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Old 2009-08-01, 14:48   Link #81
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But... what makes her cry like this?

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Old 2009-08-01, 16:46   Link #82
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If I remember right, that Konata pic was titled 'tears of joy' or something to that effect. >_>
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Old 2009-08-01, 18:15   Link #83
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Oh I thought it more of "tears of anguish"

Probably when she will miss her chance at winning "Haruhi Suzumiya prizes" or something
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Old 2009-08-01, 18:17   Link #84
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lol. Yeah, I think I used that pic in a topic on another board that asked for Konata's reaction to Bamboo Leaf Rhapsody airing. That's the only reason I remember. Seems like so long ago...
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Old 2009-08-01, 19:49   Link #85
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it makes me want to ask a list of what makes her cry.

But then all the reasons that people will probably write are Suzumiya related.
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Old 2009-08-02, 02:24   Link #86
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With tears like that, it has to be something related to Kagami.
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Old 2009-08-04, 03:18   Link #87
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Ugh, the current chapter I'm working on is going to be the death me. At the rate it's going at, it'll be the longest chapter I've ever written (Current record is 14,500 words). I'll do it though. I know my readers want to see that mud wrestling scene badly. :P
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Old 2009-08-04, 17:44   Link #88
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I liked that fanfic. Especially where Haruhi was kissing Kyon (too bad it wasn't dee-).

"Damn you, Haruhi..."
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Old 2009-08-04, 19:42   Link #89
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. "With 422 reviews, it better not suck." That's what I say.
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Old 2009-08-06, 14:14   Link #90
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Ugh, the current chapter I'm working on is going to be the death me. At the rate it's going at, it'll be the longest chapter I've ever written (Current record is 14,500 words). I'll do it though. I know my readers want to see that mud wrestling scene badly. :P
Damn.

I mean, writing 6000 words alone would drive me crazy. Wish I had your kind of motivational drive.
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Old 2009-08-06, 16:00   Link #91
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What do you think Tsukasa will say to Haruhi if Haruhi made her join the SOS Brigade (after saving her from some otaku [who thought she was To Heart's Kagimishi] using 'fists of fury' and 'hurricane kick')?
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Old 2009-08-06, 16:45   Link #92
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I liked that fanfic. Especially where Haruhi was kissing Kyon (too bad it wasn't dee-).

"Damn you, Haruhi..."
I loved that scene and I love this fic. It has my favorite pairing.
Keep up the good work Jon. It's the best Haruhi fic I've read.
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Old 2009-08-06, 17:29   Link #93
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it seems sleep walking is no longer Naru's problem.... (I would expect her to visit Kyon every night or something XD). Naru/Kyon

Haruhi's reaction: O_O

*Warning! The world is about to end.*
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Old 2009-08-06, 22:40   Link #94
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I've been thinking of splitting this chapter into two, but I'm afraid that might piss my readers off. If i did, this chapter would be about 11,000 words long and the second would be between 6000 and 7000. What do you guys think? Should I do it? If I don't, it'll be another week before the (rediculously long) chapter is posted.
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Old 2009-08-06, 22:51   Link #95
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I've been thinking of splitting this chapter into two, but I'm afraid that might piss my readers off. If i did, this chapter would be about 11,000 words long and the second would be between 6000 and 7000. What do you guys think? Should I do it? If I don't, it'll be another week before the (rediculously long) chapter is posted.
I'd go for splitting it, but then again, I've only done oneshots.

There's no way you can piss off the readers. Unless you delay the mud wrestling scene for longer than the "second season", or unless you can whip up something more annoying and repetitive than Endless Eight minus the awesome ending, everyone for the most part will be happy. There's always going to be someone bitching about something, though with this story it'd be hard to find something to complain about.

If you're sure that the first part of the currently massive, unsplit chapter is done and won't need to be polished or edited too much, then I'd say go for it. That might just be me being greedy and wanting to read more without having to wait, though.
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Old 2009-08-06, 23:00   Link #96
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I'm thinking you should scrap it and make every chapter a time loop of the kissing scene. Haruhi would have wanted it that way.


I mean, yeah split it.
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Old 2009-08-06, 23:51   Link #97
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Earth Star has added a chapter to History Lessons...

Highlights: a seance, Kyon listening to his father, and Koizumi scared sh**less!
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Old 2009-08-07, 05:44   Link #98
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I've been thinking of splitting this chapter into two, but I'm afraid that might piss my readers off. If i did, this chapter would be about 11,000 words long and the second would be between 6000 and 7000. What do you guys think? Should I do it? If I don't, it'll be another week before the (rediculously long) chapter is posted.
Trust me, I wouldn't think you would be irritating readers if you split it in half. You've been pretty good when it came to updating compared to others. (I am guilty for my bad update status) I've split a chapter in two before, and sometimes it is better. And I think it works if you can find a good point to stop or set up some suspense.

I already think 10k words is really big, so you might want to cut this down. Reading 13k or more I'd say sort of turns reading the fanfic into a chore because there's soooooooo much to cover. You may have posted a chapter that big before, but you should think about how it looks from the reader's perspective.
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Old 2009-08-07, 16:36   Link #99
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Thanks guys. I appreciate it! Chapter will be up soon!
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Old 2009-08-08, 19:32   Link #100
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Tsuruya-san leaned into Haruhi’s and spoke coyly. “You know, even if they’re not as big as Mikuru-chan’s, your rack is still awesome, nyoro~.”
I lol'd hard at this XD think I broke my hands...
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