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Old 2008-03-05, 21:54   Link #2021
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Originally Posted by Junkedcat View Post
I felt so good after my midterm i decided to put out another section...
Spoiler for Landscaper!Fate:
Kyaaaaa~ *flails* This made my day! Thanks for the update!

I like the first/third person POV you have going on. How it's following Fate and her thoughts but is still third person. Nanoha being called "Princess" as a title instead of just by Fate made me smile. It's interesting.

One thing, a few commas may help out.

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Princess didn’t seem to get the “interest” Fate had implied leading to a fumble.
the "leading to a fumble" had me a little lost and

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‘Landscaper asshole’
Yes, Fate is indeed an landscaper and an asshole. But I think "Landscaper, Asshole" would be better implied she was talking to him. the capital "A" in "asshole" refers it as a title instead of an adj.

Fate seems to be sexually frustrated. From all her comments and actions, I wouldn't be surprised if she was in the porno business to make ends meet But she actively thinks bad about everyone, leading me to believe she really does need to get laid, or at least get herself off in an elegant manner.

Princess's father doesn't like Fate :3 That will be great later.

But Nanoha admitted to sneaking out. Now I'm looking forward to Nanoha sneaking out in hopes to see Fate again.

It seems as if Nanoha in this story is really quiet, which I like. But she also seems to be drawn to danger. Perhaps she secretly ( not even herself knowing) wants Fate to advance on her?

I look forward to the next part!

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Junkedcat, several typos and wrong word choices.
Come on Jimmy a little more detail and advice would help ^^ could you point out a few and offer some better word choices?

Edit: I claim this page in the name of Landscaping!Fate
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Old 2008-03-05, 22:07   Link #2022
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NANDA KOREGAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!

I can't be exhausted for one evening and sleep through it because backlog pops up IN THE FF THREAD?!?!

What has the world come to?

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That's hot........

Who's up for a Keroko/Nanoha lemon? *raises hand*

edit: Cha-ching! I claim his page in the name of tasteful love scenes without immature people ruining them!
Lol, I would've raised my hand, had I not been working at the time and being too tired to do anything but sleep 'till now afterwards

Sata-chan hasn't lost her/his touch at page claiming huh?

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And Satashi-sama comes back swinging with the page 100 page claim
I was close. Close. :P
*AHEM, discreetly raises hand*

Arc-en-Ciel related thing here:
Vivio as a swordswoman, yes or no?
Swordman Vivio = MUST HAVE NAO!!!

Sorry, had to do it

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No, as in literally having sex with a sister not related by blood.
Why not?

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No objections here.
Excellent ~

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Vivio as a swordswoman? Yes please!


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Granted then.
I got the idea when I saw that awesome Vivio picture (In the dress with the sword remember?) and when I mentioned it to my Arc-en-Ciel partner in crime he seconded the motion.

Signum is Vivio's sensei.
Why not Burning Arisa for that matter?

btw

Vivio will kick butt if Signum is her mentor

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Keroko-kun -> poster.
Keroko-chan -> character.

also, when he says in the post that "you can use keroko" and not "you can use me" i think he's talking about the character
Incorrect

There are FOUR Kerokos here (That's right, 4 )

Keroko-chan: SHE is the female OC

Keroko-kun: HE is the male OC (That's right, Keroko-kun is an OC too ) Here is his profile

Keroko-kun: HE is the forum member and one most respected in Outer Cadia, our home (Well, we all respect each other but you know what I mean ) He's currently taken the job of H4XXBuster over there

Keroko-tan (Pointed out and description by USB-kun): A mini-me version of Keroko-chan, whose job is nothing but being a moving beacon Ion Cannon Breaker. Is loyal to Kane's cause (and rumoured to have feeling towards him). Very cute to the point everybody will get instant diabetes just by looking at her fluffs.

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Keroko/ Nanoha lemon incoming tonight if I can

This will be a fun write, so..... Hey, you gave me permission > *will abuse it*
Sata-chan...

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Trust me, Satashi-chan, I'm quite used to that.
Keroko-chan day/week much? Or dimply in general?

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Used to being used or abused?
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Both, actually. In this case I'm used to people abusing the liberty I give them in using Keroko.


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My only rule is 'keep her in-character'

Beyond that, anything is allowed.


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There are only two timelines, ya know.

There's the canon timeline, which is the Nanoverse without OCs, then there's the Kerokanon, which does include OCs.

EDIT: Page claimed in the name of hawt KeroNano yuri?

*RUNS*
APPROVED

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I'm actually pretty sure she does, she is quite firmly ingrained in the Nanoha timeline, having met Nanoha at seven and being adopted at nine and all. The full background is a loooong story, but you can read it from the link in my profile.

Edit: Sneaky posts before mine again. :P
Sneaky posts will always come before you know it. Such is life, Keroko-kun

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Go go page 100!

lol everyone suddenly wants Keroha @_@

I'm doing it talking to Kery-chan right now to get some info and stuff. Wow, this will certainly blindside the OC thread when posted
Typical Sata-chan, you're always making changes and coming up with crack pairings

You would do good in Outer Cadia

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*innocent face* I have no idea what you're talking about.
Of course you don't ()

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"THE CAKE IS A LIE!"
It indeed was

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Second page consisting over 90% material about the excruciating anticipation of the NxK lemon.

They definetly unleashed something.
I'm guessing our inner desires...


*runs*
*Fuyu no Sora collapses laughing after reading the white paragraph*

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The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie. The cake is a lie.

I heard that .

Trust me we've been calling for it ever since Keroko released adult Keroko to update the loli Keroko.

Let's not forget Tesriffith too.

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Indeed it is

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Well, I kind of lost track with all the conversations here (since, unlike Outer Cadia) FF tends to go... the relaxed path. So.... yeah.
I know the feeling No need to explain

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To add in the complication, I won't be venturing here and at Outer Cadia for one full week (it's holiday break here, and I need to seize the opportunity to rest my brain ).

On top of that, we're gonna have election day this Saturday.
Awww, shucks. But well, I hope that with this rest T3H CR4CK within you will find new ways of expressing itself

Coming up with Frieda's and yurilover sister's story much?



*RUNS AT LUDICROUS SPEED*

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*thumbs up*

Keep up the good work, Sata-chan! You know you can do it. >:3
If anyone can, she can

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Keroha done. Sent to Kery-chan for approval/edit requesting
Will be waiting

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Anything Kha writes is also classed under the Khrack-filled Rebuilt Timeline, while the main Kerokanon timeline is also referred to by myself as Alpha Timeline because MSLN Alpha is a sorta cap to the Kerokanon...


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And I couldn't resist the SRW ref.
Who can ever resist?

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I move to nominate the canon timeline as Original Generation timeline!
Motion Seconded

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*is shot at by Legion bluntshooters*
Creator-tan: *Snaps fingers*

Girls: *Protect Goose from bluntshooters*

Creator-tan:

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Sorry, a little high on aggro and hot blood after an argument with my boss. -_-
It's okay, it's okay
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Old 2008-03-05, 22:19   Link #2023
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Thanks Satashi for pointing out the errors. I kind of just pounded this one out quick without doing much of a read trough.
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I like the first/third person POV you have going on. How it's following Fate and her thoughts but is still third person. Nanoha being called "Princess" as a title instead of just by Fate made me smile. It's interesting.
I decided to use "Princess" because "that girl" was starting to get a little bit annoying. That and i want to keep Nanoha's name out of it until she tells Fate her name (a little first person controlling the third person).
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the "leading to a fumble" had me a little lost
I'll fix it in a final draft. What i meant is that she made worded her comment so that opened herself up to more harassment from Fate.
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I wouldn't be surprised if she was in the porno business to make ends meet
For some reason i feel like shooting that one down right now. Fates job pays enough.
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Princess's father doesn't like Fate :3 That will be great later.
You have no idea...

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Edit: I claim this page in the name of Landscaping!Fate
*Camera pans up the bank revealing Fate standing atop. With a lawnmower on one side, hedge trimmer on the other she stands proud holding a weed eater like it was a scepter. With the wind blowing the long hair from her ponytail she declares her title.*

"I AM THE LAWN QUEEN!"
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Old 2008-03-05, 22:27   Link #2024
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Incorrect

There are THREE Kerokos here (That's right, 3 )

Keroko-chan: SHE is the OC We call her either Keroko-chan or most commonly Keroko-tan

Keroko-kun: HE is the OC (That's right, Keroko-kun is an OC too ) Here is his profile

Keroko-kun: HE is the forum member and one most respected in Outer Cadia, our home (Well, we all respect each other but you know what I mean ) He's currently taken the job of H4XXBuster over there
You forgot Keroko-tan.
A mini-me version of Keroko-chan, whose job is nothing but being a moving beacon Ion Cannon Breaker. Is loyal to Kane's cause (and rumoured to have feeling towards him). Very cute to the point everybody will get instant diabetes just by looking at her fluffs.





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Awww, shucks. But well, I hope that with this rest T3H CR4CK within you will find new ways of expressing itself

Coming up with Frieda's and yurilover sister's story much?



*RUNS AT LUDICROUS SPEED*
Yup. Just wait for T3H CRACK.
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*Camera pans up the bank revealing Fate standing atop. With a lawnmower on one side, hedge trimmer on the other she stands proud holding a weed eater like it was a scepter. With the wind blowing the long hair from her ponytail she declares her title.*

"I AM THE LAWN QUEEN!"
XD XD XD XD

My mental broke down at this imagination.
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Old 2008-03-05, 22:35   Link #2025
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You forgot Keroko-tan.
A mini-me version of Keroko-chan, whose job is nothing but being a moving beacon Ion Cannon Breaker. Is loyal to Kane's cause (and rumoured to have feeling towards him). Very cute to the point everybody will get instant diabetes just by looking at her fluffs.



I CLEAN FORGOT KEROKO-TAN!!!!!!!!!

Oh GOD! I can only hope Kane won't throw her on me....

MY APOLOGIESSS!!!!!

*RUNS anyway*

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Yup. Just wait for T3H CRACK.
[Saint X] We'll be awaiting your return...[/Saint X]
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Old 2008-03-05, 22:51   Link #2026
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I felt so good after my midterm i decided to put out another section...
Spoiler for Landscaper!Fate:
Whoot! New part... but everyone got to it before me T-T no typos for me to catch. On a side note Mr. Takamachi is a doodie head (and I have the maturity of a five year-old).

On that note (The one about my maturity level)
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6ZnybZHj_L4 <-- this just sprung up an idea for a challenge

How about it folks? Write a short about the female crew going to the onsen just to realize that it's divided by breast size, or something silly like that? Remember to add funny silly comments and inside jokes.
ACCEPTED! Because the premise makes me giggle. I'll probably finish around Friday or this weekend so look forward to it (or don't that's cool too).
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Old 2008-03-05, 23:22   Link #2027
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Hey people, What are you doing? Having fun without me?

My doujinshi is going very good, the vacations of "Semana Santa" are coming and I will have a lot of time to make it!

Well, at least the cover (or front?) is over lol



Thanks for your message Satashi, don't worry, those coments only make me do my draws better
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Old 2008-03-06, 00:48   Link #2028
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Whoot! New part... but everyone got to it before me T-T no typos for me to catch. On a side note Mr. Takamachi is a doodie head (and I have the maturity of a five year-old).

On that note (The one about my maturity level)


ACCEPTED! Because the premise makes me giggle. I'll probably finish around Friday or this weekend so look forward to it (or don't that's cool too).
I'll be looking forward to it ^_^
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Old 2008-03-06, 02:58   Link #2029
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*Camera pans up the bank revealing Fate standing atop. With a lawnmower on one side, hedge trimmer on the other she stands proud holding a weed eater like it was a scepter. With the wind blowing the long hair from her ponytail she declares her title.*

"I AM THE LAWN QUEEN!"
Rofl. Omg this image gives me the giggles. For some reason I can imagine this scene playing on TV as part of a pesticide commercial lol.

Oh, and I forgot to to quote it, but "and wear shorter skirts!" just had me cracking up. I think it's little snide comments like that which really make and accentuate the character. Keep the funnies going Junked :3

Oh, and thanks for the PM too. I'm glad you still like the story and appreciate the detail. I'm taking on board everything else you said too so hopefully you'll like the next one. ~
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Old 2008-03-06, 03:30   Link #2030
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Anything Kha writes is also classed under the Khrack-filled Rebuilt Timeline, while the main Kerokanon timeline is also referred to by myself as Alpha Timeline because MSLN Alpha is a sorta cap to the Kerokanon...

And I couldn't resist the SRW ref.

I move to nominate the canon timeline as Original Generation timeline!

*is shot at by Legion bluntshooters*

Sorry, a little high on aggro and hot blood after an argument with my boss. -_-
I thought that the reinterpretted timeline with OCs made to fit the canon timeline was like the non-OG SRW serious, and that Rebuilt was just an arc of a longer timeline that was rebuilt to involve Keroko as well as OCs more prominently, and only deviated from Keroko's predictions in the later half of StrikerS, I thought it should be called OG!

But for Kerokanon to be OG, I'll third it because its worth it.

*makes changes*
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Old 2008-03-06, 04:20   Link #2031
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I felt so good after my midterm i decided to put out another section...
Spoiler for Landscaper!Fate:
sanding <--- should mean standing?
otherwise I don't know what sandings mean

again a great chapter
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Old 2008-03-06, 05:11   Link #2032
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Incorrect

There are FOUR Kerokos here (That's right, 4 )

Keroko-chan: SHE is the female OC

Keroko-kun: HE is the male OC (That's right, Keroko-kun is an OC too ) Here is his profile

Keroko-kun: HE is the forum member and one most respected in Outer Cadia, our home (Well, we all respect each other but you know what I mean ) He's currently taken the job of H4XXBuster over there

Keroko-tan (Pointed out and description by USB-kun): A mini-me version of Keroko-chan, whose job is nothing but being a moving beacon Ion Cannon Breaker. Is loyal to Kane's cause (and rumoured to have feeling towards him). Very cute to the point everybody will get instant diabetes just by looking at her fluffs.
To add to that, aside from her job as one of Kane's most trusted operatives, she also blasts canon inconsitencies. This may not seem to be as relevant in the fanfic thread, is it takes a more liberal view on things generally, but just to be on the safe side, I'd thought I'd warn you.

Also, I'm planning to refer to Keroko-kun OC as Kerokun, to avoid confusion like this.

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Keroko-chan day/week much? Or dimply in general?
Generally. Keroko-chan day was just one example.

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Sneaky posts will always come before you know it. Such is life, Keroko-kun
I know. I try my best to be faster, but it doesn't always work.

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I CLEAN FORGOT KEROKO-TAN!!!!!!!!!

Oh GOD! I can only hope Kane won't throw her on me....

MY APOLOGIESSS!!!!!

*RUNS anyway*
Unless you're waging war against NOD, Kane won't see a reason too. He'll leave it up to Keroko-tan to decide what to do.

As for Keroko-tan...

Keroko-tan:
*sitting curled up in a corner, an aura of gloom surounding her while she's crying* Huuu~! Fuyu-chan forgot about meee!
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Old 2008-03-06, 08:14   Link #2033
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Name: Sisterly Bonding
genre: Yuri
Rating: MA
Length: 2,475 words
Pairing: Keroko/Nanoha

Send PM for the link to story if you are interested. This story is steamy but I think a did a vastly better job than I did on Love Ties.
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Old 2008-03-06, 08:23   Link #2034
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Whoot! New part... but everyone got to it before me T-T no typos for me to catch. On a side note Mr. Takamachi is a doodie head (and I have the maturity of a five year-old).
I know the feeling... Sometimes the forum really picks up when I'm away...

Anyways Mr. Takamachi is the kind of guy that will milk as much as he can out of his investments. It's something his family line has always done, so in order to keep his money where it belongs he'll try to screw over people as much as he can. Him trying to get free service out of Fate's company is nothing new (probably why the old company left).
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Old 2008-03-06, 12:33   Link #2035
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Swordman Vivio = MUST HAVE NAO!!!

Sorry, had to do it
The reactions to Swords(wo)man Vivio pleases me greatly.
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Why not Burning Arisa for that matter?

btw
As much as I'd love for Arisa and Suzuka to have a use I'm basing this as taking place after StrikerS so... I guess if I wanted I could think of something but... You know...
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Vivio will kick butt if Signum is her mentor
That be the plan no?

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"I AM THE LAWN QUEEN!"
I just had a total WarCraft 3 flashback there.

@Satashi-sama:

gib rarz?
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Old 2008-03-06, 12:45   Link #2036
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*cheering for Sam to post today's scenarios*
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Old 2008-03-06, 13:00   Link #2037
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*Camera pans up the bank revealing Fate standing atop. With a lawnmower on one side, hedge trimmer on the other she stands proud holding a weed eater like it was a scepter. With the wind blowing the long hair from her ponytail she declares her title.*

"I AM THE LAWN QUEEN!"
I'm torn in two between Senpai!Vivio and Landscaper!Fate. Which one is the juiciest mind image?

I must visualise this more...

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Name: Sisterly Bonding
genre: Yuri
Rating: MA
Length: 2,475 words
Pairing: Keroko/Nanoha

Send PM for the link to story if you are interested. This story is steamy but I think a did a vastly better job than I did on Love Ties.
You can feel the sisterly love tonight

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*cheering for Sam to post today's scenarios*
I decided to rewrite these and currently unknown number of following scenarios, so today's are a bit later than normal.

Spoiler for Scenarios 32, 33 & 34:


Tomorrow, we'll have long explanation scenario of Selshin magics. (About 20% of the full content though. *selfpalms*)

Spoiler for Just in case:


Edit: Fate is Fate-chan to Hayate. Missed that one

Edit2: Plothole found and plugged. Minor though and doesn't really effect anything.
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Old 2008-03-06, 13:45   Link #2038
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@Satashi-sama:

gib rarz?
eh? I don't get it >.<
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Old 2008-03-06, 13:47   Link #2039
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Its a PSU thing
What I mean is can I see the lemon?
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Old 2008-03-06, 13:50   Link #2040
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@Satashi-sama:

gib rarz?
I think it's suppose to be "Give Rares"?
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