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Old 2008-10-23, 12:30   Link #10241
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Fate of the Reapers
Chapter 10

Spoiler for Chapter 10:
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Old 2008-10-23, 14:12   Link #10242
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DIVIDED DESTINY
Two People, Two Paths

Spoiler for Divided Destiny, pt. 15:


Previous Installments
-Intro
-Chapter 01
-Chapter 02
-Chapter 03
-Chapter 04
-Chapter 05
-Chapter 06
-Chapter 07
-Chapter 08
-Chapter 09
-Chapter 10
-Chapter 11
-Chapter 12
-Chapter 13
-Chapter 14
A So why did eden build weapons?

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So I started chapter 1 for Bless the Broken Road, though the beginning is mainly a flashback sequence that explains a few details. Still, I'll post it just to see what you all think, especially with Elise's characterization. Also, special thanks to Tempest Dynasty for helping me out with what model of pistol would best suit Nanoha and her needs and for explaining the differences to a clueless individual like me. XD

Anyway, here's the beginning of chapter 1...

Spoiler for Bless the Broken Road: Collision Course:
Good gun, I wonder how her magic is going to work with her gun.

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OMG poor Vivio lol

Spoiler for Pornstar!Vivio pt.8:


Pageclaim for frantic hiding of items!
Syn doesn't have a clue.

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Fate of the Reapers
Chapter 10

Spoiler for Chapter 10:
Looking forward to Nanoha meeting Fate.
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Old 2008-10-23, 15:16   Link #10243
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Yay, Saharet Cameo!

Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.9:

multiple choice, why not? Should Syn pick...

A.) Modest, cute clothes
B.) Gothic, punk clothes
C.) Revealing, sexy clothes


Um....... Let's go with pink again, it'll be my color ^^
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Old 2008-10-23, 15:23   Link #10244
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...yeah you can´t have Saharet without the furry jacket.

And... well... ummm... hellz B will be
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Old 2008-10-23, 15:25   Link #10245
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I'm actually going to vote...

B

There is plenty of opportunity for the other options.
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Old 2008-10-23, 15:26   Link #10246
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*Delurks*

wow...it's been a looooooooooooooooong time *chuckle*
I wonder if Sata did that on purpose so I show my cute little ass in here

I would say c since this is Syn...but I'm a sell out to the punk clothes so B for me :3
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Old 2008-10-23, 15:31   Link #10247
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Voting B...for pretty obvious reasons...
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Old 2008-10-23, 15:38   Link #10248
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Current standings for Divided Destiny:

A) II
B) IIIII
C) I

Approximately 2.5 hours remaining to vote

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D: WAR!?! *snip* I'm oddly drawn to that choice.
There is that possibly. We shall see where your choices take their destinies

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*snip* So why did eden build weapons?
Why indeed... Who would know about their decision to peruse such research? Perhaps it shall be revealed in time...
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Old 2008-10-23, 15:54   Link #10249
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Yay, Saharet Cameo!

Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.9:

multiple choice, why not? Should Syn pick...

A.) Modest, cute clothes
B.) Gothic, punk clothes
C.) Revealing, sexy clothes


Um....... Let's go with pink again, it'll be my color ^^

I go for B


you are doing great Satashi.
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Old 2008-10-23, 16:54   Link #10250
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Yay, Saharet Cameo!

Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.9:
>.>
<.<
i vote....transparent clothes! \o/
*bricked* /riyuu

@_@!

who threw that brick??!!
<.<
>.>

well a-anyway.. it's B too.

*glomps Saharet and snuggles in her furry jacket* X3
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Old 2008-10-23, 17:00   Link #10251
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B for families voting together
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Old 2008-10-23, 18:07   Link #10252
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Yay, Saharet Cameo!

Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.9:

multiple choice, why not? Should Syn pick...

A.) Modest, cute clothes
B.) Gothic, punk clothes
C.) Revealing, sexy clothes


Um....... Let's go with pink again, it'll be my color ^^
A
Just for the squirming that it would cause.

"The prep look looks good on you," Syn smiled at the girl in in the tennis skirt and pink-collared fitted polo shirt, "What do you want to do now?"
"Vote Republican," Vivio grimaced looking down at the clothes as if they burned her skin.
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Old 2008-10-23, 18:26   Link #10253
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And the polls are now closed :3

The final count for Divided Destiny:

A) II
B) IIIII
C) I

A weapon...something that can cause harm. Will I really have to fire it in the place I once called home?
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Old 2008-10-23, 19:24   Link #10254
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A
Just for the squirming that it would cause.

"The prep look looks good on you," Syn smiled at the girl in in the tennis skirt and pink-collared fitted polo shirt, "What do you want to do now?"
"Vote Republican," Vivio grimaced looking down at the clothes as if they burned her skin.
I saw that, bird witch! :P
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Old 2008-10-23, 19:41   Link #10255
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Spoiler for Pornstar!Vivio pt 10 section 1:


A.) Watch a movie
B.) get ice cream
C.) browse more stores
D.) End date here

Chat room votes only here!

Spoiler for section 2 (B):


A.) Feed ice cream to Vivio
B.) Take turns eating it

chatroom votes!

Spoiler for section three (B):


A.) Go into the toy store
B.) Go into the music store
C.) Go into the jewelry store
D.) End your date here.

Chatroom votes

Spoiler for section 4 (D):


A.) Try and kiss Vivio
B.) Try and hug Vivio
C.) Smile and wave
D.) Hint that Syn wants to go inside

Chatroom votes

Spoiler for Section 5 (D):


Interactive date over, returning to regular PS!V now ^_^

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Old 2008-10-23, 19:43   Link #10256
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Let's see how I do at handling the whole quote-multiple messages thing...though my ease with the whole fancy new technology stuff can be summed up in the fact that I've owned an iPod for...um...eight days now.

(even scarier is the fact that I'm essentially the IT officer for the law office where I practice!)
But for the most important things first, for PS!V I have to go with A since it would increase Vivio's discomfort level about revealing her job if she started thinking that Syn thought of her as most naturally that way. Inner-monologue angst is the best!

Edit: Blast, you posted the next chapter fragment while I was typing that *facepalm*

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Welcome to the fanfiction thread, have fun post lost and forget your sanity at the door... wait dezopenguin... ZOMG you are the one that writes those Grim grimmoire fics!!You are in the Nanoha fandom now!? (havent checked FFnet in a while)... errh fanboyness aside welcome.
Yep, I got hooked. My attention got by the doujinshi at NanoFate.net, which led me to the ff.net section, which led me to the actual show, and the next thing I knew words were spewing off my pencil. I've got six of 'em now, alternatively featuring angst, fluff, and Vivio.

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OO You're here now. AWESOME! I love your stuff particularly your grim grimorie ones. *fanswords*
Like everyone's been sayin' come check out the IRC.

Update on my shiz: I've been really bogged down with projects lately (RL ones) =-= hopefully my life will be less frantic by the end of next week.
No, no, no...your first priority is getting out chapters of RebelS, then you deal with job/school/family/relationship issues. Please, learn to properly divide your time.

(And to both of you--wow; I never expected more than one person here would have ended up reading my GrimGrimoire stories! Ah, how I dream of one day reading one not written by...well, me. )

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So I started chapter 1 for Bless the Broken Road, though the beginning is mainly a flashback sequence that explains a few details. Still, I'll post it just to see what you all think, especially with Elise's characterization. Also, special thanks to Tempest Dynasty for helping me out with what model of pistol would best suit Nanoha and her needs and for explaining the differences to a clueless individual like me. XD

Anyway, here's the beginning of chapter 1...

Spoiler for Bless the Broken Road: Collision Course:


Spoiler for Bless the Broken Road: Collision Course:





Okay, I'm onboard for the ride. Nanoha's basically a girls-with-guns character anyway, just without needing the firearms. It's a logical extension. Now, just so I don't come off like a complete idiot, the supporting cast is from Triangle Heart, is that right? Or something else entirely?

(I can just see her hooking up Raising Heart to a LAW when she needs the equivalent of a Divine Buster...)

To everyone else who offered words of welcome, thank you! Glad to be here!

Lastly, since yakking about myself is all too easy to do:

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@Thread: Why do you write? Is it a personal goal? For others?
I'd have to say it's a personal thing; my imagination has been creating stories from the time I was a little kid. I think I actually wrote my first "story" when I was...7 (a one-page teenage-sports fic, I believe) and I've been doing so ever since. Fanfiction, on the other hand, I've only been involved with for a dozen years or so. It appeals to me because whenever I really like a particular media (book, game, movie, TV show, anime, whatever) my mind immediately tries to immerse myself into it, and fanfiction provides an outlet for that (I'd probably do fanart, too, but I so can't draw), a way to merge myself with the characters, setting, whatever it is (that's why my fiction tends to be pretty much "original flavor," avoiding crossovers or AU settings, because the things that draw me to a particular original are the setting, or the plot, or the atmosphere, or the characters of that original--I don't object to reading such things, but I tend not to write them except in gag stories, and usually not even those). I do appreciate the fact that fanfiction does allow me to share my love for a particular series with others, particularly since I'm not prone to sending my original fiction anywhere.

*checks preview*

Dern, it actually worked! Cool
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Old 2008-10-23, 20:49   Link #10257
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That reminds me

Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha RebelS
Chapter 3
The Ill Tempered Forward

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4369398/..._Nanoha_RebelS

It's not a new chapter but it's been updated a bit and features a new preview and more information on The Metal Menagerie's naming scheme.
and now you can catch up on the first four parts before the 4th chapter comes out
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Old 2008-10-23, 20:59   Link #10258
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That reminds me

Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha RebelS
Chapter 3
The Ill Tempered Forward

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4369398/..._Nanoha_RebelS

It's not a new chapter but it's been updated a bit and features a new preview and more information on The Metal Menagerie's naming scheme.
and now you can catch up on the first four parts before the 4th chapter comes out
New for me, thanks! *prints*
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Old 2008-10-23, 23:20   Link #10259
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Spoiler for Chapter 7:


Some points in here are fiction such as Johannes knowing Nanoha. It's a fanfic. What do you expect?
All I have to say LOL! Fate TASTETHEROOSTER! That's an awesome name. I like this Johannes guy already. Nice chapter.

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That reminds me

Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha RebelS
Chapter 3
The Ill Tempered Forward

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4369398/..._Nanoha_RebelS

It's not a new chapter but it's been updated a bit and features a new preview and more information on The Metal Menagerie's naming scheme.
and now you can catch up on the first four parts before the 4th chapter comes out
Nice. I'll read that in a few minutes. Though I can't wait for the next chapter.

@Satashi: So much PS!Vivio! Not that I'm complaining. Anyways cute date, I can't wait to see what'll happen next

@EvilRick:
Wow the back story behind Alicia and Precia's connection to Techno-Union was super interesting. Man Zaeta is always there to save everyone with her dragon blood. OMG, Vita and Hayate were heartbreaking, I wanted to cry. Woah, ROBO-GATSURALLY showing up was unexpected. Aww Jail seems so awesome again, he's so nice. Dr. Faust is dead, I can't believe it. This looks like a really downhill battle. Damn it! I thought they had actually won! I hope Fate and Alicia will be alright. Now let's go to that palace!
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Old 2008-10-24, 00:27   Link #10260
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@Satashi: Pornstar Vivio is taking an interesting plot in the... uhmm... ViSyn? Synvio? XP

Anyway, just wanted to tell you that I do not vote in the last chapter you posted because with so many "parts" and "decitions" it was rather confusing to me

BTW, I would like to see this fic attached totally to a romantic/ cute/ lovely fic, leaving apart the "Perverted" parts (I'm refering to the begining in part 8 )
Just a sugestion though XD, Keep going!

@AtomicoX: Oh, sweet revenge Fate of the Reapers is reaching the climax! XD, So... nextc chapter is the final you said?

@marksellus and Kai the Reaper: Thank you guys for the coments about NROTU, don't worry, Alicia would be fine , I just wanted to thankyou both for following this story to this point since the begining, thankyou guys, I love you

EDIT: Oh, page claim

Then let's claim this page in the name of...

Spoiler for :
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