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Old 2009-10-08, 12:38   Link #221
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Well, the duel between Kallen and the Merlin will be more long and heavy, not the same "one hit-kallen out" of the first version.

The Merlin is totally changed too.
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Old 2009-10-11, 09:11   Link #222
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Finally, chapter 23 return with a lot of corrections, consider it, now it's more long of three pages and thanks to nobodyman9 and Mazryohn, with a good english translation.
the storyboard changed a little too, please read and good fun!

http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...t/23-01eng.jpg
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Old 2009-10-11, 12:25   Link #223
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Yep, this is getting better and better. I'm glad you put in my reference to the incident where Lelouch made everyone dress up as Zero.

Have you tried finding a colourist to make some of your works full-colour? Some of the very best Code Geass doujinshi are full-colour, and done right it could really work. Here's one of the best I know:

http://www.nattoli.net/entry/9/noise...90%E6%9C%88%29
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Old 2009-10-11, 12:47   Link #224
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The problem is...I hate computers.
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Old 2009-10-11, 13:22   Link #225
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Heh, got some problems with your own computer or scanner over there? I would like to see the OVA get completed.
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Old 2009-10-11, 13:41   Link #226
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NO, I hate computers about to draw, to color, etc...I make everything using my hands, nobody teach how to use photoshop, etc...

And I haven't time to make trial, experiment and learn by myself.
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Old 2009-10-14, 19:01   Link #227
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Turn 24 restyle started, page 1 done already.
Maybe the job will be more fast in comparison with Turn 23.
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Old 2009-10-15, 21:55   Link #228
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Instead this is a preview about the restyle of chapter 24:

Before:
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...a_ht/R2R31.JPG

And after:
http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...ta_ht/24-3.JPG

If you see, I gived to Jeremiah a more kick-ass action.
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Old 2009-10-17, 22:53   Link #229
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At least with Manga you don't have to redraw a complicated design 12 times a second, or have to spend lots of budget changing camera angles in an animated action scene. Looks better, although the "20% zoom" might make more sense if it were scene through the camera of a Knightmare Frame or even the security cameras of the Damocles.
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Old 2009-10-18, 01:30   Link #230
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It's a 20X zoom from Merlin's cockpit.
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Old 2009-10-18, 01:32   Link #231
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Okay, a new artwork.
Kallen and her happiness, I draw her with (in my opinion) the best expression for to show the past pain united with her present greatest happiness.

Spoiler for Size:
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Old 2009-10-22, 16:53   Link #232
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Another preview about Turn 24 restyle:

http://sabrinaonline.altervista.org/...ta_ht/24-6.JPG
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Old 2009-11-02, 14:16   Link #233
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knightmare battle fixed, the bigger part of turn 24 restyle is done.
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Old 2009-11-15, 22:33   Link #234
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I'm fixing the ending of chp.24.
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Old 2009-11-23, 11:25   Link #235
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So, how did the customers who bought your doujin at the convention like it? Were you able to sell them at 50 Euros each? Find anyone willing to use photoshop to colour in your stuff so it's like watching the anime again?

Quality like yours deserves to be more well-known.
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Old 2009-11-23, 14:53   Link #236
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I can't sell the doujin, Code Geass is a anime with a licence, Sunrise leave me alone because I put it for a free read.

For the rest, the chapter 24 art is complete, Just fix the text.
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Old 2009-11-25, 22:38   Link #237
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Then I can't imagine what legal exceptions there are that allow the enormous doujinshi market in Japan to flourish.

If someone fluent in Japanese helped translate your works into Japanese as well as colourizing them, I wonder how popular you'd end up being. Doujin artists in Japan can end up being pretty famous and profitable in their own right.
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Old 2009-11-25, 23:42   Link #238
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You right, but I'm not japanese, this is the problem, like Italian, I'm a intruder for them.
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Old 2009-11-25, 23:54   Link #239
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You right, but I'm not japanese, this is the problem, like Italian, I'm a intruder for them.
Eh, don't worry, they're pretty xenophobic about everyone. Heck, I'm American. I still think they feel some underlying hostility towards us

But yeah, that doujinshi market does make me wonder. Oh well, lookin' forward to the new Chapter 24 bonzo!
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Old 2009-11-26, 00:38   Link #240
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The doujin merchandise is very particoular in Japan too.
Doujinshi selling is permitted, but just inside a special convention made on purpose for that kind of manga, the Comiket.
Otherwise the doujinshi are illegal in japan too, because always a copyright plagiarism.

Then, after the comiket you can find doujinshi just in the web in place like ebay or yahoo (if you want buy them).

About the rest, the japanese people think they're the only deserving to draw manga, becuase they created the manga.
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