Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Satashi]

Saint X wasn't whining, he was just wondering if anyone saw his post 'cause we had major backlog that day and he had a story in it.

Anyway, not everyone's post gets replied to, but it doesn't mean they weren't read. Most people just don't have anything much to say on them. On this note, let's not talk about who's post were read and whose were not read.

I'm making a self deadline to get chapter XVII of SbtB out tonight. Wish me luck, work has killed me this week and I'm far behind what I wanted to get done.

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by SpaceBrotha

Oh, but i just went and did a quick search of the posts Saint X has in this thread...
including today, every post he has done since 4th has been commented atleast once... so i find it weird that he's pouting, as i've some big posts of my own that have been without any comments what so ever and i've yet to throw a tantrum because of it...
It happens to everyone, i think i've even seen a post or two that satashi did that had 0 comments...

The fact that no one coments my /yours/ his/ heres post doesn't mean that they don't take a look to your stories (Take the funny story that I post in the previus page as an example)
I¡m sure all take a look to the storyes posted but some times there's not much to say.

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

The fact that no one coments my /yours/ his/ heres post doesn't mean that they don't take a look to your stories (Take the funny story that I post in the previus page as an example)
I¡m sure all take a look to the storyes posted but some times there's not much to say.

too young for an hang-over^^

evil Vita

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Saint X wasn't whining, he was just wondering if anyone saw his post 'cause we had major backlog that day and he had a story in it.

Anyway, not everyone's post gets replied to, but it doesn't mean they weren't read. Most people just don't have anything much to say on them. On this note, let's not talk about who's post were read and whose were not read.

I'm making a self deadline to get chapter XVII of SbtB out tonight. Wish me luck, work has killed me this week and I'm far behind what I wanted to get done.

Good luck. Don't rush it though. I doubt I'm the only one who'd rather wait a little longer for your normal quality rather then get a new chapter sooner but have it be sub par.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Good luck. Don't rush it though. I doubt I'm the only one who'd rather wait a little longer for your normal quality rather then get a new chapter sooner but have it be sub par.

Thanks ^^ I think this chapter is okay. I didn't get as much down as I wanted, but it was enough to deem it worth posting. Going to try and finish this within 3 updates T_T

Right now Angel is proofing and I'm going to add diary entires and card, then post. Tonight sometime.

[Evil Rick]

Another funy story with Mexican Humor until my doujinshi is finished

Spoiler for Subaru:

Nothing Personal, just business

THere was something like the 3:00 pm in those streets, Subaru can't belive that her mission must be in a place like that, that comunity was famous for all the insegurity and violence, that were things of every day, "Ther is nothing to be worried about" she thoug, "I just need to deliver this pack and all will go away from here"

The pack was some pappers and the one who needs them was a TSAB informant know only as "Black Ant" a 39 years old guy that have no magic or military talent tbut was a really experiensed spy.

She arrives to his appartment, in the 6º floor of that old building.

Subaru: Black Ant! It's me, Subaru! Open the door!

The door open slowly and the one behind it was Black Ant.

Black Ant: Oh! Subaru. Yes, yes come in, I had company so I hope you will not feel incomfortable

Subaru: Oh don't worry about, I will only give you the pack and... Dear mother of...!!!

Subaru get petrifiedd whe she discover than the companion of Black Ant was no other but the Death itself, with his skeleton face, black cap and his oz.

Death: Well, look what we have here. It isn't the punk skategirl of the Riot Force?

Subaru:Y...Yes... uhm, nice to meet you... Bl... Black Ant here are the pappers... could you take them pleas...

Death: Wow! Hold a minute- The Death takes from his pocket a little list and check it- Mmm... let me see... Cancer, burned, shooted... Poisoned, Crushed...No. Dam! you save yourself by now Punk!

In that moment Subaru knows that the best idea should be go out, but by the moment, her legs seem to no respond.

Death: Well Black Ant, Could you please tell me why you wanted to talk with me, I have lost almost half day of work!

Black Ant: O.k. you will see, like 10 years ago, when I was in prision I know teh Gangster Big Tony, he get married with the widow of Lonsey, he kills her to take all her money, but when he got to jail, he hide all the money. He tells me were but by bad lucky I told the secret to my wife. After a time I managed to escape from Jail, but before of that I kill Big Tony and let his soon Big Tony jr. Trapedd in Jail so I will have all the money for my self, but when I came to the place Tony said he hides it, It was no there! It's ovius that y wife takeit, I look for her 5 years until I discover that she was living here.

Death: The point is?

Black Ant: The point is that by accident I kill her with this stupid gun before she tells me were she hide the money. I want you to return her so she can tell me!

Death: I'm sorry Black Ant, I can't make that kind of devolutions

Black Ant: Oh, c'mon! Ther must be something you can do!

Deat: Well, in fact there is something... - The Death take the gun that Black Ant have used ti kill his wife and giveit to him- I prupose this to you, you take this gun and suicide youself, then in the other side you can ask your wife were she hide the money, then I will tell my boss that your death was an accident and I will return you here!

Black Ant: Of course! That is brillant! I will know were is the money and you will cover your cuote. You are a Genius!

Death: Hold it! First of all I don't want any Punk watching this!

The Death grab Subaru and throws her out of the apartment and launch over her some books he find in a table just to amke her get scary.

Death: Get out! And grab some books to see if you can at least learn something. You purple hair Punk!

After that the death close the door, Subaru was a so conmotionated that she took the books and go out the building, until she hears "BAAANG!" She reactinate and took a look to the books that the Death throw to her.

Subaru: But why I will want some... Holly Mother!

Subaru discover lots of bills in the books pages, inmediatly she star looking in the rest of the books and in all of them she found lots of bills

Subaru: Of Course! Black Ant's wife hide the money in the books! He will never going to find it!

In that exactly moment, Subaru see Teana, Erio and Caro runing fast in direction to her.

Subaru: Hey, guys! You are not going to belive what I...

Teana: It's no time for that, we need to hurry!

Erio: The TSAB informus that Big Tony jr. escape from jail, and that he was
going to use a Death's Halloween costume to make a really bad joke!

Subaru: O.O!

[krisslanza]

I shall attempt to finish AeC Chapter 2 and start SoL Chapter 3.

Attempt to.

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Another funy story with Mexican Humor until my doujinshi is finished

Spoiler for Subaru:

Nothing Personal, just business

THere was something like the 3:00 pm in those streets, Subaru can't belive that her mission must be in a place like that, that comunity was famous for all the insegurity and violence, that were things of every day, "Ther is nothing to be worried about" she thoug, "I just need to deliver this pack and all will go away from here"

The pack was some pappers and the one who needs them was a TSAB informant know only as "Black Ant" a 39 years old guy that have no magic or military talent tbut was a really experiensed spy.

She arrives to his appartment, in the 6º floor of that old building.

Subaru: Black Ant! It's me, Subaru! Open the door!

The door open slowly and the one behind it was Black Ant.

Black Ant: Oh! Subaru. Yes, yes come in, I had company so I hope you will not feel incomfortable

Subaru: Oh don't worry about, I will only give you the pack and... Dear mother of...!!!

Subaru get petrifiedd whe she discover than the companion of Black Ant was no other but the Death itself, with his skeleton face, black cap and his oz.

Death: Well, look what we have here. It isn't the punk skategirl of the Riot Force?

Subaru:Y...Yes... uhm, nice to meet you... Bl... Black Ant here are the pappers... could you take them pleas...

Death: Wow! Hold a minute- The Death takes from his pocket a little list and check it- Mmm... let me see... Cancer, burned, shooted... Poisoned, Crushed...No. Dam! you save yourself by now Punk!

In that moment Subaru knows that the best idea should be go out, but by the moment, her legs seem to no respond.

Death: Well Black Ant, Could you please tell me why you wanted to talk with me, I have lost almost half day of work!

Black Ant: O.k. you will see, like 10 years ago, when I was in prision I know teh Gangster Big Tony, he get married with the widow of Lonsey, he kills her to take all her money, but when he got to jail, he hide all the money. He tells me were but by bad lucky I told the secret to my wife. After a time I managed to escape from Jail, but before of that I kill Big Tony and let his soon Big Tony jr. Trapedd in Jail so I will have all the money for my self, but when I came to the place Tony said he hides it, It was no there! It's ovius that y wife takeit, I look for her 5 years until I discover that she was living here.

Death: The point is?

Black Ant: The point is that by accident I kill her with this stupid gun before she tells me were she hide the money. I want you to return her so she can tell me!

Death: I'm sorry Black Ant, I can't make that kind of devolutions

Black Ant: Oh, c'mon! Ther must be something you can do!

Deat: Well, in fact there is something... - The Death take the gun that Black Ant have used ti kill his wife and giveit to him- I prupose this to you, you take this gun and suicide youself, then in the other side you can ask your wife were she hide the money, then I will tell my boss that your death was an accident and I will return you here!

Black Ant: Of course! That is brillant! I will know were is the money and you will cover your cuote. You are a Genius!

Death: Hold it! First of all I don't want any Punk watching this!

The Death grab Subaru and throws her out of the apartment and launch over her some books he find in a table just to amke her get scary.

Death: Get out! And grab some books to see if you can at least learn something. You purple hair Punk!

After that the death close the door, Subaru was a so conmotionated that she took the books and go out the building, until she hears "BAAANG!" She reactinate and took a look to the books that the Death throw to her.

Subaru: But why I will want some... Holly Mother!

Subaru discover lots of bills in the books pages, inmediatly she star looking in the rest of the books and in all of them she found lots of bills

Subaru: Of Course! Black Ant's wife hide the money in the books! He will never going to find it!

In that exactly moment, Subaru see Teana, Erio and Caro runing fast in direction to her.

Subaru: Hey, guys! You are not going to belive what I...

Teana: It's no time for that, we need to hurry!

Erio: The TSAB informus that Big Tony jr. escape from jail, and that he was
going to use a Death's Halloween costume to make a really bad joke!

Subaru: O.O!

omg, poor guy

but very funny *still laughing*

[Satashi]

Saved by the Bell 17

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/17/

Enjoy ^^

[Dr_Tom]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Saved by the Bell 17

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/17/

Enjoy ^^

YaY!! Thank you Satashi, reading now before I head to work to hand out copy's of Super Smash Bros. Brawl at the midnight release.

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Saved by the Bell 17

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/17/

Enjoy ^^

Spoiler for review:

the china dress will be in chapter XVIII?

I enjoyed it as I enjoyed the other chapters

I halfway expected, that Fate will catch Nanoha smoking, when she first came out of Yunno's appartment, but like you wrote it, it was better

I really laughed hard, when I read the landscaping thing
a real win

now we met Vita, I wonder how old she is, when she goes to school too
Shamal is helpfully as always and I'm happy to read, that you led her go to college and study there to be a doctor

I also expected, Fate would sleep next to Nanoha and covered them both with the sheets and Nanoha will cling to her and it would be an awkward situation in the next day, Precia with her bad timing
*Nanoha half naked, Fate maybe also with few clothes^^*

at last:
future telling by Gillian:
I will see yelling,fluff and much love

thank you for reading

[Junkedcat]

Here we go... The second chapter to Landscaper!Fate: Rated M for Mature...

Spoiler for Landscaper!Fate Chapter 2:

Landscaper!Fate

Phase Two: Who I Am

“Trespassing”

It was another one of those nights, the kind when she just couldn’t calm down to go to sleep. Fate was out again walking the streets in order to get rid of some excess energy. She had reached the furthest point she wanted to travel to and just her luck there was Princess, walking her way on the other side of the street. Fate did a mental face palm before she decided to cross the street. When that timid girl caught Fate in her eyes she gave a small wave and waited till the blonde reached her to continue on.

“I thought I told you Princess, perverts walk the streets out here.” It was a mocking tone, but she still wanted to get a point across.

“But I wanted to get some fresh air…”

“Ok, whatever.” Red eyes looked on ahead, ‘That has to be the lamest reason…Wait, I doing the same thing.’

They continued whatever way Princess wanted to go. Eventually blue eyes struck up some conversation. “I hope you didn’t get into any trouble...”

Fate had to think about this for a second, “You mean your dad?” She let out a small snicker. “Bossman ended up reaming out his ass for giving me a hard time and for refusing to sign. True, I should have had him sign before I did any additional work but still, he acted like an asshole.”

“…Sorry.”

“Not your problem that your father’s a dick.”

Princess just looked to the side after that comment. They walked a half a block before a new interruption showed up.

“Hay girls,” Two guys popped out of nowhere and got behind them, “wanna go to a party?” Fate glanced over at Princess, who cringed when a hand was placed on her shoulder. Fate felt a hand on her shoulder as well, knowing damn well how this was going to turn out.

“We’re not interested,” the blonde stated to the guys. She tried to walk off but that damn hand was still on her with a little bit of a grip.

“Oh come on, don’t be that way. You girls are much better that the rest of the sluts at the party.” The men didn’t seam to be giving up, and their grip seemed to prove the point. Princess was starting to get real panicky, signaling to the landscaper that she couldn’t beat around the bush.

“Hands…off…NOW!” the blonde’s voice dripped with venom.

“You don’t know what you’re…AHUGG!”

Princess glanced at the one behind her and saw that he was in pain. Darting her eyes at the blonde she witness her bring back one hand and pull a canister from behind her with the other. She sprayed the confused attacker behind her in the eyes and glared with furry at the other one.

“GET LOST!” Such anger was in those red eyes.

“WHY YOU LITTLE…” The one that was not blinded was cut short again with another swipe of the landscaper’s hand. This time Princess noticed that the man acquired a fresh cut across his face. Looking back at Fate she watched as she put away a knife. What a grab at Princess’ hand she dragged her away.

“THAT’S why you don’t go walking out at night in this neighborhood.”

= = = = =

“Well… here it is,” Fate pulled the key out from the door and opened it to let Princess through. She watched as the girl, still shaken up by the attempted attack, walked into her apartment. It wasn’t much and looked like any low income apartment: dull, messy, and in need of some repairs. The fidgety girl looked around for a bit before staring at her rescuer.

“You can sit on the couch you know…”

“Oh… Ok.”

Fate crashed right next to Princess on the couch. After a stretch she brought one arm to rest on the back of the couch on Princess’ side. With a sigh she tried to gather some subject the two could talk about.

“So, why did you sneak out this time?” She starred up at the ceiling ‘That girl can’t be going out just for some fresh air.’

“I just wanted to be outside.”

“Bullshit.” Red eyes shot disbelief. ‘But damn is that shy voice sexy.’

“No, really,” Princess started to play with her hands, “I wanted to get out of the house.” The girl glanced over at Fate, “I wanted to go somewhere new.”

“Why don’t you go places during the day?” Princess looked at her like she was being a smart ass. “No, seriously, if you go walking outside alone at night, something bad is bound to happen.”

“Daddy doesn’t let me go places alone…”

Fate chewed on this for a minuet. “Why don’t you ask your friends to go out with you?”

“You mean Suzuka and Arisa? They’re not really my friends… We just know each other from private school. Besides they are married and don’t have a lot of free time.”

“Not friends huh? I wouldn’t have guessed that by the conversation you three were having.” Fate moved her arm so it draped over Princess’ shoulder.

“Well, um…” she squirmed a little under the new weight on her, “It wasn’t all that interesting. It was mostly about stuff I don’t care for; like what their husbands do, decorating, and who’s who stuff.”

Fate let out a chuckle “So I wasn’t the only one board to death. I only listened to part of it hoping you would start talking about your sex lives. I was hoping to find out what kind of ‘toys’ Princess likes to play with.”

“Fate that’s…” Princess was blushing furiously under this new assumption, “it’s not right to do that kind of thing.”

“Well I guess that you have to stay all clean in your society. Just lay there and let the man do his business. Sex would have made a better conversation piece but… oh well.” The girl under her arm was now beat red. Beat red but ever so slightly leaning into the light embrace supplied by her arm. A few minutes went by before Princess spoke up again.

“I should be getting back, Daddy might find out I’m gone.” She made a movement to get up but sat back down again. “Fate? Could you… if I want to go out at night… Will you walk with me?”

Fate pondered on this before getting up to pull Princess to her feet. “Yea I’ll walk with you.” ‘Man would it suck to be cooped up in one place for so long’ “But umm… what the hell is your name?”

Princess just stared at Fate blankly before realizing she never told her her name. “umm…” a signature blush, “My name is Nanoha.”

“Nanoha,” a pause, “Na-no-ha,” a sexy moan, “Nanoha… Yea I think I could say that in the throws of passion.” She waited until Nanoha could look at her again before continuing “Come on Princess Nanoha, if we don’t get you back home you’ll turn from a tramp back into a Princess.”

= = = = =

Fate looked at her work order. ‘Says to check that side beds and figure out why a patch of shrubs and ornamental grass are dieing.’ She found the patch in questioned and made a quick examination. ‘This looks like its been…’ Lattice caught her eye and she looked one story up to a window. “Ohhh…” ‘I’m so having a talk with that girl.’

= = = = =

Fate leaned up against the light post and tapped her foot. With a sigh and a shiver she bumped her head against the post. ‘God I feel like I’ve been stood up’ She looked around and checked her watch. 12:36. ‘If the cops come by they’ll take me in for being some common whore or something… No wait, only “escort services” come knocking around these neighborhoods.’ Her thoughts escaped to her lips, “So wait… does that make me an upscale whore?”

“Fate…” Nanoha called out quietly jogging down the street.

“Sup, Princess…” Fate turned to greet the girl and then went on to walk next to her. “Did you fall on your pretty little ass this time?”

Princess blushed, not at the complement of her derrière, but at the action. “How did you know I fell…?”

“I’ve seen the trample marks at what I believe is your bedroom window.”

“Sorry…”

“Don’t be; at least now I know what window to crawl through to get some late night nookie.” Fate finished her sentence with a pinch of Nanoha’s side. She squirmed a little but continued on her way. “So where to this time Princess, I am at your service…” Fate couldn’t help but bow.

Nanoha thought about it for a little bit while they made their way to the less desirable part of town. “Let’s go to your apartment.”

“Ohhh….” Fate let a grin slip through “You want to go back to my place,” She looped an arm around one of Nanoha’s, “you get strait to the point don’t you.”

Nanoha pretty much knew what Fate implied, “I just think that your apartment is safe. I don’t need to be walking all over the place to get out of the house.”

“Point taken.”

The rest of the way was made in relative silence. Princess was embarrassed with Fate having an arm looped around hers, but it felt nice that someone was touching her like that… Once at the apartment she sat down properly on the strangely comfy old couch.

“Do you want anything to drink or much on? ‘Like me.’


“No... No thank you.”

“Ok,” Fate plopped right next to Nanoha and instantly put an arm around her. She got the expected blush and squirm but before Nanoha could ask anything Fate decided to probe something lingering in the back of her mind. “So why where you all fidgety in the convenience store that one night?”

“Oh, well… like I said before I don’t get out much so...” She paused and hung her head, “I have never been in one before.”

“So that’s why you looked like you where buying your first sex toy in there?”

“I looked like I was? Ohh….” The embarrassed girl buried her face into her palms, “I was nervous and I needed to buy something… you don’t go into a store if you don’t want to buy something right?”

Fate started to rub the girl’s shoulder. “You’re one nervous little girl, but you know what, that’s kind of hot.”

Princess moved her hand and took a peak at Fate, “Why do you say such things?”

“Because I’m a pervert, and you are a sexy woman.” Fate’s voice started to get deep.

“I heard that people tease other people like that but… why are you calling me sexy?”

Fate brought her arm from around Princess’ shoulder and placed both hands on the other girl’s one leg. Shifting around Fate was now kneeling on the couch facing Nanoha. “Because, I’m coming on to you.”

“Wait… You’re hitting on me like…”

“That’s right” Fate grinned in a soft voice, “I’m queerer than a football bat.” She moved her hands from Nanoha’s leg up to her sides, slightly pushing her down. The hands traveled to her wrists and griped them firmly. She shifted the Princess around so that she could pin her lying down on the couch. When positioned over her Fate went down and rested her cheek against Nanoha’s. The strong landscaper whispered huskily into her ear, “It’s a shame you don’t know how sexy you are… So let me make you feel how sexy you are.” Fate lifted herself up to look at her catch. It was nothing new; she did this to the drunken girls at parties, to the girls that went go through an “I hate men” phase, to any girl that is too shy to say what she wanted.

She looked into Nanoha’s eyes. Those blue, deep, beautiful, terrified eyes. They pierced right through Fate’s will. Slowly she loosened her grip on Princess’ wrists. The rest of her body lost its firmness and just slumped down. She could feel Nanoha testing her movements to see if she could escape. It didn’t really matter, her mind had gone blank, spare those blue eyes. ‘I… She was...’ a body slowly moved out from under her. ‘Why did I?’ The body began to slowly walk away, feeling its trembling. ‘If she leaves now… It will be… I would never...’ Snapped out of her trance, Fate jumped from the couch and grabbed onto Nanoha’s hand. Princess stiffened at the contact but Fate didn’t let go. They stood there for a long time, neither one saying a word.

“I’m… Sorry.” Fate’s voice was laced with defeat. It took her a while to gather her thoughts. “I should have never have done that.” She couldn’t hold her head up. She was ashamed for once in her life. “Yes… I am attracted to you, but what I did was…” a pause, “wrong.” She gently let go of the hand and kept her sight on the floor. Nanoha turned around and brought her hands together, rubbing them to calm herself down.

Meekly she made a request, “Walk me home… Please?”

“Yes… Princess.”

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Saved by the Bell 17

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/17/

Enjoy ^^

As always you have let me...

Very impresive story work my friend, a good prob that Big Fights and explosions are not necesary to create a very adictive story

(Ejemm... Did you like my funny stories?)

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Gillian

omg, poor guy

but very funny *still laughing*

Je, thanks

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

Here we go... The second chapter to Landscaper!Fate: Rated M for Mature...

Spoiler for Landscaper!Fate Chapter 2:

Chapter 2
Landscaper!Fate

It was another one of those nights, the kind that you just can’t calm down to go to sleep. Fate was out again walking the streets in order to get rid of some excess energy. She had reached the furthest point she wanted to travel to and just her luck there was Princess, walking her way on the other side of the street. Fate did a mental face palm before she decided to cross the street. When that timid girl caught Fate in her eyes she gave a small wave and waited till Fate reached her to continue on.

“I thought I told you Princess, perverts walk the streets out here.”

“But I wanted to get some fresh air…”

“Ok, whatever.”

They continued whatever way Princess wanted to go. Eventually Princess she struck up conversation. “I hope you didn’t get into any trouble.”

Fate had to think about this for a second, “You mean your dad?” She let out a small snicker. “Bossman ended up reaming out his ass for giving me a hard time and for refusing to sign. True I should have had him sign before I did any additional work but still, he acted like an asshole.”
“…Sorry.”

“Not your problem that your father’s a dick.”

Princess just looked to the side after that comment. They walked a half a block before a new interruption showed up.

“Hay girls,” Two guys popped out of nowhere and got behind them, “wanta go to a party?” Fate glanced over at Princess who cringed when a hand was placed on her shoulder. Fate felt a hand on her shoulder as well knowing damn well how this was going to turn out.

“We’re not interested,” the blonde stated to the guys. She tried to walk off but that damn hand was still on her with a little bit of a grip.

“Oh come on, don’t be that way. You girls are much better that the rest of the sluts at the party.” Princess was starting to get real panicky, signaling to Fate that she couldn’t beat around the bush.

“Hands…off…NOW” Fate’s voice dripped with venom.

“You don’t know what you’re…AHUGG!”

Princess glanced at the one behind her and saw that he was in pain. Darting her eyes at Fate she witness her bring back one hand and pull a canister from behind her with the other. She sprayed her confused attacker in the eyes and glared with furry at the other one.

“GET LOST!”

“WHY YOU LITTLE…” The one that was not blinded was cut short again by Fate with another swipe of her hand. This time Princess noticed that the man acquired a fresh cut across his face. Looking back at Fate she watched as she put away a knife. Fate grabbed Princess’ hand and pulled her along.

“THAT’S why you don’t go walking out at night in this neighborhood.”

= = = = =

“Well… here it is,” Fate pulled the key out from the door and opened it to let Princess through. She watched as the girl, still shaken up by the attempted attack, walked into her apartment. It wasn’t much and looked like any low income apartment: dull, messy, and in need of some repairs. The fidgety girl looked around for a bit before staring at Fate.

“You can sit on the couch you know…”

“Oh… Ok.”
Fate crashed right next to Princess on the couch. After a stretch she brought one arm to rest on the back of the couch on Princess’ side. With a sigh she tried to gather some subject the two could talk about.

“So, why did you sneak out this time?” ‘The girl cant be going out just for some fresh air.’

“I just wanted to be outside”

“Bullshit.” ‘But damn is that shy voice sexy.’

“No, really,” Princess started to play with her hands, “I wanted to get out of the house.” The girl glanced over at Fate, “I wanted to go somewhere new.”

“Why don’t you go places during the day?” Princess gave Fate look at her like she was being a smart ass. “No, seriously, you going walking outside at night alone and something bad is bound to happen.”

“Daddy doesn’t let me go places alone…”

Fate chewed on this for a minuet. “Why don’t you ask your friends to go out with you?”

“You mean Suzuka and Arisa? They’re not really my friends… We just know each other from private school. Besides they are married and don’t have a lot of free time.”

“Not friends huh? I wouldn’t have guessed that by the conversation you three were having.” Fate shifted her arm to drape over Princess’ shoulder.

“Well, um…” she shifted a little under the new weight on her, “It wasn’t all that interesting. It was mostly about stuff I don’t care for like what their husbands do, decorating, and who’s who stuff.”

Fate let out a chuckle “So I wasn’t the only one board to death. I only listened to part of it hoping you would start talking about your sex lives. I was hoping to find out what kind of ‘toys’ Princess likes to play with.”

“Fate that’s…” Princess was blushing furiously under this new assumption, “it’s not right to do that kind of thing.”

“Well I guess that you have to stay all clean in your society. Just lay there and let the man do his business. Sex would have made a better conversation piece but… oh well.” The girl under her arm was now beat red. Beat red but ever so slightly leaning into the light embrace supplied by her arm. About ten minutes went by before Princess spoke up again.

“I should be getting back, Daddy might find out I’m gone.” She made a movement to get up but sat back down again. “Fate? Could you… if I want to go out at night… Will you walk with me?”

Fate pondered on this before getting up to pull Princess to her feet. “Yea I’ll walk with you.” ‘Man would it suck to be cooped up in one place for so long’ “But umm… what the hell is your name?”

Princess just stared at Fate blankly before realizing she never told her her name. “umm…” a signature blush, “My name is Nanoha.”

“Nanoha,” a pause, “Na-no-ha,” a sexy moan, “Nanoha… Yea I think I could say that in the throws of passion.” She waited until Nanoha could look at her again before continuing “Come on Princess Nanoha, if we don’t get you back home you’ll turn from a tramp back into a Princess.”

= = = = =

Fate looked at her work order. ‘Says to check that side beds and figure out why a patch of shrubs and ornamental grass are dieing.’ She found the patch in questioned and made a quick examination. ‘This looks like its been….’ Lattice caught her eye and she looked one story up to a window. “Ohhh…” ‘I’m so having a talk with that girl.’

= = = = =

Fate leaned up against the light post and taped her foot. With a sigh and a shiver she taped her head against the post. ‘God I feel like I’ve been stood up’ She looked around and checked her watch. 12:36. ‘If the cops come by they’ll take me in for being some common whore or something… No wait, only “escort services” come knocking around these neighborhoods.’ “So wait… does that make me an upscale whore?”

“Fate…” Nanoha called out quietly jogging down the street.

“Sup, Princess…” Fate turned to great the girl and then went on to walk next to her. “Did you fall on your pretty little ass this time?”

Princess blushed not at the complement of her derrière but at the action, “How did you know I fall…”

“I’ve seen the trample marks at what I believe is your bedroom window.”

“Sorry…”

“Don’t be, at least now I know what window to crawl through to get some late night nookie.” Fate finished her sentence with a pinch of Nanoha’s side. She squirmed a little but continued on her way. “So where to this time Princess, I am at your service…” Fate couldn’t help but bow.

Nanoha thought about it for a little bit while they made their way to the less desirable part of town. “Let’s go to your apartment.”

“Ohhh….” Fate let a grin slip through “You want to go back to my place,” She looped an arm around one of Nanoha’s, “you get strait to the point don’t you.”

Nanoha pretty much knew what Fate implied, “I just think that your place is safe. I don’t need to be walking all over the place to get out of the house.”

“Point taken.”

The rest of the way was made in relative silence. Princess was embarrassed with Fate having a hand looped around hers, but it felt nice that someone was holding her hand… Once at the apartment she sat down properly on the strangely comfy old couch.

“Do you want anything to drink or much on? ‘Like me.’

“No... No thank you.”

“Ok,” Fate plopped right next to Nanoha and instantly put an arm around her. She got the expected blush and squirm but before Nanoha could ask anything Fate decided to probe something lingering in the back of her mind. “So why where you all fidgety in the convenience store that one night?”

“Oh, well… like I said before I don’t get out much so...” She paused and hung her head, “I have never been in one before.”

“So that’s why you looked like you where buying your first sex toy in there?”

“I looked like I was? Ohh….” The embarrassed girl buried her face into her palms, “I was nervous and I need to buy something… you don’t go into a store if you don’t want to buy something right?”

Fate started to rub the girls shoulder. “Your one nervous little girl, but you know what, that’s kind of hot.”

Princess moved her hand and took a peak at Fate, “Why do you say such things?”

“Because I’m a pervert, and you are a sexy women.” Fate’s voice started to get deep.

“I heard that people tease other people like that but… why are you calling me sexy?”

Fate brought her arm from around Princess’ shoulder and placed both hands on the other girl’s one leg. Shifting around Fate was now kneeling on the couch facing Nanoha. “Because, I’m coming on to you.”

“Wait… You’re hitting on me like…”

“That’s right” Fate grinned in a soft voice, “I’m queerer than a football bat.” She moved her hands from Nanoha’s leg up to her sides, traveled to her wrists and griped them firmly. She shifted the Princess around so that she could pin her lying down on the couch. When positioned over her Fate when down and rested her cheek against Nanoha’s. She whispered huskily into her ear, “It’s a shame you don’t know how sexy you are… So let me make you feel how sexy you are.” Fate lifted herself up to look at her catch. It was nothing new; she did this to the drunken girls at parties, the girls that went go through an “I hate men” phase, any girl that is too shy.

She looked into Nanoha’s eyes. Those blue, deep, beautiful, terrified eyes. They pierced right through Fate. Slowly she loosened her grip on Princess’ wrists. The rest of her body lost its firmness and just slumped down. She could feel Nanoha testing her movements to see if she could escape. It didn’t really matter, her mind had gone blank spare those blue eyes. ‘I… She was...’ a body slowly moved out from under her. ‘Why did I?’ The body began to slowly walk away. She could feel the other one trembling. ‘If she leaves now… It will be… I would never...’ Snapped out of her trance, Fate jumped from the couch and grabbed onto Nanoha’s hand. Princess stiffened at the contact but Fate didn’t let go. They stood there for a long time, neither one saying a word.

“I’m… Sorry.” Fate’s voice was laced with defeat. It took her a while to gather her thoughts. “I should have never have done that.” Fate couldn’t hold her head up. She was ashamed for once. “Yes… I am attracted to you, but what I did was…” A pause, “wrong.” She gently let go of the hand and kept her sight on the floor. Nanoha turned around and brought her hands together, rubbing them to calm herself down.

Meekly she made a request, “Walk me home… Please?”

“Yes… Princess.”

Oh, no! And the Hot Dog?

o.k. bad joke, congragulations Amigo

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Saved by the Bell 17

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/17/

Enjoy ^^

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

Here we go... The second chapter to Landscaper!Fate: Rated M for Mature...

Spoiler for Landscaper!Fate Chapter 2:

Chapter 2
Landscaper!Fate

It was another one of those nights, the kind that you just can’t calm down to go to sleep. Fate was out again walking the streets in order to get rid of some excess energy. She had reached the furthest point she wanted to travel to and just her luck there was Princess, walking her way on the other side of the street. Fate did a mental face palm before she decided to cross the street. When that timid girl caught Fate in her eyes she gave a small wave and waited till Fate reached her to continue on.

“I thought I told you Princess, perverts walk the streets out here.”

“But I wanted to get some fresh air…”

“Ok, whatever.”

They continued whatever way Princess wanted to go. Eventually Princess she struck up conversation. “I hope you didn’t get into any trouble.”

Fate had to think about this for a second, “You mean your dad?” She let out a small snicker. “Bossman ended up reaming out his ass for giving me a hard time and for refusing to sign. True I should have had him sign before I did any additional work but still, he acted like an asshole.”
“…Sorry.”

“Not your problem that your father’s a dick.”

Princess just looked to the side after that comment. They walked a half a block before a new interruption showed up.

“Hay girls,” Two guys popped out of nowhere and got behind them, “wanta go to a party?” Fate glanced over at Princess who cringed when a hand was placed on her shoulder. Fate felt a hand on her shoulder as well knowing damn well how this was going to turn out.

“We’re not interested,” the blonde stated to the guys. She tried to walk off but that damn hand was still on her with a little bit of a grip.

“Oh come on, don’t be that way. You girls are much better that the rest of the sluts at the party.” Princess was starting to get real panicky, signaling to Fate that she couldn’t beat around the bush.

“Hands…off…NOW” Fate’s voice dripped with venom.

“You don’t know what you’re…AHUGG!”

Princess glanced at the one behind her and saw that he was in pain. Darting her eyes at Fate she witness her bring back one hand and pull a canister from behind her with the other. She sprayed her confused attacker in the eyes and glared with furry at the other one.

“GET LOST!”

“WHY YOU LITTLE…” The one that was not blinded was cut short again by Fate with another swipe of her hand. This time Princess noticed that the man acquired a fresh cut across his face. Looking back at Fate she watched as she put away a knife. Fate grabbed Princess’ hand and pulled her along.

“THAT’S why you don’t go walking out at night in this neighborhood.”

= = = = =

“Well… here it is,” Fate pulled the key out from the door and opened it to let Princess through. She watched as the girl, still shaken up by the attempted attack, walked into her apartment. It wasn’t much and looked like any low income apartment: dull, messy, and in need of some repairs. The fidgety girl looked around for a bit before staring at Fate.

“You can sit on the couch you know…”

“Oh… Ok.”
Fate crashed right next to Princess on the couch. After a stretch she brought one arm to rest on the back of the couch on Princess’ side. With a sigh she tried to gather some subject the two could talk about.

“So, why did you sneak out this time?” ‘The girl cant be going out just for some fresh air.’

“I just wanted to be outside”

“Bullshit.” ‘But damn is that shy voice sexy.’

“No, really,” Princess started to play with her hands, “I wanted to get out of the house.” The girl glanced over at Fate, “I wanted to go somewhere new.”

“Why don’t you go places during the day?” Princess gave Fate look at her like she was being a smart ass. “No, seriously, you going walking outside at night alone and something bad is bound to happen.”

“Daddy doesn’t let me go places alone…”

Fate chewed on this for a minuet. “Why don’t you ask your friends to go out with you?”

“You mean Suzuka and Arisa? They’re not really my friends… We just know each other from private school. Besides they are married and don’t have a lot of free time.”

“Not friends huh? I wouldn’t have guessed that by the conversation you three were having.” Fate shifted her arm to drape over Princess’ shoulder.

“Well, um…” she shifted a little under the new weight on her, “It wasn’t all that interesting. It was mostly about stuff I don’t care for like what their husbands do, decorating, and who’s who stuff.”

Fate let out a chuckle “So I wasn’t the only one board to death. I only listened to part of it hoping you would start talking about your sex lives. I was hoping to find out what kind of ‘toys’ Princess likes to play with.”

“Fate that’s…” Princess was blushing furiously under this new assumption, “it’s not right to do that kind of thing.”

“Well I guess that you have to stay all clean in your society. Just lay there and let the man do his business. Sex would have made a better conversation piece but… oh well.” The girl under her arm was now beat red. Beat red but ever so slightly leaning into the light embrace supplied by her arm. About ten minutes went by before Princess spoke up again.

“I should be getting back, Daddy might find out I’m gone.” She made a movement to get up but sat back down again. “Fate? Could you… if I want to go out at night… Will you walk with me?”

Fate pondered on this before getting up to pull Princess to her feet. “Yea I’ll walk with you.” ‘Man would it suck to be cooped up in one place for so long’ “But umm… what the hell is your name?”

Princess just stared at Fate blankly before realizing she never told her her name. “umm…” a signature blush, “My name is Nanoha.”

“Nanoha,” a pause, “Na-no-ha,” a sexy moan, “Nanoha… Yea I think I could say that in the throws of passion.” She waited until Nanoha could look at her again before continuing “Come on Princess Nanoha, if we don’t get you back home you’ll turn from a tramp back into a Princess.”

= = = = =

Fate looked at her work order. ‘Says to check that side beds and figure out why a patch of shrubs and ornamental grass are dieing.’ She found the patch in questioned and made a quick examination. ‘This looks like its been….’ Lattice caught her eye and she looked one story up to a window. “Ohhh…” ‘I’m so having a talk with that girl.’

= = = = =

Fate leaned up against the light post and taped her foot. With a sigh and a shiver she taped her head against the post. ‘God I feel like I’ve been stood up’ She looked around and checked her watch. 12:36. ‘If the cops come by they’ll take me in for being some common whore or something… No wait, only “escort services” come knocking around these neighborhoods.’ “So wait… does that make me an upscale whore?”

“Fate…” Nanoha called out quietly jogging down the street.

“Sup, Princess…” Fate turned to great the girl and then went on to walk next to her. “Did you fall on your pretty little ass this time?”

Princess blushed not at the complement of her derrière but at the action, “How did you know I fall…”

“I’ve seen the trample marks at what I believe is your bedroom window.”

“Sorry…”

“Don’t be, at least now I know what window to crawl through to get some late night nookie.” Fate finished her sentence with a pinch of Nanoha’s side. She squirmed a little but continued on her way. “So where to this time Princess, I am at your service…” Fate couldn’t help but bow.

Nanoha thought about it for a little bit while they made their way to the less desirable part of town. “Let’s go to your apartment.”

“Ohhh….” Fate let a grin slip through “You want to go back to my place,” She looped an arm around one of Nanoha’s, “you get strait to the point don’t you.”

Nanoha pretty much knew what Fate implied, “I just think that your place is safe. I don’t need to be walking all over the place to get out of the house.”

“Point taken.”

The rest of the way was made in relative silence. Princess was embarrassed with Fate having a hand looped around hers, but it felt nice that someone was holding her hand… Once at the apartment she sat down properly on the strangely comfy old couch.

“Do you want anything to drink or much on? ‘Like me.’

“No... No thank you.”

“Ok,” Fate plopped right next to Nanoha and instantly put an arm around her. She got the expected blush and squirm but before Nanoha could ask anything Fate decided to probe something lingering in the back of her mind. “So why where you all fidgety in the convenience store that one night?”

“Oh, well… like I said before I don’t get out much so...” She paused and hung her head, “I have never been in one before.”

“So that’s why you looked like you where buying your first sex toy in there?”

“I looked like I was? Ohh….” The embarrassed girl buried her face into her palms, “I was nervous and I need to buy something… you don’t go into a store if you don’t want to buy something right?”

Fate started to rub the girls shoulder. “Your one nervous little girl, but you know what, that’s kind of hot.”

Princess moved her hand and took a peak at Fate, “Why do you say such things?”

“Because I’m a pervert, and you are a sexy women.” Fate’s voice started to get deep.

“I heard that people tease other people like that but… why are you calling me sexy?”

Fate brought her arm from around Princess’ shoulder and placed both hands on the other girl’s one leg. Shifting around Fate was now kneeling on the couch facing Nanoha. “Because, I’m coming on to you.”

“Wait… You’re hitting on me like…”

“That’s right” Fate grinned in a soft voice, “I’m queerer than a football bat.” She moved her hands from Nanoha’s leg up to her sides, traveled to her wrists and griped them firmly. She shifted the Princess around so that she could pin her lying down on the couch. When positioned over her Fate when down and rested her cheek against Nanoha’s. She whispered huskily into her ear, “It’s a shame you don’t know how sexy you are… So let me make you feel how sexy you are.” Fate lifted herself up to look at her catch. It was nothing new; she did this to the drunken girls at parties, the girls that went go through an “I hate men” phase, any girl that is too shy.

She looked into Nanoha’s eyes. Those blue, deep, beautiful, terrified eyes. They pierced right through Fate. Slowly she loosened her grip on Princess’ wrists. The rest of her body lost its firmness and just slumped down. She could feel Nanoha testing her movements to see if she could escape. It didn’t really matter, her mind had gone blank spare those blue eyes. ‘I… She was...’ a body slowly moved out from under her. ‘Why did I?’ The body began to slowly walk away. She could feel the other one trembling. ‘If she leaves now… It will be… I would never...’ Snapped out of her trance, Fate jumped from the couch and grabbed onto Nanoha’s hand. Princess stiffened at the contact but Fate didn’t let go. They stood there for a long time, neither one saying a word.

“I’m… Sorry.” Fate’s voice was laced with defeat. It took her a while to gather her thoughts. “I should have never have done that.” Fate couldn’t hold her head up. She was ashamed for once. “Yes… I am attracted to you, but what I did was…” A pause, “wrong.” She gently let go of the hand and kept her sight on the floor. Nanoha turned around and brought her hands together, rubbing them to calm herself down.

Meekly she made a request, “Walk me home… Please?”

“Yes… Princess.”

Woah a new SbtB chapter and a new Landscaper!Fate + Brawl out at midnight this is one good night . Reading tonight commenting tomorrow.

Edit: I know I said I'd comment tomorrow but... SbtB Fate has an interest in landscaping... I had to pause and catch my breath after that. I wonder what would happen if SbtB Fate met Landscaper!Fate Fate. On another note the line "Like a super gardener" made me think of some sort of Superhero. Maybe that's Landscaper!Fate Fate's secret identity, Landscaper by day Superhero by night. Faster then a speeding lawnmower, more powerful then the toughest weed whacker, able to perfectly shape hedges and pick up cute girls at the same time! It's Super Gardener!

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

Woah a new SbtB chapter and a new Landscaper!Fate + Brawl out at midnight this is one good night . Reading tonight commenting tomorrow.

Edit: I know I said I'd comment tomorrow but... SbtB Fate has an interest in landscaping... I had to pause and catch my breath after that. I wonder what would happen if SbtB Fate met Landscaper!Fate Fate. On another note the line "Like a super gardener" made me think of some sort of Superhero. Maybe that's Landscaper!Fate Fate's secret identity, Landscaper by day Superhero by night. Faster then a speeding lawnmower, more powerful then the toughest weed whacker, able to perfectly shape hedges and pick up cute girls at the same time! It's Super Gardener!

Haha, my Fate is a direct inspiration from Junkedcat. In fact, I asked him many, many questions about landscaping and he even helped me write that little section in SbtB. So you have him to thank for it ^^ Thanks Junkedcat.

Oh, and I sent my review/comments on chapter 2 in a PM.

Also, edited profile page to include chapter 2 of Landscaper!Fate

[Gillian]

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

Here we go... The second chapter to Landscaper!Fate: Rated M for Mature...

Spoiler for Landscaper!Fate Chapter 2:

Chapter 2
Landscaper!Fate

It was another one of those nights, the kind that you just can’t calm down to go to sleep. Fate was out again walking the streets in order to get rid of some excess energy. She had reached the furthest point she wanted to travel to and just her luck there was Princess, walking her way on the other side of the street. Fate did a mental face palm before she decided to cross the street. When that timid girl caught Fate in her eyes she gave a small wave and waited till Fate reached her to continue on.

“I thought I told you Princess, perverts walk the streets out here.”

“But I wanted to get some fresh air…”

“Ok, whatever.”

They continued whatever way Princess wanted to go. Eventually Princess she struck up conversation. “I hope you didn’t get into any trouble.”

Fate had to think about this for a second, “You mean your dad?” She let out a small snicker. “Bossman ended up reaming out his ass for giving me a hard time and for refusing to sign. True I should have had him sign before I did any additional work but still, he acted like an asshole.”
“…Sorry.”

“Not your problem that your father’s a dick.”

Princess just looked to the side after that comment. They walked a half a block before a new interruption showed up.

“Hay girls,” Two guys popped out of nowhere and got behind them, “wanta go to a party?” Fate glanced over at Princess who cringed when a hand was placed on her shoulder. Fate felt a hand on her shoulder as well knowing damn well how this was going to turn out.

“We’re not interested,” the blonde stated to the guys. She tried to walk off but that damn hand was still on her with a little bit of a grip.

“Oh come on, don’t be that way. You girls are much better that the rest of the sluts at the party.” Princess was starting to get real panicky, signaling to Fate that she couldn’t beat around the bush.

“Hands…off…NOW” Fate’s voice dripped with venom.

“You don’t know what you’re…AHUGG!”

Princess glanced at the one behind her and saw that he was in pain. Darting her eyes at Fate she witness her bring back one hand and pull a canister from behind her with the other. She sprayed her confused attacker in the eyes and glared with furry at the other one.

“GET LOST!”

“WHY YOU LITTLE…” The one that was not blinded was cut short again by Fate with another swipe of her hand. This time Princess noticed that the man acquired a fresh cut across his face. Looking back at Fate she watched as she put away a knife. Fate grabbed Princess’ hand and pulled her along.

“THAT’S why you don’t go walking out at night in this neighborhood.”

= = = = =

“Well… here it is,” Fate pulled the key out from the door and opened it to let Princess through. She watched as the girl, still shaken up by the attempted attack, walked into her apartment. It wasn’t much and looked like any low income apartment: dull, messy, and in need of some repairs. The fidgety girl looked around for a bit before staring at Fate.

“You can sit on the couch you know…”

“Oh… Ok.”
Fate crashed right next to Princess on the couch. After a stretch she brought one arm to rest on the back of the couch on Princess’ side. With a sigh she tried to gather some subject the two could talk about.

“So, why did you sneak out this time?” ‘The girl cant be going out just for some fresh air.’

“I just wanted to be outside”

“Bullshit.” ‘But damn is that shy voice sexy.’

“No, really,” Princess started to play with her hands, “I wanted to get out of the house.” The girl glanced over at Fate, “I wanted to go somewhere new.”

“Why don’t you go places during the day?” Princess gave Fate look at her like she was being a smart ass. “No, seriously, you going walking outside at night alone and something bad is bound to happen.”

“Daddy doesn’t let me go places alone…”

Fate chewed on this for a minuet. “Why don’t you ask your friends to go out with you?”

“You mean Suzuka and Arisa? They’re not really my friends… We just know each other from private school. Besides they are married and don’t have a lot of free time.”

“Not friends huh? I wouldn’t have guessed that by the conversation you three were having.” Fate shifted her arm to drape over Princess’ shoulder.

“Well, um…” she shifted a little under the new weight on her, “It wasn’t all that interesting. It was mostly about stuff I don’t care for like what their husbands do, decorating, and who’s who stuff.”

Fate let out a chuckle “So I wasn’t the only one board to death. I only listened to part of it hoping you would start talking about your sex lives. I was hoping to find out what kind of ‘toys’ Princess likes to play with.”

“Fate that’s…” Princess was blushing furiously under this new assumption, “it’s not right to do that kind of thing.”

“Well I guess that you have to stay all clean in your society. Just lay there and let the man do his business. Sex would have made a better conversation piece but… oh well.” The girl under her arm was now beat red. Beat red but ever so slightly leaning into the light embrace supplied by her arm. About ten minutes went by before Princess spoke up again.

“I should be getting back, Daddy might find out I’m gone.” She made a movement to get up but sat back down again. “Fate? Could you… if I want to go out at night… Will you walk with me?”

Fate pondered on this before getting up to pull Princess to her feet. “Yea I’ll walk with you.” ‘Man would it suck to be cooped up in one place for so long’ “But umm… what the hell is your name?”

Princess just stared at Fate blankly before realizing she never told her her name. “umm…” a signature blush, “My name is Nanoha.”

“Nanoha,” a pause, “Na-no-ha,” a sexy moan, “Nanoha… Yea I think I could say that in the throws of passion.” She waited until Nanoha could look at her again before continuing “Come on Princess Nanoha, if we don’t get you back home you’ll turn from a tramp back into a Princess.”

= = = = =

Fate looked at her work order. ‘Says to check that side beds and figure out why a patch of shrubs and ornamental grass are dieing.’ She found the patch in questioned and made a quick examination. ‘This looks like its been….’ Lattice caught her eye and she looked one story up to a window. “Ohhh…” ‘I’m so having a talk with that girl.’

= = = = =

Fate leaned up against the light post and taped her foot. With a sigh and a shiver she taped her head against the post. ‘God I feel like I’ve been stood up’ She looked around and checked her watch. 12:36. ‘If the cops come by they’ll take me in for being some common whore or something… No wait, only “escort services” come knocking around these neighborhoods.’ “So wait… does that make me an upscale whore?”

“Fate…” Nanoha called out quietly jogging down the street.

“Sup, Princess…” Fate turned to great the girl and then went on to walk next to her. “Did you fall on your pretty little ass this time?”

Princess blushed not at the complement of her derrière but at the action, “How did you know I fall…”

“I’ve seen the trample marks at what I believe is your bedroom window.”

“Sorry…”

“Don’t be, at least now I know what window to crawl through to get some late night nookie.” Fate finished her sentence with a pinch of Nanoha’s side. She squirmed a little but continued on her way. “So where to this time Princess, I am at your service…” Fate couldn’t help but bow.

Nanoha thought about it for a little bit while they made their way to the less desirable part of town. “Let’s go to your apartment.”

“Ohhh….” Fate let a grin slip through “You want to go back to my place,” She looped an arm around one of Nanoha’s, “you get strait to the point don’t you.”

Nanoha pretty much knew what Fate implied, “I just think that your place is safe. I don’t need to be walking all over the place to get out of the house.”

“Point taken.”

The rest of the way was made in relative silence. Princess was embarrassed with Fate having a hand looped around hers, but it felt nice that someone was holding her hand… Once at the apartment she sat down properly on the strangely comfy old couch.

“Do you want anything to drink or much on? ‘Like me.’

“No... No thank you.”

“Ok,” Fate plopped right next to Nanoha and instantly put an arm around her. She got the expected blush and squirm but before Nanoha could ask anything Fate decided to probe something lingering in the back of her mind. “So why where you all fidgety in the convenience store that one night?”

“Oh, well… like I said before I don’t get out much so...” She paused and hung her head, “I have never been in one before.”

“So that’s why you looked like you where buying your first sex toy in there?”

“I looked like I was? Ohh….” The embarrassed girl buried her face into her palms, “I was nervous and I need to buy something… you don’t go into a store if you don’t want to buy something right?”

Fate started to rub the girls shoulder. “Your one nervous little girl, but you know what, that’s kind of hot.”

Princess moved her hand and took a peak at Fate, “Why do you say such things?”

“Because I’m a pervert, and you are a sexy women.” Fate’s voice started to get deep.

“I heard that people tease other people like that but… why are you calling me sexy?”

Fate brought her arm from around Princess’ shoulder and placed both hands on the other girl’s one leg. Shifting around Fate was now kneeling on the couch facing Nanoha. “Because, I’m coming on to you.”

“Wait… You’re hitting on me like…”

“That’s right” Fate grinned in a soft voice, “I’m queerer than a football bat.” She moved her hands from Nanoha’s leg up to her sides, traveled to her wrists and griped them firmly. She shifted the Princess around so that she could pin her lying down on the couch. When positioned over her Fate when down and rested her cheek against Nanoha’s. She whispered huskily into her ear, “It’s a shame you don’t know how sexy you are… So let me make you feel how sexy you are.” Fate lifted herself up to look at her catch. It was nothing new; she did this to the drunken girls at parties, the girls that went go through an “I hate men” phase, any girl that is too shy.

She looked into Nanoha’s eyes. Those blue, deep, beautiful, terrified eyes. They pierced right through Fate. Slowly she loosened her grip on Princess’ wrists. The rest of her body lost its firmness and just slumped down. She could feel Nanoha testing her movements to see if she could escape. It didn’t really matter, her mind had gone blank spare those blue eyes. ‘I… She was...’ a body slowly moved out from under her. ‘Why did I?’ The body began to slowly walk away. She could feel the other one trembling. ‘If she leaves now… It will be… I would never...’ Snapped out of her trance, Fate jumped from the couch and grabbed onto Nanoha’s hand. Princess stiffened at the contact but Fate didn’t let go. They stood there for a long time, neither one saying a word.

“I’m… Sorry.” Fate’s voice was laced with defeat. It took her a while to gather her thoughts. “I should have never have done that.” Fate couldn’t hold her head up. She was ashamed for once. “Yes… I am attracted to you, but what I did was…” A pause, “wrong.” She gently let go of the hand and kept her sight on the floor. Nanoha turned around and brought her hands together, rubbing them to calm herself down.

Meekly she made a request, “Walk me home… Please?”

“Yes… Princess.”

Spoiler for review:

Fate is really bad here, attacks drunken girls
Lucky for Nanoha, Fate starts to develop feelings for her

nice read, looking forward what happens next

[Momo Chan]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Saved by the Bell 17

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/17/

Enjoy ^^

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

Here we go... The second chapter to Landscaper!Fate: Rated M for Mature...

Spoiler for Landscaper!Fate Chapter 2:

Chapter 2
Landscaper!Fate

It was another one of those nights, the kind that you just can’t calm down to go to sleep. Fate was out again walking the streets in order to get rid of some excess energy. She had reached the furthest point she wanted to travel to and just her luck there was Princess, walking her way on the other side of the street. Fate did a mental face palm before she decided to cross the street. When that timid girl caught Fate in her eyes she gave a small wave and waited till Fate reached her to continue on.

“I thought I told you Princess, perverts walk the streets out here.”

“But I wanted to get some fresh air…”

“Ok, whatever.”

They continued whatever way Princess wanted to go. Eventually Princess she struck up conversation. “I hope you didn’t get into any trouble.”

Fate had to think about this for a second, “You mean your dad?” She let out a small snicker. “Bossman ended up reaming out his ass for giving me a hard time and for refusing to sign. True I should have had him sign before I did any additional work but still, he acted like an asshole.”
“…Sorry.”

“Not your problem that your father’s a dick.”

Princess just looked to the side after that comment. They walked a half a block before a new interruption showed up.

“Hay girls,” Two guys popped out of nowhere and got behind them, “wanta go to a party?” Fate glanced over at Princess who cringed when a hand was placed on her shoulder. Fate felt a hand on her shoulder as well knowing damn well how this was going to turn out.

“We’re not interested,” the blonde stated to the guys. She tried to walk off but that damn hand was still on her with a little bit of a grip.

“Oh come on, don’t be that way. You girls are much better that the rest of the sluts at the party.” Princess was starting to get real panicky, signaling to Fate that she couldn’t beat around the bush.

“Hands…off…NOW” Fate’s voice dripped with venom.

“You don’t know what you’re…AHUGG!”

Princess glanced at the one behind her and saw that he was in pain. Darting her eyes at Fate she witness her bring back one hand and pull a canister from behind her with the other. She sprayed her confused attacker in the eyes and glared with furry at the other one.

“GET LOST!”

“WHY YOU LITTLE…” The one that was not blinded was cut short again by Fate with another swipe of her hand. This time Princess noticed that the man acquired a fresh cut across his face. Looking back at Fate she watched as she put away a knife. Fate grabbed Princess’ hand and pulled her along.

“THAT’S why you don’t go walking out at night in this neighborhood.”

= = = = =

“Well… here it is,” Fate pulled the key out from the door and opened it to let Princess through. She watched as the girl, still shaken up by the attempted attack, walked into her apartment. It wasn’t much and looked like any low income apartment: dull, messy, and in need of some repairs. The fidgety girl looked around for a bit before staring at Fate.

“You can sit on the couch you know…”

“Oh… Ok.”
Fate crashed right next to Princess on the couch. After a stretch she brought one arm to rest on the back of the couch on Princess’ side. With a sigh she tried to gather some subject the two could talk about.

“So, why did you sneak out this time?” ‘The girl cant be going out just for some fresh air.’

“I just wanted to be outside”

“Bullshit.” ‘But damn is that shy voice sexy.’

“No, really,” Princess started to play with her hands, “I wanted to get out of the house.” The girl glanced over at Fate, “I wanted to go somewhere new.”

“Why don’t you go places during the day?” Princess gave Fate look at her like she was being a smart ass. “No, seriously, you going walking outside at night alone and something bad is bound to happen.”

“Daddy doesn’t let me go places alone…”

Fate chewed on this for a minuet. “Why don’t you ask your friends to go out with you?”

“You mean Suzuka and Arisa? They’re not really my friends… We just know each other from private school. Besides they are married and don’t have a lot of free time.”

“Not friends huh? I wouldn’t have guessed that by the conversation you three were having.” Fate shifted her arm to drape over Princess’ shoulder.

“Well, um…” she shifted a little under the new weight on her, “It wasn’t all that interesting. It was mostly about stuff I don’t care for like what their husbands do, decorating, and who’s who stuff.”

Fate let out a chuckle “So I wasn’t the only one board to death. I only listened to part of it hoping you would start talking about your sex lives. I was hoping to find out what kind of ‘toys’ Princess likes to play with.”

“Fate that’s…” Princess was blushing furiously under this new assumption, “it’s not right to do that kind of thing.”

“Well I guess that you have to stay all clean in your society. Just lay there and let the man do his business. Sex would have made a better conversation piece but… oh well.” The girl under her arm was now beat red. Beat red but ever so slightly leaning into the light embrace supplied by her arm. About ten minutes went by before Princess spoke up again.

“I should be getting back, Daddy might find out I’m gone.” She made a movement to get up but sat back down again. “Fate? Could you… if I want to go out at night… Will you walk with me?”

Fate pondered on this before getting up to pull Princess to her feet. “Yea I’ll walk with you.” ‘Man would it suck to be cooped up in one place for so long’ “But umm… what the hell is your name?”

Princess just stared at Fate blankly before realizing she never told her her name. “umm…” a signature blush, “My name is Nanoha.”

“Nanoha,” a pause, “Na-no-ha,” a sexy moan, “Nanoha… Yea I think I could say that in the throws of passion.” She waited until Nanoha could look at her again before continuing “Come on Princess Nanoha, if we don’t get you back home you’ll turn from a tramp back into a Princess.”

= = = = =

Fate looked at her work order. ‘Says to check that side beds and figure out why a patch of shrubs and ornamental grass are dieing.’ She found the patch in questioned and made a quick examination. ‘This looks like its been….’ Lattice caught her eye and she looked one story up to a window. “Ohhh…” ‘I’m so having a talk with that girl.’

= = = = =

Fate leaned up against the light post and taped her foot. With a sigh and a shiver she taped her head against the post. ‘God I feel like I’ve been stood up’ She looked around and checked her watch. 12:36. ‘If the cops come by they’ll take me in for being some common whore or something… No wait, only “escort services” come knocking around these neighborhoods.’ “So wait… does that make me an upscale whore?”

“Fate…” Nanoha called out quietly jogging down the street.

“Sup, Princess…” Fate turned to great the girl and then went on to walk next to her. “Did you fall on your pretty little ass this time?”

Princess blushed not at the complement of her derrière but at the action, “How did you know I fall…”

“I’ve seen the trample marks at what I believe is your bedroom window.”

“Sorry…”

“Don’t be, at least now I know what window to crawl through to get some late night nookie.” Fate finished her sentence with a pinch of Nanoha’s side. She squirmed a little but continued on her way. “So where to this time Princess, I am at your service…” Fate couldn’t help but bow.

Nanoha thought about it for a little bit while they made their way to the less desirable part of town. “Let’s go to your apartment.”

“Ohhh….” Fate let a grin slip through “You want to go back to my place,” She looped an arm around one of Nanoha’s, “you get strait to the point don’t you.”

Nanoha pretty much knew what Fate implied, “I just think that your place is safe. I don’t need to be walking all over the place to get out of the house.”

“Point taken.”

The rest of the way was made in relative silence. Princess was embarrassed with Fate having a hand looped around hers, but it felt nice that someone was holding her hand… Once at the apartment she sat down properly on the strangely comfy old couch.

“Do you want anything to drink or much on? ‘Like me.’

“No... No thank you.”

“Ok,” Fate plopped right next to Nanoha and instantly put an arm around her. She got the expected blush and squirm but before Nanoha could ask anything Fate decided to probe something lingering in the back of her mind. “So why where you all fidgety in the convenience store that one night?”

“Oh, well… like I said before I don’t get out much so...” She paused and hung her head, “I have never been in one before.”

“So that’s why you looked like you where buying your first sex toy in there?”

“I looked like I was? Ohh….” The embarrassed girl buried her face into her palms, “I was nervous and I need to buy something… you don’t go into a store if you don’t want to buy something right?”

Fate started to rub the girls shoulder. “Your one nervous little girl, but you know what, that’s kind of hot.”

Princess moved her hand and took a peak at Fate, “Why do you say such things?”

“Because I’m a pervert, and you are a sexy women.” Fate’s voice started to get deep.

“I heard that people tease other people like that but… why are you calling me sexy?”

Fate brought her arm from around Princess’ shoulder and placed both hands on the other girl’s one leg. Shifting around Fate was now kneeling on the couch facing Nanoha. “Because, I’m coming on to you.”

“Wait… You’re hitting on me like…”

“That’s right” Fate grinned in a soft voice, “I’m queerer than a football bat.” She moved her hands from Nanoha’s leg up to her sides, traveled to her wrists and griped them firmly. She shifted the Princess around so that she could pin her lying down on the couch. When positioned over her Fate when down and rested her cheek against Nanoha’s. She whispered huskily into her ear, “It’s a shame you don’t know how sexy you are… So let me make you feel how sexy you are.” Fate lifted herself up to look at her catch. It was nothing new; she did this to the drunken girls at parties, the girls that went go through an “I hate men” phase, any girl that is too shy.

She looked into Nanoha’s eyes. Those blue, deep, beautiful, terrified eyes. They pierced right through Fate. Slowly she loosened her grip on Princess’ wrists. The rest of her body lost its firmness and just slumped down. She could feel Nanoha testing her movements to see if she could escape. It didn’t really matter, her mind had gone blank spare those blue eyes. ‘I… She was...’ a body slowly moved out from under her. ‘Why did I?’ The body began to slowly walk away. She could feel the other one trembling. ‘If she leaves now… It will be… I would never...’ Snapped out of her trance, Fate jumped from the couch and grabbed onto Nanoha’s hand. Princess stiffened at the contact but Fate didn’t let go. They stood there for a long time, neither one saying a word.

“I’m… Sorry.” Fate’s voice was laced with defeat. It took her a while to gather her thoughts. “I should have never have done that.” Fate couldn’t hold her head up. She was ashamed for once. “Yes… I am attracted to you, but what I did was…” A pause, “wrong.” She gently let go of the hand and kept her sight on the floor. Nanoha turned around and brought her hands together, rubbing them to calm herself down.

Meekly she made a request, “Walk me home… Please?”

“Yes… Princess.”

I was sooo happy you updated (squeeee)
Good chapter, but it seemed really short.
BUT that leaves more to look forward to for the next chapter ^^

Yeah, I know Landscaper!Fate is rated M but I read it anyway, because I really like the idea....
Fate's a jerk, but I've been waiting for a story with Fate being a jerk instead of the nice, quiet type she normally is. I imagined her like my signature picture
full pic:



In which she looks awesome....

[Sam the Onion]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Saved by the Bell 17

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3991951/17/

Enjoy ^^

Spoiler for Comments:

I'd say you're overdramatizing that addicion part and how people react to it. But I guess that's just cultural differences.

Drugs against drugs, huh? Well, it does work but I find it amusing how people promise to help you and just slam a pillcase in your hand
Or maybe it's just that that's just the first part of their aid against the addiction, which is how I think it is after further pondering.

Good chapter, but I hope you won't take another chapter just for this issue, although there was some progress in Fate's furure plans.

Originally Posted by Junkedcat

Here we go... The second chapter to Landscaper!Fate: Rated M for Mature...

Spoiler for Landscaper!Fate Chapter 2:

Chapter 2
Landscaper!Fate

*snip*

Spoiler for Comments:

So OOC, yet so great

Rated M? I think that was a slight overkill. Alright, there was arguably two attempted rapes, but nothing that graphical to make it M. (But what am I to say? Satashi-sama had to rate my fic as I had no idea of what people consider suitable for what age )

I remember how SbtB was just a shortie in the beginning but now it has grown into massive story. Hopefully L!F has the same fate

Originally Posted by Momo Chan

I was sooo happy you updated (squeeee)
Good chapter, but it seemed really short.
BUT that leaves more to look forward to for the next chapter ^^

Yeah, I know Landscaper!Fate is rated M but I read it anyway, because I really like the idea....
Fate's a jerk, but I've been waiting for a story with Fate being a jerk instead of the nice, quiet type she normally is. I imagined her like my signature picture
full pic:



In which she looks awesome....

Agreed

It's pretty easy to imagine L!F like that.

Spoiler for 42, 43, 44, 45 & 46:

Four Minds

”Mhmm...” She moaned in her bed. It was almost midday and she could hear people talking outside.

Forward quaters were close to the canteen, where the sound of talking and scent of freshly made food would always comfort oversleeping forwards.

”I'm late!” Caro grabbed her clock and gave it a violent shake. ”Whyyyy~?”

She swiftly climbed down from her bed, dressed in the dull RF6 uniform and ran outside without checking her appearance.

”Morning, Caro.” She stopped herself and noticed Erio greeting her.

”We're late!”

”Nope, Nanoha-san said at the field that because it was the day of the big mission there will not be any training today.” Erio comforted the hyperactive girl. ”You're lucky to sleep this long.”

Caro calmed herself. ”Oh. Well then, morning, Erio-kun.” She smiled at the boy.

”Haaaaa~” A man behind them yawned. ”Oh, Erio. Pleasing your mistress are we?”

”Aren-sama!” The boy saluted.

”Drop the -sama, please.” Aren ordered. ”Has the boy been well, Caro?” He crouched to ask the small girl directly.

”Weeell~. Erio-kun is always nice to me.” Caro smiled innocently.

”Ooohohooo~.” Aren gave thumbs up at his discipline. ”Good job!”

”Yo-you have mistaken.” Erio denied desperately.

”Just go with the flow.” Aren left the two child laughing.

”...and what's more suprising that he's not the only one with it!” Shari informed Yuuno listening closely.

”What more did you find out?” He asked interested of Shari's research.

”Morning Shari-chan, Yuuno-san.” Aren interrupted his best friends around here. He had had many interesting chats with Shari about engineering and he got along with Yuuno.

”Morning Aren.” Shari waved at him not minding that he had interrupted her talk. ”Finally up. Slept well?”

”Huh? I thought I slept only for 6 hours?”

”You were in that tube over a day.” Yuuno answered.

”Oh... I thought I woke up during the same day. Ahhaha~” He laughed, embarrassed.

~--
Nanoha was watching this interested, nibbling her bread away slowly.

”Be careful or Shari or Aren will take Yuuno away from you.” Fate warned after watching Nanoha's actions for a while.

”I got my Fate-chan.” Nanoha answered still watching the newly formed group of friends.

”Ye-yes... You declared me yours yesterday...” Fate blushed to ears.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

”Attention everybody. This is Nanoha speaking.”

The meeting Fate was in silenced to listen what Nanoha had to say.

”From this day onward, Fate-chan is mine. Don't go touching her without my permission. Those who do, will be Nanozised!”

”N-no she couldn't...” Fate pinched herself to confirm she wasn't dreaming.

The cheering RF6 made was heard from miles away.

”Good job, Fate-chan.” Hayate congratulated clapping happily and quickly everybody in the room joined her. ”What happened?”

”Ye-yesterday-Nothing happened! She said that 'I will let everybody know that I got Fate-chan'. I can't believe she did it.” Fate lowered her head in her hands to cover her blushing.

”Aaaaw...” People around her moaned in dissapointment.

”Wh-what?”

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

”Hehee...” She turned facing Fate and leaned over the table and kissed her in the forehead. ”Mark of Nanoha. Claimed for all of eternity.”

A few couraging whistles and cheers came from people scattered around the hall.

~--
”Did I miss something?” Aren turned his head around towards the sounds.

”You sure did. Let me tell you...” Shari began her story.

____________________

”Aren-san, you tell us the rest.” Hayate called for the suited man to rise to the stand.

”Yes, Hayate-san.” Aren answered and walked to the front. ”There are four knights protecting the book. Don't try to befriend them...”

Sudden laughter of Subaru interrupted the briefing.

”What?”

”Ah... No, it's nothing. Please continue.” Subaru apologized still giggling.

”Uh... Anyway. As I was saying, the knights have only one programming. Protect the book. You can't overcome that.”

”So we need to kill the knights to get the book?” Nanoha asked.

”You can't kill them even if you wanted to.” Aren said. ”As I've told you. The book channels the knights giving them near immortality and unlimited mana until it runs out of cores to burn. After that it will take mine and burn it to oblivion.”

”Are you saying that we have to fight the knights until the book runs out of power, kills you and then choose a new master for it so we can destroy it?” Yuuno questioned making people gasp.

”No, no. This programming will end if two conditions happen.” Aren raised two fingers. ”First, I am there.” He lowered one. ”Second, they suffer a fatal wound.”

”But you said they were immortal.” Fate asked.

”'Near immortal. They can't die but will know if they would.” Aren corrected. ”What we need to do is to kill all knights before the book runs out of power and I die.”

”Won't the knights die once released from the book as it can't channel to them anymore? I know they are important people to you.” Hayate looked at her knights.

”Ok, maybe immortality was a bad term. The book prevents them from aging and resurrects them when they die.” Aren shrugged his shoulders.

”Wait! They aren't really bond to the book!?” Hayate yelled. ”You mean they are still real people?”

”They should be. Maybe programming was a bad term too...” The man scratched his head and fixated his eyes on a wall.

”Are you sure the book hasn't ran out of power keeping them from aging?” Fate asked.

”That's one fun thing about the book. This version can use same linker core for unlimited times. So, the knights use their own to power the book that then channels them power so they don't age. Smart,eh?”

Yuuno lifted his jaw to question again. ”You mean that Selshin magic could keep people alive for ever and eternity, not to mention resurrect?”

”Level four acolyte of Jube could using his own power, without the resurrection part.” ”But that power was only for the kings and they could only do it for one person. The book on the other hand is infused by Jube himself and thus can do it with the small power it gains from the knights.”

”So even the gods of Selshin joined in this project?” Yuuno asked.

”Well it was interesting for them, so some of them joined in.” Aren explained, hinting doubt. ”I'm more worried about the knights having fun with the unlimited mana.”

”What do you mean?” Fate asked

”I know.” Nanoha volunteered to explain. ”Think that you have unlimited power, you are forced to use it and people against you are trying to kill you. What do you do?”

Fate fell silent and thought about it.

”Have the most fun fight in your life.” The brunette explained.

”Indeed. Goddess of Bonds, Marriage and Friendship, Vichin, has herself binded them to this task. Her color is pink and when you see a flash of that color, they have died once and the bond is broken.” He continued. ”The book has 1333 pages, so even that there is masses of power to use. Try to beat the knights fast.”

”Why so many pages? The previous worked with 666.” Fate asked.

”Not sure, maybe they wanted it to really kickass.” Aren lifted his shoulders.

”You got gods for everything? Couldn't you do anything by yourself?” Shari complained as an atheist.

”Pretty much and...” Aren was stunned by the claim. He knew it was true but didn't want to say it.

”I think that's everything we need to know.” Hayate declared clapping slightly at the interview Aren gave. ”Chrono was close-by again so we'll be boarding Claudia again or maybe he was waiting for us... Anyway pack your stuff and get ready.” She ordered gaining salutes.

____________________

”Aren...” Shari came knocking to her friends door. ”I'm sorry what I said back in the briefing.”

The man in the upper bed rolled in it until he was faced at Shari. ”It's okay. You're right, we didn't do anything by ourselves or atleast without the power gained from gods.” He stated now that only she could hear it.

”Still...”

”We even had a rule that people had to train magic, so they could do their jobs better.” Aren laughed. ”Those without any talent were cast out from society and forced to do odd jobs for living. My grandmother was like that.” He smiled, tearing.

Shari climbed up the ladder and sat next to Aren. ”I'm sorry for the painful memories I've caused.”

”It's okay I told you.” Aren casted his face down. ”You didn't know so I can't blame you or would anyway.”

”Why is that?” She placed her hand on his shoulder. ”When somebody does bad things to you, you should be angry.”

”I can count my friends from 400 years with two hands. Being angry to one is the last thing I want to do.” Aren stared at his palms.

Shari was silent for a while. ”You got more then that here.” She comforted.

”Really?” Aren asked, strangely surprised. ”You mean it's not the Nanoha and Yuuno inside me saying 'They are all your friends'?”

”Have you discarded every friend canditate like that for your entire life?”

”Well, it would have been rude just to claim they're all my friends.” He smiled sadly.

”You're too modest.” Shari lifted her voice. ”In Mid-Childa making friends equals submission through overwhelming power, forcing yourself into people's lives and, when it comes down to it, converting from friendship abuser into friend.” She explains enthusiastically.

”Yuunoha doesn't agree with you.” Aren smirked.

”They just live in denial.” Shari placed her hand on Aren's shoulder, shaking her head.

”I see.” He cast his face down. ”Thanks.” He wiped his face with his sleeve.

”Always crying.” Shari gave Aren a friendly punch. ”Your suit will get dirty. How about we go and get you some real clothing afterwards?” She asked.

”Ahaha... Sounds good.” He smiled at the woman next to him, smiling back.

Spoiler for Special:

I could put another piece of info in Aren's profile but I'll wait until there are more.

Get ready to face giant load of OC's and a spotlight change.

[Satashi]

L!F definetly needs to be Mature rating. It's heavily laced with adult themes (which makes it so great). plus, a "T" rating may limit Junkedcat on things to put in. Like Fate almost raping Nanoha. Mature rating clearly states that it's not holding back, and I appreciate that. It's a breath of fresh air to see a real life kinda fic, where Fate is a jerk, horny, and wants a piece of Nanoha's cute butt.

You win cookies Junkedcat.