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Old 2008-01-18, 19:05   Link #301
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I don't mind the so much "I liked it" one liners, those are good too. I mean the people who just rant and rant and rant about..nothing. here's an example. I wrote a story about a girl teaching a guy how to kiss. and this is the review I got
Spoiler for this is just sad:


...WTF!? and it's a signed review so I can't get it taken down.

but anyway, as to Nanoha ones. This one really bothers me. (a review on latest SbtB chapter
Spoiler for .....:


I just hate being talked to like I'm in some military camp (every review is like that). And the first review I got from him I thought "hey a military guy?" So I checked his profile and it seems to be a young teen who likes First person shooters. I messaged him and asked not to be given reviews like that ( my dad is a retired marine. ) because it kinda offended me. Well, he's still going strong. I'm happy he likes my stories, I really am... but man, can he just be a little better on respecting my wishes or offering some advice that doesn't sound like a drill sergeant?


And no, the people here are great. Specially you riddly ^^


WHAT THE ING HELL WAS THAT ?!!! Good lord that guy needs to know when he's crossed the line! Good lord!

As for military camp, I'd be wondering wth if he was talking to me like he's my drill sergeant. I know how you feel somewhat, since I'm a retired Air Cadet, and was Drill Team Commander/Sergeant for a couple years.

In terms of reviews, thats why I now adopt a policy of not saying anything, unless I have something worth saying, or it was an extremely well down chapter. Then I'll start flapping my fingers XD

P.S. WOOT! PAGE CLAIM 2!! xD
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Old 2008-01-18, 19:42   Link #302
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Gonna start chapter 8. Preview incoming soon-ish
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Old 2008-01-18, 20:11   Link #303
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Gonna start chapter 8. Preview incoming soon-ish
Yeah! and while we're waiting, i think i'll go to sleep now... it's been about 24 hours since i woke up...

...but atleast i have something to look forward to when i wake up
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Old 2008-01-18, 20:16   Link #304
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Yeah! and while we're waiting, i think i'll go to sleep now... it's been about 24 hours since i woke up...

...but atleast i have something to look forward to when i wake up
dude...24 hours?!! I'm not sure even I can stay up that long....
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Old 2008-01-18, 21:01   Link #305
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24 hrs. nah that's nothing i once did a triple all nighter

... might explain me being on the line of insanity hmmm

anyway i'm so glad it's finals time for me because that means i can finally progress on my fic. Oc profile and fic summary will be posted when second chapter is done.

@Satashi

anyway i want to say that i love SbtB so far and i apologize for not leaving a review. However i have long adopted not reviewing unless i have constructive criticism and besides typos i'm left dry when i read this. Well at least i'm not one of the annoying reviewers you have.
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Old 2008-01-18, 21:02   Link #306
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dude...24 hours?!! I'm not sure even I can stay up that long....
I've stayed up about......36 hours before. It sucked. Badly. I don't reccomend it to anyone lol.

Oh, and sorry. I got ninjad to ehal for Gruul's, Mag, AND Karazhan tonight >< Marathon run.*turns on vent, cracks a mountain dew, and cheers* let's do it!
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Old 2008-01-18, 21:21   Link #307
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I've stayed up about......36 hours before. It sucked. Badly. I don't reccomend it to anyone lol.

Oh, and sorry. I got ninjad to ehal for Gruul's, Mag, AND Karazhan tonight >< Marathon run.*turns on vent, cracks a mountain dew, and cheers* let's do it!
Sounds like you're gonna hit 48 hrs now. Join the club!

Now if only I have the time to read that dating sim being run nicely here (got lots of work to do and raids to attend), I'd love to join in... T_T

And apologies to the thread for what has happened, we have our own radicals and moderates, and that was just the rads... ^^;
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Old 2008-01-19, 00:48   Link #308
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Sounds like you're gonna hit 48 hrs now. Join the club!

Now if only I have the time to read that dating sim being run nicely here (got lots of work to do and raids to attend), I'd love to join in... T_T

And apologies to the thread for what has happened, we have our own radicals and moderates, and that was just the rads... ^^;
ah crap./....I'll update Lyrical days tomorrow
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Old 2008-01-19, 14:02   Link #309
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Fan art completed
Spoiler for Rubik's Cube, lingerie NSFW:
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Old 2008-01-19, 14:11   Link #310
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Fan art completed
Spoiler for Rubik's Cube, lingerie NSFW:
Double-post =3, and let me say I really like that pic. It makes SbtB seem more.... what word am I looking for...? Something good, I know that much....
*walks off, thinking.*


EDIT:

*snap*
I got it! It makes it seem more official. Like, MORE than a fanfic. And that makes it all the more enjoyable to read, in my book. =3
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Old 2008-01-19, 15:05   Link #311
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Double-post =3, and let me say I really like that pic. It makes SbtB seem more.... what word am I looking for...? Something good, I know that much....
*walks off, thinking.*


EDIT:

*snap*
I got it! It makes it seem more official. Like, MORE than a fanfic. And that makes it all the more enjoyable to read, in my book. =3
Wait till you see Angel's art

edit: Here's a long teaser for you, just because
Spoiler for SbtB VIII:

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Old 2008-01-19, 17:08   Link #312
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Wait till you see Angel's art

edit: Here's a long teaser for you, just because
Spoiler for SbtB VIII:
I do this "Ear-to-Ear" grin WAY to often when reading SbtB...
..
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Can't wait!
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Old 2008-01-19, 17:19   Link #313
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Wait till you see Angel's art

edit: Here's a long teaser for you, just because
Spoiler for SbtB VIII:
*Faints from excitement*

...........

*Wakes up a few minutes later*

Oh crap my paint pots were left opened! At least I cleaned my brushes before I looked at this...

Either way, good update, can't wait to see the whole chapter.

P.S. Oh and before I forget, I do like how you portrayed Nanoha in this particular scene. Not only you managed to capture the purity of her character (albeit somewhat unbelievable for someone in the military during StrikerS due to her lack of a kill record), you also showed us that she's actually HUMAN!!! That's the one thing that always bothered me during StrikerS. She didn't seem like a person, rather just some mass of really powerful energy in human form.

Anyways, keep up the good work. You've really portrayed Nanoha really well ^^
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Old 2008-01-19, 20:11   Link #314
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Wait till you see Angel's art

edit: Here's a long teaser for you, just because
Spoiler for SbtB VIII:
The character interactions were nice. (Nanoha climbing all those flights of stairs due to her fear was cute.) Precia is such a great mother figure in your story. It makes me somewhat sad to look back on the actual series, and see what a broken mess she is.
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Old 2008-01-19, 21:13   Link #315
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I do this "Ear-to-Ear" grin WAY to often when reading SbtB...
..
...
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Can't wait!
Get ready to smile more, this chapter is made of Fluff and Waff.

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P.S. Oh and before I forget, I do like how you portrayed Nanoha in this particular scene. Not only you managed to capture the purity of her character (albeit somewhat unbelievable for someone in the military during StrikerS due to her lack of a kill record), you also showed us that she's actually HUMAN!!! That's the one thing that always bothered me during StrikerS. She didn't seem like a person, rather just some mass of really powerful energy in human form.

Anyways, keep up the good work. You've really portrayed Nanoha really well ^^
Thanks, I was a little worried that all the AU going on, she may have lost touch with her original self. I've built up enough that I can start having her do things in this universe and not be "OOC" but I'm glad that Nanoha is still Nanoha.

It's a bad fear I have of making the girls seem TOO out of it.

Also, expect more school in upcoming chapters as well. as this is, after all, Saved by the bell lol

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The character interactions were nice. (Nanoha climbing all those flights of stairs due to her fear was cute.) Precia is such a great mother figure in your story. It makes me somewhat sad to look back on the actual series, and see what a broken mess she is.
I really like Precia, and it appears as if others do as well. I wonder if this will start a Precia movement like the Hayate/Yuuno thing so long ago oh man, people are going to stone me if I keep feeding you guys crack.

And Nanoha's fear is cute but I feel bad for her >.< She's obviously really bad if she would climb so many flights of stairs to avoid a 30 second elevator trip.
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Get ready to smile more, this chapter is made of Fluff and Waff.
Expectations Set, Taichou! Awaiting Product!
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Old 2008-01-19, 22:28   Link #317
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Expectations Set, Taichou! Awaiting Product!
Have an ultraaaaa spoiiiiiilllllleeeeeerrrrrr

Spoiler for zomg poor Fate!:


you can thank me later.
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Old 2008-01-19, 23:33   Link #318
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I'll look forward to it. Now if I could only actually get some ideas of how to do my chapter 3 this weekend would be a lot... Better
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Old 2008-01-20, 00:46   Link #319
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Have an ultraaaaa spoiiiiiilllllleeeeeerrrrrr

Spoiler for zomg poor Fate!:


you can thank me later.
Oh dear god! SERIOUSLY?!

CALL THE PARAMEDICS!
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Old 2008-01-20, 01:15   Link #320
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Wait till you see Angel's art

edit: Here's a long teaser for you, just because
Spoiler for SbtB VIII:
There do be grins about... and right after i woke up too!
and i agree with the comments above, nanoha seems more human in this fic than in the actual serie, and precia is definitely better off than in the canon... and by far more likeable as she is.

Can't wait to see more!
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