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Old 2008-02-18, 05:04   Link #19981
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MAHOU SHOUJO KALEIDO-SOFY, KENZAN!!! ^_^

Kha! I did it! I did it!

21STE DREI-KEITEN 02
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Old 2008-02-18, 05:05   Link #19982
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HOLY SHIT PAGE 1000!!!!!!!!!!!!



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Old 2008-02-18, 05:06   Link #19983
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IMO A classic case of "Did Not Do The Research" for melee combat (hell, I'm guilty of that as well). If they say Fate's an expert melee fighter, than by god, make her one. Make her fighting style extremely complex.
I just don't know though. Without good examples, it makes it even harder to determine how wide spread martial prowess is, to know how she should react in thinking with an opponent actually smacking asside a Zanber 'I will CREAM YOU' swing like the ones she used on Jail in strikers. A strike that big has only two roads of attack, overhead, or baseball bat. (The first of which Jail CAUGHT, the second of which he just ignored and got smeared.)

One of the things I want to emphasize, is that Crash doesn't think of himself as a fighter. But he's standing up astoundingly well to a pair of Aces, in both tactical prowess, and on the spot skill. While claiming no skill, he successfully parries a Zeus Zamber and creates a counter opening. (Which he thinks along lines. "Oh, god now I've pissed her off...")
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Old 2008-02-18, 05:08   Link #19984
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Yes it is


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Thanks for being so happy ^^ Makes me a little self-conciously embarrassed
just as planned?

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First of all I think I should apologize since I think I was the original offender I guess with Tais and the E.V.A device.
Well, to put it frankly, your concept of using an external power-armor and the reasonings behind it, coupled by THE WAY you used such tech in your scenarios, were enough to warrant it a pass from pretty much everyone. It might raise some eyebrows, sure. But your satirical and more humor-oriented stories were very good dampeners to any reservations or would-be reservations as a whole. Plus, considering it's Tsuzuki using the concept, plus no mention whatsoever of mass-production, along with the fact that a mainly magic-utility and mage-enhancing and not a gun-totting (as in real guns or similar) mech platform... Nope. No problems for me.

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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Boke is the idiot of the duo! The Tsukkomi (Hayate ) is the straight man/woman. They're usually equipped with a Harisen


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XD. Well if you ever want another person's perspective on it, pm away
Thanks. I'll take note of that.

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*stuffs chewing gum into the barrel of the gun*

A few episodes worth of Yagami no Signum-tan?


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Okay, bad jokes aside, the idea is just for lulz and crack.

Spoiler for Something like this:




Hoho~! Nice!
Signum's feeling the fun of being a kid!

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And what's this?

Spoiler for Omake!:


Okay what the hell did I just write?

*RUNS*


What the hell did you just write indeed...

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Basically, it is an attempt to incorporate the Fate Stay Night story into the Nanohaverse, but made such that it develops Sophia's character, and has ramifications for the future of Belka.

The Pilgrim Duels is an old, recently revived but illegal tournament held to commemorate the greatest hero of the time. In the old days, the Duels were held by the Belka Clergy who kept watch over the Tome of Devotion which did the recording of the Hero's Linker Core and thus strengthened itself. The Hero himself had one of his wishes granted, and as always that wish would bring great prosperity to the land, as only the purest of hearts could win the Duels.

During the chaos of the Belka Implosion, the Convent rescued the only Tome of power they could find and hid it deep within the Sankt Alexei Vault, along with all the Ancient Belka devices, technologies, scriptures they could find.

Years ago, a group calling themselves the Opel Magi managed to steal the Tome of Devotion during the sacking of Renault years ago, the fire that killed every person that Kha knew, and turned him into the Cleric. However, that book was surprisingly incomplete, lacking over 330+ pages. In order to complete the book, they revived the Pilgrim Duels, but without proper supervision the games went out of hand, and the first games ended up in the almost complete destruction of an Outer World.

Kha had the missing pages, craved out when he came into contact with the Tome. After hearing of the games 1 year before meeting Hayate, Kha vowed to stop the thieves when they resurfaced again.

However, Sophia, both weighed down by her father's wish to revive the Games and participate as well as her heart broken by Kha choosing Fate over her, has other plans...

Thus begins the events of Nanoha/Cente Gravia.
Oohh... Interesting. In a Khatastropic way!

This better be a good basis for Hayate to learn some close-range self-defense...

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~~~New Intelligence Data Updated~~~

It's HERE! The big Vita & Signum patch you've been waiting for!

Vita
- Is now canonized as Servant Berserker.
- Graf Eisen's Simon-ism has been dropped.

Signum
- More crack regarding her life story has been added.
- Is now canonized as Servant Archer.
- Note the new sword flash attack! Dynamic Kill animation added!
- Several new Sturmfalke attacks added, of which one is just RIDDLED with crack. Can you take it?!

Go ahead, click on the above to take a look! Comments? Criticisms?
Not much of a problem there aside from the crack ones... though I have lingering doubts about the Knights becoming servants... And the Tome of the Night Sky's involvement considering it's supposed to be all gone by now aside from it's remnants inside Hayate...

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Time for T3H HERO of Rebuilt!

LIGHTNING-03
Rebuilt of Erio


Spoiler for pic:


Hmm... Wrong age?
Spoiler for Erio, Knight Rider:
Thank your Meister, Erio, for I made you Grand.

Not a lot of crack as well, but can you spot the VA refs in the post?

And can you think of any more things that Kha and Erio are alike?


Not bad. Not bad at all! The Granado as Strada and the shamanisms are a bit eyebrow-raising though...


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Woops

And I actually thought of using the Sai-Blade... I mean a giant HAND with Finger Launchers and GN Sword-style blade?

BEST MULTIWEAPON EVER

And not to mention GekiChopper's

CHESTOAH!!!!!!!!!!
Too bad Ken got shafted. Gou as well.:/

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Uhm thanks Though I still think we really need more Almaria
Oh?

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And I know just the non-crack method of "bringing her back" >.>

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Mayura: We'd be truly honored if you did!
Julie: We... we will


Aurion: I'm not a melee-specialist. -_-

Me: You're good enough to beat multiple melee-specialists even in close range.

Aurion: You are sure having a fun time throwing more oil into the fire, huh?

Me: Yep!

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He looks like a cat there

Swan's reaction though is PRICELESS
XD







Anyway, more about me...

I'm having a hard time with the current fights I'm writing; which are the Aurion vs. Hayate mock battle and the Grandis vs. Signum real battle...

The main problem in the first one is I'm getting in a bit of a tight spot with regards to Hayate's performance... She's, quite frankly, holding out quite well, if not almost constantly on the defensive. In a quick rundown without spoilering, here's her performance stats as of GenerationS...

Spoiler for GenerationS Hayate:


It's hard. It's VERY hard. But she has all the potential in the world to properly cover up her weaknesses and eventually even go as far as holding herself against her fellow Aces. Anybody who wants to say it's impossible? Speak up now. They won't make the SSS-rank if there were absolutely nobody who reached such a level. (Not perfect, alright?) And I believe Hayate can, eventually. She doesn't deserve to be a shafted one-trick pony and I won't let her be! I'm going to show her potential here, and I need all the advice I can get to make it happen without much skepticism from others.

And once more, this managed to accomplish the feat of making me even more pissed off at 7arcs than I ever thought possible. -_-

Any thoughts? Should I lower or raise some stats? Any ideas for how much her performance could improve upon Unison?
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Old 2008-02-18, 05:15   Link #19985
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MAHOU SHOUJO KALEIDO-SOFY, KENZAN!!! ^_^

Kha! I did it! I did it!

21STE DREI-KEITEN 02
Rebuilt of Sophia


COMING SOON! ^_^
Nice! It's thanks to me...

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15 more to 20000th reply!

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Oohh... Interesting. In a Khatastropic way!

This better be a good basis for Hayate to learn some close-range self-defense...
Thanks for the heads-up! I see Hayate approaching Kha for some lessons! And I'm sure Kha will rise to the occasion!

*runs*

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Not much of a problem there aside from the crack ones... though I have lingering doubts about the Knights becoming servants... And the Tome of the Night Sky's involvement considering it's supposed to be all gone by now aside from it's remnants inside Hayate...
The Knights are just strengthened, otherwise there's no real difference.

And that's Hayate's reaching out to them. Also, the ROM of the Tome wasn't destroyed, and allowed it to be an arbiter of the Duels like the other 2 Tomes.

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Not bad. Not bad at all! The Granado as Strada and the shamanisms are a bit eyebrow-raising though...


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Anyway, more about me...

I'm having a hard time with the current fights I'm writing; which are the Aurion vs. Hayate mock battle and the Grandis vs. Signum real battle...

The main problem in the first one is I'm getting in a bit of a tight spot with regards to Hayate's performance... She's, quite frankly, holding out quite well, if not almost constantly on the defensive. In a quick rundown without spoilering, here's her performance stats as of GenerationS...

Spoiler for GenerationS Hayate:


It's hard. It's VERY hard. But she has all the potential in the world to properly cover up her weaknesses and eventually even go as far as holding herself against her fellow Aces. Anybody who wants to say it's impossible? Speak up now. They won't make the SSS-rank if there were absolutely nobody who reached such a level. (Not perfect, alright?) And I believe Hayate can, eventually. She doesn't deserve to be a shafted one-trick pony and I won't let her be! I'm going to show her potential here, and I need all the advice I can get to make it happen without much skepticism from others.

And once more, this managed to accomplish the feat of making me even more pissed off at 7arcs than I ever thought possible. -_-

Any thoughts? Should I lower or raise some stats? Any ideas for how much her performance could improve upon Unison?
Looks ok from here.

EDIT: It's awfully crowded in here! Looks like the markets are in for a Bull Run!!!
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Old 2008-02-18, 05:18   Link #19986
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Khatastrophic? I like the sound of that! ^_^
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Old 2008-02-18, 05:20   Link #19987
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Anita, to run for the bull is one thing, to do it while going off-topic is another. Please stay on topic.

And to stay on topic, I shall reveal the 2nd Erio VA ref...

...after a few more posts.

*runs*
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Old 2008-02-18, 05:27   Link #19988
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Idiot Kha.

Thanks for the compliments! Kha thought I should grab that slot for Sophia's post cos she's worth it, but hope we haven't caused too much trouble today...
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Old 2008-02-18, 05:29   Link #19989
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Now this is gonna look it its all my fault...

Thread: Jii~~~~



I mean, I wouldn't have let you have it if you wanted to post that Legolas OC you created.


And in other news... Did we just pull another Kha & Anita show...?
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Old 2008-02-18, 05:34   Link #19990
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Yes. Yes you did.
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Old 2008-02-18, 05:37   Link #19991
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Oh it's no trouble at all. In fact, I personally know very well how it feels like for two people to hijack a thread, it's very entertaining

Carry On, Don't Mind Us

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Old 2008-02-18, 05:47   Link #19992
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Damnit, must sleep... must stay awake... for epic 20000th post...

oh screw it. Happy 20,000th, minnasan!
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Old 2008-02-18, 05:55   Link #19993
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@ Kha and Anita show:

Oh it's no trouble at all. In fact, I personally know very well how it feels like for two people to hijack a thread, it's very entertaining

Carry On, Don't Mind Us

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...and at times like this, she just MSNs me "Ja ne!" and logs.

*hears several clicks of cartridges loading and notices the whole thread getting closer.*

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Old 2008-02-18, 05:57   Link #19994
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"In Rebuilt, Caro is dere for Chrono. At first."



*runs*
Why not?!

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I won't be able to sleep until I fire this one off.

While thinking about aspects of Crash's dogfight, I know he's at one point, going to come into melee combat on the ground with Fate. In which, I have him flashback to some lessons Fox has given him on close combat attributes, on the advantages of parrying, or force redirection.

Thinking about it, I can't recall a single Nanoha fight where the melee combat actually shows any counter moves, parries, force redirects, thowing, or using opponent's momentum against them.

Fate is supposed to be very good Melee fighter, but just how good do we want to put her in pure martial skill when we never see a good example of a force redirection move? There's a huge number of massive openings to be made when an opponent commits to a high force move. Such as Vita's overhead with a hammer blow... Shove it off to the side as it comes down and lay a knee (Or blade, or spell) into her stomach.
All blows I can recall are direct blocks, or full dodges. Both are physically intensive, and often wasteful.

Comments?
This is one of the instances where I wish I could read the novel... In the anime, what is shown is most likely easily-animated direct attacks. And no, neither did I see anything that so much resembled a parry or counter-momentum strike. but this is where the fanfics comes in, anyway. If you were to ask me, Fate is good with weapons/armed-combat. That's the way she was trained since day-1. So I don't think she is unbeatable in hand-to-hand; but she should be pretty damned good still. The Knights, on the other hand, I don't know what to think.

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Thanks for the heads-up! I see Hayate approaching Kha for some lessons! And I'm sure Kha will rise to the occasion!

*runs*
Don't worry. KhaXHarem is not much of an issue in Rebuilt.

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The Knights are just strengthened, otherwise there's no real difference.

And that's Hayate's reaching out to them. Also, the ROM of the Tome wasn't destroyed, and allowed it to be an arbiter of the Duels like the other 2 Tomes.
Noted.

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Khatastrophic? I like the sound of that! ^_^
Thanks!

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Anita, to run for the bull is one thing, to do it while going off-topic is another. Please stay on topic.

And to stay on topic, I shall reveal the 2nd Erio VA ref...

...after a few more posts.

*runs*
Oi, oi...

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Idiot Kha.

Thanks for the compliments! Kha thought I should grab that slot for Sophia's post cos she's worth it, but hope we haven't caused too much trouble today...
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Now this is gonna look it its all my fault...

Thread: Jii~~~~



I mean, I wouldn't have let you have it if you wanted to post that Legolas OC you created.


And in other news... Did we just pull another Kha & Anita show...?
Yep. You better apologize to her now!
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MAHOU SHOUJO KALEIDO-SOFY, KENZAN!!! ^_^

Kha! I did it! I did it!

21STE DREI-KEITEN 02
Rebuilt of Sophia


COMING SOON! ^_^
Ooooh your first OC contribution?

Looking forward to it

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HOLY SHIT PAGE 1000!!!!!!!!!!!!



BROTHERS! WE HAVE MADE IT!
AMEN BROTHERS!!!!!

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Oohh... Interesting. In a Khatastropic way!
*saves new term in dictionary*



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Too bad Ken got shafted. Gou as well.:/
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Aurion: I'm not a melee-specialist. -_-

Me: You're good enough to beat multiple melee-specialists even in close range.

Aurion: You are sure having a fun time throwing more oil into the fire, huh?

Me: Yep!

Belkarangers: *latches on and presses themselves into Aurion*

ONEGAI, SENSEI!!!!!




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Anyway, more about me...

I'm having a hard time with the current fights I'm writing; which are the Aurion vs. Hayate mock battle and the Grandis vs. Signum real battle...

The main problem in the first one is I'm getting in a bit of a tight spot with regards to Hayate's performance... She's, quite frankly, holding out quite well, if not almost constantly on the defensive. In a quick rundown without spoilering, here's her performance stats as of GenerationS...

Spoiler for GenerationS Hayate:


It's hard. It's VERY hard. But she has all the potential in the world to properly cover up her weaknesses and eventually even go as far as holding herself against her fellow Aces. Anybody who wants to say it's impossible? Speak up now. They won't make the SSS-rank if there were absolutely nobody who reached such a level. (Not perfect, alright?) And I believe Hayate can, eventually. She doesn't deserve to be a shafted one-trick pony and I won't let her be! I'm going to show her potential here, and I need all the advice I can get to make it happen without much skepticism from others.

And once more, this managed to accomplish the feat of making me even more pissed off at 7arcs than I ever thought possible. -_-

Any thoughts? Should I lower or raise some stats? Any ideas for how much her performance could improve upon Unison?
Now that's a good rant when I see one

No problems on my side, since I'd like to see Hayate beefed-up and get the credit she deserves

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Old 2008-02-18, 06:01   Link #19996
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@Kha: I believe the second VA ref...is in the shoes. :3

Kusuha-sama!

And congrats for 20k posts!

*Shelves plans to bring Loran Cehack and co. into the OC*
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Why not?!

*runs*
Amy: Chrono-kunn~~~ ()



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Don't worry. KhaXHarem is not much of an issue in Rebuilt.
I meant in all timelines.

*RUNS*

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Noted.
But thanks for the hint, I almost didn't cover it.

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Yep. You better apologize to her now!
Me? Apologize? About what?
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Ooooh your first OC contribution?

Looking forward to it
^_^

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Me? Apologize? About what?
Apologize, or you're sleeping on the couch when you get back!
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^_^

Apologize, or you're sleeping on the couch when you get back!
...
...
...

REALLY?! I GET TO STAY OVER AGAIN?!

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What's this? Writing from yours truly? UNPOSSIBLE

Kicking this party off with the Akatsuki arc of StorieS

Spoiler for Promises of Today part I:


EDIT: Kinda cheap but hey I want this 20k get.

And not forgetting..

"THIS! IS! OUTER CADIA!!!!!!!!!!"

"ORE TACHI WO, DARE DA TO OMOTTE YAGARU?!"
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