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Old 2004-04-17, 20:04   Link #81
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Murder my Angel

The night I looked up at the sky
Tears revealed the truth
For all I should see is blue
But instead blood covers
When I walk alone
My body cannot fight
All these tears
That came into my life
I walked so far
Searching for my answers
And all I found was you
Staring at that same sky
I think you are my answer
What I've been searching for
So if I help you
You'll help me
And in the end I will know
.You're my wings.
Carry me along the wind
The breeze of my heart
Your eyes tell a tale of love
But a bloody path waits
I know it is true
But it doesn't seem right
The monster is you
And I am the one who has to fight.
I take that sword
And pierce it into your heart
The same pain that I felt staring at that sky
Your horrid screams
The same I used to love
Has blackness clouded my eyes?
I put down my sword
For I refuse to fight
The same being that helped me that night
Even if you appear different to others
In my heart I can see your face
The real you inside me
Is all I need
I stare at the sky once more
For I am to die
And you.
Are still my angel
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Old 2004-04-17, 20:15   Link #82
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Why you bump thread!

Okay, to add to my earlier post, here is a couplet, and a sampling of lyrical prose from a much larger series I wrote.

Someone knocked over (Prelude to Fragment)
Someone knocked over the jug of hot chocolate.
There is blood splattered on one of the walls.

Fragment III (High-school gyms)
High-school gyms are dark at night, and smelly. The floor is dangerous because someone might see me but the metal stands are hard and cold. I'm sleeping lying flat on the stands in the cold of the night, thinking of you. Tomorrow I will sleep in an oily alleyway outside a McDonald's, but soon -- next week maybe -- I will have reached the abandoned yellow fields and the forest of firevine.
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Old 2004-04-17, 20:16   Link #83
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a haiku, by me ^_^

OMG I AM TEH SAD
J00 ha><0red ma Bo><0r
I will teh killz0rz
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Old 2004-04-17, 21:07   Link #84
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I call this MAD WHISPERS -

A glass of your insipid dram I will drink.
You beckon with hands bony and aged
Lead me not unto where I will think.
Many times this scene you have staged.

I think of those who致e gone before.
Hale hearty and true of belief.
Past this moment, through the door.
Now they can find no relief.

They saw their dreams crushed to dust
and their beliefs buckled under the strain
Their hopes sit upon your shelf caked in rust.
And you are their master yet bane.

For if I ponder and think,
maybe I will see the error of their way.
I値l refuse your insipid dram to drink
and live to rue the day.
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Old 2004-04-18, 06:04   Link #85
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The moon

So do you ever look at the moon?
And think of the ones you love
The ones you want to be with
Do you think about all the things that have gone on
Do you think about all the troubles you had
Do you cry every time when you see the moon
Ever night
The moon is a symbol of peace
It creates a time of personal space
It can only be there each month
For us, to all be there to watch
It as it rose and sank

The stars

It twinkles like life
It blooms ever every night
It can be seen around the world
If only
We could just sit down and stare at the beauty of the stars
To connect the lines of angels

The wind

The wind a voice of warning
It warns us all of the times and weather
It protects us
And plays withes us
The wind is a messenger for you and me
I wish it was here. Here to tell me its stories.

Autumn

The time of year, where leaves fall like snow,
The time of sadness goes
The waking of others is a dream
The colorful sunsets
And beautiful rise of the moon
The time of year where the clouds wipe away the sadness of others
The moon of autumn is the brightest of all it fills the dense forest's with light
The rain-washes the tears of the ground
Everything is forgotten as autumn arrives.

Spring

The season of life
The time of rejoicing
When the weather is just right
The sky is blue
Where the birds are singing
The smell of the blooming flowers
That eliminates sadness
What will this world be like with out spring?
Is something I would not want to know?



here is a handful of poems that i wrote when i was 7
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Old 2004-09-11, 08:08   Link #86
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Don't

Don't dwell on thoughts that don't occur
Don't let life fly past in a blur
Don't seize the moment when it comes
Don't hold the thought from whence it runs.

Don't keep keep the sunlight in your hands
Don't let pass with fury the timeless sands
Don't live with souls that once were slain
Don't let the tears fall down in rain.

Don't hurt someone in hate or spite
Don't see daggers in the dark of night
Don't blow your chance to change your ways
Don't forget to live by days.

Don't be aware of all your give
Don't dwell on dreams and forget to live.
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Old 2007-02-28, 17:27   Link #87
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Wrote this in work today when I was pissed off lol.

My life is such a mess, more polluted than Loch Ness

I feel like I'm being smothered, by a massive, pulsating peach

Its scent is so delectable, yet its taste is out of reach

My mind is not my own, for I am forever in a quandary

Spinning, wet, and wild, like my dirty, sweaty laundry
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Old 2009-03-16, 18:02   Link #88
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this is what i wrote when i was drunk) the first one is more of a song. the second really sucks, i know...

Ignoring all logic, accepting the deal-
searching for something most think isn't real.
Chaos that rages inside of your head...
clinging to thoughts that you're better off dead.
Wanting some peace, always in need of rest,
To lie in bed, like a bird in its nest.

How many people have told you to stop
climbing these steps, never reaching the top.
Now with the knowlege, you've fought for so long
What do you see? That you're nothing but wrong.
The problems you thought you had solved long ago
Reappear in your mind and you know what they show-
Life is a secret that you'll never know.

* * *

what is life? you think you know.
I hear, I see, I think I live.
if all's illusion - what you say,
life itself - restricting boundaries...
slaves of fate, why aren't you sure?
free forever, why aren't you sure?
why not exist beyond reality?
word losing meaning, this is truth.
without the senses, what is there?
question more than answer.
afraid of asking, not being answered.
strayed from the obvious,
but are you certain till you find out?
trust another - trust reality.
what you now know just still alive
may turn to nothing once you're dead.
why fear if origin unknown?
kept in the dark by unknown force...
having read, you don't believe.
hidden fear, your mind - reality.
nothing proven yet,
well you may wait.
beyond the walls, beyond the lies,
want or not, you will discover...
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Old 2011-01-04, 21:08   Link #89
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lol, i dug up this thread once again a year later. seems that not many of u guys are into poetry...edit - most are just shy to post here ))) anyway, i want to spam my poems here as it was a very productive few months. i've written around 7-9 poems.
Subscribe and post your poems ppl! i know you have some) this is not the type of thread that should die!!!

You’re not the same

Somehow I’ve been born
Against my own will
This reality so worn
A cup left to fill
Your rules I will learn
The laws to get by
What you say I will yearn
Not even ask why
The more I will grow
The more I will know
And a time will come
When I’ll have my own head
I’ll stop being dumb
There’ll be things that I read
That won’t let me be numb
You’ll expect me to fit
In the world brightly lit
In the boundaries you set
That you’ll never regret
And be one in the crowd
A small piece in the cloud
I’ll find strength to endure
Weight of being obscure
I will pick all the locks
To the doors that you closed
Thinking out of the box
Walk the path you opposed
I will be what I want
No one’s ever to taunt
To break not afraid
The guidelines you laid
They are not for me
The others - maybe
I’d rather be all alone
Than be raised as a drone
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Old 2011-01-04, 22:48   Link #90
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Whipped this one up in one of my philosophical moods. Kudos to anyone who can decipher its meaning.

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"HumaniFix"

I'm in here by the cavern
My wilderness sanctity
Far away from troubles
Society made for me
That hospital of denial, that cruel twist of nature
It denies me the greatness, of ascending my torture

Im advancing, preparing, I'm thinking this through
Those silly dumb monkeys dont have a ___ clue
With each coming line, a sickening gen
"Survival of the fittest" my motto, always been

Steel and thunder
Tar and their drugs
Mans bodies no further than a year once torn asunder
Tanks of consistency, and puddles of, "Nothing new,"
My friends my family, they join in the stew

Mankind will unfavor, my ideals denying "their" truth
They're petrifying, so denying, never minding
They are
Sinking ever deeper into the septic pool

Their jeans will grow filthy, thier models will crumble
Thine legs incapable of holding thier stumble
My god whats become?
The world lost its fervor
Mother bring back our destiny, beyond simple utters
Of, "Money" and "Fame" and those god damned "Games"
Time is much too short to fall right and under...

Cause Im advancing, preparing, I'm thinking this through
Those silly dumb monkeys dont have a ___ clue
With each coming line, another sickening gen
"Survival of the fittest" my motto, always been
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Old 2011-01-04, 23:01   Link #91
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um, yeah, that was hard to understand. but that is what poetry is all about. i kinda got the feeling that you are rejecting the past generation for its stupidity, that evolution will work towards weeding stupid ppl out. i'm probably wrong, but hearing different theories even if wrong, about your poem can be very fun.
here's another one of mine...maybe to some its meaning is also bleak.

Dream world

I have this world I dream
Where I say what I mean
Free from what I seem
Boundaries that sink
Meeting what I think
Seeing all minds link
No more is you
No more is me
Fathom the view
There’s only we
What I will see
What you will smell
I’ll always say
You’ll always hear
What I will feel
What you will fear
Together we’ll heal
...as you are me
and i am you...
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Old 2011-01-04, 23:06   Link #92
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Dude.

That sounds like a poem meant for NGE. The fact that it's talking about one consciousness (Right?) completely reminds me of the AT Field destruction and the sea at the end. A single mind of humanity.

"...as you are me
and I am you..."

That's what really hits the nail into my interpretation.
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Old 2011-01-04, 23:08   Link #93
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yeah, exactly right))) its my utopia.
so did i get the meaning of your poem right ...? any more poems?
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Old 2011-01-04, 23:09   Link #94
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From my view, Asuras' poem probably means people who gamble, smoke, and do things that will only make their lives short. So "Survival of the Fittest" means just going solo and leaving them to their fates. Or thats how I see it.
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Old 2011-01-04, 23:11   Link #95
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Those interpretations both sound good, but they are actualy quite wrong.
I don't really expect anyone to get it (I'm not a very good poet), but if you take individual sentences and look at them, then fuse it back together, I think you'd have a better chance at deciphering it.
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Old 2011-01-04, 23:16   Link #96
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Those interpretations both sound good, but they are actualy quite wrong.
I don't really expect anyone to get it (I'm not a very good poet), but if you take individual sentences and look at them, then fuse it back together, I think you'd have a better chance at deciphering it.
there is this site - GS poetry. there are phrases lurking somewhere on it that describe why poetry is better than prose. or smth like that. one of them says something along the lines of "poetry is cool cause there are tons of ways you can understand and interpret each line".
and another one...lol.

People
By cover we don稚 judge the book
This piece of wisdom that we took
Was being told to us since youth.
And now so simple seems its truth.
We turn the cover, read a page.
When not as young perceived their age
Some might uncover as time flies
Still deeper meaning hidden lies.
Not what you thought the book defines
Every new chapter gives you signs.
You have to read between the lines,
See contradictions it confines.
Reread each page day after day
with true devotion find a way
see what it really meant to say
The structure not what you have thought
Untie the knot that is the plot
let pieces fall firmly in place
And understand narrative's grace.
The wasted time is worth it all.
You've broken yet another wall.
While books are hard to comprehend
Finale will come, you can depend.
But unlike books, a person's mind
Has no last page or words "the end".
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Old 2011-01-05, 12:08   Link #97
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composition with winter elements

there are cracks in the ice for
which i know not the reason
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Old 2011-01-05, 14:10   Link #98
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funny thing is, the best poems (2 out of 11) i've written sober, but they aren't as emotional as the others. they just have a more distinct meaning, more structured and took more time to write by far. and now excuse me, i need to get more beer to finish my new poem...

Ricky Contrroversy
i have this habbit of making remakes of others' poems. sorry if you feel i plagiated your work.

there are cracks in the ice.
even in this cold season
unknown for them reason
still i let it suffice


Spoiler for poem 1:

Spoiler for poem 2:

Spoiler for poem 3:

Spoiler for poem 4:

Spoiler for poem 5:

Spoiler for poem 6:
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Old 2011-01-05, 20:27   Link #99
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My poetry...umm...it's all free verse so almost none of it rhymes...
it doesn't really have a deeper meaning, but I write poetry based on my emotions so...

In a Moment

Broken smiles
Lonely souls
I was yearning to be loved
Catching a glimpse of an open door
but it closed just as fast
Was never to be more
than just a dream...
but that's okay
dreams don't last
I set mine free
though a part of me will always be
with you


last line (s) ("though a...you") borrowed from "Never Had a Dream Come True" by S Club 7.

Never Far
Sometimes
I'm left with an emptiness inside
because I love you
and I know you'll never say the same
but nonetheless I cherish
the time I have with you
for it is/you are more precious
than any other thing to me
and though I know you'll never leave
I fear that if you knew
you'd run away
that I would lose you
so stay with me in silence
as we are here together
and on days when you are sad
remember
that I am never far


With You

You came home
I asked what was wrong
you told me 妬t's nothing
I didn't believe you.
You told me abruptly to leave you alone
but I wouldn't leave .
We bitched and we argued
but I still wouldn't leave.
You slipped for a moment
I saw that you lay there
you were broken and lonely
so I picked you back up
then we were kissing
and we clung to each other
as the tears came down
crying, and kissing,
we stood there, together
and there in that moment I knew
our friendship was meant to stay
so may it be
that it never fades away


the first two are dedicated to the one person who means to me more than my own life.

The third is dedicated to...someone who knows who he is.
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Old 2011-01-05, 20:59   Link #100
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Chaos mind
Thousands of words fly in my head
I try to adjust to the state I have bred
Rushing through fast, awake in my mind
A plague that entrances and one of a kind
Never before has this chaos done wrong
Abrupt as it was, regardless it’s gone.
And sane once again, I don’t know anymore
This power that drives me. And crave I do more.
My thoughts are at stall…there’s no structure at all
All that is left is my soul that is sore…
Sounds to me like it describes the "chaos" involved with a balance between utter chaos and bleak and boring quietness in ones mind. It is hard to moderate ones thoughts, and only one of the two extremes seem like the only way to many.
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