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Old 2009-10-21, 01:28   Link #261
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Esp; the animatio n is great but the spooky factor is quite missing; I know than she is a vampire bit it's isn"t showing much o this picture. I am not sur e than it would be enought but adding some blood on the ground might help.
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Old 2009-10-21, 05:12   Link #262
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Taken the suggestions into reality:


v2

- Fixed colour, levels
- Added glowing red vampire eyes, some blood
- Added blur to the non light area
- Made it darker to give it a true night feeling


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Old 2009-10-21, 07:28   Link #263
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Esp I prefer version2 but it's much scary. I did saw the glowing eyes on the dark only because I was searching for the glow. For the darkening of the the non-illuminated area, is it possible than you did it too much? something betweem v1 and v2 would look more natural.
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Old 2009-10-21, 07:31   Link #264
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Old 2009-10-21, 09:06   Link #265
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Also, version 1.5!



- Balanced the brightness
- Removed some unnecessary blur
- Slighty fixed colours


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Should be something between v1 and v2. *stares at ganbaru* Well, anything else?
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Old 2009-10-21, 17:31   Link #266
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Esp I prefer V15, the lightning is more realistic. The only disavantage is than it tonned down the ''glowing red eyes''.
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Old 2009-10-21, 21:46   Link #267
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@Eps - I prefer this version for more spooky feeling... plus the glowing eyes in there is really cool ^^

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Old 2009-10-22, 00:45   Link #268
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@Eps - I prefer this version for more spooky feeling... plus the glowing eyes in there is really cool ^^

I also think this version is more "spooky." Technically version 1.5 has the best lighting, but what are we going for here, spookiness or realism? I know that my vote will go to the entries that will best fit the theme, which are the spookiest ones.
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Old 2009-10-22, 00:47   Link #269
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Now this is spooky.
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Old 2009-10-22, 10:28   Link #270
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Since it's getting close to the final date, I might as well submit it as my final entry.

Final entry:



- Made adjustments from v1.5 to look more like v2
- You might call it v1.75
- Darker setting and the eyes are glowing fiercer
- I'm getting seasick from looking at the swinging lamp




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Old 2009-10-23, 01:07   Link #271
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Applied the suggestions for the light, so here's version...3?





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I know I'm calling it close to the deadline but which one looks good? C&C?
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Old 2009-10-23, 03:15   Link #272
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Applied the suggestions for the light, so here's version...3?

FINAL ENTRY (...just in case. )



I know I'm calling it close to the deadline but which one looks good? C&C?
This one, looks more natural. It's perfect.
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Old 2009-10-23, 03:39   Link #273
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Applied the suggestions for the light, so here's version...3?

FINAL ENTRY (...just in case. )


I think it's a nice entry. In my opinion though, the flickering candles are quite distracting of some sort. An easy fix would be for the candles to glow and dim more slowly. While this reduces realism, it actually works in favor of the theme. I would like most to focus on the ghost, which was what made your static version so spooky.
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Old 2009-10-23, 04:12   Link #274
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PreSage I would say than your latest look the best. The animation look better on this one, but like KholdStare said it's getting more attention than the ghost.
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Old 2009-10-23, 06:48   Link #275
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I was afraid the flashing light would divert too much attention. Well, I toned the intensity of the lights down a bit and slowed the flashing down. This is it. No more tweaking. >_<; Thanks for all the help everyone! And good luck to all!

FINAL ENTRY
v4





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Old 2009-10-23, 15:51   Link #276
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It looks much better. Good job!
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Old 2009-10-23, 22:45   Link #277
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Final Entry list.
  1. SweetHoney


  2. katiemirmo


  3. Miko Miko


  4. Raiga


  5. ganbaru


  6. ayu-smepai


  7. Baka-man


  8. Larthak


  9. KholdStare


  10. vandakiara


  11. White Manju Bun


  12. Soul-Stealer


  13. Evil Rick


  14. LKK


  15. JRendell


  16. Hakuryu


  17. Katocchi


  18. Risa chan


  19. Drake


  20. Endrance


  21. Pellissier


  22. capture


  23. Eps~


  24. PreSage




  25. KiNA


Entry phase closed. Wait for Solace for voting thread. Have fun guys and good job ^^ .. Check out the last 7 for horror animation battles
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