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Old 2009-01-01, 22:07   Link #1
Yumi Chan
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My Story's

Hello. I have made these storys. I did NOT make the picture's though. By the way if it is bad, in your post,just post the positive things. i hope you Enjoy! Oh also, i will update some post's once in a while.^^

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Spoiler for Part 2:
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Old 2009-01-01, 23:05   Link #2
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This is interesting. I'd like to see more of it.
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Old 2009-01-03, 22:25   Link #3
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Please Rate!

Ok people. all people that veiw,please just read and rate. you don't need to post it. but you can read it at least. so please rate and read.
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Old 2009-01-03, 23:41   Link #4
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I was bored and started reading this; I think the story's okay. Though I think there should be some things you should try to improve, like developing it more. I mean, like instead of saying "Amanda and Kimmy are good friends." you should use "Amanda and Kimmy are good friends. They've been friends since they were 2 years old." or something. And btw, the note that was left by Mrs. April, why was it directed to *just* Amanda and not the rest of the classroom too?

Oh yeah, instead of using the three options the poll has, why don't you make it like ranting it from 1 to 10? I think it'd be better. And sorry for all the criticism Keep on writing!
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Old 2009-01-08, 03:13   Link #5
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hahaha what a nice cute story. I'm liking it, but I won't rate it yet, i'm going to wait how it turns out.

read mine too! in my signature!
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Old 2009-01-17, 18:42   Link #6
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So far so good! i can't wait untill the next chapter
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Old 2009-01-18, 20:27   Link #7
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Keep 'em coming.
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Old 2009-01-29, 19:45   Link #8
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Im still thinking 4 part 3..... keep writing though!
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