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Old 2008-11-17, 00:44   Link #11021
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Well after lurking moar since about page 300 I thought I'd attempt to contribute something to the thread.

I got lured here originally by Satashi waxing lyrical about the wonders of this forum and this thread on Fanfiction.net (there's another story regarding how I found out about Satashi's fanfics ) and decided to investigate and since then I've spent many a day at work trawling the thread in search of new shiny things.

I'm not going to attempt a review of the last 250 pages so you can breathe a sigh of relief.

I also bring my first fanfic attempt ever.

It's a bit dark and probably cliched so be aware.

Spoiler for Loss:


If anyone wants to R&R it would be greatly appreciated, I don't think it's that good but it'd be nice to know what I can improve.
Man, that thing was Epic!

You should know that I'm the fan #1 of Vita, and by saing this, I mean that I'm very selective with fics based on her, and this short of yours is just a jewel

I liked it, liked, liked, liked it!

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Last preview sounds so sad. Random thing I noticed: to me it looks like the pencil drawings (like the one with BattleArmor!Jail are a lot cleaner/detailed than the ballpoint pen(?) NROTU ones. I don't know, it just looks better.
Time to introduce you to my nemesis, Time O.o

Yes, with pencil, I work shades, lights and bariaton of thones, but a single page of comic drawed with pencil takes me like 1 hour and 30 minutes, while one with pen (example, NROTU) just takes like 30 minutes, big diference, don't you think?

To resume, taking my times in school and work, plus when I add text on the computer, if I had worked the chapters of NROTU with pencil, at this time, I would be still working on chapter 9 lol

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How about some classics? A quick done short to please the angry plot bunnies. for now...
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Random, I know.
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>.>

<.<

Yoda: Vita
Obi Wan: Signum
Leia (or however you spell donut hair's name): Nanoha
Han Solo: Hayate
Chewbaka: Zaffy

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So that makes Luke = Fate?
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Actually Alicia should be Leia and Nanoha Should Mara Jade
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Yes! Zafira totally fits Chewbaka's role!
So the updated list would be:

Yoda: Vita
Obi Wan: Signum
Leia: Alicia
Han Solo: Hayate
Chewbaka: Zaffy
R2D2: Reinforce
C3PO: Agito
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...Palpatine = Precia?
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@markesellus
Leia: Alicia
Han Solo: Hayate

So that would make it a HayateAlicia or for TSS HayateNanoha?

By "Reinforce" do you mean I or II?
O.O!

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Old 2008-11-17, 01:06   Link #11022
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Now we've got a logo we just need Kai to write it.

@Kai: I don't think we're helping your plot bunnies.
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Old 2008-11-17, 03:40   Link #11023
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I want to put links to my OCs in my sig, should i just go back an endlessly edit one of my old posts or will i have to put a new post in the OC thread?
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Old 2008-11-17, 03:50   Link #11024
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Nice AX...
...now my turn.

"I am all that is. I am all that is not. Everything dances to what I command it to. I am the Dweller of Darkness, the Color out of Space, the Watcher in the Mist.
Who am I? I am Deathwing... Deathwing the DESTROYER!

"And she...? She is my Aspect. She is my daughter. She is... Keroko Georashi."

Black Order Chronicle: Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha - Chapter 00: Watashi Wa...
Keroko Georashi

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4507818/...he_Black_Order

Note: That link might die soon. If it does, I will relink.
Beta'd by no one yet cause Tempest is busy.

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I liked hearing Keroko's history, looking forward to how your going to weave this into the main timeline.
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Old 2008-11-17, 04:52   Link #11025
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I want to put links to my OCs in my sig, should i just go back an endlessly edit one of my old posts or will i have to put a new post in the OC thread?
Anything you like, but OCs belong to the OC thread and not the fanfiction thread. Unless you've fic written about OCs, but then it can still stay in OC thread...
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Old 2008-11-17, 06:41   Link #11026
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I want to put links to my OCs in my sig, should i just go back an endlessly edit one of my old posts or will i have to put a new post in the OC thread?
Either make a new post in OCT/FFT, it doesn't really matter, unless you want them analyzed, then OCT is your choice. However, you say that they are old and then I presume they have already gone through the initial busting.

Either way, make a new post if you don't want to spend endless hours looking for your original post.
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Anything you like, but OCs belong to the OC thread and not the fanfiction thread. Unless you've fic written about OCs, but then it can still stay in OC thread...
Not necessarily. The OCT is, imo (concerning OC's), for haxxbusting and the more technical aspects of characters.
Posting OC's in FFT is to my knowledge perfectly acceptable if they add to the story and the author wants to introduce them or add more information relevant to the readers.
That's what I currently do with my Reapers or HAVOC (which I consider an OC actually.)
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Old 2008-11-17, 06:57   Link #11027
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Either make a new post in OCT/FFT, it doesn't really matter, unless you want them analyzed, then OCT is your choice. However, you say that they are old and then I presume they have already gone through the initial busting.

Either way, make a new post if you don't want to spend endless hours looking for your original post.
I'm with Atomic on this one. If you cannot find your character on the index in the OC thread, just repost them. However, if they are fresh characters and you feel that they may or may not sit within the Nanoha-verse well, then post it in the OC thread instead so that they can take a look at your character and give it a thorough review and give their opinion on the characters.

Otherwise, just post it here.

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Anything you like, but OCs belong to the OC thread and not the fanfiction thread. Unless you've fic written about OCs, but then it can still stay in OC thread...
Not necessarily. It can go in either thread, except that it's preferred in OC because then that's were all the character-busters are who actually take characters and disassemble them for any kinks or errors that shouldn't be there and the like.

As far as I'm concerned, they can be on here if the posters want to do it. Just as as long as it's a reasonably balanced character that won't have everyone freaking out or something or another.
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Old 2008-11-17, 07:33   Link #11028
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Not necessarily. The OCT is, imo (concerning OC's), for haxxbusting and the more technical aspects of characters.
Posting OC's in FFT is to my knowledge perfectly acceptable if they add to the story and the author wants to introduce them or add more information relevant to the readers.
That's what I currently do with my Reapers or HAVOC (which I consider an OC actually.)
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Not necessarily. It can go in either thread, except that it's preferred in OC because then that's were all the character-busters are who actually take characters and disassemble them for any kinks or errors that shouldn't be there and the like.

As far as I'm concerned, they can be on here if the posters want to do it. Just as as long as it's a reasonably balanced character that won't have everyone freaking out or something or another.
Yea, I'm not saying that OC-related stuff belong only to OC thread. After all, PS!Vivio and Kagerou's Black Order fics both include OCs. Fics including or focusing on OCs in the FFT are fine to me.

Though, I do think OC profiles all belong to OCT, and not on FFT. Putting them here would undermine OCT's existence.

If my opinion matters to you, that is.
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Old 2008-11-17, 12:10   Link #11029
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Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.41:
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Old 2008-11-17, 12:41   Link #11030
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I want to put links to my OCs in my sig, should i just go back an endlessly edit one of my old posts or will i have to put a new post in the OC thread?
Yes, you can put the link to your OCs and works under your sig, many people does that
But I sugets you to make the oficial post to link in the OC thread

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Well.... so Vivio dicided to invite her uh?

Thing are turning into a very interesting way O.o!
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Old 2008-11-17, 13:15   Link #11031
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Well after lurking moar since about page 300 I thought I'd attempt to contribute something to the thread.

I got lured here originally by Satashi waxing lyrical about the wonders of this forum and this thread on Fanfiction.net (there's another story regarding how I found out about Satashi's fanfics ) and decided to investigate and since then I've spent many a day at work trawling the thread in search of new shiny things.

I'm not going to attempt a review of the last 250 pages so you can breathe a sigh of relief.

I also bring my first fanfic attempt ever.

It's a bit dark and probably cliched so be aware.

Spoiler for Loss:


If anyone wants to R&R it would be greatly appreciated, I don't think it's that good but it'd be nice to know what I can improve.
You came here because of me? XD that's spiffy. Come to our chatroom sometime too, hte link's under my signature. ^_^ Welcome to the thread.

Tasty angst as well. Keroko will love you for sure. ^_^ pretty well written as well.

Sorry for my lack of presence lately. WoW and all :3 I'm only level 74 >.< I have a whiles to go. Also college starts December 1st so that'll kill my time as well. *sighs* oh well, incoming PS!Vivio
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Old 2008-11-17, 13:53   Link #11032
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Spoiler for Previously:
Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.41:
Wise words from Elena. I like how she tried to get Syn to dress up. Good chapter to see where Syn is at in this whole ordeal and how she's slowly accepting it. She said it herself, she likes Vivio as a person, and she doesn't have the same 'look' in her eyes in the videos. Well we'll see what happens at the strip club...if Syn can even find her way there.
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Old 2008-11-17, 14:01   Link #11033
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Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.42 (this one is very NSFW. STill AS safe, but NSFW.:

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Old 2008-11-17, 14:18   Link #11034
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Second last paragraph, last two sentences, change to active. They'll sound better.
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Old 2008-11-17, 14:57   Link #11035
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Ok Ok here is what i think ok not thinking here, i am out of words once again, Satashi i guess you did send my bain cells away, lolz kidding.

If that happen i won't able to focuse on my exam tomorrow, well i have to go to sleep, see ya.

and Satashi you are ROCK. ^-^
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Old 2008-11-17, 16:15   Link #11036
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Second last paragraph, last two sentences, change to active. They'll sound better.
Done.

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Ok Ok here is what i think ok not thinking here, i am out of words once again, Satashi i guess you did send my bain cells away, lolz kidding.

If that happen i won't able to focuse on my exam tomorrow, well i have to go to sleep, see ya.

and Satashi you are ROCK. ^-^
XD thank you ^_^
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Old 2008-11-17, 17:27   Link #11037
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Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.41:
'I'm... a little bit aroused but... at the same time I'm not... Vivio doesn't... have that look in her eyes that I'm so used to seeing...'

This may be the best line of the entire story so far. This is, after all, the entire point that Syn and Vivio's relationship depends on. If it's the emotional tie that's ultimately significant, then they're all right. If it's the physical act that marks Syn's emotional line in the sand, then they've got problems--but at least Syn is now seeing for herself that there really is a difference between those two things. Syn's mom, intriguingly, seems to be on Vivio's side in this, maybe because she really does understand and maybe just because she could see how happy Syn was during that time.

It makes me wonder just how knowing that Syn is in the audience will affect Vivio's "private shows" at Peaches...
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Old 2008-11-17, 17:29   Link #11038
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...Palpatine = Precia?
Wouldn't that spiral into some weird Palpatine (Precia) = Luke (Fate's) Mother? Precia should be Padme. Then we can have JailXPrecia!

I always thought Hayate being far more suitable for Palpatine's role. Controlling the Republic (TSAB), issuing a clone (cyborg) army, all just to finish her evil mastermind plan of creating her Empire (Harem). Yet then we're left without Han Solo... Nevermind.

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O.O!

Do you mind if I borrow this a little?
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Now we've got a logo we just need Kai to write it.

@Kai: I don't think we're helping your plot bunnies.
Not at all.
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Spoiler for PornStar!Vivio pt.42 (this one is very NSFW. STill AS safe, but NSFW.:
I'm not exactly sure what to say about this part. Syn actually gets to see more of Vivio's profession and she seems to be enjoying herself for the time being. Yet there is something about the whole atmosphere that makes me believe that it won't be continuously smooth sailing from now on. Nothing comes out of speculationg, so I can't wait to see the next part out.
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Old 2008-11-17, 17:44   Link #11039
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Wouldn't that spiral into some weird Palpatine (Precia) = Luke (Fate's) Mother? Precia should be Padme. Then we can have JailXPrecia!

I always thought Hayate being far more suitable for Palpatine's role. Controlling the Republic (TSAB), issuing a clone (cyborg) army, all just to finish her evil mastermind plan of creating her Empire (Harem). Yet then we're left without Han Solo... Nevermind.

Precia=Padme works perfectly, since not only were both Jail and Precia responsible for creating Fate, but apparently before Alicia's death Precia wasn't the complete nutjob we all know and want to shove a scythe through.

I vote for Regius Gaiz as Palpatine. Not only was he (with the Council) behind the funding of Jail Scaglietti/Vader, but I believe the StrikerS-edition Jail was actually cloned at the behest of Gaiz and the Council, completing the metaphor for Palpatine seducing Anakin to the Dark Side...And if you ignore the Expanded Universe stuff, then Vader turning on Palpatine in Return of the Jedi parallels Jail turning Zest and Due loose on Gaiz, although from considerably less pleasant motives.
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Old 2008-11-17, 18:38   Link #11040
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Hows this

Jail = Emperor
Precia = Vader
Alicia = Luke
Fate = Leia
Nanoha = Han Solo
Yunno = Lando
Regius = Grand Moff Tarkin
Numbers = Imperial Guard
Chrono = Admiral Ackbar
Rein II = C-3PO
Agito = R2-D2
Hayate = Wedge Antilies
Zafira = Chewbacca

Tell me what you think.
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