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Old 2008-10-24, 00:42   Link #10261
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All I have to say LOL! Fate TASTETHEROOSTER! That's an awesome name. I like this Johannes guy already. Nice chapter.


Nice. I'll read that in a few minutes. Though I can't wait for the next chapter.

@Satashi: So much PS!Vivio! Not that I'm complaining. Anyways cute date, I can't wait to see what'll happen next

@EvilRick:
Wow the back story behind Alicia and Precia's connection to Techno-Union was super interesting. Man Zaeta is always there to save everyone with her dragon blood. OMG, Vita and Hayate were heartbreaking, I wanted to cry. Woah, ROBO-GATSURALLY showing up was unexpected. Aww Jail seems so awesome again, he's so nice. Dr. Faust is dead, I can't believe it. This looks like a really downhill battle. Damn it! I thought they had actually won! I hope Fate and Alicia will be alright. Now let's go to that palace!
Glad you liked it. After I'm done with this fanfic, I'll start on a new one which is still a secret.
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Old 2008-10-24, 02:17   Link #10262
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Spoiler for Chapter 8:


Here is Chapter 8. Feel free to comment.
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Old 2008-10-24, 03:34   Link #10263
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Ahem.

Here goes nothing.

Re-post (not really, actually) of first attempt at fanfic, GO!

Xena

The ZENITH Project
~Act One, Scene One~

Spoiler for actual text:


Character Guides Eventually (I hope.)

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Old 2008-10-24, 04:13   Link #10264
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Wow. Almost broke my neck reading backlog.

Love the work everyone, it's been a while and I've been so busy I haven't even had time to fantasize about running people over with trucks.

@Satashi Is that really your office? It looks more like a dream. That is not a chasis for standard work computers ;D
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Old 2008-10-24, 04:27   Link #10265
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A's Combat Zero: The Belkan Crusade (parody of Ace Combat Zero: The Belkan War). Think it's a good idea to write?
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Old 2008-10-24, 04:30   Link #10266
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Ahem.

Here goes nothing.

Re-post of first attempt at fanfic, GO!

Xena

The ZENITH Project
~Act One, Scene One~

Spoiler for actual text:


Character Guides Eventually (I hope.)
hiya xena ^^ well that didn't take too long to read. i'm loving that AI X3 i hope to read more about the main character as i find his personality interesting. gunman!! who is this mysterious gunman and what is his role in this story!! @.@ must find out! i want to know what happens next DX. who might this student be? *o* (i'm hoping it's a character from MGLN lol) good luck on this fic ^^ and don't worry, the length is just right....for FFT.
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Old 2008-10-24, 04:41   Link #10267
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A's Combat Zero: The Belkan Crusade (parody of Ace Combat Zero: The Belkan War). Think it's a good idea to write?
Depends how much you know about Belka, or it might get funny.

Still, anything is possible...Parodies have no hard and fast rules



@wanwan1203: *cough* You ease my mind.

I was much afeared that it would be too long for the second time XD

Well, I suppose...I get to sit on my thumbs for a while, eh, wan?
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Old 2008-10-24, 05:38   Link #10268
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Okay, I'm onboard for the ride. Nanoha's basically a girls-with-guns character anyway, just without needing the firearms. It's a logical extension. Now, just so I don't come off like a complete idiot, the supporting cast is from Triangle Heart, is that right? Or something else entirely?

(I can just see her hooking up Raising Heart to a LAW when she needs the equivalent of a Divine Buster...)

Yep, yep. Elise in paticular is an OVA-only character from Triangle Heart and Fiasse is a regular from the game. Also, if my plotbunny cooperates, Kuon might end up making it into the story after all without sacrificing Nanoha's limited magic potential.

(Pity it would only be a last resort move...)
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Old 2008-10-24, 07:40   Link #10269
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@Satashi: Pornstar Vivio is taking an interesting plot in the... uhmm... ViSyn? Synvio? XP

Anyway, just wanted to tell you that I do not vote in the last chapter you posted because with so many "parts" and "decitions" it was rather confusing to me

BTW, I would like to see this fic attached totally to a romantic/ cute/ lovely fic, leaving apart the "Perverted" parts (I'm refering to the begining in part 8 )
Just a sugestion though XD, Keep going!
XD Their date was interactive on the chatroom. I would write and post then people would vote in the chatroom nd I would continue it. I'm making PS!V slightly interactive just for the fun of it ^^.

As for the "perverted" parts in PS!V, there will be no actual hentai or lemon scenes in it, but there will be parts showing Vivio doing her job ( such as when she was recording herself ). No detail or anything will be shown, but that's part of the fic just as much as Syn's jobs are.

Don't worry, though, this fic isn't about sex, it's about the two girls and how they fall in love/ deal with life.
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Old 2008-10-24, 08:59   Link #10270
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XD Their date was interactive on the chatroom. I would write and post then people would vote in the chatroom nd I would continue it. I'm making PS!V slightly interactive just for the fun of it ^^.

As for the "perverted" parts in PS!V, there will be no actual hentai or lemon scenes in it, but there will be parts showing Vivio doing her job ( such as when she was recording herself ). No detail or anything will be shown, but that's part of the fic just as much as Syn's jobs are.

Don't worry, though, this fic isn't about sex, it's about the two girls and how they fall in love/ deal with life.
On that note though, I would like it if you actually did do another lemon piece on the two of them , if you are willing to do so of course. Despite lemons in general is one thing, sex, it's how the authors go about presenting the sex that make it fall into the various categories, ie: raunchy, romantic, platonic, etc. In your case, you usually make it tastefully romantic XD

So if you're willing, I'd like to see one between the two of them, if possible a few, providing on if they actually copulate their relationship partway through the story, instead of at the end, as it seems to be your thing.

Mind you I don't meant his perversely when I ask this. I personally think that you are one of the few rare writers out there who can actually write a well written piece of pornographic art (because let's face it, in the end it still is a form of it). And that's just it, you make it a piece of art, pornographic, but it is still an art :3 And that's what makes your lemon more enjoyable than the next guy, unless I am looking for something raunchy and blunt.
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Old 2008-10-24, 10:25   Link #10271
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Spacebrotha cameo this time!

@Ghaz: A Vivio/Syn lemon? hmmm..... Okay, I'll do it in this story, when it's time to do it. A nice respectful,tastefully done lemon ^^

This PS!V is a little more mature. No hentai or lemons, but more so than my normal stuff. AKA Vivio at her job and speaking about it a little. Why I chose to put this in is because it shows how Vivio thinks about her job and her confusion about real emotion.

Spoiler for Pornstar!Vivio pt.11:

A.) Get Syn something spicy
B.) Get Syn some fast food
C.) get Syn something nice from a restaurant, to-go.
D.) Get Syn some snacks, something sweet.

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Old 2008-10-24, 10:38   Link #10272
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Spacebrotha cameo this time!

@Spacebrotha: A Vivio/Syn lemon? hmmm..... Okay, I'll do it in this story, when it's time to do it. A nice respectful,tastefully done lemon ^^

This PS!V is a little more mature. No hentai or lemons, but more so than my normal stuff. AKA Vivio at her job and speaking about it a little. Why I chose to put this in is because it shows how Vivio thinks about her job and her confusion about real emotion.

Spoiler for Pornstar!Vivio pt.11:

A.) Get Syn something spicy
B.) Get Syn some fast food
C.) get Syn something nice from a restaurant, to-go.
D.) Get Syn some snacks, something sweet.
B

Interesting chapter, exploring a bit Vivio's emotions and the dificult it could be for her asept a relation in the middle of that profesion

Nice work as always
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Old 2008-10-24, 11:00   Link #10273
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I shall take B

And Sata is right about not putting sex as an important matter, since Vivio's job consist of that, she can't really make her like in her other shorts would be weird...

Space as a porn star... woah... hahahahhahaha oh boy I wonder if sata's gonna get steamrolled?
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Old 2008-10-24, 11:27   Link #10274
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Spacebrotha cameo this time!

@Spacebrotha: A Vivio/Syn lemon? hmmm..... Okay, I'll do it in this story, when it's time to do it. A nice respectful,tastefully done lemon ^^

This PS!V is a little more mature. No hentai or lemons, but more so than my normal stuff. AKA Vivio at her job and speaking about it a little. Why I chose to put this in is because it shows how Vivio thinks about her job and her confusion about real emotion.

Spoiler for Pornstar!Vivio pt.11:

A.) Get Syn something spicy
B.) Get Syn some fast food
C.) get Syn something nice from a restaurant, to-go.
D.) Get Syn some snacks, something sweet.
A please
Syn, to me any ways, seems like the type to like spicy foods
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Old 2008-10-24, 11:44   Link #10275
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Spacebrotha cameo this time!

@Spacebrotha: A Vivio/Syn lemon? hmmm..... Okay, I'll do it in this story, when it's time to do it. A nice respectful,tastefully done lemon ^^

This PS!V is a little more mature. No hentai or lemons, but more so than my normal stuff. AKA Vivio at her job and speaking about it a little. Why I chose to put this in is because it shows how Vivio thinks about her job and her confusion about real emotion.

Spoiler for Pornstar!Vivio pt.11:

A.) Get Syn something spicy
B.) Get Syn some fast food
C.) get Syn something nice from a restaurant, to-go.
D.) Get Syn some snacks, something sweet.
If Vivio is starting to feel more "girlfriendy," then it's time to try to do something speCial!
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Old 2008-10-24, 12:14   Link #10276
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Spacebrotha cameo this time!

@Spacebrotha: A Vivio/Syn lemon? hmmm..... Okay, I'll do it in this story, when it's time to do it. A nice respectful,tastefully done lemon ^^

This PS!V is a little more mature. No hentai or lemons, but more so than my normal stuff. AKA Vivio at her job and speaking about it a little. Why I chose to put this in is because it shows how Vivio thinks about her job and her confusion about real emotion.

Spoiler for Pornstar!Vivio pt.11:

A.) Get Syn something spicy
B.) Get Syn some fast food
C.) get Syn something nice from a restaurant, to-go.
D.) Get Syn some snacks, something sweet.


I go for C, Satashi hurry up and update, i can't wait.
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Old 2008-10-24, 14:33   Link #10277
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So all of the chat people are goping to appear?

mmm... well with B as is better for the tongue
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Old 2008-10-24, 15:40   Link #10279
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Here is Chapter 8. Feel free to comment.
Wow Johannes is pretty cool. Though I worry about Vita. She almost got SLBed! D: Well it looks like they are getting hints to the cure, but I wonder why she wasn't affected?

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Ahem.

Here goes nothing.

Re-post (not really, actually) of first attempt at fanfic, GO!

Xena

The ZENITH Project
~Act One, Scene One~

Spoiler for actual text:


Character Guides Eventually (I hope.)
I like Charlotte she's so cute/funny when she forgets to be formal or when she scolds Ashcroft. That whole conversation about the random gunner was interesting. Important? Maybe. I like how he's called old fruit. So I wonder who this apprentice is? The first person who comes to mind is Hayate, but who knows?
OMG ITS NOT A FOOTNOTE!
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Spacebrotha cameo this time!
@Ghaz: A Vivio/Syn lemon? hmmm..... Okay, I'll do it in this story, when it's time to do it. A nice respectful,tastefully done lemon ^^

This PS!V is a little more mature. No hentai or lemons, but more so than my normal stuff. AKA Vivio at her job and speaking about it a little. Why I chose to put this in is because it shows how Vivio thinks about her job and her confusion about real emotion.

Spoiler for Pornstar!Vivio pt.11:

A.) Get Syn something spicy
B.) Get Syn some fast food
C.) get Syn something nice from a restaurant, to-go.
D.) Get Syn some snacks, something sweet.
A because I like it, and it will be funny if she can't handle spicy food. I like the conversation between SpaceBrotha and Vivio, funny and sweet.
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