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Old 2007-07-11, 00:58   Link #2001
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A joke I started...

Spoiler:

...........@_@!

WEll for my story it's.....

Spoiler for Elio's mask in 6th D :P:


[Edit]: OMG, Nightengale, grats on the 2,000th post!
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Old 2007-07-11, 01:03   Link #2002
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Satashi-sama... You haven't happened to have watched Transformers now would you?
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Old 2007-07-11, 01:12   Link #2003
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Satashi-sama... You haven't happened to have watched Transformers now would you?
First showing opening day :P

Also watching the AVI right now * munches popcorn*
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Old 2007-07-11, 01:51   Link #2004
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First showing opening day :P

Also watching the AVI right now * munches popcorn*
That's just so cute

Excellent "Vivio's high school days" Satashi-san You must make this a fic It's so funny I'd laugh if I wasn't in so much trouble T_T
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Old 2007-07-11, 02:14   Link #2005
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@ Satashi: those short stories were brilliant! I had a good dose of laughter reading them.

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Diary of a Windtalker
Status: Charter 5, Part II

Progress: 60%
Note: see preview below.

Spoiler for length:


What do you think?

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The Whistling Gale
Lyrical of Time

Status: Charter 2
Progress: 35%
Note: just resumed working on it after 2-month hiatus. Nothing much is going to be featured in the chapter, with the exception of Yuuno as the first half of the chapter's main focus. Then the story switches to Alexandra's first day of training at the bureau as a recruit.
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Old 2007-07-11, 02:53   Link #2006
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Geeze go out for a bit (nothing like a midnight movie showing) and miss commenting on the cool Vivio fic getting going. Really great stuff. Gotta feel for Vivio having cool Mom's but also having Mom's that could vaporize any potential boyfriends...gotta be rough.

But good on Erio, seems like things are working out just fine there .
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Old 2007-07-11, 03:10   Link #2007
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Oh man I wanted to a teenage Vivio fic...oh well i guess I switch over to Vivio fic plan B.
I said that I'd do it so I did it...and if anyone thinks it's bad. I'll stop it right now and try rework it.

Spoiler for For Magical Girl Lyrical Vivio Part 1:


To Be Continued...
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Old 2007-07-11, 04:02   Link #2008
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...........@_@!

WEll for my story it's.....

Spoiler for Elio's mask in 6th D :P:


[Edit]: OMG, Nightengale, grats on the 2,000th post!
Shouldn't it be....
Spoiler for Erio's fetish:


Congratulations on the 2k get, Nightengale!


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I said that I'd do it so I did it...and if anyone thinks it's bad. I'll stop it right now and try rework it.

Spoiler for For Magical Girl Lyrical Vivio Part 1:


To Be Continued...
Interesting. Your using the Vivio image in your avatar and sig as a reference, right? So far, the story is fine, the characters are not being out of character regarding Vivio, and the next part is definitely a must see.

The grammar needs some work, but it's really nothing to worry about much because it can easily be fixed. Please continue.
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Old 2007-07-11, 05:09   Link #2009
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Dark Wing, good story idea. But I see a number of punctuation, grammatical and typo errors. If you're going to develop this further, please be more careful.
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Old 2007-07-11, 06:35   Link #2010
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Looks impressive, and I like the idea that this could turn into a full table top.

In the OC thread, my OC, Kha Alexei Testarossa, is the last of the Holy Velka Imperium's "Light of Velka", which is the equivalent of the Imperium's Ordo Maelleus. I can contribute him to be a famous "Brother-Captain" in Haruhi's Grey Knights, if she has them.

And not just him; there are several characters that I've created or incorporated using the Imperial Guard "rojak" model, and those can fit into your storyline lock stock and barrel too! What do ya think?
Sure, I have not yet finalized the Legions involved in this project, but the Grey Knights have a high chance of being among them. I would also be willing to accept any character that fits into the storyline.
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Old 2007-07-11, 08:50   Link #2011
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Spoiler for If Vivio was in high school......:


To be continued....
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Spoiler for Vivio: High school Days part 2:
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Spoiler for Vivio: High School days part 3:

Where do you come up with these story lines...*holds up jealous sign*

Getting rejected over Fate....ow that must hurt.

Waitress....happen to have a picture handy....

Lol so it's 'do as i say' not 'do as i did' in the family....
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Old 2007-07-11, 09:07   Link #2012
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Sure, I have not yet finalized the Legions involved in this project, but the Grey Knights have a high chance of being among them. I would also be willing to accept any character that fits into the storyline.
Great! Now to get to work on another Bluecheesium bomb... Liingo! Help me! And does Darco do WH40K too?
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Old 2007-07-11, 09:30   Link #2013
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Great! Now to get to work on another Bluecheesium bomb... Liingo! Help me! And does Darco do WH40K too?
Help you with what.... I've already done my 40k/nanoha crossover with Akilae

I just have to work on his backstory to explain why Akilae is there now.

I don't think so.
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Old 2007-07-11, 11:09   Link #2014
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CrosyS has been updated! Track 7 at 50%, and First Lightning, the prequel coming soon!
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Old 2007-07-11, 11:22   Link #2015
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I think we could use a master database for the fics on this discussion, like the one on the OC discussion. Instead of directly linking to each fic, I propose that the database will link to a post maintained by an author here that lists their fics on this discussion. That way, the maintainer of the master databse only needs to add new authors, the authors themselves will update their own listings. I believe this will be faster and more flexible than the master database on the OC discussion. Thoughts?
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Old 2007-07-11, 12:52   Link #2016
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@Dark Wing oh noes you have the same siggy as me D: (gonna read ficcy in a few hours, getting ready to go watch Harry Potter)

@Liingo: Hehe, Vivio as a waitress is a spiffy mental image isn't it? As for where I get the ideas.....this one came out of the blue while while watching Transformers the movie lol! The main guy is kinda a dork so it jsut randomly hit me, "What would Vivio be like in high school?" and I pictured her as the kinda very pretty outcast but still somehow popular ( hence cheerleader but hanging out with the 'common' group of people isntead of the popular bratty snobs :P )

@FlareKnight: Yeah, poor Vivio Nanoha really wouldn't hesitate to make that fact known and poor Fate just wants to help but ends up embarrassing her

@USB-chan new stuff! I'll read as soon as I'm back from movie theature!

Vivio:High school days part 4:
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Old 2007-07-11, 13:07   Link #2017
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as usual satashi writes out stuff that 1. is gorgeous 2. delicious to read 3. cracks people up.

Satashi - when are you going to like make the shorts here on a page somewhere? maybe in text form so we can leech it off?
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Old 2007-07-11, 13:43   Link #2018
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Dark Wing, good story idea. But I see a number of punctuation, grammatical and typo errors. If you're going to develop this further, please be more careful.
Well in my defense I was still half sleep with I started writing this so I kind of figured I would miss a few errors. It also would seem that Microsoft Word is the best program for checking spelling or grammar errors.

Anyway your I'm going to have to look over all my mistakes before I can continue any further.

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oh noes you have the same siggy as me D: (gonna read ficcy in a few hours, getting ready to go watch Harry Potter)
Don't worry this is only a temp sig my Vivio turned out to be two big so I was forced to change it. I'll switch over to my new one when it's ready.
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Old 2007-07-11, 16:48   Link #2019
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as usual satashi writes out stuff that 1. is gorgeous 2. delicious to read 3. cracks people up.

Satashi - when are you going to like make the shorts here on a page somewhere? maybe in text form so we can leech it off?
I post them all under "SNL a digital short" on fanfiction.net. I'm just lazy updating it hehe

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Well in my defense I was still half sleep with I started writing this so I kind of figured I would miss a few errors. It also would seem that Microsoft Word is the best program for checking spelling or grammar errors.

Anyway your I'm going to have to look over all my mistakes before I can continue any further.

Don't worry this is only a temp sig my Vivio turned out to be two big so I was forced to change it. I'll switch over to my new one when it's ready.
Here's some advice from someone who makes a TON of spelling erros: Use Open Office, you can download it for free from fanfiction.net . Unlike Microsoft word, you can have multiple spell corrections for a single word. AKA, you can have Nanha,Nanaha,Nanoa, and the likes all auto correct to "Nanoha", while Microsoft word will only allow one of them to do it. So once you set it to auto correct your common typos you won't have to spellcheck but like 1 minute before it's ready to go. It doens't have a grammar check tho >.<

And I was kidding about your siggy :P tho, the Vivio one kicks major butt

[Edit] @USB-chan: Funny Chasing a kitty always = funny

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Old 2007-07-11, 17:02   Link #2020
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I write all my fanfiction in Wordpad xD
It just tends to have grammer errors and I just Firefox for spell checking. XD
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