipher:
Family guy?
Link to the world outside (he read the news and pay attention)
Foil to Ichika
The ultimate counter-Ichika pilot
present different idea and morality to Ichika
A good character in gray area (99% Hero and 1% Anti-hero)
Putting Family first, Friend second, himself third and the world fourth.

Concept of Alex:
Gender Bender
Rich person
Born with golden spoon (No discrimination compared to other male)
Deliberately Sue

Concept of Pigsy (Might be the first to be elimiated but he is a fun character to have...):
Pervert
Otaku
NOT a pilot, never will be.
For fun character that does not contribute to the plot what-so-ever.
and most importantly pervert.
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