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Old 2008-05-02, 13:01   Link #3941
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For Angel, who's taking exams.

Spoiler for Disney World Pt.5 I think:
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Old 2008-05-02, 13:22   Link #3942
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Chapter 30
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Spoiler for Los Ganados:


Spoiler for Los Ganados Aspect:


Hey guys, some problems here, I was working on the guion of Chapter6 of Rise of Techno - Union and noticed that it was too big, I calculate more than 50 pages, thing that will made it a bit dificult to download. Do you think I should divide it in 2 chapters making a total of 14 chapters of Rise of Techno - Union instead of 13?
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Old 2008-05-02, 13:25   Link #3943
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For Angel, who's taking exams.

Spoiler for Disney World Pt.5 I think:
Adorable

And this chapter was funny for two reasons. One because Nanoha's reaction to rolercoasters is funny, two because Keroko-chan suffers from the very same problem.

Heh, this reminds me of that OC scenario during the very early days of the OC-thread in which Keroko got a ride in Kha's aircraft, and he decided to 'stunt around'
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Old 2008-05-02, 15:12   Link #3944
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Hey guys, some problems here, I was working on the guion of Chapter6 of Rise of Techno - Union and noticed that it was too big, I calculate more than 50 pages, thing that will made it a bit dificult to download. Do you think I should divide it in 2 chapters making a total of 14 chapters of Rise of Techno - Union instead of 13?
If the file is over 100 megs, you should divide it up in two parts but release it as one chapter. Liiike:

RoT-U chapter 6 part a
RoT-U chapter 6 part b

If it's only like 50 or so megs, then one file is fine. very few people have dial-up anymore and with download accelerators, it'll still be a fast download.
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Adorable

And this chapter was funny for two reasons. One because Nanoha's reaction to rolercoasters is funny, two because Keroko-chan suffers from the very same problem.

Heh, this reminds me of that OC scenario during the very early days of the OC-thread in which Keroko got a ride in Kha's aircraft, and he decided to 'stunt around'
Hehe, I'd add Keroko in the background somewhere glad you liked it.
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Old 2008-05-02, 15:57   Link #3945
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Ew.
Why is everyone talking about Evangelion? Especially on a Nanoha thread?
Momo is displeased

Back on topic of Nanoha fanfiction:
Satashi and MercurianAngel did a LOVELY job on Emerald Bell. A little too much for me at times but it was beautiful *_*
And just simply amazing.
I really enjoyed reading it despite the...yeah....


Great job. Though I don't think I want to read something like this again
Just admit it. You enjoyed every bit of it

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I second the motion for the end of the Evangelion talk on the Nanoha fanfiction boards. I have never seen the series, nor do I have any interest in it, and it's not fun for me to come to a board where I expect wonderful mahou shoujo only to find discussion on something I have no interest in. I read the crossover and I liked it, but the wank was a little much for me.

So.

Yeah.

-gets off soapbox-

Back on topic. I was thinking about potentially extending Undercover into two more parts, instead of one. So I was wondering, what do you guys think I should do.

a] make epic-long-chapter-of-death and actually end everything for this final update - this will take longer than the usual friday night update.
b] add an epilogue that helps to finish off the storyline with cuteness and fluff after some epic angst?
c] Do neither and write something else (Like Cop!Nanoha or more of Vivio's boyfriend)
A and C

More C than A tho

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So I was looking at this
And I started getting inspiration for some super selfaware crack that got off topic but it's crack so who cares.
Spoiler for SUPER CRACK!... but not quite KHAAAAAAARCK:

I was glad to see that the papa Yuuno I put in Bodyguard!Nanoha wasn't so farfetched


@Evil rick that is definitely one evil avatar
@TheSinwithin- I don't have an opinion because to be honest... I haven't read Undercover yet ^^; I've been waiting for you to finish so I could read it all in one sitting.

Edit: Whoot! Page claim! I claim this page in the name of staying on topic!
Shiny crack should get a name of it's own

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If there's a 4th season, I hope it's about Nanoha......

Anyway, Week is completed.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4231451/1/

Enjoy~
So... That was Nanoha having fun with her sister? All along? Without any other thoughts?

I know she tried hard but that sure was either damn okay with it or insanely good at covering her emotions.

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Epic win!

... And somehow I just can't get the image of Vivio pretending to be movie star out of my mind. All she needs now a huge hat to finish the image.

And yes, I am one of those supporting Vivio-centric S4. But then, my opinion is hugely biased at that point. :3 *hugs movie-star Vivio*
Seconded *jumps on the Vivio hug pile*

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Spoiler for Lyrical Days:


(that was last one. Let's get a new vote count. BOLD AND RED please. If you want the rest of Lyrical Days, I will post it later probably. For now, everyone feel free to vote.
Voting B again even that Yuuno will be screwed by the end
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Old 2008-05-02, 16:28   Link #3946
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Epic win!

And yes, I am one of those supporting Vivio-centric S4. But then, my opinion is hugely biased at that point. :3 *hugs movie-star Vivio*
I third that *gets on the Vivio bandwagon

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Mmmm...such good quality crack . Perhaps you should try out the crack and khrack we have in the OC thread...
I keep meaning to check out the OC thread but I have no idea how to jump in. XD

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Shiny crack should get a name of it's own
*scratches chin* Shiny crack hm... more like SHINY crack. I guess it'd be crack that completely destroys the 4th wall and has a tendency to involve minor characters. If anyone thinks of a better name and/or definition please post it ><.

And by the way:
B

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Old 2008-05-02, 17:21   Link #3947
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*scratches chin* Shiny crack hm... more like SHINY crack. I guess it'd be crack that completely destroys the 4th wall and has a tendency to involve minor characters. If anyone thinks of a better name and/or definition please post it ><.
TSS........The Shine Syrup? It's the liquid, easy to swallow crack.

Shine Syrup........ so that's what the kids on the street are calling it these days....
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Old 2008-05-02, 17:23   Link #3948
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TSS........The Shine Syrup? It's the liquid, easy to swallow crack.

Shine Syrup........ so that's what the kids on the street are calling it these days....
Shinethanol?
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Old 2008-05-02, 17:35   Link #3949
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Shine Syrup XD
Shinethanol XD

I say we put it to a vote. ('Cause I'm just indecisiveness like that)

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Old 2008-05-02, 20:20   Link #3950
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Well guys, after posting up Week, I remember that a few people didn't know what pretzel's were. I've come to aid you!

Spoiler for pretzel logic:


Also, more on topicness:

Lyrical Days, collection:

Lyrical Days
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Old 2008-05-02, 20:46   Link #3951
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If the file is over 100 megs, you should divide it up in two parts but release it as one chapter. Liiike:

RoT-U chapter 6 part a
RoT-U chapter 6 part b

If it's only like 50 or so megs, then one file is fine. very few people have dial-up anymore and with download accelerators, it'll still be a fast download.
Spoiler for off topic:
But divide it in Part "a" & part "b" is not the same as divide it in two individual chapters? Plus I don't want chapters biggers than 40 pages
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Old 2008-05-02, 23:34   Link #3952
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It appears I've written a new Tale from Hayate's house

Magical Babysitter lyrical... Vita?!

And yes it is based on that picture Evil Rick posted like six pages back.
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Old 2008-05-02, 23:49   Link #3953
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It appears I've written a new Tale from Hayate's house

Magical Babysitter lyrical... Vita?!

And yes it is based on that picture Evil Rick posted like six pages back.
He, he !

I like it, poor Vita, I can't image how did she ended after the "beauty tratment" of Vivio

I'm glad that that image had work to you, I think this is one of your bests fics,you earned a cookie
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Old 2008-05-02, 23:56   Link #3954
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Undercover, Chapter Seven, "Because a battle rages inside of me"

Chapter Seven Link

Spoiler for Notes:
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Old 2008-05-03, 03:30   Link #3955
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Undercover, Chapter Seven, "Because a battle rages inside of me"

Chapter Seven Link

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I like how you portraid Takeshi in the battle, thinks he knows what he's doing but in actual fact, doesnt have a clue.

And the scene where Fate comforts Nanoha was very touching.

Looking forward to the final chapter.
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Old 2008-05-03, 04:21   Link #3956
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I always thought it strange that Impulse For of Fate's barrier jacket came with a white over coat that looked ... a lot like Nanoha's barrier Jacket. So I created an explanation.
However, Fate was using a white cape back in junior high, a year before this, already.
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Old 2008-05-03, 05:12   Link #3957
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It appears I've written a new Tale from Hayate's house

Magical Babysitter lyrical... Vita?!

And yes it is based on that picture Evil Rick posted like six pages back.
*has finally recovered from laughing*

Oh yes, that was brilliant. I can see why Nanoha failed to keep in her laughter.

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Well guys, after posting up Week, I remember that a few people didn't know what pretzel's were. I've come to aid you!

Spoiler for pretzel logic:


Also, more on topicness:

Lyrical Days, collection:

Lyrical Days
Hmm, Lyrical Days got a bit buried, didn't it? I vote A. Nanoha deserves a bit of apreciation.

Which reminds me, I really should finish that part of Raising Heart. Bleh, writing Nanoha in 'that' mood is hard. >_<
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However, Fate was using a white cape back in junior high, a year before this, already.
hum... -gets out As manga- ARRRRUUUUG. WHY YOU MAKE MY CUTE MOMENTS DIFFICULT SEVEN ARCS!?

Well, I guess that one could say that because Fate wasn't using Impulse Form that the cape wouldn't be there ... at the moment.

-goes off to facepalm in the corner.-
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Old 2008-05-03, 11:07   Link #3959
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*has finally recovered from laughing*

Oh yes, that was brilliant. I can see why Nanoha failed to keep in her laughter.



Hmm, Lyrical Days got a bit buried, didn't it? Nanoha deserves a bit of apreciation.

Which reminds me, I really should finish that part of Raising Heart. Bleh, writing Nanoha in 'that' mood is hard. >_<
Always count on Keroko-chan :3
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Old 2008-05-03, 11:34   Link #3960
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It appears I've written a new Tale from Hayate's house

Magical Babysitter lyrical... Vita?!

And yes it is based on that picture Evil Rick posted like six pages back.
I can see Vita convincing everyone that Zafira has rabies, thus providing her a good excuse to put him down.
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