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Old 2008-01-17, 13:07   Link #261
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@Kourin: Thanks for all the input

I'm writing Diary entries right now during my lunch break. Hopefully I will be able to proof and update my fic before too late tonight.

edit: I win!

edit2: Fate is winning The favorite character poll*shock!*. Also, diary entries are done. there are only three but they're long and offer deeper inputs on what's going on. I may add short ones as I proofread but not sure.

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Old 2008-01-17, 13:58   Link #262
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Vote for your fave character in SbtB
http://snappoll.com/poll/245211.php
I love Precia but I vote Fate (sorry, it's by far, my favorite character XD)

I'm waiting for the next chapter *___* but I read it (only) Tomorrow morning T.T
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Old 2008-01-17, 20:42   Link #263
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Aww. Still the only one to vote Arisa...
We don't see enough of her!
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Old 2008-01-17, 21:09   Link #264
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Saved by the Bell VII

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/7/

Wow, this one was long, pushing 10,000 words. I hope that makes up for the 3 day delay in updating >.< This chapter dedicated to Mercurian Angel ^^
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Old 2008-01-17, 21:22   Link #265
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Saved by the Bell VII

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/7/

Wow, this one was long, pushing 10,000 words. I hope that makes up for the 3 day delay in updating >.< This chapter dedicated to Mercurian Angel ^^
Almost 10,000 words...? That's a bunch of awesome. I'm glad to see you're enjoying it enough to write that much for this chapter.
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Old 2008-01-17, 21:39   Link #266
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My stories are kind of like a flash in the pan. Big when they hit and then they kinda fade away. Now the summer blockbusters. Oh man, those are the ones people just keep talking about
Well, yes and no.

Most people can name the well-loved summer movies...but it's kinda hard to name others...

Example: Most people from summer '07 remember that the last PotC movie came out then, but how many remember the Ghost Rider movie?


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I think "Nyan" is the correct kitty sound. but "Nya" is the more commonly used one.

I thought it was a meow too...
It is - but just "Nya" makes for better usage when annoyed:

Nyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

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[edit]: Yes, I play. I have a level 70 Grand Marshal rogue (also rival, challenger, justicar, gladiator) and my current character is a level 70 restro shaman. World of Warcraft = my life lol
Sorry, should have been more specific: Do you play RO?

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Precia...Hooooboy. Can't deny that one at all XD! She's too perky, too lively, too out spoken, and a lot of other "too" 's as well lol. I'll have to say here that I.... well, I used "author's privileges in an Alternate Universe" to shape her up. How did I get her personality? My aunt hahaha. My aunt is just like Precia in this story. I think Fate really needs a good mother and since I had the chance.... I'm making up for all those bad things I wrote about Fate with this story XD! (actually no, I'm embarrassing 10 years off Fate's life )
Do keep in mind what Alicia said during A's:

"She was too kind...and that was why she broke..."

Or something like that...
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Old 2008-01-17, 22:48   Link #267
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Saved by the Bell VII

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/7/

Wow, this one was long, pushing 10,000 words. I hope that makes up for the 3 day delay in updating >.< This chapter dedicated to Mercurian Angel ^^
Whew, finished reading. The length was great! Now you have me spoiled. I personally liked their phone call conversation, and the other random day by day events put in. It makes it flow nicely, and adds more detail to their lives.

Spoiler for embarrassing!:


I also love the details you add to things. Nanoha carving little items that reflect on their relationship into the cake was cute. The diary entries were also full of win again.
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Old 2008-01-17, 23:00   Link #268
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Whew, finished reading. The length was great! Now you have me spoiled. I personally liked their phone call conversation, and the other random day by day events put in. It makes it flow nicely, and adds more detail to their lives.

Spoiler for embarrassing!:


I also love the details you add to things. Nanoha carving little items that reflect on their relationship into the cake was cute. The diary entries were also full of win again.
XD thank you. The phone call was something I was worried about, since it was just filler. I left it in because I liked it. I was just worried if people would get bored reading it or not >.<
Spoiler for Embarrassing x2:
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Old 2008-01-17, 23:13   Link #269
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XD thank you. The phone call was something I was worried about, since it was just filler. I left it in because I liked it. I was just worried if people would get bored reading it or not >.<
Spoiler for Embarrassing x2:
Well, it was enjoyable filler.

My favorite part was probably when:

Spoiler for Top secret, but not really:
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Old 2008-01-17, 23:38   Link #270
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@ Reiji Tabibito: Satashi plays World of Warcraft! It even says so in the quote LOL

@ Satashi: Wow...that's all I can say...wow...
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Old 2008-01-17, 23:42   Link #271
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@Riddly: I'm happy you liked it so much ^_^ I was worried about the chapter as a whole but now I'm really happy myself ^^

@ghazghkull: you liked it that much? @_@ *flattered*

@Reiji Tabibito: I also played RO for a long time. on the official server I had an 87 Monk and a 93 Priestess. Co-founder of "Guardians of POING" guild, we sold our services to protect a castle during WoE for 1 mil Zenny :3

*yawns* well, time to sleep. I'll start on chapter VIII tomorrow. Saturday I plan on updating archives with more people from the OC thread. Going to start sending PMs shortly.

I've experiments to run, there is research to be done, on Fate's Diary entries. XD XD
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Old 2008-01-18, 00:03   Link #272
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Saved by the Bell VII

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/7/

Wow, this one was long, pushing 10,000 words. I hope that makes up for the 3 day delay in updating >.< This chapter dedicated to Mercurian Angel ^^
You know this already, but
*squeeeeee*
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Old 2008-01-18, 04:13   Link #273
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@ghazghkull: you liked it that much? @_@ *flattered*
Course I liked it. Utterly fluffy it was. Plus, now it's a turning point in Nanoha's and Fate's relationship, in the sense that because Nanoha's going to be busier, now with tennis team, and her new job, they don't get to hang around as much, which leaves Nanoha opened to be approached by a guy who might have a thing for her and make his move, unaware there's someone else who's also vying for her heart.

So yeah, I like it. This gives Fate the more reason to fight for Nanoha's heart ^^ It's adds a really nice flair and flavour to it, wouldn't you agree?

Cheers ^^ Ja ne
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Old 2008-01-18, 04:46   Link #274
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Saved by the Bell VII

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/7/

Wow, this one was long, pushing 10,000 words. I hope that makes up for the 3 day delay in updating >.< This chapter dedicated to Mercurian Angel ^^
Another great chapter ^^ the relationship between Nanoha and Fate become really interesting.
And "The talk" with Precia ... XD! No comment. XD!
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Old 2008-01-18, 05:24   Link #275
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ah Satashi, SBtB is made of wonders and win! I shouldn't be getting nose bleeds from a pg13 rated fanfic, this Isn't natural.
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Old 2008-01-18, 08:37   Link #276
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Course I liked it. Utterly fluffy it was. Plus, now it's a turning point in Nanoha's and Fate's relationship, in the sense that because Nanoha's going to be busier, now with tennis team, and her new job, they don't get to hang around as much, which leaves Nanoha opened to be approached by a guy who might have a thing for her and make his move, unaware there's someone else who's also vying for her heart.

So yeah, I like it. This gives Fate the more reason to fight for Nanoha's heart ^^ It's adds a really nice flair and flavour to it, wouldn't you agree?

Cheers ^^ Ja ne
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Another great chapter ^^ the relationship between Nanoha and Fate become really interesting.
And "The talk" with Precia ... XD! No comment. XD!
XD poor Fate ^^ she can never win can she?

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ah Satashi, SBtB is made of wonders and win! I shouldn't be getting nose bleeds from a pg13 rated fanfic, this Isn't natural.
It's rated "T" for teen! as in.....17? @_@ bad nosebleeds! bad!

[edit]: Wow, Fate is leading fave character with a staggering 18 votes! In second place is Precia with........3? @_@
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Old 2008-01-18, 10:51   Link #277
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Here to update little bit.

Fic nearing completition. 2 chapters and epilogue till finish. Expecting to be finished at 90k words. But that doesn't include the fact that I want to rewrite the beginning of the story.

This is my first time writing seriously something so after 70k words you can expect anyone to improve at some level, I will just transfer everything learned to the beginning too.

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Saved by the Bell VII

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/7/

Wow, this one was long, pushing 10,000 words. I hope that makes up for the 3 day delay in updating >.< This chapter dedicated to Mercurian Angel ^^
I must have missed something in basic child education First time hearing about a talk like that I had no idea what talk this was about before I actually read the fic

Well I've been pretty careful


Spoiler for Sploilerz:
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Old 2008-01-18, 11:13   Link #278
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Here to update little bit.

Fic nearing completition. 2 chapters and epilogue till finish. Expecting to be finished at 90k words. But that doesn't include the fact that I want to rewrite the beginning of the story.

This is my first time writing seriously something so after 70k words you can expect anyone to improve at some level, I will just transfer everything learned to the beginning too.

I must have missed something in basic child education First time hearing about a talk like that I had no idea what talk this was about before I actually read the fic

Well I've been pretty careful


Spoiler for Sploilerz:
Definetly the talk is every teen's nightmare You're lucky you never had to go through it. I was submitted to it when I was 14 >.< Poor Nanoha, though, he talk was "elightening" , which means she learned things lol. The question that she asked her mom was originally in the story but I took it out at the last moment XP
Spoiler for spoilerz answered:
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Old 2008-01-18, 11:31   Link #279
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I laughed... this type of dialouge is why I like this story. Also, Happy Fate is fun, Great story, and a nic e counter to the Nanoha centric nature of the last few stories
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Old 2008-01-18, 11:44   Link #280
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Har. I never got "the talk". *Wins*
Well today is my day to plan out my weekend of writing... Time to found like some white sticker or something or white-out and write 'Arc-en-Ciel' on my journal... I'd like to include 'Ashes unto Dust' but I dunno how to write that in katakana.
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