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Old 2008-04-02, 11:54   Link #3081
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Insulin! Wh-where's my insulin?!

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This page is claimed in the name of more pics by MercurianAngel!!!

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Old 2008-04-02, 12:36   Link #3082
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New post so it doesn't get lost.

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I leave the shopping experience to some one else.
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Old 2008-04-02, 14:52   Link #3083
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I leave the shopping experience to some one else.
Awkward conversation is awkward indeed. I loled a little at the Arisa-'Yukari' conversation, because it is true that Nanoha would be hard pressed to actually join into a conversation with a bunch of kids that she 'doesn't know'.

That being said, if I didn't have a Japanese test to study for right now, I'd claim a part. Perhaps when I get back.
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Old 2008-04-02, 15:17   Link #3084
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"Geeze,
We're not getting a bunch of stuff like that, Vivio.
Put it back."


Bad parent -> (Fate)
"Why don't we keep this a secret from Mama?"
*Sob*
"Mama?" Vivio walked back up to the shopping buggy with an armful of treats and chips. "Let's get these, we havn't had snacks in ages."

"Mou, Vivio," Nanoha sniffed at her. "We're not getting a bunch of stuff like that, go put it back." With a shake of her head she continued on her path through the aisle and putting only the items on her shopping list into the cart. 'I swear, that girl has a sweet tooth that puts Fate to shame. Honestly, all those snacks...I need to teach her how to shop properly within a budget.'

Vivio scuffled her foot across the floor as she turned and walked back the way she had come. "Jeez, I'm sixteen already, I can pick a few things out..." Sadly she put her fruit snacks back on the shelf. As she turned She looked at Fate, who was smiling at her happily.

"Let's..." She began, taking a few of Vivio's items top go pay out for on her own. "Keep this a secret from Mama, okay?"

"Fate-mama, thank you." She smiled brightly and allowed herself to be pet a few times. "You're the best!"

~*out of time T_T continued later maybe*~
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Old 2008-04-02, 15:21   Link #3085
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hey everyone, it's April fools day. What sort of pranks would the Nanoha cast pull on each other?

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Gave some very good laughs

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Oh god that expression

Caught the mood perfectly

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For those interested:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4171760/1/

A dark fic I wrote, which admittedly may not suit everyone. It was an experiment though, so feedback would be welcome.
Have I already mentioned how I love character killings done well?

Otherwise good but Jail relying in talking of morals and values to a person who just slaghtered your guards and whose every friend you just killed doesn't really compute

Spoiler for 126 & 127:
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Old 2008-04-02, 16:19   Link #3086
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"Mama?" Vivio walked back up to the shopping buggy with an armful of treats and chips. "Let's get these, we havn't had snacks in ages."

"Mou, Vivio," Nanoha sniffed at her. "We're not getting a bunch of stuff like that, go put it back." With a shake of her head she continued on her path through the aisle and putting only the items on her shopping list into the cart. 'I swear, that girl has a sweet tooth that puts Fate to shame. Honestly, all those snacks...I need to teach her how to shop properly within a budget.'

Vivio scuffled her foot across the floor as she turned and walked back the way she had come. "Jeez, I'm sixteen already, I can pick a few things out..." Sadly she put her fruit snacks back on the shelf. As she turned She looked at Fate, who was smiling at her happily.

"Let's..." She began, taking a few of Vivio's items top go pay out for on her own. "Keep this a secret from Mama, okay?"

"Fate-mama, thank you." She smiled brightly and allowed herself to be pet a few times. "You're the best!"

~*out of time T_T continued later maybe*~
KAWAI!!!! Can't wait to see more :3
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Old 2008-04-02, 16:39   Link #3087
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Have I already mentioned how I love character killings done well?

Otherwise good but Jail relying in talking of morals and values to a person who just slaghtered your guards and whose every friend you just killed doesn't really compute
Ahaha.. that part with Jail was due to a combination of things I guess. He's deranged, frightened and yet still defiant at the same time. I suppose in a way he was trying to save his own skin by pushng Nanoha into self-loathing. He fails of course considering how resolute she was, but he was desparate enough to throw morals at her face simply because he knows that the old Nanoha would have stopped in her tracks, and he ALSO knows how psychotic (retarded) his own self is in comparison, but still doesn't care.

Anyway. Thank you to everyone who read and commented on my story. The general response has been good and I'm rather surprised to tell the truth, since I had no idea how to write these kinda fics when I started. Do people want more of them I wonder? :3
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Old 2008-04-02, 16:43   Link #3088
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Haha. Please continue when Fate is sober...and remembers Nanoha's promise for "another time"

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However, Satashi and I (well...Satashi's part is technically already done XD) are working on the Emerald Bell project that I hope you will enjoy
I'm excite for that. Can't wait you guys!

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It's too bad Arisa and Suzuka don't know about magic... But really funny. Arisa and 'Yukari' was really good.

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"Mama?" Vivio walked back up to the shopping buggy with an armful of treats and chips. "Let's get these, we havn't had snacks in ages."

"Mou, Vivio," Nanoha sniffed at her. "We're not getting a bunch of stuff like that, go put it back." With a shake of her head she continued on her path through the aisle and putting only the items on her shopping list into the cart. 'I swear, that girl has a sweet tooth that puts Fate to shame. Honestly, all those snacks...I need to teach her how to shop properly within a budget.'

Vivio scuffled her foot across the floor as she turned and walked back the way she had come. "Jeez, I'm sixteen already, I can pick a few things out..." Sadly she put her fruit snacks back on the shelf. As she turned She looked at Fate, who was smiling at her happily.

"Let's..." She began, taking a few of Vivio's items top go pay out for on her own. "Keep this a secret from Mama, okay?"

"Fate-mama, thank you." She smiled brightly and allowed herself to be pet a few times. "You're the best!"
That was cute. Fate is kind of a push over when it comes to Vivio.
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Old 2008-04-02, 18:48   Link #3089
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Anyway. Thank you to everyone who read and commented on my story. The general response has been good and I'm rather surprised to tell the truth, since I had no idea how to write these kinda fics when I started. Do people want more of them I wonder? :3
epic is always good, but pls not with such a sad background
everybody dead
on the other hand, it's nice to see Nanoha go berserk, you hardly see that
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Old 2008-04-03, 00:10   Link #3090
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A random short story that I wrote during class! I need too exercise my writing! ><

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Old 2008-04-03, 00:19   Link #3091
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A random short story that I wrote during class! I need too exercise my writing! ><

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:3

I DO NOT want to be in that group :3

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That had to hurt XD
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Old 2008-04-03, 01:11   Link #3092
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Chapter 3 LOL

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NOTE: Draws still aren't ready >.<
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Old 2008-04-03, 01:57   Link #3093
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A random short story that I wrote during class! I need too exercise my writing! ><

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Lol that sounds like Nanoha. Over kill much?

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Chapter 3 LOL

Vatican Knights

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NOTE: Draws still aren't ready >.<
The first mission! Sounds a bit kreepy (yes...creepy with a K). Karil kind of seems like a wuss...but i still like her. Is it really a little girl? or is it...a slave!? Dun dun dun...
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Old 2008-04-03, 03:49   Link #3094
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For those interested:

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4171760/1/

A dark fic I wrote, which admittedly may not suit everyone. It was an experiment though, so feedback would be welcome.

I like the way you, did the dawning realisation for Jail.
Couldnt comment on this sooner as my laptop had a severe virus.
(In MGLN terms thats an S rank virus)
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Old 2008-04-03, 10:53   Link #3095
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"Geeze,
We're not getting a bunch of stuff like that, Vivio.
Put it back."


Bad parent -> (Fate)
"Why don't we keep this a secret from Mama?"
*Sob*
Spoiler for complete story:
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Old 2008-04-03, 11:36   Link #3096
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Chapter 3 LOL

Vatican Knights

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NOTE: Draws still aren't ready >.<
Okay... this is getting interesting! What... is that child?


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That was nice. It had a nice mood throughout the story and what Nanoha and Fate were talking felt very sincere and genuine. Although the last bit totally broke that mood! Vivio will have to learn very strong barrier magic unless she wants to have her boyfriends hospitalized. With parents like Nanoha and Fate, who needs enemies?
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Old 2008-04-03, 11:46   Link #3097
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Impressive. Because at the same time as I love Fate and Nanoha as a pairing, they're sort of completely different when it comes to parenting styles. At least you've managed to help them find a happy medium, because Vivio is going to be a wild child when she grows up.

I like it.
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Old 2008-04-03, 12:31   Link #3098
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Old 2008-04-03, 12:39   Link #3099
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I vote for more teenager Vivio fic challenge!

Edit: because it's awesome and amusing and MY GOD Satashi, where do you get these ideas?
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Old 2008-04-03, 12:44   Link #3100
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I vote for more teenager Vivio fic challenge!

Edit: because it's awesome and amusing and MY GOD Satashi, where do you get these ideas?
Um.... no where rally

I got lunch, sat down, started nibbling my philly cheese sub and was like "hey, ya know what? *chew chew* I think Vivio should dress up in something and have Nanoha stop her *swallows, chugs mountain dew, writes* and... Let's put Fate in there for good measure.... *post, finishes lunch*"

Challenge? Teenage!Vivio? I don't have time right now but I might do something at next break depending if I can or not. Kinda busy today and my left wrist is killing me for some reason @_@
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