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Old 2003-11-23, 22:26   Link #1
Tzurial
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I share with you

A character in one of my stories. She has no background though... Oh white void how you haunt me so!



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Old 2003-11-23, 22:27   Link #2
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lol its not really my thing if ya know what i mean but its still good artwork noneoftheless! well done ^_^
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Old 2003-11-23, 22:41   Link #3
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Nice drawing but she's one girl I don't want to see naked.
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Old 2003-11-24, 00:35   Link #4
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well, since u asked..., maybe can work a bit on the feminine side? the face that is... just a little bit.
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Old 2003-11-24, 03:30   Link #5
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face is scary rest is good ....erh face is so disturbing
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Old 2003-11-24, 05:14   Link #6
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Anyone else see the movie Flashdance?
Cause it sure seems like he tried to put that girl into anime form. As far as comments go, i agree with everyone else.
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Old 2003-11-24, 08:30   Link #7
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The CGing is pretty nice, but fix the body a bit.
Face:Make the nose smaller. It also needs to go a little more upwards. Make the chin a bit more pointy. It's too long and round and makes her look more like a guy.
Body:Left arm looks a bit longer then right arm. Try to make her breasts a bit bigger as well. Just so it's more noticable. She looks way too flat.

I'm not sure if you were trying to make her look like a guy, but her face mostly is what gives her this image. I thought she was a guy until someone pointed out otherwise.
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Old 2003-11-24, 09:05   Link #8
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Quite nice! Hmm, but izzit possible if you fix her face a little? It looks a little weird though.
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Old 2003-11-25, 02:22   Link #9
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Ehm, I can't say I agree with people wanting you to change the face. It's nice to see someone doing something different instead of just copying from their favourite anime or manga. Keep developing your own style and you'll be so much the better for it.
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Old 2003-11-25, 02:39   Link #10
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Thanks for my manly chin style support teapad ;_;
and everyone! Ill work harder to make my faces not so sordid! Look forward to my heroics!
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Old 2003-11-25, 09:40   Link #11
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lol man that girl is uglyyyyyyyyyyyyy kinda makes my potrait of my girlfriend look good ahhahaha. Anyways nice job on the cg and the body isnt too bad. The face is too long and inside curvy and the eye pops out of the head on the left ewwwwww and the nose.... anyways Im shure you'll get a more femine style soon enough.
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Old 2003-11-25, 12:07   Link #12
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Old 2003-11-25, 18:01   Link #13
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Hmm, so did you do this on purpose?
I'm guessing you draw a lot more guys yes? This isn't a bad thing either though.
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Old 2003-11-25, 19:23   Link #14
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Nice drawing although she doesnt look to apealing...
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Old 2003-11-26, 09:35   Link #15
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change the face..... if its possible, its too good body for this girl
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