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Old 2008-04-14, 15:24   Link #23501
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Part 2.

Spoiler for Hayate and Reinforce II:


Relationships:
Spoiler for Relationships:


Hahaha......

This was fun as hell to make!

This is my little surprise profile for my comeback after being away for so long due to exams. Absolutely NO ONE knew I was making this!

As it is, this profile is highly subjective in inception but I tried to be objective in most parts. To be fair, I included most of the good AND the bad traits I can find in her.

And yes, I did make her persona a bit darker than what 7arcs may have intended...
But I'm sticking with it!

Comments, criticisms, advice are welcomed...

CREDITS:
Spoiler for Credits:


I'll deal with the rest of the work later. I'm beat and it's already past 4 in the morning here...

Thanks for your time.
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Old 2008-04-14, 15:34   Link #23502
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Aaron? Is that you? It's me, Wibbles! I'm back, and I have ideas I want you to hear.
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Old 2008-04-14, 15:35   Link #23503
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Wibbles! Good to see you alive and kickin! Just link me to your works and I'll giv'em a look-see and reviews.

Though the replies will come tomorrow... I'm off to bed...@_@
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Old 2008-04-14, 16:31   Link #23504
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Part 2.

Relationships:
Spoiler for Relationships:


Hahaha......

This was fun as hell to make!

This is my little surprise profile for my comeback after being away for so long due to exams. Absolutely NO ONE knew I was making this!

As it is, this profile is highly subjective in inception but I tried to be subjective in most parts. To be fair, I included most of the good AND the bad traits I can find in her.

And yes, I did make her persona a bit darker than what 7arcs may have intended...
But I'm sticking with it!

Comments, criticisms, advice are welcomed...

CREDITS:
Spoiler for Credits:


I'll deal with the rest of the work later. I'm beat and it's already past 4 in the morning here...

Thanks for your time.
Like I said on IRC about have doubt of the names of Chrono and Amy's children. I just re-listen StrikerS SoundStage 1. They are called Carol and Tiara.
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Old 2008-04-14, 18:03   Link #23505
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Will bust backlog later; for now, this:

Spoiler for Final Scene, MSLNAlpha Episode 03:


Will post on the fanfic thread when Goose finishes the rewrite he's been doing for like... two weeks.
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Old 2008-04-14, 19:03   Link #23506
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*peers out of the Sea of Dirac*

>_>

Spoiler for Arrival:


*dives back into the Sea of Dirac*
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Old 2008-04-14, 19:12   Link #23507
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*peers out of the Sea of Dirac*

>_>

Spoiler for Arrival:


*dives back into the Sea of Dirac*
Well that was a fun read :3

Boy do I feel sorry for them LOL XD

*Reaches into the Sea of Dirac and pulls Evagenlion Xgouki and punts him into the air*

Hurry up with work and get your ass onto IRC. It's too quiet and I need someone to talk to :3
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Old 2008-04-14, 19:13   Link #23508
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... I missed this place...
So many memories... So many fun and learning experiences...
So much profiles, so much stories, so much BLUECHEESIUM, EPICSIUM, SWEETCHEESIUM, etc...
Kono kanji… Tokimekuze!!! (This feeling... How exciting!!!)
It's good to be back.


And as a comeback performance, I present you...

[SIZE="7"]
~ Yagami Hayate ~
Nice work! I never Rebuilt the CCs to this extent since most of it you'd find in Wiki.

But this is definitely good, and I think I can use this wholesale for Rebuilt, sans the GenerationS bits since they haven't happened yet, and plus the new Confessor spells I dreamed up for Belka Confessors. >3

...what?! You want me to waaaaht?! I left her history with Kha at home, cos it's so long!!! Uploading it later.

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Will bust backlog later; for now, this:

Spoiler for Final Scene, MSLNAlpha Episode 03:


Will post on the fanfic thread when Goose finishes the rewrite he's been doing for like... two weeks.
I see what you did there... My only complaint is that I can't think of a GAR enough death for any of the CKs using the latest information, but it's just me.

And LOCKON STRATOS appears!!!

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Like I said on IRC about have doubt of the names of Chrono and Amy's children. I just re-listen StrikerS SoundStage 1. They are called Carol and Tiara.
They are both girls?! I thought they were male-female frat twins.

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The Steel Talons and some SCII units?

KKKKKKHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!! !
All Steel Talons, with the Valkyrie being the SMS-25F Valkyrie from the new Macross Frontier.

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>_>

I didn't see a Shaman around here...

*Blinks and RUNS*
*Creator-san watches Eva get crit-multi-bolted-NS-crit-multi-bolted to dust*

Yes it happened before... My shammy guildie then pulled aggro on Lurker.

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Another EPIC trap from the trap master himself.

And NOD? HERE? About time

And to steal a bit from Mortal Kombat...

FLAWLESS INTEGRATION
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Old 2008-04-14, 20:35   Link #23509
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Anyway, Real Men Always Come Late and Override Everything

Next stop: Sanshiro Kitamura, a.k.a-.
Spoiler:
...I come back, and the first thing I do is this...



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I wonder if I can use this for Rebuilt...
Spoiler for CHOU GINGA!!!:
...Ideas...?

No.


No you may not.


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STEEL TALONS


Spoiler for STEEL TALONS:
...

*RUNS AT EPIC FLYING SPEED*

Jesus Christ in Heaven...

...haven't we made enough C&C references here already?


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Type-0 Sentoukijin

Rebuilt of Uomo



Spoiler for Uomo:

...a trap spawned from a trap.


Figures.


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Tesla doesn't drink, try better.

You COULD always spike her drink...

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Wibbles! Good to see you alive and kickin! Just link me to your works and I'll giv'em a look-see and reviews.

Though the replies will come tomorrow... I'm off to bed...@_@
Interesting job you did on the revamped Hayate profile. Although...

<points to corner>

Arcas: I'm not mentioned...I'm not mentioned...I'm not mentioned...

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Spoiler for Final Scene, MSLNAlpha Episode 03:


Will post on the fanfic thread when Goose finishes the rewrite he's been doing for like... two weeks.
..."that backwater world"? And a Nakajima connection? This doesn't sound good...

...and WTF @ Carim agreeing to kill der Kleriker and the CKs?!

If Kha dies, Kagerou...

...then will undo EVERYTHING you do in this story!


THAT CLEAR?!
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Old 2008-04-14, 21:26   Link #23510
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..."that backwater world"? And a Nakajima connection? This doesn't sound good...

...and WTF @ Carim agreeing to kill der Kleriker and the CKs?!

If Kha dies, Kagerou...

...then will undo EVERYTHING you do in this story!


THAT CLEAR?!
I thank you for your concern, but I've already given Kagerou all the creative licence for whatever he needs, though with the kill count in Alpha, it pretty much is a plot with a completely AU continuation. Besides, its a Halo-esque fic; it doesn't follow the same rules as the original Nanohaverse.


~~~New Intelligence Data Updated~~~

And for those who know it, Night Wizard and Shugo Chara will be landing in the OC thread soon, but it has to start with the Drake Squad.

Especially Shugo Chara. Why? Just a preview:
Spoiler for evilloli!Fate?!:
...yes indeed.

Most of all, she's voiced by Nana Mizuki, but is 100x more badass than Fate. And Meikyuu Butterfly is another winning insert!!!

*dances after adding 1 more song to Fate's Lyrical Magic collection, and finding the perfect Character Opening for Allie*

Btw, I'm giving Daybreak's Bell to Serena. Erio will be using Einyuu as originally planned.

*cackles at the Khrack he's making for the Rebuilt of StrikerS DVD Extras*

>3
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Old 2008-04-14, 21:27   Link #23511
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Right. This bit with Rico and Nova has forced me to take a second look at how I'm making these characters, and I've decided that my current line of thought, having the characters form a band of Outlaw Star-style renegades, isn't as feasible for the general storyline I'd had planned out. Which leads me to my new idea, which I need some advice on:

Instead of mercenaries, bounty hunters, pirates and so forth, this group of characters I'm working on is part of a project by the Enforcers High Command (or whatever it's referred to as) to create a mobile force similar to Riot Force Six, but outfitted with a requisitioned capital ship (probably the Asura, rescued once again from being demolished) and intended to move freely throughout the multiverse, their primary mission being to track down Lost Logia. The problem is that this team is sabotaged by jealous Army, Navy, and Air Force commanders, who respond to the call for some of their best units by sending their biggest washouts: think Nanoha's take on "The Dirty Dozen", or Star Wars' Wraith Squadron. Notable members include Rena Ryuugu, Zero, Rico and Nova (who get upgraded to Ace status and placed in command positions), among several others I still need to work out.

Given what we know of the bureau military, is this a reasonable concept, or is there some aspect of the military I can't think of that would prevent this from working?
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Old 2008-04-14, 21:37   Link #23512
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Part 2.

Relationships:
Spoiler for Relationships:


Hahaha......

This was fun as hell to make!

This is my little surprise profile for my comeback after being away for so long due to exams. Absolutely NO ONE knew I was making this!

As it is, this profile is highly subjective in inception but I tried to be subjective in most parts. To be fair, I included most of the good AND the bad traits I can find in her.

And yes, I did make her persona a bit darker than what 7arcs may have intended...
But I'm sticking with it!

Comments, criticisms, advice are welcomed...

CREDITS:
Spoiler for Credits:


I'll deal with the rest of the work later. I'm beat and it's already past 4 in the morning here...

Thanks for your time.
Nicely done, mostly stuff we all know but still gives good background for your fic, and it's good to know my poorly aimed ramblings maybe have done some good as well.

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All Steel Talons, with the Valkyrie being the SMS-25F Valkyrie from the new Macross Frontier.
...
*Starts Gearing up for busting*

We've been over this mecha bullshit before... and now you're going to try and add bloody flying transforming ones? Do you WANT to become a notch on my rifle?

And we've got beef with your newly introduced Ripoffium nonsense too.
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Old 2008-04-14, 21:41   Link #23513
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...
*Starts Gearing up for busting*

We've been over this mecha bullshit before... and now you're going to try and add bloody flying transforming ones? Do you WANT to become a notch on my rifle?
Steel Talons were crack, and all focused on Walkers, so I replaced their little fighter with something more in flavor.

Okay I'll drop the Valkyries. Even then, I thought the Steel Talons were a rather OOC subfaction to port, so it would give me some more leeway in the rules regarding walkers...

And what, you're gonna stop me from making a REAL mahou shoujo, which is a breath of fresh air after all this militarism?!
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Old 2008-04-14, 22:20   Link #23514
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Like I said on IRC about have doubt of the names of Chrono and Amy's children. I just re-listen StrikerS SoundStage 1. They are called Carol and Tiara.
Actually,boy's name is カレル(Karel?) and girl's name is リエラ(Riera?)

Spoiler:
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Old 2008-04-14, 22:25   Link #23515
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Quick backlog breaking right now, gotta stay on top of things...

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Type-0 Sentoukijin

Rebuilt of Uomo



Spoiler for Uomo:
...I was watching Star Wars: Ep. 6 last night...(for the uninformed, check up on your memes.)

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ReBuild of Katrina? Nah..


~~~~~~




Spoiler for Katrina:



Backstory explaining Katrina's link to Jail, as well as Quint and the Alphinos.

Spoiler:



---

A placeholder for the revised version of the original profile. I got tired of referring to three separate posts for one profile and decided to make changes to the old one while I was at it.

A list of the changes.
  • - comestic changes to history
  • - reorganization of each section.
  • - rank fixed at S+
  • - Edited spells and added in some new ones.
  • - junking of conflicting spells such as AMF
Nice profile there, and it's a long one too. Reminds me to do a Rebuilt of someone else's profile...as well as several others.

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... I missed this place...
So many memories... So many fun and learning experiences...
So much profiles, so much stories, so much BLUECHEESIUM, EPICSIUM, SWEETCHEESIUM, etc...
Kono kanji… Tokimekuze!!! (This feeling... How exciting!!!)
It's good to be back.


And as a comeback performance, I present you...

~ Yagami Hayate ~
Ver. GenerationS
As Expected from the OC's Hayate fan...

I see you're back here too, Aaron...and you beat me on the comeback post...

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Will bust backlog later; for now, this:

Spoiler for Final Scene, MSLNAlpha Episode 03:


Will post on the fanfic thread when Goose finishes the rewrite he's been doing for like... two weeks.
Woah...what in the world happened to Nanoha?

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*peers out of the Sea of Dirac*

>_>

Spoiler for Arrival:


*dives back into the Sea of Dirac*
Ouch for those guys...don't mess with a Rider...
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Old 2008-04-14, 22:31   Link #23516
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I assume nothing. Unison devices are said in canon to increase the user's control over their own magic. Given that UDs and mages have separate consciousnesses, I think it's a viable option to have the mage and the device split their attentions into two courses of action; say for instance, Nova programs the spells while Rico forms them, or Nova controls the spells in flight while Rico dodges around and engages in melee. At the upper end of this spectrum, you could even have them form and fire two spells at once, though you wouldn't get the benefits of the unison for either of them.
So, how does the above justify allowing the Unison device, the mage, or even a combo of the two concentrating completely on that task, to program 100 missiles in 20 seconds? It is not always possible to use a "mold" philosophy to construct things.

If you can't prove that (and sometimes if you can prove that), your idea is considered Speculative, and its acceptance will be determined solely by its literary balance and merit, which it is obviously flunking.
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Old 2008-04-14, 22:34   Link #23517
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A mold? Maybe not. How about copy and paste?
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Old 2008-04-14, 22:40   Link #23518
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Variant of "mold" philosophy. Now get to the essence of the question.
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Old 2008-04-14, 22:46   Link #23519
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I have no proof for you save for the fact that it isn't expressly stated to be impossible, which in this thread just won't fly, I know.

Congrats, ark. You've completely raped one of my better character concepts. I sincerely hope you're pleased with yourself, because I sure as hell ain't. Now if you'll excuse me, I've got a drawing board to get back to.
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Old 2008-04-14, 23:05   Link #23520
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If you had been willing to compromise ...

Anyway, ask ATC. He even drew diagrams for his Lance Rifle (the firing mechanism, the fire control was completely handwaved). Which didn't stop the h3xxbusting team from halving its speed and quartering its range.
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