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Old 2008-08-10, 15:06   Link #7941
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Back again with another long short!!

@Kossa: Im putting Vivio and Syn at early teenage years, although i've not quite decided on age. It depends on where i take the fic, or how mature it gets..............

@Alquall: Yeah i can understand about writing Syn is difficult if you didn't create her, i just figured id give it a shot. I keep asking Keroko questions, sorry about that Keroko!

Anyway here is part 2!

Spoiler for The Beginning 2:



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YAY! want more!

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Yeah... I know, I've been dead to the world....

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XDD yay device love!
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Old 2008-08-10, 17:42   Link #7942
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Hey, Keroko! Am I getting any closer?

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Old 2008-08-10, 17:53   Link #7943
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Hey, Keroko! Am I getting any closer?

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GREAT!! But, um what happened to Syn? Demands Prequel NOW!
and a sequel

also I liked the song aswell
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Old 2008-08-10, 18:22   Link #7944
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Back again with another long short!!

@Kossa: Im putting Vivio and Syn at early teenage years, although i've not quite decided on age. It depends on where i take the fic, or how mature it gets..............

@Alquall: Yeah i can understand about writing Syn is difficult if you didn't create her, i just figured id give it a shot. I keep asking Keroko questions, sorry about that Keroko!

Anyway here is part 2!

Spoiler for The Beginning 2:



Edit: Page Claim in the name of the new influx of VivioxSyn Love and my ongoing personal battle of fluff vs angst!
Stubborn Syn doesn't want to cry even if she wants to. That's how stubborn she is. :3 Luckily she has Vivio to watch over her now.

Elena's appearance was a surprise, certainly didn't see that one coming.

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Yeah... I know, I've been dead to the world....

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Raising HeartXBardiche UD love is adorable. And Raising Heart's children... her Blaster Bits?

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Hey, Keroko! Am I getting any closer?

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Yep, that's Syn in combat allright, efficient, brutal, yet still sarcastic.

Though I went 'Dwa? ' at the brainwashing. But I'm sure that was intended.

...

Prequel, nao! :3



Also, no works from me... yet. I spend most of today finalizing the profile and device of the OC of my upcoming story (the only OC, don't worry. And there will be pictures to help visualize).

Actually, most of today was spend thinking up a good name. Blast it, good names can sometimes be so hard to find.

The story in question is planned to be very focussed on Ginga and the numbers. Whether Teana will have a strong role depends on the SSX (in fact, a lot of the story depends on SSX, even the focus, but I certainly hope so). The first chapter is mainly an introduction chapter, explaining how and why the various characters know eachother and such, its set pre-SSX, sometime during StrikerS, so it should be recognisable to most.

With a bit of luck the first chapter should be out tomorow, but I won't make any promises.
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Old 2008-08-10, 19:04   Link #7945
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Raising HeartXBardiche UD love is adorable. And Raising Heart's children... her Blaster Bits?
Yep, her kids are the blaster bits. I kind of visualize them as hyperactive mini RH's (about the relative size a ten year old is to a 20 year old).

Spoiler for Source of some of my inspration:
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Old 2008-08-10, 19:47   Link #7946
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Nanoha Rise of Techno - Union, chapter 8

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Spoiler for Preview:


Download link

http://www.badongo.com/file/10789209

Enjoy!
The dream sequence was sad. I could recognize Hayate but I agree with Kai, you need to work on Hayate. Woo! Everyone is healed. What did they do to Vita? Dr. Faust needs to die. I wonder what's wrong with the Emperor. Interesting name for the Demon Overlord... OMG! I love the AMI appearance. AMI is awesome sauce. Finally Zaeta's past is being revealed. The ending was such a Nanoha thing to do. But I worry about all the Mages. "Death to the Mages!

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Well I returned for angstland and brought you a souvenir

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Vivio! T.T
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Hey, Keroko! Am I getting any closer?

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Ooh that was good. I agree with the prequel idea.
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Yep, her kids are the blaster bits. I kind of visualize them as hyperactive mini RH's (about the relative size a ten year old is to a 20 year old).

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Aww nice picture.
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Old 2008-08-10, 21:34   Link #7947
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I've got to say, this made my day a lot brighter! It couldn't have come at a better time. The beginning was great, that dream/whatever it was, although I'll admit I wouldn't have recognized Hayate until her name was mentioned, which makes me a bit sad. What happened to Vita?!? Or what does the Emperor actually want with her?!? I'll say, there were some really funny pages and frames this time around. Yay for AMI! And Zaeta had gained another layer of story and maybe I can stand her a little better now after that. Nanoha was awesome at the end though. All in all this chapter really made my day and it's probably one of the best ones so far. Thanks a lot!
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The dream sequence was sad. I could recognize Hayate but I agree with Kai, you need to work on Hayate. Woo! Everyone is healed. What did they do to Vita? Dr. Faust needs to die. I wonder what's wrong with the Emperor. Interesting name for the Demon Overlord... OMG! I love the AMI appearance. AMI is awesome sauce. Finally Zaeta's past is being revealed. The ending was such a Nanoha thing to do. But I worry about all the Mages. "Death to the Mages!
I'm glad you liked this chapter as well , and yeah, well... I haven't draw Hayate since chapter 1 so I don't have much practique with her, sorry , I'll imrpve on the next chapter

And Vita... gess what

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@Junkedcat: Nice Draw
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Old 2008-08-10, 21:59   Link #7948
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Yep, her kids are the blaster bits. I kind of visualize them as hyperactive mini RH's (about the relative size a ten year old is to a 20 year old).

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That pic is WIN.
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Old 2008-08-11, 01:04   Link #7949
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Hello, I know I might be interrupting anything but are there any KH/Nanoha fics?
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Old 2008-08-11, 01:55   Link #7950
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Awesome match to the music!

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Yep, her kids are the blaster bits. I kind of visualize them as hyperactive mini RH's (about the relative size a ten year old is to a 20 year old).

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haha Bardiche and his mayuge - I like ;D
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Old 2008-08-11, 04:48   Link #7951
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Hey, Keroko! Am I getting any closer?

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ooohhh... What happened to Syn??? amnesia or something? cool fic by the way.
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Old 2008-08-11, 06:10   Link #7952
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Hello, I know I might be interrupting anything but are there any KH/Nanoha fics?
KH? Kingdom Hearts?
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Old 2008-08-11, 06:44   Link #7953
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Hello, I know I might be interrupting anything but are there any KH/Nanoha fics?
Yeah... I have no idea what KH stands for, unless you mean Kingdom Hearts.
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Old 2008-08-11, 06:58   Link #7954
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Yeah... I have no idea what KH stands for, unless you mean Kingdom Hearts.
Or probably it stands for Kaguya Hime (some manga I've once heard about).
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Old 2008-08-11, 08:49   Link #7955
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Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt. 1a (The return of Etaf!):


A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate
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Old 2008-08-11, 08:57   Link #7956
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Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt. 1a (The return of Etaf!):


A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate
It's Etaf! Yay! What happened in the hallway? I love how Nanoha shocked everyone with the "I've been on dates and even gone bungee jumping". Sadly this chapter still didn't explain what's wrong with Nanoha. I vote B for Vampireness!
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Old 2008-08-11, 09:00   Link #7957
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Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt. 1a (The return of Etaf!):


A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate
Still no exact answer with Nanoha. Trolley-bed-things don't just jump out windows and cause fires. o_O What were Fate and Hayate doing?
B
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Old 2008-08-11, 09:01   Link #7958
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Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt. 1a (The return of Etaf!):


A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate
Gah! And here I was thinking we'd finally get some real info about Nanoha's ilness. Great, now I'm left wondering what the hell happened.

Still, I want to see Hayate talking to Nanoha, maybe she'd explain a few things, such as why she came here in the first place.

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Old 2008-08-11, 09:21   Link #7959
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Spoiler for Vampire!Fate pt. 1a (The return of Etaf!):


A.) Nanoha
B.) Fate
Etaf returns It seems Fate and Hayate have small "argument".
EDIT: vote changed.
A
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Old 2008-08-11, 09:35   Link #7960
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Gah! And here I was thinking we'd finally get some real info about Nanoha's ilness. Great, now I'm left wondering what the hell happened.

Still, I want to see Hayate talking to Nanoha, maybe she'd explain a few things, such as why she came here in the first place.
I know right? Satashi just keeps us at the edge. Though now that you mention it I kind of want to change my vote. But I won't

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Etaf returns It seems Fate and Hayate have small "argument".
I don't think its quite small.

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