Nanoha FanFiction Discussion

[Hiria]

Originally Posted by wanwan1203

Happy 500 Nanoha Fanfiction Discussion Thread!

I, wanwan, resident perv and FFC mascot, hereby claim this page in honor of FFT and FFC!!!! To all the authors, readers, lurkers: Happy 500th page! woooo!!!

*laith wrote a very nice short about our thread's 500th page get.
*image courtesy of AtomicoX. thank you AX. ^^

awww. happy 500!!! ^^

Originally Posted by Laith

Spoiler for From 400 to 500 there are too many worlds:

“Anyway,” Fate said as she stood in the frame of the door. “What are you doing?”

“Preparing for a party, cant you see?” Hayate responded as she was floating near the door, to place the start of a banner that read something like “Con-tul-fo-eac-500-es” which meant nothing to her.

“And what are we celebrating?” she asked curious at what was the special occasion that kept Nanoha and Vivio for welcoming her after months of not seeing each other.

“You don’t know?” Fate shook her head. “But it’s so simple that even Vivio knows,” then Hayate stopped. “Have you really gone that long?”

“It was only two, three months away.” she answered, trying to defend herself.

“So that´s why. Well that´s no big deal, I can make a quick tour with you so you can understand.” Taking Fate´s hand she quickly ran into a table. Sitting her down, she started to say.
“So your little vampirism continued, with you knowing more about the new girl of Britain. There was a try on a crossover between us and the most gainax series ever. Vita got a new adventure, Vivio eventually showed up. Your mother and Nanoha-chan´s mother started a romance. I and Carim started a romance too, with politics and Vivio and Zafira on the background. Your Landscaper work got a nice welcome. Your artist side came to be known as you wooed Nanoha once again. Shamal was a secret agent, can you believe that? The guys started to tell bedtime stories to Vivio. She liked them all. Teana and Nanoha fell in love and escaped from the police. Nanoha, Signum, Tomoyo, Erio and I went to a mission in outer space. Yuuno got bionic implants can you believe it? Childhoods were cracked but that tends to happen. Syn and Vivio told us their story… you will know Syn soon enough. We started a really nice romance or continued I am not so sure. Yuuno got a protagonist role and he is in a dating sim or something, I am not sure about the details. Vivio was going to star in another adventure and you are going to appear with your vampirism. The reapers attacken once again and we were overpowered again. Arisa and Suzuka got their time to shine, Nanoha went medieval on us and started a campaign to save your sister. People started to appear and fight and we got involved. You got so cute and innocent while Nanoha made honor to her white devil nickname. Zest got killed after finding about who was his son. Yuuno, Vita and Vivio were sold to the Testarossa manor.You and Nanoha were separated by space, literally. A virus attacked and made zombie people. Zafira saved Nanoha from dying. There some short but awesome adventures too” She stopped the long list and returned to Fate. “Now you remember?”

The expression on her face couldn’t be described as she said three words. “WHAT THE HELL?”

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The banner just said something simple.

“Congratulations for reaching 500 pages fanfiction thread”
Keep going guys.

Do YOU remember?

oh! I do! I do! XD

Originally Posted by Satashi

Just a little help... (Part 1)
Just a little help... please? (Part 2)

Spoiler for Just a little help... 3:

"Are you sure about this?" Fate's uneasy voice faltered when she looked around the corner to where Nanoha was sitting. The girl was eating lunch on the weekend by herself while happily reading a book on magical techniques.

"Sure I'm sure," Hayate confirmed, looking over Fate one last time. A very tight black mini skirt hugged the girl's hips before revealing black stocking clad legs that went into heels. A fashionable matching top covered the girl's upper half while still showing off a mass of cleavage for the world to see. The hair was left flowing completely and dark sunglasses covered her eyes. To top it off, a gold bracelet was on her slender wrist and a purse was carried as well. "You look like a buisness woman, she'll fawn all over you!"

Fate took a deep breath and nodded, getting one last thumbs-up before she rounded the corner and began to strut her way over to the girl. Her hips wagged with each step, breasts bouncing just enough to get the attention of the males around her. One man choked on his coffee as she passed and another walked into a lamp post while looking at her butt. When she got over to Nanoha, she noticed that the girl was now on her cell phone so she bent over lightly, her breasts begging for attention. "Nanoha," Her voice was slightly husky and she pulled down her sunglasses just lightly to look at her.

"Really!?" Nanoha jumped up, shocking Fate into standing properly again. "Just now? I'll be right there!" She hung up the phone and looked at Fate excitedly. "Ah, Fate-chan, Suzuka's cat just had her kittens! I'm going to go see!" With that, she ran off happily. Fate blinked, slowly opening her mouth as if she were about to say something but closed it back shortly after.

"Hey there sexy," A voice made her turn to look up at a group of college students eying her chest. "What say you come to our frat party tonight? We could... ease some of the stress from the work day."

Fate glared hard. "I'm sixteen!" The men jumped back in shock, staring at her fora few more moments before moving off and away from her. "Mou, I knew this wouldn't work!" Turning, she tried to go back to Hayate but she tripped over her heels and crashed to the ground. "Ugh!" As she tried to stand on her heels, she unconsciously wiggled her butt in front of a man who couldn't help but whistle at her. "Animals!" She shrieked loudly, blushing and hurrying off.

To be continued!

I feel bad for Fate. ahahaha.

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by TerranReaper

Chapter 1 and 2 were slightly altered to make things a little more relevant. Go check it out. C'mon, keep more ideas coming. If you wanna see what happen to Vita, click this spoiler. If not, don't touch.

Spoiler for What happen to Vita:

The alpha strain virus took over her motor functions, meaning that she is alive and conscious but can't control her movements.

AGGHHH! Don't spoild the things like this! The coolest thing of a fic is the mistery

If I had said since chapter 1 that Sky was the traitor on Vatikan Knights, or that the Pest was truly Alicia on NROTU, my fics wouldn't been that cool

Originally Posted by Kagerou

...this sounds really familiar...

*Stares at old fanfic where he had a... -ahem-... thing that worked the same way.*

Also, your fanfic has a similar name to my old one

*resumes hiatus*

Man, in my Fic NROTU also appears a Vita been forced to act against her will, not for that I'm saing that TerranReaper is reapping my fic

[TerranReaper]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

AGGHHH! Don't spoild the things like this! The coolest thing of a fic is the mistery

If I had said since chapter 1 that Sky was the traitor on Vatikan Knights, or that the Pest was truly Alicia on NROTU, my fics wouldn't been that cool



Man, in my Fic NROTU also appears a Vita been forced to act against her will, not for that I'm saing that TerranReaper is reapping my fic

just to let you know, it kinda hit me and i've never seen any story with vita acting against her will, though i heard of some from my friends.

[Satashi]

Spoiler for Porn Star!Vivio:

Vivio laughed at the joke that was just told and shook her head in an amused manor. Her friends were all drunk and were currently having a contest to see who could eat the most spicy wings in a row without drinking anything. As to not get caught up in the contest herself, the girl excused herself from the table and walked to the bar of the nightclub. She sat next to a blue haired girl and ordered a strawberry daiquiri to sip on while the harder stuff settled in her stomach.

"Hey," The girl spoke to her after a few moments. "What brings a pretty little thing like yourself here?"

Vivio looked to the side and grinned, slightly tipsy, at the mis-matched eyes looking at her. One red, one blue, the heterchromia was pronounced fully. "Are you hitting on me?"

"Yup." The woman propped her cheek up on her palm and looked at Vivio with an amused smile. It was obvious she was crossing onto the drunk side but the cheerful expression on her face made Vivio stay at her seat.

"I'm celebrating a new DVD release," Vivio answered the first question asked of her.

"Oh? Favourite movie come out?" A smile came paired with a giggle. "I'm Syn, by the way."

"Vivio," she introduced herself. "And no, I work for a company that just finished one. It should be on the market in a few weeks."

"Hmmmmm," Syn hummed while chewing on this information. "Better than me."

"What do you do?"

Syn suddenly looked a little sad and crossed her arms on the bar before resting her chin on them. "I got fired today."

"Oh, I'm sorry..."

The blue haired one closed her eyes. "My boss was hitting on me earlier and I turned him down... A few days later I'm fired for something so stupid it doesn't even make sense..."

"I see..." Vivio felt sad for the girl sitting next to her. 'Such a pretty little thing too... No wonder she's drowning her woes.'

"...and I don' know how I'm going to pay my bills," Syn was still talking, eyes lightly glazed. "I'm already a month behind on my rent...." She looked lightly as the bartender came to her, giving the look of if she wanted another glass or not.

Vivio took the bottle the man was holding and filled up Syn's small glass with it. "Go ahead, it's on me."

"...Thanks." She took a drink and gave it an apreciative look. "You said your name was Vivio?"

"Mmmhn."

"Pretty name." Syn turned to face her once more.

[TerranReaper]

Just to ask your opinions, should i continue my story? seems like i have more nays than yays. not that i have anything to complain or unsatisfied, it's just that i want to write a story appealing to all. I you dun want me to, i have a second story which is better.

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by TerranReaper

Just to ask your opinions, should i continue my story? seems like i have more nays than yays. not that i have anything to complain or unsatisfied, it's just that i want to write a story appealing to all. I you dun want me to, i have a second story which is better.

Noone has say that you should better stop it

I just told you to keep the mistery as a secret to catch more readers

And I was speaking to Kagerou with the thing of the "Ripped creation" XP

Sorry if I ofended you

@Satashi: Yay! Pornastar Vivio! XD gonna read it latter, I'm on a hurry

[TerranReaper]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Noone has say that you should better stop it

I just told you to keep the mistery as a secret to catch more readers

And I was speaking to Kagerou with the thing of the "Ripped creation" XP

Sorry if I ofended you

@Satashi: Yay! Pornastar Vivio! XD gonna read it latter, I'm on a hurry

So what did he say about it?

[Comartemis]

Pornstar.... Vivio?

*Comar headdesks repeatedly*

Is nothing sacred in this fandom?!

[XenahortCharybdis]

Piece of Kind Friendly Advice, Comart.

When you have wanwan, satashi, TSS, Rick (just to name a few) and gang (and just to mention, our new addition TReaper) on the same thread...

Nothing Will Ever Be Sacred Again.

Sick, twisted, morbid, khracked, fluffy, plot-less. insane, nonsensical...But strangely fun at the same time.

That's what this is all about.

Xena

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by TerranReaper

So what did he say about it?

Here:

Originally Posted by Kagerou

...this sounds really familiar...

*Stares at old fanfic where he had a... -ahem-... thing that worked the same way.*

Also, your fanfic has a similar name to my old one

*resumes hiatus*

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Originally Posted by Comartemis

Pornstar.... Vivio?

*Comar headdesks repeatedly*

Is nothing sacred in this fandom?!

Is an adult Vivio, don't get scared XD

[NorthernFallout]

Originally Posted by Comartemis

Pornstar.... Vivio?

*Comar headdesks repeatedly*

Is nothing sacred in this fandom?!

Have you actually read the different parts? Or have you just read the title?

[Vie]

Originally Posted by Comartemis

Pornstar.... Vivio?

*Comar headdesks repeatedly*

Is nothing sacred in this fandom?!

Umm... You're the one that suggested crossovers with Negima and HiguKai... should you really be surprised?
Not to mention the one about Fate killing Nanoha and wearing her skin. >.>

And I think the earlier pornstar!Vivio is on FF.net under SNL: A Digital Short by Satashi, if you want more. :P
There's nothing explicit, it's just the idea itself.


@Satashi: Me likes Pornstar!Syn!!!!

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by XenahortCharybdis

Piece of Kind Friendly Advice, Comart.

When you have wanwan, satashi, TSS, Rick (just to name a few) and gang (and just to mention, our new addition TReaper) on the same thread...

Nothing Will Ever Be Sacred Again.

Sick, twisted, morbid, khracked, fluffy, plot-less. insane, nonsensical...But strangely fun at the same time.

That's what this is all about.

Xena

Amen Xena, amen

Long live to the twisted yet fun and catching fics

[markesellus]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Porn Star!Vivio:

Vivio laughed at the joke that was just told and shook her head in an amused manor. Her friends were all drunk and were currently having a contest to see who could eat the most spicy wings in a row without drinking anything. As to not get caught up in the contest herself, the girl excused herself from the table and walked to the bar of the nightclub. She sat next to a blue haired girl and ordered a strawberry daiquiri to sip on while the harder stuff settled in her stomach.

"Hey," The girl spoke to her after a few moments. "What brings a pretty little thing like yourself here?"

Vivio looked to the side and grinned, slightly tipsy, at the mis-matched eyes looking at her. One red, one blue, the heterchromia was pronounced fully. "Are you hitting on me?"

"Yup." The woman propped her cheek up on her palm and looked at Vivio with an amused smile. It was obvious she was crossing onto the drunk side but the cheerful expression on her face made Vivio stay at her seat.

"I'm celebrating a new DVD release," Vivio answered the first question asked of her.

"Oh? Favourite movie come out?" A smile came paired with a giggle. "I'm Syn, by the way."

"Vivio," she introduced herself. "And no, I work for a company that just finished one. It should be on the market in a few weeks."

"Hmmmmm," Syn hummed while chewing on this information. "Better than me."

"What do you do?"

Syn suddenly looked a little sad and crossed her arms on the bar before resting her chin on them. "I got fired today."

"Oh, I'm sorry..."

The blue haired one closed her eyes. "My boss was hitting on me earlier and I turned him down... A few days later I'm fired for something so stupid it doesn't even make sense..."

"I see..." Vivio felt sad for the girl sitting next to her. 'Such a pretty little thing too... No wonder she's drowning her woes.'

"...and I don' know how I'm going to pay my bills," Syn was still talking, eyes lightly glazed. "I'm already a month behind on my rent...." She looked lightly as the bartender came to her, giving the look of if she wanted another glass or not.

Vivio took the bottle the man was holding and filled up Syn's small glass with it. "Go ahead, it's on me."

"...Thanks." She took a drink and gave it an apreciative look. "You said your name was Vivio?"

"Mmmhn."

"Pretty name." Syn turned to face her once more.

Alright Syn is in the picture! I can't wait for more.

Originally Posted by TerranReaper

Just to ask your opinions, should i continue my story? seems like i have more nays than yays. not that i have anything to complain or unsatisfied, it's just that i want to write a story appealing to all. I you dun want me to, i have a second story which is better.

I think you should do it. I mean it's not like we don't like your story, well I like it. Just take in the critique and improve the story. You can even ask someone to Beta for you if you really want. A lot of us like helping out. Oh and don't spoil the story, like what happened to Vita. You should slowly reveal what happened, it makes it alot more exciting and interesting. You should talk to EvilRick, he is good at making surprises.

@XenahortCharybdis: Lol, what else did you expect? It's the Nanoha FF thread! It's 75% crack, 90% fluff, 25% angst and about 10% bloody.

[Satashi]

Originally Posted by TerranReaper

Just to ask your opinions, should i continue my story? seems like i have more nays than yays. not that i have anything to complain or unsatisfied, it's just that i want to write a story appealing to all. I you dun want me to, i have a second story which is better.

Try doing both at once if you want. But remember, you can't please everybody. Write for what you want to write for. There will ALWAYS be someone who doesn't like it, or disagrees with it. The key is doing what you feel like and following what your mind wants. Just as there will always be someone who doesn't like it, there will always be someone who DOES. Never give up hopes just 'cause a few people say "nay" to it, because you know people are saying "yay" as well.

Originally Posted by Comartemis

Pornstar.... Vivio?

*Comar headdesks repeatedly*

Is nothing sacred in this fandom?!

Dun worry, like Rick said, she's older now ^_^ this is actually like the... third installment I think.

Originally Posted by DigiGatou

And I think the earlier pornstar!Vivio is on FF.net under SNL: A Digital Short by Satashi, if you want more. :P
There's nothing explicit, it's just the idea itself.


@Satashi: Me likes Pornstar!Syn!!!!

XD yes, it's under my SNL stories. Although Syn isn't going to work in the adult film industry in this story ^^

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by TerranReaper

Just to ask your opinions, should i continue my story? seems like i have more nays than yays. not that i have anything to complain or unsatisfied, it's just that i want to write a story appealing to all. I you dun want me to, i have a second story which is better.

Stopping is a sign of defeat. If you ARE serious about the premise, go over the points the Outer Cadians and people in the FF thread have pointed out to improve it. Don't just keep writing; go back and rework it. We're all here to help. Just remember: don't do what 7arcs did and forget to DO YOUR RESEARCH

[Comartemis]

Originally Posted by XenahortCharybdis

Piece of Kind Friendly Advice, Comart.

When you have wanwan, satashi, TSS, Rick (just to name a few) and gang (and just to mention, our new addition TReaper) on the same thread...

Nothing Will Ever Be Sacred Again.

*Comar whimpers and goes to find a rock to hide under*

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

Is an adult Vivio, don't get scared XD

*Comar's brain continues to smoke*

Still really REALLY does not compute!

Originally Posted by AtomicoX

Have you actually read the different parts? Or have you just read the title?

I get bad thoughts just from reading the premise, but I did just read the third part. It's not a bad idea per se, it just seems really really weird, much moreso if it's supposed to be placed in a canon timeline.

*Comar tries and fails to picture Nanoha-mama's reaction on learning about Vivio's new job*

Originally Posted by DigiGatou

Umm... You're the one that suggested crossovers with Negima and HiguKai... should you really be surprised?
Not to mention the one about Fate killing Nanoha and wearing her skin. >.>

You're confusing me with Wild Goose.

Crossovers? Bah, you're talking to a guy who spent the past two years hanging out on a site dedicated almost entirely to Ranma/Sailor Moon crossovers. Believe me, there's nothing the least bit strange about Nanoha/Negima, and Nanoha/Higurashi actually computes on some level on account of all the jokes about Nanoha being a yandere, but I couldn't conceive of Pornstar!Vivio even if you got me and my muse hopped up on some really bad drugs and kept us as high as a kite for weeks on end.

I'll probably give it a look later just to see what kind of madness Satashi is capable of unleashing when he's really motivated, but the concept still sounds like Crack Unleaded to me.

[Raging Heart]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Porn Star!Vivio:

Vivio laughed at the joke that was just told and shook her head in an amused manor. Her friends were all drunk and were currently having a contest to see who could eat the most spicy wings in a row without drinking anything. As to not get caught up in the contest herself, the girl excused herself from the table and walked to the bar of the nightclub. She sat next to a blue haired girl and ordered a strawberry daiquiri to sip on while the harder stuff settled in her stomach.

"Hey," The girl spoke to her after a few moments. "What brings a pretty little thing like yourself here?"

Vivio looked to the side and grinned, slightly tipsy, at the mis-matched eyes looking at her. One red, one blue, the heterchromia was pronounced fully. "Are you hitting on me?"

"Yup." The woman propped her cheek up on her palm and looked at Vivio with an amused smile. It was obvious she was crossing onto the drunk side but the cheerful expression on her face made Vivio stay at her seat.

"I'm celebrating a new DVD release," Vivio answered the first question asked of her.

"Oh? Favourite movie come out?" A smile came paired with a giggle. "I'm Syn, by the way."

"Vivio," she introduced herself. "And no, I work for a company that just finished one. It should be on the market in a few weeks."

"Hmmmmm," Syn hummed while chewing on this information. "Better than me."

"What do you do?"

Syn suddenly looked a little sad and crossed her arms on the bar before resting her chin on them. "I got fired today."

"Oh, I'm sorry..."

The blue haired one closed her eyes. "My boss was hitting on me earlier and I turned him down... A few days later I'm fired for something so stupid it doesn't even make sense..."

"I see..." Vivio felt sad for the girl sitting next to her. 'Such a pretty little thing too... No wonder she's drowning her woes.'

"...and I don' know how I'm going to pay my bills," Syn was still talking, eyes lightly glazed. "I'm already a month behind on my rent...." She looked lightly as the bartender came to her, giving the look of if she wanted another glass or not.

Vivio took the bottle the man was holding and filled up Syn's small glass with it. "Go ahead, it's on me."

"...Thanks." She took a drink and gave it an apreciative look. "You said your name was Vivio?"

"Mmmhn."

"Pretty name." Syn turned to face her once more.

nice one, hhhmm i wonder what Syn will do next, and Vivio too.

anyway i read 'Just a little help.' poor Fate she tired hard with Nanoha who seemed to be well off, the last part make me laugh.

i wonder what Fate will do next, can't wait for your update Satashi.

[Vivio Testarossa]

Originally Posted by Satashi

Spoiler for Porn Star!Vivio:

Vivio laughed at the joke that was just told and shook her head in an amused manor. Her friends were all drunk and were currently having a contest to see who could eat the most spicy wings in a row without drinking anything. As to not get caught up in the contest herself, the girl excused herself from the table and walked to the bar of the nightclub. She sat next to a blue haired girl and ordered a strawberry daiquiri to sip on while the harder stuff settled in her stomach.

"Hey," The girl spoke to her after a few moments. "What brings a pretty little thing like yourself here?"

Vivio looked to the side and grinned, slightly tipsy, at the mis-matched eyes looking at her. One red, one blue, the heterchromia was pronounced fully. "Are you hitting on me?"

"Yup." The woman propped her cheek up on her palm and looked at Vivio with an amused smile. It was obvious she was crossing onto the drunk side but the cheerful expression on her face made Vivio stay at her seat.

"I'm celebrating a new DVD release," Vivio answered the first question asked of her.

"Oh? Favourite movie come out?" A smile came paired with a giggle. "I'm Syn, by the way."

"Vivio," she introduced herself. "And no, I work for a company that just finished one. It should be on the market in a few weeks."

"Hmmmmm," Syn hummed while chewing on this information. "Better than me."

"What do you do?"

Syn suddenly looked a little sad and crossed her arms on the bar before resting her chin on them. "I got fired today."

"Oh, I'm sorry..."

The blue haired one closed her eyes. "My boss was hitting on me earlier and I turned him down... A few days later I'm fired for something so stupid it doesn't even make sense..."

"I see..." Vivio felt sad for the girl sitting next to her. 'Such a pretty little thing too... No wonder she's drowning her woes.'

"...and I don' know how I'm going to pay my bills," Syn was still talking, eyes lightly glazed. "I'm already a month behind on my rent...." She looked lightly as the bartender came to her, giving the look of if she wanted another glass or not.

Vivio took the bottle the man was holding and filled up Syn's small glass with it. "Go ahead, it's on me."

"...Thanks." She took a drink and gave it an apreciative look. "You said your name was Vivio?"

"Mmmhn."

"Pretty name." Syn turned to face her once more.

Ah, so Satashi is deciding to write a pseudo-lolicon story now?

[Evangelion Xgouki]

Originally Posted by Vivio Testarossa

Ah, so Satashi is deciding to write a pseudo-lolicon story now?

How is it pseudo-lolicon when they're all over 21 in the story?