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Old 2008-10-17, 15:07   Link #10061
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*Comar whimpers and goes to find a rock to hide under*


*Comar's brain continues to smoke*

Still really REALLY does not compute!


I get bad thoughts just from reading the premise, but I did just read the third part. It's not a bad idea per se, it just seems really really weird, much moreso if it's supposed to be placed in a canon timeline.

*Comar tries and fails to picture Nanoha-mama's reaction on learning about Vivio's new job*
^^; you really need to read the first pirt before deciding anything. It's an AU where both Nanoha and Fate died, scaring Vivio away from the military and giving her a personal loathing for it. She went away from the friends of her parents who would have taken care of her and instead tried to make it on her own and after a while went into adult films.

It's not a story about Vivio in lewd sexual situations, but rather about her and Syn struggling just to live life and make it. Two girls who find each other and try to keep the other from falling down on the hard road down life.

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Ah, so Satashi is deciding to write a pseudo-lolicon story now?
O.< like Eva said, they're both over 21. Have you read the first parts?

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Old 2008-10-17, 15:23   Link #10062
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How is it pseudo-lolicon when they're all over 21 in the story?
That of course assumes that the minimum drinking age is 21... For example in the real world nation of Tanzania, the minimum drinking age is 5, and in Morocco there is no minimum drinking age! Also all satashi says is Vivio, thus it is possible...
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Old 2008-10-17, 15:54   Link #10063
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That of course assumes that the minimum drinking age is 21... For example in the real world nation of Tanzania, the minimum drinking age is 5, and in Morocco there is no minimum drinking age! Also all satashi says is Vivio, thus it is possible...
I am pretty sure that Satashi would not write a story about children starring in a porn. I'm also pretty sure that we're not in Morocco or Tanzania, but a first world country with a drinking age somewhere in the 18 - 21 range. This range is also generally the acceptable range for an individual to participate in the adult entertainment world.

Stop over-analysing these things and looking too deeply. Or do you really think so lowly of Satashi to even suspect her of writing lolicon porn?

Have some faith in her.
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Old 2008-10-17, 16:10   Link #10064
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Have some faith in her.
Or him

Or whatever Satashi might be (except a divine being of some kind given how much Satashi complains about being referred to as one )
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Old 2008-10-17, 16:35   Link #10065
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I need to start wrapping up stories that are distracting me from my older stories, so here's another installment of Feito No Hana (the one that started with Nurse!Hayate)

Spoiler for Pt. 4- Hayate/Fate? NanoFate?:
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Old 2008-10-17, 16:40   Link #10066
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I need to start wrapping up stories that are distracting me from my older stories, so here's another installment of Feito No Hana (the one that started with Nurse!Hayate)

Spoiler for Pt. 4- Hayate/Fate? NanoFate?:
LE-GASP!!!

MOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh the tension is RISIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!

Looking forward for more :3
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Old 2008-10-17, 17:22   Link #10067
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Piece of Kind Friendly Advice, Comart.

When you have wanwan, satashi, TSS, Rick (just to name a few) and gang (and just to mention, our new addition TReaper) on the same thread...

Nothing Will Ever Be Sacred Again.

Sick, twisted, morbid, khracked, fluffy, plot-less. insane, nonsensical...But strangely fun at the same time.

That's what this is all about.

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.. you forgot hilarious :3
Spoiler for :3:




oh and to Knight

Good Job! and I'm looking forward to even more

and to Satashi
What ever will PS!Vivio do next?

and finally To Comar
*stirs the crack pot*

If you can't take the crack get out of the forum
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Old 2008-10-17, 17:45   Link #10068
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Old 2008-10-17, 18:24   Link #10069
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DIVIDED DESTINY
Two People, Two Paths

Spoiler for Divided Destiny, pt. 14:


Previous Installments
-Intro
-Chapter 01
-Chapter 02
-Chapter 03
-Chapter 04
-Chapter 05
-Chapter 06
-Chapter 07
-Chapter 08
-Chapter 09
-Chapter 10
-Chapter 11
-Chapter 12
-Chapter 13
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Old 2008-10-17, 18:37   Link #10070
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DIVIDED DESTINY
Two People, Two Paths

Spoiler for Divided Destiny, pt. 14:


Previous Installments
-Intro
-Chapter 01
-Chapter 02
-Chapter 03
-Chapter 04
-Chapter 05
-Chapter 06
-Chapter 07
-Chapter 08
-Chapter 09
-Chapter 10
-Chapter 11
-Chapter 12
-Chapter 13

Will choose A.
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Old 2008-10-17, 18:51   Link #10071
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I need to start wrapping up stories that are distracting me from my older stories, so here's another installment of Feito No Hana (the one that started with Nurse!Hayate)

Spoiler for Pt. 4- Hayate/Fate? NanoFate?:
Nice but can you please post link to 3rd part? I missed it somehow ^^;;
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Old 2008-10-17, 19:17   Link #10072
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I need to start wrapping up stories that are distracting me from my older stories, so here's another installment of Feito No Hana (the one that started with Nurse!Hayate)

Spoiler for Pt. 4- Hayate/Fate? NanoFate?:
That was good. Nice development and the angsty that will come... great

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Fate of the Reapers
Chapter 9
Conversion
Spoiler for Ch 9:


Picture inside spoiler, read to find out.
Spoiler for Author's note:
Nice chapter, although it is sad that this is going to end so fast. Also the image is awesome.

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DIVIDED DESTINY
Two People, Two Paths

Spoiler for Divided Destiny, pt. 14:


Previous Installments
-Intro
-Chapter 01
-Chapter 02
-Chapter 03
-Chapter 04
-Chapter 05
-Chapter 06
-Chapter 07
-Chapter 08
-Chapter 09
-Chapter 10
-Chapter 11
-Chapter 12
-Chapter 13
So they are okay? That´s good.

And so continue
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Old 2008-10-17, 19:33   Link #10073
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You're confusing me with Wild Goose.

Crossovers? Bah, you're talking to a guy who spent the past two years hanging out on a site dedicated almost entirely to Ranma/Sailor Moon crossovers. Believe me, there's nothing the least bit strange about Nanoha/Negima, and Nanoha/Higurashi actually computes on some level on account of all the jokes about Nanoha being a yandere, but I couldn't conceive of Pornstar!Vivio even if you got me and my muse hopped up on some really bad drugs and kept us as high as a kite for weeks on end.

I'll probably give it a look later just to see what kind of madness Satashi is capable of unleashing when he's really motivated, but the concept still sounds like Crack Unleaded to me.
I was referring to Wild Goose, just forgot to add the floating somewhere around in thread part. >.>

Crossovers do compute but as for execution...Bah.

Just... look at it with an open mind, since there's nothing too explicit about it, IIRC.

@TSS : That was a little harsh... Unless it was a joke, of course, to which I have nothing to say.

@Knight of L-sama : O_O Rising tensions, will Nanoha snap? See it next time on Feito no Hana! XD
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Old 2008-10-17, 19:34   Link #10074
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That of course assumes that the minimum drinking age is 21... For example in the real world nation of Tanzania, the minimum drinking age is 5, and in Morocco there is no minimum drinking age! Also all satashi says is Vivio, thus it is possible...

you know, I really don't mind people talking about my fics......

but please read it first
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I shook my head to clear it. There was no point in looking into the past. I was twenty two now, and my mothers were in heaven. I had made it on my own for six years now and despite what some people think, being a porn star wasn't as bad as it's made out to be.
I said earlier that this was part 3.
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Old 2008-10-17, 19:39   Link #10075
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Nice but can you please post link to 3rd part? I missed it somehow ^^;;
*agonizes over searching for it*

Ha-HAH! Found it! ^_^

It was a while back, so I don't blame you for possibly missing it.
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Old 2008-10-17, 21:19   Link #10076
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@TSS : That was a little harsh... Unless it was a joke, of course, to which I have nothing to say.
harsh? It's just a play on "If you can't take the heat get out of the kitchen" since silly Comar was overreacting to Porn Star Vivio =-=...honestly people take things way too seriously
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Old 2008-10-17, 21:39   Link #10077
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harsh? It's just a play on "If you can't take the heat get out of the kitchen" since silly Comar was overreacting to Porn Star Vivio =-=...honestly people take things way too seriously
I think it was the big and red aspect of it that made it sound more serious than intended. XP But indeed, FFT isn't exactly a melting pot for seriousness... (not that I think that's a bad thing)
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Old 2008-10-17, 22:10   Link #10078
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SYN!SYN!SYN!

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Old 2008-10-17, 22:58   Link #10079
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Hurray!! more PS!V

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I need to start wrapping up stories that are distracting me from my older stories, so here's another installment of Feito No Hana (the one that started with Nurse!Hayate)

Spoiler for Pt. 4- Hayate/Fate? NanoFate?:

Normally I'm a pretty loyal Nanoha/Fate follower, But I'm too hooked on this story so please up date soon

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Fate of the Reapers
Chapter 9
Conversion
Spoiler for Ch 9:


Picture inside spoiler, read to find out.
Spoiler for Author's note:
Oh My Gawd!! Not My FATE!!!!
Oh well, hopefully Nanoha can 'befriend' her again


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DIVIDED DESTINY
Two People, Two Paths

Spoiler for Divided Destiny, pt. 14:


Previous Installments
-Intro
-Chapter 01
-Chapter 02
-Chapter 03
-Chapter 04
-Chapter 05
-Chapter 06
-Chapter 07
-Chapter 08
-Chapter 09
-Chapter 10
-Chapter 11
-Chapter 12
-Chapter 13
A please
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Old 2008-10-17, 23:23   Link #10080
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Well, lots of requesting for Hayate and Fate in a relationship, so here's something I did for everyone.

WARNING: This is Fate x Hayate! Don't read if you don't like it!

Spoiler for Hayate x Fate:
Not only Hayate x Fate, but some Yuunoha too. Great!
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<.<

>.>

Spoiler for The Wolf and the Girl pt1:
Zaffoha? Give more!
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Let's try this again...

Spoiler for Pt. 7- Fate's Revolution:


Spoiler for After you read:
What a twist! Still, all these devilish ways of thinking are fun to read!
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Happy 500 Nanoha Fanfiction Discussion Thread!


I, wanwan, resident perv and FFC mascot, hereby claim this page in honor of FFT and FFC!!!! To all the authors, readers, lurkers: Happy 500th page! woooo!!!


*laith wrote a very nice short about our thread's 500th page get.
*image courtesy of AtomicoX. thank you AX. ^^
Wohoooo! Now let's work to double that number!
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GO 500!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And for fun here's a short

Spoiler for ???!Hayate:
Took a while to realize just WHAT was going on, but the ending was sweet.
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Spoiler for From 400 to 500 there are too many worlds:


Do YOU remember?
I remember! Just never realized so many things were written in 100 pages.
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Here is the second chapter of Alpha Outbreak. Hopefully it's better than the first.
Spoiler for Chapter 2: Decision:
Let the party begin.
There some things that could use some working, although the premise is really interesting.

The thing that I found the worst was Nanoha joking about killing somebody (or was she being serious?). No. That's just a big 'no' coming from Nanoha. Besides the logic being flawed there: WHY kill him? There's also a few other things that raise question marks and could do with some working. Besides that, I think everybody else who comented covered the important things.

Oh, and I think I haven't welcomed you yet. Welcome to the thread.
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Syn! People are kind of over reacting with the story though.
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I need to start wrapping up stories that are distracting me from my older stories, so here's another installment of Feito No Hana (the one that started with Nurse!Hayate)

Spoiler for Pt. 4- Hayate/Fate? NanoFate?:
Oh wow! The next chapter should be quite interesting.
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Fate of the Reapers
Chapter 9
Conversion
Spoiler for Ch 9:


Picture inside spoiler, read to find out.
Spoiler for Author's note:
The story always somehow felt as if it would be longer, not ending in two chapters. Anyway - seems like everybody will have a surprise when they get to the base. What is going to happen to Fate? Also, nice banner! Are my eyes fooling me, or is that part of Iron Man's eye from one of the movie posters?
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DIVIDED DESTINY
Two People, Two Paths

Spoiler for Divided Destiny, pt. 14:


Previous Installments
-Intro
-Chapter 01
-Chapter 02
-Chapter 03
-Chapter 04
-Chapter 05
-Chapter 06
-Chapter 07
-Chapter 08
-Chapter 09
-Chapter 10
-Chapter 11
-Chapter 12
-Chapter 13
A.

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