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Old 2009-01-11, 05:36   Link #1
Kohei_R
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Anime origination and strawberry sweetness [drawings and CGs]

I decided to make a serious thread with all my pieces instead of randomnly posting every x time.

This is my latest. I'll keep updating this post/thread from now on. The other threads can be deleted. Thanks and sorry for the trouble

1)
Once again, a new drawing and CG of mine:



http://road-safety.deviantart.com/ar...etch-112141380
http://road-safety.deviantart.com/ar...etch-112141380
http://road-safety.deviantart.com/ar...etch-112141380

^ Full view please



http://road-safety.deviantart.com/ar...l-DP-112141629
http://road-safety.deviantart.com/ar...l-DP-112141629
http://road-safety.deviantart.com/ar...l-DP-112141629
^ Full view please


Constructive criticism and plain opinions are greatly welcomed

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2) This drawing and dp came out directly from my mind and from the love I hold towards ARIA.



and the digital painted piece:


http://road-safety.deviantart.com/ar...i-DP-109114810
http://road-safety.deviantart.com/ar...i-DP-109114810
http://road-safety.deviantart.com/ar...i-DP-109114810
http://road-safety.deviantart.com/ar...i-DP-109114810

Full view is greatly encouraged and recommended.


Feedback is welcomed here and in dA

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Old 2009-02-07, 19:47   Link #2
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Sorry for the double post, but I added a new piece at the top and if I didn't post it would remain unnoticed.

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Old 2009-02-08, 17:08   Link #3
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Not a single reply?

Awwww ;_;
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Old 2009-02-08, 19:58   Link #4
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Your drawings are good but the colors seem out of place... but who knows i'm not an Artsy person

The backgrounds look good and the blonde girl reminds me of somebody from an anime but i can't figure it out

Hair looks like it needs a little more lighting
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Old 2009-02-12, 17:24   Link #5
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Thanks for your input. I shall work on what you've highlighted

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The backgrounds look good and the blonde girl reminds me of somebody from an anime but i can't figure it out
Click on the link to see the details about the piece. The name is over there.
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Old 2009-02-14, 14:40   Link #6
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In the first image most of the lines are parallel which it shouldn't be since all lines will be going to the vanishing point. The space between the lines will get smaller whilst yours aren't. Also your coloring are very vivid I guess it can be consider a style but, in yours it looks like you have trouble with light and color. To simplify things, think of dark,medium, light and highlight obviously your dark will be your darkest tone and highlight will be your lightest tone and know your light source (one is probably the best to start; two can work but can be very complicated) Try to saturate your colors a bit more. Following traditional rules, as things moves farther away from you it gets lighter and less detail and, as things move closer it gets darker and more detailed.

Also your last one, Akari looks REALLY short. If you bring their legs down to where they are they are standing on same axis/plane. Push Akari further into the background so it doesn't look like Akari is standing in a hole.

Keep at it.
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Old 2009-02-14, 16:39   Link #7
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Well, to tell you the truth I prefer the rough drawings over the colored ones. I like to watch at the sketch as it gives off a nice feel of what the artist went through to create his work That's my general preference so you don't have to worry a thing.

Anyway, nice work. As my predecessor said, the background character is a bit too short for this perspective. I like how you draw though, keep it up
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Old 2009-02-14, 16:59   Link #8
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i dont watch aria, and most people commented on that so i'm going to talk about your #1.
The girl in kimono.

First there are some anatomical problems present.
Its the hardest part of human body, the hand. I wouldn't nitpick it so much, but in this case the girls' right arm is stretched out.

The hand kinda stands out in that brown wood in the back (not sure what that is)
2 choices
a. kill the contrast b/w the hand and the wood
b. fix the hand (recommended)

next thing, the legs. individually they are done pretty well, but the crus and the thigh doesnt match in terms of proportion, i would definitely make the thighs thinner.

If you need reference try the character profile of Clamp's code geass. they are done very well imo.
screenshots are not the best as they drop and rise in terms of quality.
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Old 2009-02-14, 17:02   Link #9
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Nice, but I've seen these on AF before. Are they from the same person?
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