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2008-09-29, 17:08
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So uh, for the Lyrical Waha doujin, my mates and I are having trouble re-wording page sixteen....
Spoiler
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Possible slight spoiler 'cause Rein's too cute.
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リインの せいで 遅れた 足の 回復を お手伝いしたい
Help in the rehabilitation/recovery of her legs that Rein delayed
How should we re-phrase it so it doesn't sound so.... literal? Or at least make it not sound so awkward without having to type out a paragraph.
The weird thing is she's talking to the book, but just expressing her feelings. The translation makes it sound like she's making a request to the book.
Or something. I don't think most people would notice/care/take it too seriously, but eh.
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Making up for the delay in the doujin because English is not my forte....
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