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Old 2008-10-21, 04:36   Link #17561
Keroko
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Pervy Nanoha perving Teana in a lovely display of Nanoha/Teana?

Translation and source please!

Also, now that I've found these Due comics:



A translation for these would be most welcome too.
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Old 2008-10-21, 08:04   Link #17562
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My biggest beef with the BetrayerS doujin is the lack of grammar. Regardless, thank you for the work you've done. Can't comment on the translation itself, though I haven't heard the greatest things about it, sadly. Who really cares about how you've cleaned up the images when the raws were pretty bad.... Though I can't say I'm too keen on seeing gutter shadows, either.
Hello

Please let me know where the mistakes are so I make improvements for the HQ release

The good news is.. I am getting the doujinshi so I may scan it myself!

*crossfingers* Seems like the seller put it in the mail yesterday :X

Come get here quick! >.<
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Old 2008-10-21, 12:46   Link #17563
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Oh, dokupan, did you want more PLUM doujins? I think the only ones I didn't send you are Magical SEED No.Due, Magical SEED Galaxy, Magical SEED BIND, Magical SEED, and Magical SEED A2, so I'm not sure which ones you don't have.... Is it safe for me to assume you have Magical SEED OTHER as well?

And we kind of sort of did three doujins - Lyrical Waha, Master, and I'm totally counting all those eggs as an entire entity.

So, I'm a paranoid procrastinating perfectionist, eh?


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Pervy Nanoha perving Teana in a lovely display of Nanoha/Teana?

Translation and source please!
Magical SEED FREEDOM by PLUM. Non-h, don't worry, don't worry...

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Please let me know where the mistakes are so I make improvements for the HQ release
I'm not sure about other people, but I'm quite used to having sentences ending with a period, if not some other form of punctuation. >_>;

Being consistent is key. Another thing I just realized as I'm reading through, there are.... little to no contractions. I know when you're formally writing, you don't use contractions, but when we're talking about people speaking....

For example, on page eleven, someone is saying "IT... IT IS... !!!" It would flow a lot better if it was "IT'S... !!!" Besides, who'd say an extra word or syllable or something when you're seeing the White Devil who looks like she'll Starlight Breaker your rump?

Spoiler for Possible mistakes:

Someone should proofread my own "proofreading". I'm kind of a comma-holic. That, and I've only completed grade ten English, lol....

dlbdsfgadfsga;f I don't know why I'm bothering. A lot of the sentences just sound weird and I don't know enough Japanese to try and help re-phrase anything. Pretty much everything else just seems to be you missing a comma somewhere, with the odd spelling mistake and subject verb disagreeing. And stuff. Bleh.
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Old 2008-10-21, 12:52   Link #17564
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Old 2008-10-21, 13:58   Link #17565
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Oh, dokupan, did you want more PLUM doujins? I think the only ones I didn't send you are Magical SEED No.Due, Magical SEED Galaxy, Magical SEED BIND, Magical SEED, and Magical SEED A2, so I'm not sure which ones you don't have.... Is it safe for me to assume you have Magical SEED OTHER as well?

And we kind of sort of did three doujins - Lyrical Waha, Master, and I'm totally counting all those eggs as an entire entity.

So, I'm a paranoid procrastinating perfectionist, eh?
Got all those~ And OTHER as well, yes. Magical SEED DESTINY and Magical SEED 総集編X too. It's all the newer ones I can't find. :<

Okay, sure, we've done 3 then.

Are you going to deny it? :>

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That, and I've only completed grade ten English, lol....
So does that mean you're in eleventh grade or a dropout? :O

Blargh, I'm not going to be doing anymore translating until my eyes've healed.
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Old 2008-10-21, 14:34   Link #17566
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Old 2008-10-21, 15:06   Link #17567
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Cute moment
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Old 2008-10-21, 21:24   Link #17568
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lol.. feito in musubi's body shop

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Old 2008-10-21, 21:32   Link #17569
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lol.. feito in musubi's body shop

The face seems shopped...

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Old 2008-10-21, 21:33   Link #17570
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Yes.. its a shop .. I've said it, it is Musubi's body shop ^^
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Old 2008-10-21, 21:35   Link #17571
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Yes.. its a shop .. I've said it, it is Musubi's body shop ^^
Oh, you're right, I got confused with the Musubi thing when I read it the first time
BTW, nice avatar!

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Old 2008-10-21, 22:45   Link #17572
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These are some pretty pwnage pictures.
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Old 2008-10-21, 23:42   Link #17573
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@BPHaru Could you translate http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/a...oi_Extra_7.jpg?

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Old 2008-10-21, 23:44   Link #17574
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Ladies and gentlemen!

(Though I have a feeling there would be more Gents in here due to the nature of the thread )

I just finished translating the Doujinshi Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Nanoha BetrayerS~!

Download here~

I am currently waiting for the Doujinshi to arrive via mail to me~ Once I get it in my hands there will be better quality scans released~

Please bear with these for now~

Enjoy~

I'm sorry to bother you,

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Old 2008-10-22, 00:18   Link #17575
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@BPHaru Could you translate http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/a...oi_Extra_7.jpg?

Thanks
It's just a poem, so it's not that easy to translate. This was made by our dear doujinshi editor and fanfic writer Naymco (who also redrew Hazukashikunai no ga Koi) for a thread in our forums that is for role playing as canon Nanoha characters (the thread is fun because now everyone is 'rolling' their chracters in the whole forum xD). Our Fate is marrying our Nanoha soon, so she drew it for the occasion, and maybe the poem is for her votes...? We'll have to wait until the weeding to know ^^

Also is hard for me to translate from Spanish to English, but I'll give it a try if you want (but I can guarantee that it will sound weird, and some sentences would have to be reworded )



If I were an angel
I would fly to you
forever
I would do it
I would do anything
to be by your side
I would do
the impossible
to hold your hand
You are my life
my destiny, my day by day.
You are
what I dream
what I yearn.
I need you,
like flowers and the waters
drops in a umbrella
heart in a soul
I feel that way
I feel something beautiful
I have a feeling and tell you
I tell and repeat
that I just...
fell in love with you.


Done.
I think it sounded better in Spanish, but anyway I'll be pleased if someone tells me what should be corrected (grammar, wording, spelling). It's mainly because I had some problems translating this and I want to know where are any mistakes.

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Old 2008-10-22, 00:26   Link #17576
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Some doujins (worksafe):

Spoiler for PV6:


Spoiler for PV7:
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Old 2008-10-22, 08:45   Link #17577
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It's just a poem, so it's not that easy to translate. This was made by our dear doujinshi editor and fanfic writer Naymco (who also redrew Hazukashikunai no ga Koi) for a thread in our forums that is for role playing as canon Nanoha characters (the thread is fun because now everyone is 'rolling' their chracters in the whole forum xD). Our Fate is marrying our Nanoha soon, so she drew it for the occasion, and maybe the poem is for her votes...? We'll have to wait until the weeding to know ^^

Also is hard for me to translate from Spanish to English, but I'll give it a try if you want (but I can guarantee that it will sound weird, and some sentences would have to be reworded )



If I were an angel
I would fly to you
forever
I would do it
I would do anything
to be by your side
I would do
the impossible
to hold your hand
You are my life
my destiny, my day by day.
You are
what I dream
what I yearn.
I need you,
like flowers and the waters
drops in a umbrella
heart in a soul
I feel that way
I feel something beautiful
I have a feeling and tell you
I tell and repeat
that I just...
fell in love with you.


Done.
I think it sounded better in Spanish, but anyway I'll be pleased if someone tells me what should be corrected (grammar, wording, spelling). It's mainly because I had some problems translating this and I want to know where are any mistakes.

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I don't see any mystakes, I think the poem sounds beautifull in all languages . I tanslated the poem in portuguese and sound good.
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Old 2008-10-22, 11:39   Link #17578
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*blink* Green eyes? Yuuno? No its not Yuuno... Fate? But those green eyes...

Wow, looks like Yuuno and Fate's child grew up nicely.
It's actually a picture of Due.





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Old 2008-10-22, 13:49   Link #17579
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I have the following Safe for work doujins:
[0422SHOP] Lyrical Nanoka
[AMR] Decade Eins
[Briest] LMR 02
[CHA know-me DO-JI] Lyrical Jyoutoh!
[D-Cube] Fate in Stay Night
[Daikakudou] Roshinante Go Ahead
[Einsatz Gruppe] No.1 White Devil
[Fukashigi] Nanoha no Hon
[GRINP] Lyrical Bonus!!!!!
[Kawaisounako] Kawauso Vol. 02
[Kikakugai.Extend] Fate Out of Standard
[Kohakunosima] O Yakusoku wa Zettai! Muteki Nano~
[mstl-60997] NR-01
[Parukusu] PV6
[Parukusu] PV7
[PLUM] Magical SEED FREEDOM
[Rental Senkan] Midori
[Rimitubureiku + T-A-C-O] Nanoha-san no Technique
[Romantic Sintai-Kensa] pop x pop
[Subitan] Vivio no Oekakichou
[Upagoya Endori] Standby Ready Clock Up!
[Utsura Uraraka] Rein Ganbaru Desu!

Already in english
[RAID SLASH] Thunder Bird
[GiB] Lyrical Waha
[Iceky] The Same Feel [ENG]
[Aterier Miyabi] Sky Colors [ENG]
[MoruHouse] Koiwa Mutekinano [ENG]
[Nagomutei] Sleeping Butterfly [ENG]
[RAID SLASH] Fake Jewel [ENG]
[UnisonBell] Nanohana [ENG]
[SEA STAR] KISS [ENG]
[SEA STAR] LOVE LOVE LOVE [ENG]
[SEA STAR] Punyu Punyu [ENG]
[SEA STAR] Sweet Home [ENG]
[SEA STAR] Velvet [ENG]
[Rocket Guy] Akuma demo Nanoha! nano [ENG]

Anyone want me to post any of these?
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Old 2008-10-22, 15:30   Link #17580
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Anyone want me to post any of these?
[AMR] Decade Eins
[Briest] LMR 02
[GRINP] Lyrical Bonus!!!!!
[Kikakugai.Extend] Fate Out of Standard
[Kohakunosima] O Yakusoku wa Zettai! Muteki Nano~
[Upagoya Endori] Standby Ready Clock Up!

If it's not too much trouble. @_@
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