Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Satashi]

For Angel, who's taking exams.

Spoiler for Disney World Pt.5 I think:

Nanoha screamed bloody murder as the roller coaster flew around the tracks and made clinking sounds that she just knew were bolts unscrewing. Vivio was next to her, happily holding onto the safety rail and cheering. Fate was on the other side of the little one, also crying out happily. When the minute and a half long ride was finished the two blonds looked at each other and smiled while Nanoha slouched down, trying not to throw up.

"Congratulations!" The operator told them happily after spinning a wheel. "You have all won another ride without waiting!" Several people cheered, making Nanoha shoot bolt upright.

The ride started moving again and Vivio hopped in the seat happily. Fate took her hand again and lifted them in the air. The brown haired girl grasped the guard rail firmly, screaming out how life was unfair.

~**~

"Uguuuu..." Face down on the table, Nanoha allowed Fate to rub her back soothingly. "I'm going to be sick..."

"No you're not." The blond laughed, keeping an eye on Vivio who was ordering something a few feet away. "You can handle flying so you can handle this."

"It's different when you're bolted down and can't control it..." With a slow breath she sat up and calmed down. "I'm okay now..."

"Mama!" Vivio ran over to them holding a cold beverage in her hands.

"Vivio went to get you something to calm down with, "Fate explained happily as their daughter jogged. "Careful Vivio, don't-"

Fall.

Vivio landed face first, cushioning the landing with her hands but also making the drink cover her head completly. "Vivio," Nanoha knelt down and lifted her daughter up, Fate's influence becoming obvious. "Are you okay?"

"Mm..."

Fate started wiping the girl off. "Not hurt?"

Vivio shook her head. "I'm sorry."

"Don't be," Nanoha shook her head. "Hey, Vivio, what do you want to do now?"

"Another roller coaster!" She answered at once.

"Sounds fun!" Fate agreed instantly.

Nanoha sank back. "Why me...?" Looking around, she pointed. "I'm going to go shopping, so you two behave alright?"

"You behave," Fate countered playfully. "We'll be back soon, meet here in half an hour?"

"Okay," Nanoha shouldered her purse and gave Fate a quick kiss on the cheek. "Call me if you can't find me."

"Right," lending down Fate scooped up Vivio. "Come on ,Vivio! Let's go ride another!" Her neck was hugged happily.

[Evil Rick]

Chapter 30

Vatican Knights

Spoiler for Los Ganados:

A chilly air blow in that field covered with skelletons, Alphonse, Helga and me remained silent while hearing those giant steps that were making the land trumble, I slowly standed up and pulled out my gun preparing myself for wathever was coming

An inmense shadow appear inside the cave, it was descomunal, like 20 meters, it slowly came out to the sunlight, a colosal Slave, it has the apearance of a bull, like a minotaur, it was holding a inmense Axe, for that thing was the axe that we saw in that armery, it was to arm this monster, he noticed us, making some strang noises from his mouth, we remained petrificed and silent, If you think that saw a big creature like that was something terrifing,image our surprise when we saw a second one coming out of the cave too, the two titans were no other than Los Ganados

"Uh... Vivio?" Helga was petrificed, Alphonse has hiden her behind him, I didn't knew wath to do, the monster of the lake was one thing, this two giants were something totally diferent, I though there was no way to defeat them, the first Ganado rise his axe and charge it against us, we reactionate and evade it, when the descomunal weapon touch the ground, it was like if the land was tearing apart

"Fire! Fire!" I screamed while shooted my own gun against Los Ganados

The slaves meerly feel the bullets, they started to cahse us, one go behind Alphonse and Helga and the other went against me!

The onlt thing I was doing was to evade him, he was fast and strong, the Axe were falling just a few mteters away from me, plus he was also trying to crush me with his feets, just like if I were a little ant! Helga and Alphonse were under the same situation

Los Ganados hitted the ground, smashed it and crushed it, trying to get us, I knew we were not going to last long, still in the ground, I rolled myself and shooted against his head, he coveret it with his hand, like were you do to scare the flyes, I aprovechate and ran away

Alphonse washolding Helga aginst the ground, in a little hole that was out of the reach of the enormus hands of the other Ganado, it was furius, smashing the ground trying to get my friends out of there, I shooted against him with the intention of call his atention, it worked... by my disgrace, now the two Ganados has their sights over me, I ran and grabed my Inquisitor's Axe, when I turned I saw that one of the slaves was going to catch me with his hand, I quickly swinged my Axe and ripped out one of his fingers, the slave made a horrible chill, the othert one charge his axe gainst me, I evade it and keep runing until I reacha high ground who leave me at the alture of their chests, the two slaves wereaproaching to me, the one with the finger ripped looked quite mad, From their position, Helga and Alphonse shooted against them, they call the atention of one that turn, the one with the finger ripped don't turn and raise his axe ready to slash me, I saw an oportunity there

The Ganado launched his axe in a vertical slash, I thro my self to the floor to evade it, the axe stabbed in the backof the other Ganado who falled dead inmediatly mading a horrible last roar, the other one turn to saw what had he done, I quickly jumped at his back, with one hand I grabed myself from his hairs, I pulled out my gun and shooted against his neck, the slave throw his axe and tryed to reachme, but I was out from his range, soon my face was covered with his blood, I quickly reloaded and keeep firing against his neck, I think I shoot like 5 rounds of bullets against him from the back of his neck wehn he finally started to stagger and finally falled to the ground aparently death

I was totally exauthed, Alphonse and Helga helped me to got up

"Hey Vivio! You got him all by yourself" Alphonse sayed while cleaning my face with his own cloth, I couldn't help but laugh, we were walking away from the corpses when I feelt that something was moving behind us, I turned and saw the Ganado I though I was killed rising his head, I try to scare but before I could do anyting he catch me with his hand

"Vivio!!!" Helga screamed, the Slave opened his mouth, he was going to ate me! Just when He was going to bite me a shoot came from the distance, the bullet got inside his eye, a second one in the same place, and a third one who finally finished him, this time, the Ganado was really dead

I realised myself from his hand, Alphonse and Helga helped me, at the distance I saw Raphael holding his Sniper Rifle, curius, he had saved me, behind him came several regulators, and Sky, Jasper and Karil too, in a fe minutes they all were at our point

I remained there like 15 minutes recovering my strenght, Karil was really worried about me, I told her I was allright, Sky came out from the cave followed by some regulators, they had gone inside to inspectionate it

"God news" He said "These two slaves were not here just for casuality, there is a pasage at the back of the cave, they were guarding it"

"So... these two cows were protecting the entrance to something... Something tells me that is our dear friend Nanoha. Grab you guns people, we are moving" Raphael comanded, we all standed up and gone inside the cave, bue before we got in, I noticed something in Raphael, his sniper rifle, the image came to my mind as a flash... it wa sthe same gun that the strange shadow used to kill Jack Velorius

Spoiler for Los Ganados Aspect:

Hey guys, some problems here, I was working on the guion of Chapter6 of Rise of Techno - Union and noticed that it was too big, I calculate more than 50 pages, thing that will made it a bit dificult to download. Do you think I should divide it in 2 chapters making a total of 14 chapters of Rise of Techno - Union instead of 13?

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by Satashi

For Angel, who's taking exams.

Spoiler for Disney World Pt.5 I think:

Nanoha screamed bloody murder as the roller coaster flew around the tracks and made clinking sounds that she just knew were bolts unscrewing. Vivio was next to her, happily holding onto the safety rail and cheering. Fate was on the other side of the little one, also crying out happily. When the minute and a half long ride was finished the two blonds looked at each other and smiled while Nanoha slouched down, trying not to throw up.

"Congratulations!" The operator told them happily after spinning a wheel. "You have all won another ride without waiting!" Several people cheered, making Nanoha shoot bolt upright.

The ride started moving again and Vivio hopped in the seat happily. Fate took her hand again and lifted them in the air. The brown haired girl grasped the guard rail firmly, screaming out how life was unfair.

~**~

"Uguuuu..." Face down on the table, Nanoha allowed Fate to rub her back soothingly. "I'm going to be sick..."

"No you're not." The blond laughed, keeping an eye on Vivio who was ordering something a few feet away. "You can handle flying so you can handle this."

"It's different when you're bolted down and can't control it..." With a slow breath she sat up and calmed down. "I'm okay now..."

"Mama!" Vivio ran over to them holding a cold beverage in her hands.

"Vivio went to get you something to calm down with, "Fate explained happily as their daughter jogged. "Careful Vivio, don't-"

Fall.

Vivio landed face first, cushioning the landing with her hands but also making the drink cover her head completly. "Vivio," Nanoha knelt down and lifted her daughter up, Fate's influence becoming obvious. "Are you okay?"

"Mm..."

Fate started wiping the girl off. "Not hurt?"

Vivio shook her head. "I'm sorry."

"Don't be," Nanoha shook her head. "Hey, Vivio, what do you want to do now?"

"Another roller coaster!" She answered at once.

"Sounds fun!" Fate agreed instantly.

Nanoha sank back. "Why me...?" Looking around, she pointed. "I'm going to go shopping, so you two behave alright?"

"You behave," Fate countered playfully. "We'll be back soon, meet here in half an hour?"

"Okay," Nanoha shouldered her purse and gave Fate a quick kiss on the cheek. "Call me if you can't find me."

"Right," lending down Fate scooped up Vivio. "Come on ,Vivio! Let's go ride another!" Her neck was hugged happily.

Adorable

And this chapter was funny for two reasons. One because Nanoha's reaction to rolercoasters is funny, two because Keroko-chan suffers from the very same problem.

Heh, this reminds me of that OC scenario during the very early days of the OC-thread in which Keroko got a ride in Kha's aircraft, and he decided to 'stunt around'

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Hey guys, some problems here, I was working on the guion of Chapter6 of Rise of Techno - Union and noticed that it was too big, I calculate more than 50 pages, thing that will made it a bit dificult to download. Do you think I should divide it in 2 chapters making a total of 14 chapters of Rise of Techno - Union instead of 13?

If the file is over 100 megs, you should divide it up in two parts but release it as one chapter. Liiike:

RoT-U chapter 6 part a
RoT-U chapter 6 part b

If it's only like 50 or so megs, then one file is fine. very few people have dial-up anymore and with download accelerators, it'll still be a fast download.

Spoiler for off topic:

A program called "Free Download Manager" is really good for speeding up and managing your downloads. It brought me from 150 k/s to almost 700 k/s. Worth looking into.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Adorable

And this chapter was funny for two reasons. One because Nanoha's reaction to rolercoasters is funny, two because Keroko-chan suffers from the very same problem.

Heh, this reminds me of that OC scenario during the very early days of the OC-thread in which Keroko got a ride in Kha's aircraft, and he decided to 'stunt around'

Hehe, I'd add Keroko in the background somewhere glad you liked it.

[Sam the Onion]

Originally Posted by Momo Chan

Ew.
Why is everyone talking about Evangelion? Especially on a Nanoha thread?
Momo is displeased

Back on topic of Nanoha fanfiction:
Satashi and MercurianAngel did a LOVELY job on Emerald Bell. A little too much for me at times but it was beautiful *_*
And just simply amazing.
I really enjoyed reading it despite the...yeah....


Great job. Though I don't think I want to read something like this again

Just admit it. You enjoyed every bit of it

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

I second the motion for the end of the Evangelion talk on the Nanoha fanfiction boards. I have never seen the series, nor do I have any interest in it, and it's not fun for me to come to a board where I expect wonderful mahou shoujo only to find discussion on something I have no interest in. I read the crossover and I liked it, but the wank was a little much for me.

So.

Yeah.

-gets off soapbox-

Back on topic. I was thinking about potentially extending Undercover into two more parts, instead of one. So I was wondering, what do you guys think I should do.

a] make epic-long-chapter-of-death and actually end everything for this final update - this will take longer than the usual friday night update.
b] add an epilogue that helps to finish off the storyline with cuteness and fluff after some epic angst?
c] Do neither and write something else (Like Cop!Nanoha or more of Vivio's boyfriend)

A and C

More C than A tho

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

So I was looking at this
And I started getting inspiration for some super selfaware crack that got off topic but it's crack so who cares.

Spoiler for SUPER CRACK!... but not quite KHAAAAAAARCK:

Upon viewing the character chart

Nanoha: *sigh* nothing new really. Again with the ambiguousness -_-‘
Fate: … I’m not in Nanoha’s box…
Nanoha: Nya ha ha well it’s not like we’re cannonly family really and you get a nice best friend line to me and Hayate.
Fate: Best… friend… oh… that’s all *doom*
Yuuno:… I ‘m not in Nanoha’s box… *emo corner*
Nanoha: A-ah Yuuno-kun
Yuuno: *drawing sad circles on the ground* Ana no-lines gets to be in the box but poor ‘ol loyal Yuuno doesn’t get that.
Fate: *Joins Yuuno in the corner* I don’t get to be Fate-mama anymore…
Erio + Caro: Then what exactly are we?
Subaru: Since Fate was a Mama and now isn’t in the family does that make her… *thinks. Gasps* A deadbeat dad!
Tiana: *Thwack!* She’s a girl!
Subaru: *sniff* Ne Tia Tia there weren’t any lines connecting us *Teary eyes*
Tiana: O-of course there weren’t *blush* Why would there be anyway?
Subaru: But Tia~ *Tackle hug/Gropage*
Tiana: O////O G-Get off!

Vice: Hey Zaffy~ look what I got!
Zafira: What? And don’t call me Zaffy.
Vice: I got my own box *pride* See *points* Me and… um… eye patch girl
Zafira: *sweatdrop* You don’t even know her name? [btw: Does anyone actually know her name?]
Vice: Phssst it’s not important.
Zafira: O.o
Griffith: *searching*… *still searching* … *more searching*… I’m… I’m not on here.
Zafira: Eh? But… there are dead people on here. Dead people with… even less lines then you?
Vice: *back pat* there there some people just aren’t meant for main characterdom
Griffith: Getting a box does not make you a main character after all Yuuno got one.
Yuuno: D: What? I-I’m a main character
Hayate: Oh Yuuno your delusions are so adorable.
Vita: Everyone knows if you’re male and in Nanoha you’re just a minor character
Yuuno/Chrono/Zafira/Vice/Griffith: OBJECTION!
Signum: Foolishly foolish fools. Mahou Shojou Lyrical Nanoha is aimed at people who have no interest in watching a bunch of men. Look at the fan art if you need proof.
Vice: E-eh I have no counter for that.
Chrono: Fanfiction! We have Fanfiction!
Zafira/Yuuno/Griffith: … -_-;
Zafira: I only have that weird fic that’s never updated about me being a babysitter
Griffith: Most people don’t remember I was even in Nanoha
Yuuno: YUNOHA! *Jumps up with passion* THE WORLD NEEDS MORE YU—
Fate: NANOFATE *Tackles Yuuno*
Yuuno: *struggling on the ground with Fate* Don’t be greedy I need the screen time not you!
Fate: You can never have enough screen time
Nanoha: *eye twitch* That’s all I am? A method to get seen?
Fate/Yuuno: No duh.
Vice: Oh Yuuno you’re so short sighted. Hooking up with the main character isn’t the only way to get more screen time. There’s always the Vivio route.
Zafira: Not this again. Look if we’re going by cannon the only people who have any contact wit—
Yuuno: Besides I already won.
Everybody: Eh?
Yuuno: See here. It says parent/child and Vivio *proud*
Vita: -_- It says you work to maintain Nanoha and Vivio’s parent/child relationship
Yuuno: oh…
Fate: What the hell does that mean?
Vivio: *comes in wearing a giant feather boa, fur coat and giant sunglasses* Did somebody say the star’s name? Vivio doesn’t like it when… her lesser castmates talk about her.
Zafira: A-a-h V-vivio?
Nanoha: *sigh* She’s been like this ever since she heard the theory if we get a forth season it will center around her.
Vivio: *Flips back hair* It’s only natural that someone of Vivio’s talent and moeness would be the star. Face it. You girls are just… too old.
Nanoha/Fate/Hayate: OoO….
Nanoha: WHO’S AN OLD LADY WHO CAN’T SELL A SINGLE HENTAI DOUJIN!
Vivio: No one wants to watch an old 20 something run around in a mini skirt.
Nanoha: EH?!?
Signum: She has a point. Anime characters over the age of 25 or so have significantly smaller fanbases an—
Nanoha: That can’t be true.
Vivio: The younger they are the more popular Oh HO HO HO HO HO HO!
Nanoha: NOOOOOOOOO!

I was glad to see that the papa Yuuno I put in Bodyguard!Nanoha wasn't so farfetched


@Evil rick that is definitely one evil avatar
@TheSinwithin- I don't have an opinion because to be honest... I haven't read Undercover yet ^^; I've been waiting for you to finish so I could read it all in one sitting.

Edit: Whoot! Page claim! I claim this page in the name of staying on topic!

Shiny crack should get a name of it's own

Originally Posted by Satashi

If there's a 4th season, I hope it's about Nanoha......

Anyway, Week is completed.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4231451/1/

Enjoy~

So... That was Nanoha having fun with her sister? All along? Without any other thoughts?

I know she tried hard but that sure was either damn okay with it or insanely good at covering her emotions.

Originally Posted by Keroko

Epic win!

... And somehow I just can't get the image of Vivio pretending to be movie star out of my mind. All she needs now a huge hat to finish the image.

And yes, I am one of those supporting Vivio-centric S4. But then, my opinion is hugely biased at that point. :3 *hugs movie-star Vivio*

Seconded *jumps on the Vivio hug pile*

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Lyrical Days:

*snip*

(that was last one. Let's get a new vote count. BOLD AND RED please. If you want the rest of Lyrical Days, I will post it later probably. For now, everyone feel free to vote.

Voting B again even that Yuuno will be screwed by the end

[TheShinySword]

Originally Posted by Keroko

Epic win!

And yes, I am one of those supporting Vivio-centric S4. But then, my opinion is hugely biased at that point. :3 *hugs movie-star Vivio*

I third that *gets on the Vivio bandwagon

Originally Posted by Evangelion Xgouki

Mmmm...such good quality crack . Perhaps you should try out the crack and khrack we have in the OC thread...

I keep meaning to check out the OC thread but I have no idea how to jump in. XD

Originally Posted by Sam the Onion

Shiny crack should get a name of it's own

*scratches chin* Shiny crack hm... more like SHINY crack. I guess it'd be crack that completely destroys the 4th wall and has a tendency to involve minor characters. If anyone thinks of a better name and/or definition please post it ><.

And by the way:
B

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

*scratches chin* Shiny crack hm... more like SHINY crack. I guess it'd be crack that completely destroys the 4th wall and has a tendency to involve minor characters. If anyone thinks of a better name and/or definition please post it ><.

TSS........The Shine Syrup? It's the liquid, easy to swallow crack.

Shine Syrup........ so that's what the kids on the street are calling it these days....

[Sam the Onion]

Originally Posted by Satashi

TSS........The Shine Syrup? It's the liquid, easy to swallow crack.

Shine Syrup........ so that's what the kids on the street are calling it these days....

Shinethanol?

[TheShinySword]

Shine Syrup XD
Shinethanol XD

I say we put it to a vote. ('Cause I'm just indecisiveness like that)

[Satashi]

Well guys, after posting up Week, I remember that a few people didn't know what pretzel's were. I've come to aid you!

Spoiler for pretzel logic:

Also, more on topicness:

Lyrical Days, collection:

Lyrical Days

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Satashi

If the file is over 100 megs, you should divide it up in two parts but release it as one chapter. Liiike:

RoT-U chapter 6 part a
RoT-U chapter 6 part b

If it's only like 50 or so megs, then one file is fine. very few people have dial-up anymore and with download accelerators, it'll still be a fast download.

Spoiler for off topic:

A program called "Free Download Manager" is really good for speeding up and managing your downloads. It brought me from 150 k/s to almost 700 k/s. Worth looking into.

But divide it in Part "a" & part "b" is not the same as divide it in two individual chapters? Plus I don't want chapters biggers than 40 pages

[TheShinySword]

It appears I've written a new Tale from Hayate's house

Magical Babysitter lyrical... Vita?!

And yes it is based on that picture Evil Rick posted like six pages back.

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

It appears I've written a new Tale from Hayate's house

Magical Babysitter lyrical... Vita?!

And yes it is based on that picture Evil Rick posted like six pages back.

He, he !

I like it, poor Vita, I can't image how did she ended after the "beauty tratment" of Vivio

I'm glad that that image had work to you, I think this is one of your bests fics,you earned a cookie

[Thesinwithin]

Undercover, Chapter Seven, "Because a battle rages inside of me"

Chapter Seven Link

Spoiler for Notes:

-Title is from "Kiss!^2 Bang!^2 by Komatsu Ayaka. Anyone familiar with Pretty Guardian Sailor Moon (which has eaten my soul, again -sigh-) will know that this is by far one of the most catchy songs ever written.

-Fate and Nanoha, after a week of Fate getting used the the idea of the new bond that they share, are finally starting to just be cute together.

-I figure that even though Nanoha hates Fate worrying over her, she will worry about Fate's condition. They care so much for each other. Its cute.

-Fate is very torn between action and nonaction here, mostly because she knows that she is still injured, but at the same time; she desperately needs to fight something.

-Point Me Spells are (c) JK Rowling. I modified it to work within a Nanoha-setting, and I firmly believe that a spell like this must exist on in Mid-Style magic, because they're so damn useful.

-When Fate changes her barrier jacket to her old, original one (from the first two series) she's doing it because when she uses Impulse Form she's sacrificing some of her speed in order to have more defense. In order to do well in the fight, Fate reasons that she's going to have to be faster than Subject A, who is easily as fast as she is when she's using Impulse Form for her Barrier Jacket.

-"Who the hell do you think I am?" Well, this isn't Gurren Laggan, but I couldn't resist the reference. Takeshi is rather insulted

-Protection Powered and Round Shield are both of Nanoha's stronger protection spells. I figured that she would be the sort to combine them when Fate was threatened.

-Nanoha giving Fate part of her barrier Jacket was something that is actually part of the original plans for this story. I always thought it strange that Impulse For of Fate's barrier jacket came with a white over coat that looked ... a lot like Nanoha's barrier Jacket. So I created an explanation.

-So if you completely destroy someone's linker core, they die.

-A lot of police officers, after their first shooting, require someone to talk to. I think that the TSAB might not have shrinks on staff, however, because that would have been the first thing that I would have suggested Nanoha do, had I been Chrono.

[Advent000]

Originally Posted by Thesinwithin

Undercover, Chapter Seven, "Because a battle rages inside of me"

Chapter Seven Link

Spoiler for Notes:

-Title is from "Kiss!^2 Bang!^2 by Komatsu Ayaka. Anyone familiar with Pretty Guardian Sailor Moon (which has eaten my soul, again -sigh-) will know that this is by far one of the most catchy songs ever written.

-Fate and Nanoha, after a week of Fate getting used the the idea of the new bond that they share, are finally starting to just be cute together.

-I figure that even though Nanoha hates Fate worrying over her, she will worry about Fate's condition. They care so much for each other. Its cute.

-Fate is very torn between action and nonaction here, mostly because she knows that she is still injured, but at the same time; she desperately needs to fight something.

-Point Me Spells are (c) JK Rowling. I modified it to work within a Nanoha-setting, and I firmly believe that a spell like this must exist on in Mid-Style magic, because they're so damn useful.

-When Fate changes her barrier jacket to her old, original one (from the first two series) she's doing it because when she uses Impulse Form she's sacrificing some of her speed in order to have more defense. In order to do well in the fight, Fate reasons that she's going to have to be faster than Subject A, who is easily as fast as she is when she's using Impulse Form for her Barrier Jacket.

-"Who the hell do you think I am?" Well, this isn't Gurren Laggan, but I couldn't resist the reference. Takeshi is rather insulted

-Protection Powered and Round Shield are both of Nanoha's stronger protection spells. I figured that she would be the sort to combine them when Fate was threatened.

-Nanoha giving Fate part of her barrier Jacket was something that is actually part of the original plans for this story. I always thought it strange that Impulse For of Fate's barrier jacket came with a white over coat that looked ... a lot like Nanoha's barrier Jacket. So I created an explanation.

-So if you completely destroy someone's linker core, they die.

-A lot of police officers, after their first shooting, require someone to talk to. I think that the TSAB might not have shrinks on staff, however, because that would have been the first thing that I would have suggested Nanoha do, had I been Chrono.

I like how you portraid Takeshi in the battle, thinks he knows what he's doing but in actual fact, doesnt have a clue.

And the scene where Fate comforts Nanoha was very touching.

Looking forward to the final chapter.

[Jimmy C]

Originally Posted by thesinwithin

I always thought it strange that Impulse For of Fate's barrier jacket came with a white over coat that looked ... a lot like Nanoha's barrier Jacket. So I created an explanation.

However, Fate was using a white cape back in junior high, a year before this, already.

[Keroko]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

It appears I've written a new Tale from Hayate's house

Magical Babysitter lyrical... Vita?!

And yes it is based on that picture Evil Rick posted like six pages back.

*has finally recovered from laughing*

Oh yes, that was brilliant. I can see why Nanoha failed to keep in her laughter.

Originally Posted by Satashi

Well guys, after posting up Week, I remember that a few people didn't know what pretzel's were. I've come to aid you!

Spoiler for pretzel logic:

Also, more on topicness:

Lyrical Days, collection:

Lyrical Days

Hmm, Lyrical Days got a bit buried, didn't it? I vote A. Nanoha deserves a bit of apreciation.

Which reminds me, I really should finish that part of Raising Heart. Bleh, writing Nanoha in 'that' mood is hard. >_<

[Thesinwithin]

Originally Posted by Jimmy C

However, Fate was using a white cape back in junior high, a year before this, already.

hum... -gets out As manga- ARRRRUUUUG. WHY YOU MAKE MY CUTE MOMENTS DIFFICULT SEVEN ARCS!?

Well, I guess that one could say that because Fate wasn't using Impulse Form that the cape wouldn't be there ... at the moment.

-goes off to facepalm in the corner.-

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by Keroko

*has finally recovered from laughing*

Oh yes, that was brilliant. I can see why Nanoha failed to keep in her laughter.



Hmm, Lyrical Days got a bit buried, didn't it? Nanoha deserves a bit of apreciation.

Which reminds me, I really should finish that part of Raising Heart. Bleh, writing Nanoha in 'that' mood is hard. >_<

Always count on Keroko-chan :3

[Junkedcat]

Originally Posted by TheShinySword

It appears I've written a new Tale from Hayate's house

Magical Babysitter lyrical... Vita?!

And yes it is based on that picture Evil Rick posted like six pages back.

I can see Vita convincing everyone that Zafira has rabies, thus providing her a good excuse to put him down.