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Old 2009-12-13, 04:38   Link #21041
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Which ones? On the color pages of Vivid ch 1, it looks like a pale shade of metalic green to me, So silver-green would be how I'd put it. But just silver? Doesn't fit to me.
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Old 2009-12-13, 05:52   Link #21042
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SHINY THAT IS TOO MUCH CRACK ARGH!!!

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Old 2009-12-13, 06:54   Link #21043
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@ Nanya and RB's "Day In The Life" Omake: Lovely work from the two of you as usual. Just wondering, though, exactly how far into the future does the omake take place?

@ Shiny's "Force?!": Did I ever tell you how much I love you? That was brilliant as always.
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Old 2009-12-13, 12:39   Link #21044
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Old 2009-12-13, 13:35   Link #21045
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Well, this isn't a complete 2nd chapter yet...

But...

It's time for more Time Loops.

The ice skating match you were waiting for!

Plus, I threw a Gunbuster reference into the chapter!

Spoiler for Numbers in Nerima:
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Old 2009-12-13, 13:48   Link #21046
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Well, this isn't a complete 2nd chapter yet...

But...

It's time for more Time Loops.

The ice skating match you were waiting for!

Plus, I threw a Gunbuster reference into the chapter!

Spoiler for Numbers in Nerima:
I like Nove! XD
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Old 2009-12-13, 13:58   Link #21047
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It's time.

You've been waiting with bated breathe for two months.


FORCE?! Chapter 3
What the Hell is a Huckebein?
http://www.mediafire.com/?z5md4mjthdn





How do you make jokes about dead nuns? DX

Previously on Force?!

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
No duct tape jokes from NotSquall? i are disappoint, Shiny.
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Old 2009-12-13, 14:19   Link #21048
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Oh, and before I forget...

@Raiser: My lurking buddy read some of what's going on with your series here in the FFT, and this was his two cents on what you could possibly use for Vivio and Yuuno:

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On the other hand, that would actually make for an interesting story idea all by itself. For example, if what drew Vivio and Yuuno to one another was, precisely, their intellectualism, because they're the kind of people who would rather curl up with a book than lose themselves in emotion, that the kind of emo-gushing-in-public that one expects from Young People In Love horrifies them (indeed, perhaps this is what draws Vivio towards older men in general?). You could actually make a very good story out of the disconnect between what they like about each other and what their friends and contemporaries think they like about each other (and a bit of slapstick comedy, too), and spiral out from there into things developing from that stage into real love.
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Old 2009-12-13, 14:45   Link #21049
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On the other hand, that would actually make for an interesting story idea all by itself. For example, if what drew Vivio and Yuuno to one another was, precisely, their intellectualism, because they're the kind of people who would rather curl up with a book than lose themselves in emotion, that the kind of emo-gushing-in-public that one expects from Young People In Love horrifies them (indeed, perhaps this is what draws Vivio towards older men in general?). You could actually make a very good story out of the disconnect between what they like about each other and what their friends and contemporaries think they like about each other (and a bit of slapstick comedy, too), and spiral out from there into things developing from that stage into real love.
Now that is a VERY good setup.

You could easily have them be a "couple" without actually having them as one. Much like Nanoha and Fate have in the series, there could be a closeness to them that would imply a romantic involvement but it isn't actually clear. On a busy day, Vivio might go to Yuuno's house to escape the "hustle and bustle" of her home life. Read books together, talk about something, ect.

Also I could see them going on "dates" as well. Vivio and Yuuno would love to talk and discuss things going on, and I'm sure Vivio would turn to him for help on any school project she has to do. While others see it as the two getting together and going out to eat on a date, they could see it as "a night well spent with someone who actually understands what I want to talk about" and such.

*paces*

The possibilities there are just about endless. misunderstandings often lead to the people who are misunderstood to take a step back and look at each other. That alone could make Vivio realize "what she wants" in a boyfriend, and then realize that she isn't getting that from the people her own age. Although she wouldn't instantly turn to Yuuno as a boyfriend, she most definetly would spend more time with him because "that's what makes her happy". In turn, the outsiders like Nanoha, Chrono, ect, would see it as a small cause for alarm that Vivio isn't living her "normal teenage life".

You could dance around it, without squicking any, for multiple chapters

Beamers, tell your friend that was an excellent observation :3
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Old 2009-12-13, 15:42   Link #21050
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It's been a while, but finally here's an update!

How Alicia died, what happened in the Jewel Seed fight after Fate left and the story of the First Black Angel...

ANGEL
Is second-best really good enough?

Spoiler for Angel, Chapter 8: Albatross Necklaces:

Spoiler for Author's Note:



Previous Parts:

Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7

Next chapter: Chips
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Old 2009-12-13, 16:04   Link #21051
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It's been a while, but finally here's an update!

How Alicia died, what happened in the Jewel Seed fight after Fate left and the story of the First Black Angel...

ANGEL
Is second-best really good enough?

Spoiler for Angel, Chapter 8: Albatross Necklaces:

Spoiler for Author's Note:



Previous Parts:

Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7

Next chapter: Chips
Crossover story! 8D

I kid, I kid.

Very nice. I have to say this is my favorite chapter so far. The Carim/Hayate scene is very well done, and I like the little mood whiplash at the end and how Carim doesn't even realize what she's doing. The background on the first Black Angel is much appreciated and clears up a lot of things, and nice changes to the Reinforce section; still manages to send a chill down my spine when I read it.

Update soon!
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Old 2009-12-13, 16:20   Link #21052
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The Carim/Hayate scene
Carim....Hayate...

Hayate.... Ha
Carim.... Rim...

couple name....
HARIM!? It all makes so much sense now! I must warn the others!

Hayate: Sa~ta~shi~
Sata: No! Stay Away! I have to tell Beamers who her real enemy is! *runs!*
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Old 2009-12-13, 16:23   Link #21053
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Carim is a General in Hayate's Lesbian Army.
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Old 2009-12-13, 16:27   Link #21054
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Carim....Hayate...

Hayate.... Ha
Carim.... Rim...

couple name....
HARIM!? It all makes so much sense now! I must warn the others!

Hayate: Sa~ta~shi~
Sata: No! Stay Away! I have to tell Beamers who her real enemy is! *runs!*
I...

I have a real enemy?
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Old 2009-12-13, 16:30   Link #21055
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I...

I have a real enemy?
Yeah, its Spinster!Vivio.

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Old 2009-12-13, 16:32   Link #21056
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Nun!Spinster!Vivio

Lutecia + Nanoha: It's the perfect job for you!

Vivio: ;A;
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Old 2009-12-13, 17:03   Link #21057
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Vivio: Lutecia... Nanoha-mama... I got the job.

Lutecia: Way to go Vivio!

Nanoha: Aw, Sweetie, I'm so proud of you! The church is such a great place for you!

Lutecia: You'll be with people who understand you!

Nanoha: and who respect you as a woman!

Vivio:No, not the church. There's a place downtown... called Peaches. I'm working there.

Fate: *looks up from her cooking of dinner* The strip club!?

Lutecia: you're working at a strip club!?

Nanoha:Why do you know it's a strip club, Fate-chan!?

Vivio:*points at Fate* that was you I saw the other night!?
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Old 2009-12-13, 17:08   Link #21058
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Vivio: Lutecia... Nanoha-mama... I got the job.

Lutecia: Way to go Vivio!

Nanoha: Aw, Sweetie, I'm so proud of you! The church is such a great place for you!

Lutecia: You'll be with people who understand you!

Nanoha: and who respect you as a woman!

Vivio:No, not the church. There's a place downtown... called Peaches. I'm working there.

Fate: *looks up from her cooking of dinner* The strip club!?

Lutecia: you're working at a strip club!?

Nanoha:Why do you know it's a strip club, Fate-chan!?

Vivio:*points at Fate* that was you I saw the other night!?

*nosebleeds*


I LOVE this!!!! Fate at a strip club and Vivio in it. WIN!!!!

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Old 2009-12-13, 17:10   Link #21059
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Vivio: Lutecia... Nanoha-mama... I got the job.

Lutecia: Way to go Vivio!

Nanoha: Aw, Sweetie, I'm so proud of you! The church is such a great place for you!

Lutecia: You'll be with people who understand you!

Nanoha: and who respect you as a woman!

Vivio:No, not the church. There's a place downtown... called Peaches. I'm working there.

Fate: *looks up from her cooking of dinner* The strip club!?

Lutecia: you're working at a strip club!?

Nanoha:Why do you know it's a strip club, Fate-chan!?

Vivio:*points at Fate* that was you I saw the other night!?
Fate: I assure you, Yuuno and I were there for strictly work related things.

Nanoha: Y-Yuuno was there too!

Lutecia: You mean Yuuno and a bunch of strangers have seen more of Vivio then I have!! *curls up in the corner*
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Old 2009-12-13, 17:12   Link #21060
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*nosebleeds*


I LOVE this!!!! Fate at a strip club and Vivio in it. WIN!!!!

I can just imagine Fate sitting down, ordering something to drink, and a girl comes over to her and straddles her lap in the dimly lit room...

Fate: Oh, hey there hottie.

Vivio: Hey sexy... *rocks* ready for a good time?

Fate:Oh yeah...

*lights come on after a dance ends*

Fate:...Vivio?

Vivio: Mama!?

*awkward silence*

Fate:*holds up a twenty-SHOT-*

[EDIT a la Shiny]

Yuuno: *sloooooowly sneaks away*
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