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Old 2008-10-17, 23:59   Link #10081
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From a crazy idea during the summer to full fledged crack(ish) story I present to you this:

(be forewarned that i have not spent much time proofing this. Also, the theme may be too mature for some people, but no mature acts take place.)

Spoiler for Familiar Feel:


Thank you those in the FFC that gave me some ideas as well as pushed me to write this.
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Old 2008-10-18, 00:18   Link #10082
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Originally Posted by Junkedcat View Post
From a crazy idea during the summer to full fledged crack(ish) story I present to you this:

(be forewarned that i have not spent much time proofing this. Also, the theme may be too mature for some people, but no mature acts take place.)

Spoiler for Familiar Feel:


Thank you those in the FFC that gave me some ideas as well as pushed me to write this.
Yes, Finally it arrives! :emot-4chan:

Other than the occasional typo, or grammar flop, it was very well written. Not too descriptive, not too drawn out. Over all, I loved it~ And, for once, saved it~

On the topic of typos, however; "every minuet she thought about the subject"~
If you read that as written, even though it's incorrect, I can't help but love the line, and the - unintentional - choice of typo~

Keep writing, JC, and you'll always have a fan~
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Old 2008-10-18, 00:32   Link #10083
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Originally Posted by Junkedcat View Post
From a crazy idea during the summer to full fledged crack(ish) story I present to you this:

(be forewarned that i have not spent much time proofing this. Also, the theme may be too mature for some people, but no mature acts take place.)

Spoiler for Familiar Feel:


Thank you those in the FFC that gave me some ideas as well as pushed me to write this.
Just 3 words for this: Wow, Continue Please
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Old 2008-10-18, 00:36   Link #10084
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Originally Posted by Junkedcat View Post
From a crazy idea during the summer to full fledged crack(ish) story I present to you this:

(be forewarned that i have not spent much time proofing this. Also, the theme may be too mature for some people, but no mature acts take place.)

Spoiler for Familiar Feel:


Thank you those in the FFC that gave me some ideas as well as pushed me to write this.
Wow JC, this is so good. And hey, we all make typos and more if we pull this one at the middle of the night. You should do chap 2 ASAP.
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Old 2008-10-18, 00:42   Link #10085
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Originally Posted by Junkedcat View Post
From a crazy idea during the summer to full fledged crack(ish) story I present to you this:

(be forewarned that i have not spent much time proofing this. Also, the theme may be too mature for some people, but no mature acts take place.)

Spoiler for Familiar Feel:


Thank you those in the FFC that gave me some ideas as well as pushed me to write this.
Yay JC! You totally came through with awesomeness and awesomesauce.
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Old 2008-10-18, 01:44   Link #10086
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Or him

Or whatever Satashi might be (except a divine being of some kind given how much Satashi complains about being referred to as one )
Satashi made a photo of her room and post in the channel and we conclude that she is a girl :3
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Old 2008-10-18, 01:52   Link #10087
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Spoiler for Porn Star!Vivio:
Interesting, I'm not a big Fan of Vivio x Syn but this fic seems to beging taking it's course

I played in one of those contes you know? In this case they were Jalapeños but the result was almost the same

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@XenahortCharybdis: Lol, what else did you expect? It's the Nanoha FF thread! It's 75% crack, 90% fluff, 25% angst and about 10% bloody.
From that 10%, 9% is me for sure

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If you can't take the crack get out of the forum
Shiny has spoke!

Beware the God of Crack!

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Fate of the Reapers
Chapter 9
Conversion
Spoiler for Ch 9:


Picture inside spoiler, read to find out.
Spoiler for Author's note:
It has been a long way, since that short in wich you introduced the Reapers until this chapter

I had always liked this creation of yours since the begining

I'd like to work with the Reapers in the future if you allow me to
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Old 2008-10-18, 01:58   Link #10088
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Satashi made a photo of her room and post in the channel and we conclude that she is a girl :3
What? I missed that!
I'm curious, I need to see that photo now! Where I can see it?

BTW, Junkedcat, any news about Landscaper!Fate? I love that fic ^^

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Old 2008-10-18, 02:09   Link #10089
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Satashi made a photo of her room and post in the channel and we conclude that she is a girl :3
I know curiosity killed the cat (good thing I'm not 1 ) but I'd like to see it too
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Old 2008-10-18, 02:11   Link #10090
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she posted in our irc channel, and I lost the link... too lazy to dig in the logs
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Old 2008-10-18, 02:21   Link #10091
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she posted in our irc channel, and I lost the link... too lazy to dig in the logs
Well, until Stashi doesn't confirm it by himself/herselve is esentially imposible to know if Satashi is he or she

You said, Satashi posted a photo of his/her room, but, how can you verificate that it was truly Satashi's room? Satashi could look for a photo of a girl's room on Internet or search through magasines and/or friends in order to play a joke to the chat room XP

Although, doe to Satashi's way of writing and details like Satashi's misslike for gore and inclination for romance storyes also makes me thing that Satashi is a pretty girl

But as I said, for us, is imposible to know
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Old 2008-10-18, 02:31   Link #10092
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harsh? It's just a play on "If you can't take the heat get out of the kitchen" since silly Comar was overreacting to Porn Star Vivio =-=...honestly people take things way too seriously
It's a little hard to tell jokes and wordplay apart through text alone. >.>
Sorry. >.<
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Old 2008-10-18, 04:38   Link #10093
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The story always somehow felt as if it would be longer, not ending in two chapters. Anyway - seems like everybody will have a surprise when they get to the base. What is going to happen to Fate?
Well, yeah, it is a bit short but I made it that way so it just isn't fillers. Plus, my ideas a running really low and I kinda have it plotted out already. But as I said, Ch 10 and 11 will probably be the longest so you could count those as 4 chapters (I hope).
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Also, nice banner! Are my eyes fooling me, or is that part of Iron Man's eye from one of the movie posters?
Nope, you are certainly correct. I think his eyes fits the reapers (although with some differences) and I manage to get Fate in there too. I will probably rework it a bit before Ch 11 release to improve it.

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It has been a long way, since that short in wich you introduced the Reapers until this chapter

I had always liked this creation of yours since the begining

I'd like to work with the Reapers in the future if you allow me to
I'm glad you like them, they have a personal place for me too. And you are of course welcome to use them however you like, as long as you tell who they came from.
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Old 2008-10-18, 07:25   Link #10094
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I need to start wrapping up stories that are distracting me from my older stories, so here's another installment of Feito No Hana (the one that started with Nurse!Hayate)

Spoiler for Pt. 4- Hayate/Fate? NanoFate?:
O.o

...

mooore!!!
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Old 2008-10-18, 07:58   Link #10095
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you guys are funny :P

Nanoha looked at Vivio questingly. "What are you doing sweetie?"

"Taking pictures of my room to show my friends online."

The mother considered this. "Did you clean your room first?"

"Nope, too lazy." The teen took a picture and went about uploading them.

Nanoha smiled, ignoring the fact that the imag showed one of Vivio's bras hanging off the bed. Her daughter would learn the hard way to double check everything before showing her friends...

Spoiler for pics:
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Old 2008-10-18, 09:28   Link #10096
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you guys are funny :P

Nanoha looked at Vivio questingly. "What are you doing sweetie?"

"Taking pictures of my room to show my friends online."

The mother considered this. "Did you clean your room first?"

"Nope, too lazy." The teen took a picture and went about uploading them.

Nanoha smiled, ignoring the fact that the imag showed one of Vivio's bras hanging off the bed. Her daughter would learn the hard way to double check everything before showing her friends...

Spoiler for pics:
*has that FMA wallscroll*
Hey Sata it was the camera that was slanted in the last pic right

And I conclude that we can't conclude anything from it. :3 Satashi will be Satashi until Satashi let's me hear his/her voice =-=
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Old 2008-10-18, 10:14   Link #10097
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you guys are funny :P

Nanoha looked at Vivio questingly. "What are you doing sweetie?"

"Taking pictures of my room to show my friends online."

The mother considered this. "Did you clean your room first?"

"Nope, too lazy." The teen took a picture and went about uploading them.

Nanoha smiled, ignoring the fact that the imag showed one of Vivio's bras hanging off the bed. Her daughter would learn the hard way to double check everything before showing her friends...

Spoiler for pics:
Those are lot of anime stuff

I still don't know why people says that your room is a proob that you'r a girl

I looks more like the room of a 100% anime fan

EDIT: I noriced something on your office Satashi, you practique Feng Shui?
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Old 2008-10-18, 10:19   Link #10098
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Spoiler for pics:
Me thinks this last pic has potential for answers... >.> <.< I vote for Satashi being a perfectly typical (albeit long-time merchandise hoarder) female with shoujo and shounen and spartan tastes in decorating. >.> You just don't strike me as being very male-y... >.>

Spoiler for Bedroom of Manhood:


^^ And you know, I think Satashi only keeps it a secret because we keep trying to guess like its such a big deal. It's a self-perpetuating cycle. XP

Edit: Although, the idea of plushies and what looks like alcohol being stored in the same place makes me giggle.
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Old 2008-10-18, 10:21   Link #10099
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you guys are funny :P

Nanoha looked at Vivio questingly. "What are you doing sweetie?"

"Taking pictures of my room to show my friends online."

The mother considered this. "Did you clean your room first?"

"Nope, too lazy." The teen took a picture and went about uploading them.

Nanoha smiled, ignoring the fact that the imag showed one of Vivio's bras hanging off the bed. Her daughter would learn the hard way to double check everything before showing her friends...

Spoiler for pics:
LOL looks like my room
Except mines more messier (like Vivio's apparently )

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*has that FMA wallscroll*
Hey Sata it was the camera that was slanted in the last pic right

And I conclude that we can't conclude anything from it. :3 Satashi will be Satashi until Satashi let's me hear his/her voice =-=
True
I seriously dont think thats going to happen, Satashi's too much of a tease
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Old 2008-10-18, 10:29   Link #10100
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DIVIDED DESTINY
Two People, Two Paths

Spoiler for Divided Destiny, pt. 14:


Previous Installments
-Intro
-Chapter 01
-Chapter 02
-Chapter 03
-Chapter 04
-Chapter 05
-Chapter 06
-Chapter 07
-Chapter 08
-Chapter 09
-Chapter 10
-Chapter 11
-Chapter 12
-Chapter 13
A, please and thank you...
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