SOTM 2008 - November (Military) - Entry Phase

[zSolaris]

Originally Posted by Evil Rick

It's a nice animation, but as KiNA said, we musty be sticked to military in therms of costumes, armors, vehicles, etc... not just girls with weapons

KOS-MOS is from a very military game. Xenosaga I, II, and III are extremely military based.

[KiNA]

I could argue Seto San is a mermaid all day long to my mum too, but without a picture of her in mermaid form, its a futile attempt.

What I mean is the viewer dont have to know the BG of the render to tell if its fits the theme or not.

[zSolaris]

Originally Posted by KiNA

I could argue Seto San is a mermaid all day long to my mum too, but without a picture of her in mermaid form, its a futile attempt.

What I mean is the viewer dont have to know the BG of the render to tell if its fits the theme or not.

Well, looks like I'll be redoing my entry then. It was a nice chance to try animation out though!

Also, that is KOS-MOS's military uniform. >.>

[Arceon]

Originally Posted by KiNA

+27px over the limit for sig height.

Really? I thought it was only +17. . .unless the height limit got changed to 150 and it hasn't applied to the first page rules yet. . .

Either way I changed to the backup render I had, I just chose the other cause I liked it better:

[KiNA]

I failed at math @.@

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Arceon

Really? I thought it was only +17. . .unless the height limit got changed to 150 and it hasn't applied to the first page rules yet. . .

Either way I changed to the backup render I had, I just chose the other cause I liked it better:

Ah, that's much more better

I like more this render

[ryuukazi]

Originally Posted by zSolaris

Well, looks like I'll be redoing my entry then. It was a nice chance to try animation out though!

Also, that is KOS-MOS's military uniform. >.>

haha true true but I think they are going for conventional military... With robots

[gelato_]

Originally Posted by Sagasu

Is mine military theme? I'm not really sure myself =o
Anyway, tried to blend it abit

if you ask me, IMO i'd say its not military enough. Their dressing looks more space suit to me, much less they aint carrying any weapons of any sorts. .Yes, i have not watch the anime where these characters are from (my guess is either gundam or macross), so i dont even know the background of these guys, their suits kinda remind me of those from blassreiters though.

[Marina]

Originally Posted by Arceon

Really? I thought it was only +17. . .unless the height limit got changed to 150 and it hasn't applied to the first page rules yet. . .

Either way I changed to the backup render I had, I just chose the other cause I liked it better:

Awwwwwww it's the same render I was working on! ^_^ No worries though since I'll probably work on a couple others for submission.
I really like the transparent top and the render is just win!

Anyways, here's the same render that I was working on:

Worked on it last night and was planning on editing it more later tonight, but I'll prolly start up on my backup renders! CnC still appreciated~

[Sephi]

I think it's quite nice Marina. Perhaps some part of the render could use some blending)hand area, and that below sticking out. The end of the gun/her back looks nicely blended in. And the text could use some work. But it's quite a nice entry imho

*goes back to hibernation/lurking*

[CrowKenobi]

Marina, since your take on the render is different, I'd keep it!

Anyway, version 1:





Yes, I know the line art is the "J" model...

[KholdStare]

So what are the chances that this will be accepted?

[Terrestrial Dream]

Originally Posted by KholdStare

So what are the chances that this will be accepted?

Doesn't really seem like military for me.

Alright which one should I use
The one that I made few months ago?


Or the one that I made recently?
Final Entry

[Marina]

Originally Posted by Sephi

I think it's quite nice Marina. Perhaps some part of the render could use some blending)hand area, and that below sticking out. The end of the gun/her back looks nicely blended in. And the text could use some work. But it's quite a nice entry imho

*goes back to hibernation/lurking*

Thanks Sephi ^_^ Always nice to get feedback from you
Could you elaborate more on the "blending hand area...sticking out?" Do you mean the drop shadow that can be seen there?
Also the text: I did notice that I'm not satisfied with it yet. I'm having a hard time picking the colors and font...

Originally Posted by CrowKenobi

Marina, since your take on the render is different, I'd keep it!

Thanks CK! (Happy birthday too ) We'll see, I'll keep working on it, but I'll still work on 1 or 2 more since I have some similar renders. I really like the artist whoever it is.

Originally Posted by Terrestrial Dream

Alright which one should I use
The one that I made few months ago?


Or the one that I made recently?

I vote the recent one. You always do a good job with that style!

[Terrestrial Dream]

Originally Posted by Marina

I vote the recent one. You always do a good job with that style!

Hmm.... for now I guess I will go with the recent one, and thanks for the compliment .

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by KholdStare

So what are the chances that this will be accepted?

Well, I know that the character is militar but in the render id doesn't looks like

Originally Posted by Terrestrial Dream

Or the one that I made recently?
Final Entry

I shoulkd pik this one, it looks really good

[Arceon]

Right, a few minor changes:



C&C?

[CrowKenobi]

Originally Posted by CrowKenobi

version 1:

Version 2:



C&C appreciated!

[Evil Rick]

Originally Posted by Arceon

Right, a few minor changes:



C&C?

Me likes it! :3

Originally Posted by CrowKenobi

Version 2:



C&C appreciated!

Hmmm... that mecha at the bg drawed in white doesn't looks exactly very good :?

[ganbaru]

Originally Posted by KholdStare

So what are the chances that this will be accepted?

I like it, but... I doubt than it it meet the theme.
( I know what is Chise, but without that knowledge, the sig loose his link with the theme)