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Old 2008-05-08, 03:14   Link #24261
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Aaargghhhh How can I forget it's the one year anniversary if OCT. I keep saying last week, don't forget it, don't forget it....

ORZ...

Aside from myself dispair, Happy birthsday OCT
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Old 2008-05-08, 04:06   Link #24262
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*pops in*

Happy Birthday OC thread!

really busy, friends coming over so I don't really have time to write. ^_^;

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Old 2008-05-08, 04:29   Link #24263
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Ah, it's the thread's birthday. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

Well, I didn't buy cakes for you today, but here, you can have this.

*chucks BLUECHEESE NUKE and flees*

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha GuardianS

Chapter Eight—Rain and Sacrifice

Spoiler for Scene I:


Spoiler for Scene II:


Spoiler for Scene III:


Spoiler for Scene IV:
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Old 2008-05-08, 04:34   Link #24264
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And another one!

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha GuardianS

Chapter Eight—Rain and Sacrifice

Spoiler for Scene IV, continued:


Spoiler for Scene V:


Right, that's about all ...

Not.

That's only half of the entire bluecheesium, I'll post the rest when I've gotten over this sore at my rear. Been sitting too long in front of the computer.

Enjoy!

P/S: Before that, I'll have to offer prayers and apologies to the God and the OC thread in general for purposefully sending a number of CC members from Escutcheon, Teana, and Signum to the guillotine. May their souls rest in peace.

*FLEES LIKE HELL!*

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Old 2008-05-08, 05:11   Link #24265
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Alright. I'm fully in love with this series now...

Excellent work indeed. The group fights are nicely done...and that girl is SCARY. I'm gonna try praying that that ship of theirs is in one piece

(although I'm secretly hoping it's in many, many pieces )

*runs from Angry Aaron*



and I'm all the more determined to make mine as EPIC.

My exams are officially over for the rest of this semester, and now it's time to start writing again.

Yay~

Anyway...

*spies the EDIT*

No need to offer your prayers...they can die if they like. Or if you like. Um, if...err, heck, nevermind. Just know that I don't mind if they get killed-

*is shot*

@Kha: Could I have some basic information about...um, Kha?
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Old 2008-05-08, 05:42   Link #24266
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Right, that's about all ...

Not.

That's only half of the entire bluecheesium, I'll post the rest when I've gotten over this sore at my rear. Been sitting too long in front of the computer.

Enjoy!

P/S: Before that, I'll have to offer prayers and apologies to the God and the OC thread in general for purposefully sending a number of CC members from Escutcheon, Teana, and Signum to the guillotine. May their souls rest in peace.

*FLEES LIKE HELL!*
Rofl, that's only half.................

Talk about making me feel bad... That's probably about as many words as I've written for my own fics combined

All I can say is send them to their deaths........... *flamesuit on* I'm not one to criticise when one of my neglected fics is planned with many deaths

Talk about epic haxx though. I'll let it through for the sake of the story but shouldn't Chrono and the others had some sought of inlking about the massive thingamawhatsis that just leveled thier base/ship( I can't remember at all)? Heck Long Arch was able to detect a S-rank attack from an undetermined distance away in Strikers (This was the first contact of vivio) where as here we've got something that is equally or even more powerful than Diecis cannon shot.

Dramatic entrance for the capture at the end of scene 4 for sure XD. Would have better for them to just blast them (knock them unconscious) and be done with it (without the intro) but yeah

Why SB of all things for Teana to use Why!!!!!!!!! Cross-fire or that other attack, phantom bullet ( I think it was (aborted in Devil-Nanoha sequence)) would have been better(probably) due to shorter cast times.

That's it for now

Oh and Happy Birthday OC XD XD
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Old 2008-05-08, 06:01   Link #24267
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Looks like the setting fits well for a 'dark future'. TSAB doesn't look like it's going to stand any longer while Laguna follows in her brother's footsteps. Insights into past events are good too.

work there. Figure that Shinji(?) is Iruel's base and even Hayate goes evil here.
Hehe thank you very much!

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Seyla.
Reading this word, I guess you also know who Aleksander Kerensky is, quiaff?

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Ah, it finally arrives . Awesome work as always, Kyral though I think you're gonna need to order more chairs .
Sorry for the delay. Thanks that you like it!
Don't worry... we have enough chairs... we own every single chair on Midchilda! >:-D

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Looks like Shinji? I have no idea why...
Must be a coincidence

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Nice dark setting, the Dark Generals are beginning to be explained, and an awesome poster to boot!
Thanks! But I must apologize: I didn't even used one of your characters, I also mentioned another.


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Rinya is CUUUUTTEE~!!!

NIce work!!
Gratz! You're the first one calling her cute! xD

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This is AWESOME, KYRAL!!! NICE JOB!!!

I loved the interactions between the 'siblings' of Darkness.
And Laguna following Vice's footsteps was an awesomely good surprise!!!

Though... Hayate... being corrupted...

Spoiler for NOOOOOOOOOOO~~~~~~~~~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:
















*ORZ IN DESPAIR*

T____________T

Anyway, don't mind me. Carry on...()


Laguna is a character that isn't used often in other works, so I thought it would be nice to use her.


*evil grin*
Yes! Hayate Yagami is the first Dark General! She started it all!
She lead the assault on Midchilda! She destroyd the Saint Church! And... she kicked Elrics butt in the last chapter

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WE ARE NOT WORTHY!!!!

Totally INCREDIBLE!!!

Nice job!!!

(Balks and sobs at the sight of Dark Hayate... ;____;

[ ])
Glad you like it!
(*gives handkerchief* )

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Anyway, its the 8th of May where I am! OC thread is ONE YEAR OLD TODAY! Minna! SAY IT WITH ME! WITH PASSION! FEELING! BLUECHESIUM! HOT BLOOD! SPIRAL ENERGY!


O-TANJOUBI, OMEDETOU GOZAIMASU, OC THREAD-SAN!!!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY, OC TREAD!!!!!


And we can't have a birthday without DELICIOUS CAKES!

W0000000000000000000000T!

It's a year old!!

CONGRATULATIONS!! OUTER CAAADIAAAAAA!!!


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But...

But...

THE CAKE IS A LIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*RUNS FASTER*

And HAPPY BIRTHDAY OC
Hm... delicous lie cake! :3


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Ah, it's the thread's birthday. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

Well, I didn't buy cakes for you today, but here, you can have this.

*chucks BLUECHEESE NUKE and flees*

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha GuardianS

Chapter Eight—Rain and Sacrifice

Spoiler for Scene I:


Spoiler for Scene II:


Spoiler for Scene III:

Quote:
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And another one!

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha GuardianS

Chapter Eight—Rain and Sacrifice

Spoiler for Scene IV, continued:


Spoiler for Scene V:


Right, that's about all ...

Not.

That's only half of the entire bluecheesium, I'll post the rest when I've gotten over this sore at my rear. Been sitting too long in front of the computer.

Enjoy!

P/S: Before that, I'll have to offer prayers and apologies to the God and the OC thread in general for purposefully sending a number of CC members from Escutcheon, Teana, and Signum to the guillotine. May their souls rest in peace.

*FLEES LIKE HELL!*
Freaking Awsome! O.o

Oh... and one thing :3

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<Tausend Hiebe: Bleiche Morgendämmerung (Thousand Strikes: Pale Dawn).>
Yeah! It is used in action!
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Old 2008-05-08, 06:47   Link #24268
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@Liingo: Thanks for the comments . I'll get to them later and tell you why. Hopefully it's understandable, or you may already find your answers here (one of them, in any case).

@Kyral: Yep, the Belkan Scriptor's magic is showing here! Going to do a big backlog buster later. Haven't read your stuff yet, but from the outlook, it's superb!

Anyway, third round! BLUECHEESE NUKE, AWAY!

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha GuardianS

Chapter Eight—Rain and Sacrifice

Spoiler for Scene VI:


Spoiler for Scene VII:

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Old 2008-05-08, 06:51   Link #24269
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And final warhead, launched!

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha GuardianS

Chapter Eight—Rain and Sacrifice

Spoiler for Scene VII, continued:


And that's it. All four of them. Truth is, it's actually as long as Chapter Six, but production cost was too high and things got toned down a little.

Now that my nuke ammunition is out ...

*flees from HAXX-busters and people crying for my blood*

P/S(1): The guillotine is a lie.
P/S(2): Please stop if you think your adrenaline is pumping too fast from the (ill-paced) actions. It's not good for your heart. :3
P/S(3): The author suggest Eye-mo in advance.

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Old 2008-05-08, 07:24   Link #24270
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@Liingo: Thanks for the comments . I'll get to them later and tell you why. Hopefully it's understandable, or you may already find your answers here (one of them, in any case).
Ahh, I see a variation on grenade jumping. Well it makes sense Don't worry so much about explaining the other comments raised. I'm perfectly happy to sit and wait for things to be explained in the story. Of course if that's not true then that's a different matter entirely

Although it does seem to me that we have epic haxx on the 'good guys team' with what Leona threw out in the chapter... Perhaps not so devasting in property damage but still powerful none the less

One more falls. Or at least is now a literal vegetable

Suitably epic nuke from our resident grand story teller XD

I still can't shake the feeling that the templars are going to end up on the good side by the end of this. Although it's debateable how many of them are still going to be alive by it's conclusion.

Now to sit for another month or so to wait for the next installment, the aftermath. *sigh*

Ahhh, I really need to work on my fics sometime... Now if only I had a time machine

Yeah I figured
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Old 2008-05-08, 07:53   Link #24271
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And final warhead, launched!

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha GuardianS

Chapter Eight—Rain and Sacrifice

Spoiler for Scene VII, continued:


And that's it. All four of them. Truth is, it's actually as long as Chapter Six, but production cost was too high and things got toned down a little.

Now that my nuke ammunition is out ...

*flees from HAXX-busters and people crying for my blood*

P/S(1): The guillotine is a lie.
P/S(2): Please stop if you think your adrenaline is pumping too fast from the (ill-paced) actions. It's not good for your heart. :3
P/S(3): The author suggest Eye-mo in advance.
:t witch:

The...lines are nice...

The action was cool...

The couple's move was so Sora and Nike...

I feel for S-Sharazad...

And I think there's...something about Leona...

BUT!

BUT! BUT! BUTTTTT!!!!!!

NOOOOOOOOOO------TRYSTAHN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU'RE MY FAAAAVVVVOOORRRRIIITTTTEEEE TEMPLARRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOOOOOUUUUUUUUU CAN'T DDDDDDDIIIIIEEEEEE HHHEEEEEERRRRREEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!

...

DAMN YOU PF!~

:u pset:
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Old 2008-05-08, 07:58   Link #24272
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Reading this word, I guess you also know who Aleksander Kerensky is, quiaff?
Who do you think I am? Of course aff, bantam surat.

*cocks his Blood Kite's pulse laser array*

Yes, Applegarth's Penetrator build is SO MUCH BETTER on the Blood Kite
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Old 2008-05-08, 08:00   Link #24273
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Happy Birthday OC! Yes, I'm still alive, just not actively working on my OCs for the moment. I shall devour the bluecheese nukes I see around here later. Had a bad week. Laters! *pokes PF and runs*

Edit: Xena! Double posting!? NO U! *smacks Xena with harisen and disappears again*

Resuming activities in OC again, hopefully I can find time in between work to post every now and then. Writing will have to be done at home, I do enough of that in the office. -_-'
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Old 2008-05-08, 08:14   Link #24274
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Who do you think I am? Of course aff, bantam surat.

*cocks his Blood Kite's pulse laser array*

Yes, Applegarth's Penetrator build is SO MUCH BETTER on the Blood Kite
Clanners?!

*TK powers up his Sagittaire*
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Clanners?!

*TK powers up his Sagittaire*
Just be glad I didn't use Cranston's build on a Turkina! Used to smash the limbs of people with gauss rifles, just for lulz. The head was for entertainment.
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Happy birthday OC Thread!
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Old 2008-05-08, 10:23   Link #24277
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Who do you think I am? Of course aff, bantam surat.

*cocks his Blood Kite's pulse laser array*

Yes, Applegarth's Penetrator build is SO MUCH BETTER on the Blood Kite
Kinda out of the swing with all the new mechs and variants around..

*ponders between Victor's Daishi and standard Pillager*

*strafes Xena with Phelean's Timber Wolf*



And of course, Happy One Year to Cadia.
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Kinda out of the swing with all the new mechs and variants around..

*ponders between Victor's Daishi and standard Pillager*

*strafes Xena with Phelean's Timber Wolf*



And of course, Happy One Year to Cadia.
Just go with a classic! Like the Atlas!

*TK leads his mechs into battle and begins laying waste to the Clanner scum*
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Old 2008-05-08, 11:28   Link #24279
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Well, in celebration to OCT's birthday:
Another chapter! sorry it took a while.
Again, thanks to PhoenixG and Aaron008R for beta-reading!

To everyone who read, thanks alot, couldn't be doing this without you guys and gals. I read everyone's comments even though i might not have responded to them, i also tried to make it a bit more clear to avoid needless confusion. But if i didn't succeed in that, then i suppose that confusion is just a part of my personality.

links to chapters 1 and 2.

About formatting: Davrams lines are always preluded by an empty line, and i usually don't have another empty line afterwards. But when i have two people talking and neither TALKS LIKE THIS, i use empty lines to indicate that the person who's talking has changed.

anyway, around 5500 words like the last chapter as well, here it is:
Spoiler:


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Old 2008-05-08, 11:41   Link #24280
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@Kyral: Yep, the Belkan Scriptor's magic is showing here! Going to do a big backlog buster later. Haven't read your stuff yet, but from the outlook, it's superb!
Don't praise me until you read it. I still have a long way to go.

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Anyway, third round! BLUECHEESE NUKE, AWAY!

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha GuardianS

Chapter Eight—Rain and Sacrifice

Spoiler for Scene VI:


Spoiler for Scene VII:
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And final warhead, launched!

Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha GuardianS

Chapter Eight—Rain and Sacrifice

Spoiler for Scene VII, continued:


And that's it. All four of them. Truth is, it's actually as long as Chapter Six, but production cost was too high and things got toned down a little.

Now that my nuke ammunition is out ...

*flees from HAXX-busters and people crying for my blood*

P/S(1): The guillotine is a lie.
P/S(2): Please stop if you think your adrenaline is pumping too fast from the (ill-paced) actions. It's not good for your heart. :3
P/S(3): The author suggest Eye-mo in advance.

Wait!
I thought they died!? But they never have!?
You played with my innocent heart! ;.;
(ok... and that's from the guy who killed nanoha off screen >.> )


Ah... that's what I call a fun read

Sadly two things cought my eye...
*drops a big, ancient and ornamented on the table and opens it.*


Spoiler for Belka Buster:



and... lol what have I done!?

Suddenly there is the clan war all over again!

Well... Timber Wolf/Mad Cat is my favorite mech too. I'm also more a fan of the classic mechs like Centurion, Battlemaster and Thunderbolt. Or my goold old Stinger LAM (w00t! It's a VF I tell you! A friggn' VF in Gerwalk Mode! Well... that's where it comes from xD)
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