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Old 2008-03-04, 21:41   Link #1941
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That was a cute read :3 Looking forward to reading more :3
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Old 2008-03-04, 21:54   Link #1942
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This really enthralls me. There's just something about an over confident perverted Fate hitting on the ever-so-innocent Nanoha that I want to see more of. I picture Fate dressed so casually with untied shoes, baggy jeans, but a shirt that shows off her curves. Nanoha strikes me as a girl wearing a sunday dress, or a tie-strap dress. The kind with support on the dress so you don't have to wear a bra, giving her a rather innocent look.

So far Nanoha seems extremely interested in "the dirty world", as her reply to Fate saying she snuck out to Barrier Jacket someone was to just blush and turn away. She seems innocent, feeling embarrassed just looking at Fate's perverted motions. I like that; the fidgeting, the shyness, but still interested. I'd love to see Fate open put moves on her. ( Fate: You're looking awfully hard. Want to touch? *pushes chest closer*" Nanoha: *slowly reaches to test it after much debate*)

Why was Nanoha out? Why did she look at the candy like that? Did she sneak out to try some? Is she that sheltered? I'd like to see more.

Fate is still great. She obviously has nothing against lewd acts, which I hope she will throw on Nanoha soon.

So there's my two cents ^^
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Doujinshi form? Care to elaborate on that?



LOL well any botched attempt is usually a learning experience anyways :3

It just felt a bit off after I read that, so hence why I gave it a thorough stripping :3 Hopefully the next time you decide to attempt a kinky one again, I'll be able to just sit back and enjoy the hottest of it rather than being put off by the glaring errors
I didn't proof it like I normally do >.<

and doujinshi form as in I write, Angel draws, and together it's a graphic novel/story.
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Old 2008-03-04, 22:06   Link #1943
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I didn't proof it like I normally do >.<

and doujinshi form as in I write, Angel draws, and together it's a graphic novel/story.
I see. Looking forward to it then indeed :3

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Old 2008-03-04, 22:36   Link #1944
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I see. Looking forward to it then indeed :3
We hope to get it done by early april, and to your statement, it's best not to start fires :3
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Old 2008-03-04, 23:18   Link #1945
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Is that a dare to post my OC stories here?
I think The Gemini Sisters might be a little too much for the FF You'd have to first explain who they are, where they come from, why they're called The Gemini Sisters (), etc
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Old 2008-03-04, 23:49   Link #1946
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OH... UH! I really want to "Watch dirty things"!!!

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Old 2008-03-05, 02:00   Link #1947
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I think The Gemini Sisters might be a little too much for the FF You'd have to first explain who they are, where they come from, why they're called The Gemini Sisters (), etc
the FF will be BURNING RED if they get here...

and wow... it seems that FF is now immune to OC-type Backlog Breakers...

no one even noticed my post a few pages back...



TIME FOR SOME BACKLOG BREAKER REVERBERATION!!!!
Spoiler for Phase 1:


Saint X Arrives...

Spoiler for Phase 2:


Yup... it's the CRACK talking...






And here is Phase 3...

some snippets for review...

Spoiler for WIP: Escape from Ground Central:


Spoiler for Escape from Ground Central: Chapter 1 Snippet:


FYI: "Bridget" is the same one on my AVA right now... Search OC for Bridget under my name as well..

*hops on gondola and rows fast*

*but not before acting*

Phase 4...

Spoiler for WIP: Lost in ElHazard: The Opening Phases:


Not Yet complete... but most of the charas are from other series universes and a lot of OCs as well...

*runs*

*hops into gondola*

*and rows fast... really fast*
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Old 2008-03-05, 02:16   Link #1948
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I think The Gemini Sisters might be a little too much for the FF You'd have to first explain who they are, where they come from, why they're called The Gemini Sisters (), etc
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the FF will be BURNING RED if they get here...

and wow... it seems that FF is now immune to OC-type Backlog Breakers...

no one even noticed my post a few pages back...
Well, that's why I refrain myself from posting anything that may cause this thread to implode.

Yeah, my stories are being forgotten, too. And to think I did my best in having Cinque wear the Undine uniform....

Oh, well, there's always Yuunodas.

ARIA Natural 13 has lots of Athena-senpai goodness. God, I think I'll kill people for her CD single. though I'm angry at Alice-chan for treating Athena-senpai like that.
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Old 2008-03-05, 02:18   Link #1949
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Yeah, my stories are being forgotten, too. And to think I did my best in having Cinque wear the Undine uniform....
Undine? Undine as in Number 11, the self proclaimed Strongest Claymore from the anime Claymore?
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Old 2008-03-05, 02:22   Link #1950
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Undine? Undine as in Number 11, the self proclaimed Strongest Claymore from the anime Claymore?
Haha, no. I was talking about Undine from ARIA anime. I mean... gondolier, anyone?
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Old 2008-03-05, 02:23   Link #1951
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Undine? Undine as in Number 11, the self proclaimed Strongest Claymore from the anime Claymore?
*Proceeds to whack ghazghkull with a GN Oar*

Spoiler for These Undines!:


*Continues to whack ghazghkull with a GN Oar*
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Old 2008-03-05, 02:27   Link #1952
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Just a quick question, but do people remember how Shiro and Momoko addressed Fate-chan when they meet her in A's? Can't quite remember and I can't check at the moment, so.. :x
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Old 2008-03-05, 02:28   Link #1953
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*Proceeds to whack ghazghkull with a GN Oar*

Spoiler for These Undines!:


*Continues to whack ghazghkull with a GN Oar*
Why do you beat on me so!!!!
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Old 2008-03-05, 02:30   Link #1954
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*Proceeds to whack ghazghkull with a GN Oar*

Spoiler for These Undines!:


*Continues to whack ghazghkull with a GN Oar*
Is it wrong for me to say that short-haired Aika is HAWT?

@ AshLikeSnow: I don't know, but I think they did. I may have to check my DVD again.
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Old 2008-03-05, 02:34   Link #1955
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Why do you beat on me so!!!!
Because it is Alicia-T. Florence sama's will!

As Fuyu would say; "We are the Gondolists that worship that supreme goddesses Alicia and Horo-chama and gladly burn our offerings in the flames of a GN Drive Solar Furnace!!!

*Continues whacking ghazghkull with a GN Oar*

Andrei: Yup... it's the CRACK talking- he really needs to sleep.

Bridget: On it...

Bridget ties up Saint X in shis yoyo and drags him out...

Saint X: Next time... it will be you S-*static*... *fades*

Andrei: GN Drives, convenient for blanking out messages with *static*.

Saint X: And yes USB... you can have her... as long as Dekkai-Chan belongs to Lowe and Hohe-Sama is Mi-

*static*

Bridget ties up Saint X in shis yoyo and drags him out... again.
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Because it is Alicia-T. Florence sama's will!

As Fuyu would say; "We are the Gondolists that worship that supreme goddesses Alicia and Horo-chama and gladly burn our offerings in the flames of a GN Drive Solar Furnace!!!

*Continues whacking ghazghkull with a GN Oar*
Easy there, Saint.

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Saint X: And yes USB... you can have her... as long as Dekkai-Chan belongs to Lowe and Hohe-Sama is Mi-

*static*

Bridget ties up Saint X in shis yoyo and drags him out... again.
But I thought I can have Athena-senpai at the same time?

*runs*

Fanfic update: none; currently refraining from doing all fanfics as I'm occupied with my final-term major project. well, enjoy what I have served here.
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Old 2008-03-05, 06:51   Link #1957
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*pops in with another installment of...*
Spoiler for Landscaper!Fate:
a good start into the afternoon for me
hope the update comes soon

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Just a quick question, but do people remember how Shiro and Momoko addressed Fate-chan when they meet her in A's? Can't quite remember and I can't check at the moment, so.. :x
I think with Fate-chan, because Nanoha would introduce her something like "Mum, Dad*I only know Ka-san^^ hope I write it correct *, this here is Fate-chan...", but I can look after it, when I'm home(in about 5 hours), if it's still not answered correctly
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Old 2008-03-05, 09:04   Link #1958
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the FF will be BURNING RED if they get here...
My point precisely People should make the difference between FF and Cadia

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and wow... it seems that FF is now immune to OC-type Backlog Breakers...

no one even noticed my post a few pages back...



TIME FOR SOME BACKLOG BREAKER REVERBERATION!!!!
Spoiler for Phase 1:


Saint X Arrives...

Spoiler for Phase 2:


Yup... it's the CRACK talking...
FF immune to Cadia Backlog Breakers?

UNPOSSIBLE!!! ()

The crack is strong within you

Won't this scare off newcomers though?

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Well, that's why I refrain myself from posting anything that may cause this thread to implode.

Yeah, my stories are being forgotten, too. And to think I did my best in having Cinque wear the Undine uniform....

Oh, well, there's always Yuunodas.
I think that may be because you haven't poked your head here for so long, USB-kun Besides, madness has a rightful place here right? Don't forget it's always welcome there

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ARIA Natural 13 has lots of Athena-senpai goodness. God, I think I'll kill people for her CD single. though I'm angry at Alice-chan for treating Athena-senpai like that.


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Haha, no. I was talking about Undine from ARIA anime. I mean... gondolier, anyone?
More like Gondolists

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*Proceeds to whack ghazghkull with a GN Oar*

Spoiler for These Undines!:


*Continues to whack ghazghkull with a GN Oar*
*Fuyu no Sora collapses thanks to roars of uncontrolled laughter*

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Because it is Alicia-T. Florence sama's will!

As Fuyu would say; "We are the Gondolists that worship that supreme goddesses Alicia and Horo-chama and gladly burn our offerings in the flames of a GN Drive Solar Furnace!!!

*Continues whacking ghazghkull with a GN Oar*

Andrei: Yup... it's the CRACK talking- he really needs to sleep.

Bridget: On it...

Bridget ties up Saint X in shis yoyo and drags him out...

Saint X: Next time... it will be you S-*static*... *fades*

Andrei: GN Drives, convenient for blanking out messages with *static*.

Saint X: And yes USB... you can have her... as long as Dekkai-Chan belongs to Lowe and Hohe-Sama is Mi-

*static*

Bridget ties up Saint X in shis yoyo and drags him out... again.


Now, get those OCs back to Cadia before we keep invading this place, the MODership comes and the Sky Falls on our heads

*Fuyu no Sora collapses laughing again after seeing Saint X persistently whacking ghazghkull with a GN Oar*

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Easy there, Saint.
But it's fun

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But I thought I can have Athena-senpai at the same time?

*runs*

Fanfic update: none; currently refraining from doing all fanfics as I'm occupied with my final-term major project. well, enjoy what I have served here.
Keep running USB-kun

Aww, like I said before: Real life *sigh* Always interfering with our creativity and our writing

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Just a quick question, but do people remember how Shiro and Momoko addressed Fate-chan when they meet her in A's? Can't quite remember and I can't check at the moment, so.. :x
They call her "Fate-san" if my memory doesn't fail me
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Old 2008-03-05, 10:30   Link #1959
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Landscaper!Fate Fate (that feels weird to type... Fate Fate) gets cooler with every part.

My Nitpicky self caught one thing though...

Aka: "Barrier to block off water why the hell did I walk this far from home?" Homophones are fun though this is a case of a simple typo.
Thank you for the pick up... Homophones can be quite a problem for me...

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That was a cute read :3 Looking forward to reading more :3
Good that you are looking forward, but it might be some time till i get another one
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This really enthralls me. There's just something about an over confident perverted Fate hitting on the ever-so-innocent Nanoha that I want to see more of. I picture Fate dressed so casually with untied shoes, baggy jeans, but a shirt that shows off her curves. Nanoha strikes me as a girl wearing a sunday dress, or a tie-strap dress. The kind with support on the dress so you don't have to wear a bra, giving her a rather innocent look.

So far Nanoha seems extremely interested in "the dirty world", as her reply to Fate saying she snuck out to Barrier Jacket someone was to just blush and turn away. She seems innocent, feeling embarrassed just looking at Fate's perverted motions. I like that; the fidgeting, the shyness, but still interested. I'd love to see Fate open put moves on her. ( Fate: You're looking awfully hard. Want to touch? *pushes chest closer*" Nanoha: *slowly reaches to test it after much debate*)

Why was Nanoha out? Why did she look at the candy like that? Did she sneak out to try some? Is she that sheltered? I'd like to see more.

Fate is still great. She obviously has nothing against lewd acts, which I hope she will throw on Nanoha soon.

So there's my two cents ^^
Over confident perverted Fate hitting on an ever-so-innocent Nanoha is interesting to me too (see Inimical by Arigatou Sheitarou for more pervy Fate). I did realize during breakfast the i left out some harassment out of the story. Oh well i can add it in later.

The only thing i can add to your description of Nanoha's appearance is that she has her hair down for most of the time.

Nanoha lacks social defenses, so unlike Fate she is not quick to defend herself against various comments. Her only option is to pretty much turn and ignore it.

More is to come and things will get interesting as we find out more about the girls.

*Looks up at suspected FxN scene* Maybe... At some point...
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OH... UH! I really want to "Watch dirty things"!!!

I know that you mean this as a joke but to clarify for others, you're going to have to use a bit of you imagination at times (like with the hot dog).
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