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Old 2010-01-08, 22:32   Link #22041
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No one can know everything about the universe around them. Two entities... both thinking that they're all there is. Both that they're the big fish in this pond. Both about to find out that they are gravely mistaken.

A ragtag mercenary ship.

An Enforcer and her aides.

Universes Collide.

Beyond the Edge
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5651895/1/Beyond_the_Edge
A universe is far too large for any organization of beings to be the be-all and end-all. The TSAB is about to find this out first hand.


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Old 2010-01-09, 00:32   Link #22042
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New from TheShinySatashi productions,

Magical Girl Lyrical Vividly!Loli Fanservice


http://www.mediafire.com/?zz3ltjujnom
Join Vivio as she starts her brand new adventure!

Disclaimer: This is a parody work of Vivid by TheShinySword and Satashi.
Vividly is not meant to be taken internally, used as medication, or to treat nosebleeds.
Please stop consuming Vividly if you experience headaches from laughter, long moments wondering why the original wasn't this good, or if you start to agree with Nanoha.
Vividly is not meant to be taken by those who are pregnant or may become pregnant.
In case of emergency, please contact Shiny or Satashi during normal business hours.

(posted here because we rewrote it )
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Old 2010-01-09, 01:32   Link #22043
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I'm glad you liked the line ! Feel free to write a side-story about it if you like, but I don't think that the Logs will turn into a running collaboration . It's tricky enough managing the plot and story arcs with two people, and ever since the plot-bug bit us in the butts we have plans....yes, PLANS we say!
No, no, no. I wasn't trying to butt into your project, I wanted to know if there were more chapters with you two collaborating. Judging by the answer and the helping of goodness later on, I'm going to hazard a guess at yes.

I commented on Vividly over on the image thread, but that too is something I hope gets continued.
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Old 2010-01-09, 01:50   Link #22044
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Here it is again, Draft Version 4.0 Un-beta-ed sneak peek of:
Please, Arrest Me!


Genre: Adventure/action/humor
Pairing(s): Subaru Nakajima/Teana Lanstar
Rating: T
Status: Incomplete/series launch (Feb. 17, 2010)


Spoiler for Please, Arrest Me! ver.4 Draft, un-beta-ed:


Spoiler for Author's Notes:
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Old 2010-01-09, 02:17   Link #22045
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[CENTER]New from TheShinySatashi productions,

Magical Girl Lyrical Vividly!Loli Fanservice

Disclaimer: This is a parody work of Vivid by TheShinySword and Satashi.
Vividly is not meant to be taken internally, used as medication, or to treat nosebleeds.
Please stop consuming Vividly if you experience headaches from laughter, long moments wondering why the original wasn't this good, or if you start to agree with Nanoha.
Vividly is not meant to be taken by those who are pregnant or may become pregnant.
In case of emergency, please contact Shiny or Satashi during normal business hours.

(posted here because we rewrote it )
@w@ It was wonderful~

Panty shots and total destruction!! >w<

I am afraid I might be addicted. Need moar! D: There was nothing in the warning about it being addictiveee ;~;

But yesh, great job
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Old 2010-01-09, 05:45   Link #22046
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This story takes place before Log #3 in the month of January that got skipped . Therefore, this is Log #2.1

And we return to the crack! Although the angst made a surprise appearance at the end , but that's to be expected from RB and me .

Daily Activity Log of Officers F. Testarossa and N. Takamachi

Spoiler for Log #2.1:
Just so you know, I'm following this series :3 ganbatte ne!
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Old 2010-01-09, 08:52   Link #22047
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@ Vividly....

You have NO idea how many times I laughed reading that. Satashi...Shiny...

VERY well done.

@RB didnt you change your avatar twice in a single day? so does that mean

Avatar counter last time: 12 mins? XD

Or does it count that you changed it back?
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Old 2010-01-09, 16:58   Link #22048
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Here it is again, Draft Version 4.0 Un-beta-ed sneak peek of:
Please, Arrest Me!


Genre: Adventure/action/humor
Pairing(s): Subaru Nakajima/Teana Lanstar
Rating: T
Status: Incomplete/series launch (Feb. 17, 2010)


Spoiler for Please, Arrest Me! ver.4 Draft, un-beta-ed:


Spoiler for Author's Notes:
Nanoha as a S.W.A.T. agent?

So you turned that not-serious short into a serious story! It looks like Subaru is already pretty good at blowing things up, and after she gets taught by Nanoha?

Thug: *sees Subaru and immediately drops his weapons* I SURRENDER!
Subaru: I haven't done anything yet!
Thug: I DON'T WANT TO DIE!
Subaru: ....
Nanoha: See, that's how my arrest record is so astronomically high compared to everyone else...
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Old 2010-01-09, 17:02   Link #22049
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Here it is again, Draft Version 4.0 Un-beta-ed sneak peek of:
Please, Arrest Me!


Genre: Adventure/action/humor
Pairing(s): Subaru Nakajima/Teana Lanstar
Rating: T
Status: Incomplete/series launch (Feb. 17, 2010)


Spoiler for Please, Arrest Me! ver.4 Draft, un-beta-ed:


Spoiler for Author's Notes:
Birds of a feather blow things up together?
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Old 2010-01-09, 17:04   Link #22050
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*points to RB* Another change I see :3

After what...2 or 3 days? XD
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Old 2010-01-09, 17:14   Link #22051
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Nanoha as a S.W.A.T. agent?

So you turned that not-serious short into a serious story! It looks like Subaru is already pretty good at blowing things up, and after she gets taught by Nanoha?

Thug: *sees Subaru and immediately drops his weapons* I SURRENDER!
Subaru: I haven't done anything yet!
Thug: I DON'T WANT TO DIE!
Subaru: ....
Nanoha: See, that's how my arrest record is so astronomically high compared to everyone else...
lol XD That was funny!
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Old 2010-01-09, 18:56   Link #22052
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No one can know everything about the universe around them. Two entities... both thinking that they're all there is. Both that they're the big fish in this pond. Both about to find out that they are gravely mistaken.

A ragtag mercenary ship.

An Enforcer and her aides.

Universes Collide.

Beyond the Edge
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5651895/1/Beyond_the_Edge
A universe is far too large for any organization of beings to be the be-all and end-all. The TSAB is about to find this out first hand.


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Read it. Well-done first chapter (except that you misspelled "fervor" in one place) from a "easy to read and understand" standpoint, introducing the new Empire which, one presumes, will be the hostile force.

That said, the problem with this prologue is that it really doesn't tell me anything about the story. I assume from the story summary and the details about the Empire being big on expansionism and conquest that it's going to be "hostile nation encounters TSAB," but not really how that plays out--it could be anything between a series of action-thriller engagements between espionage-type agents (let's face it, the TSAB is big, and if the Empire is itself large, simply flinging itself into a war that might end up being Mutually Assured Destruction isn't too bright...plus you identified Fate and Tea as the main characters), or it might be a sci-fi fleet-battles type of thing, or...well, you get the idea. The addition of the Silver Blur and its crew makes me wonder where they'll come in...I'm mentally channeling any number of rogue-trader variant storylines there...

I find it intriguing that Quicksilver exists, with the same kind of relationship with its master as TSAB Devices have, although you neither confirmed nor denied whether that is an Intelligent Device talking or something else entirely, so I'll try to avoid conclusion-jumping.

However, the first chapter being well-written and enjoyable. I'll simply wait and see what the next one brings. The advantage of serial fiction and all that.

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*points to RB* Another change I see :3

After what...2 or 3 days? XD
Actually, she changed it, then changed it back, and now changed it again. She almost got to 48 hours before that first change, though!!! (Is there a 12-step program for avatar addiction?)
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Old 2010-01-09, 20:51   Link #22053
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My Guardian Angel

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Spoiler for My Guardian Angel: Chapter 2:
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Old 2010-01-09, 20:52   Link #22054
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Section 1 (part 1) of chapter 3:

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Section 2 (part 2) of Chapter 3: [New]

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Old 2010-01-09, 21:09   Link #22055
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Section 2 (part 2) of Chapter 3: [New]

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Oh, boy... Fate, honey, just what do you have in mind if your question is "Do you like to fly"?

And of course, Fate has to go and be a mood killer. I have to admit I'm starting to feel a little bad for Nanoha. She's really trying, and Fate isn't making things easy for her, Knight or not.
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Old 2010-01-09, 22:17   Link #22056
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Actually, she changed it, then changed it back, and now changed it again. She almost got to 48 hours before that first change, though!!! (Is there a 12-step program for avatar addiction?)
She just changed it AGAIN and it wasnt even 4 hours! (I am SO going to get skewered next time she brings me into the dungeon )
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Old 2010-01-09, 22:20   Link #22057
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You guys, I know it's just a gag, but seriously, I'm not in the mood for this at all right now...
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Old 2010-01-09, 22:40   Link #22058
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Uh, yeah, I agree that we don't need to point out her avatar change every single time, especially since this is the fanfiction thread.
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Old 2010-01-09, 22:50   Link #22059
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To break the chain I'll throw this in. I am sure lots of you have already read this, but I am certain some haven't yet. If nothing else it will serve as a new trail starter

Spoiler for I dont know what to call this lolz:
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Old 2010-01-10, 00:21   Link #22060
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I'm starting to get really, REALLY annoyed by anonymous reviewers on FF.Net

*sighs* There goes any sort of good mood I had...

Not that I've had one for the past two weeks.

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