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Old 2009-01-15, 17:35   Link #1
Lord Uiruu
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Question PSEUDO! my manga!

Yamada Shiro... a high school sophomore. When Kajiroku Kuro, Chishizaru "Spitfire" Yasugun, O'Neill, and Azakura show up as new students in Shiro's grade, things get hectic. His teacher, Mr. Octavius, gives every student a present for student appreciation week. Shiro gets a bandana with a weird star symbol......

The bandana contains the ancient spirit of a former Shinigami King Kar'zik' Mak'shuk'u. Kar'zik' is the true identity of Mr. Octavius. When he reveals that, he tells Shiro about the bandana. From then on, Shiro becomes a warrior. He is able to transform into a Fake Shinigami, a half-human half-shinigami! He has dual swords which hold immense power......

The Fake Demigods, half-human half-demigods(demigods are almost gods) are plotting to take over Earth, as their world is destabilizing. Kuro, Spitfire, O'Neill, and Azakura are all Fake Demigods. Apparently, they had no idea about this plot and become the allies of Shiro.
Shiro's older brother Yamada Saru is a general in their army! And later on, his mom, Yamada Aomizu, is revealed to be too! His father is an Orclaw, a monster-orca being who dont come into play until later............................................. .........
As it turns out, Azakura is only a footsoldier in their ranks, along with Kuro and Spitfire. But! O'Neill is also a general! He joins the enemy's side!

dont feel like writing anything else yet. feedback!
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Old 2009-01-15, 22:49   Link #2
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The main character's intro into the story feels kinda generic, but I like the story so far. It's actually one that I think could end up being closer to my liking in genre compared to the other manga development ideas starting to sprout here.

Out of curiosity, do u have an idea about the star symbol yet? You said it was a weird one, so it sounds like this could be a logo or icon to the story. A recognizeable icon is always good for a story/series (especially in commercialism lol).

I look forward to where this one goes :3
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Old 2009-01-15, 23:09   Link #3
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So far, a bit bareboned with the sitch of school activity, and character development. This is a good start for a rough idea. Final product should be more descriptive, and more twists/turns and anti-clamax moments to trick the readers.

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Old 2009-01-16, 17:45   Link #4
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The main character's intro into the story feels kinda generic, but I like the story so far. It's actually one that I think could end up being closer to my liking in genre compared to the other manga development ideas starting to sprout here.

Out of curiosity, do u have an idea about the star symbol yet? You said it was a weird one, so it sounds like this could be a logo or icon to the story. A recognizeable icon is always good for a story/series (especially in commercialism lol).

I look forward to where this one goes :3
yea i got a symbol design. I'll make an album for stuff like that.....
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Old 2009-01-16, 17:47   Link #5
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So far, a bit bareboned with the sitch of school activity, and character development. This is a good start for a rough idea. Final product should be more descriptive, and more twists/turns and anti-clamax moments to trick the readers.

etc...
and... it is! I gots an ellaborate cliffhanger... but im too lazy to right it here lolz
sorry if that wasnt very good... but if only i could show you the caharacter designs and the entire plot....
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Old 2009-04-03, 15:43   Link #6
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so you mean to say you cant?
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