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Old 2004-08-13, 16:20   Link #1
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Smile hobbsy art! ^_^

i hope you like, i messed up the upload (??) i think but you have to download the image to view it:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/9749053/

yaaay my 1st deviation!
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Old 2004-08-13, 20:02   Link #2
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changed it

link may have changed.. dunno but i re uploaded it correctly http://www.deviantart.com/view/9754608/
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Old 2004-08-13, 20:33   Link #3
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That's not bad. I'll point out a couple of things to help you improve though. The first is to remember the head is an oval, whereas you drew the top of her head more like a rectangle. You might also want to give her a more angled jaw, instead of so flat, of course she might look quite so much like a thug then
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Old 2004-08-13, 20:47   Link #4
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I like her style!!
But the hair somehow looks flat. I donīt know how to make it bettre since Iīm no good at drawing hair... Maybe some more shadowing would do it!?
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Old 2004-08-13, 22:58   Link #5
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Oh... My... goodness.

I think I've met a few people like that..... O.o

Anyway, good job!

Her neck is a bit long, though. A basic rule of thumb that I've started using is that the neck's length from the chin to the clavicle is one handwidth... about the distance between one's mouth and nose. The length between where the muscles meet the neck and the chin... that's about half of that... so about the distance between the chin and the lips. I hope that helps!!

EDIT: And, ummm... in the future, you may want to just edit your first post. Double (or more) posting is probably one of the easiest ways to get mods irritated at you.
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Old 2004-08-13, 23:08   Link #6
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hehe soz bout the double post!

also thanks tons for the help! ill get working on it and post some more work soon! by the way a lil warning im not great with colour so i never really add colour in..hehe
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Old 2004-08-13, 23:28   Link #7
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Hm, its ok. Like everyone else said, the head is a little flat. The eye looks a little too far over, might want to try moving it a *little* to the right some more. I find the lines by her mouth make her seem a little old-looking.
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Old 2004-08-14, 10:45   Link #8
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she is ment to look rough
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Old 2004-08-14, 10:57   Link #9
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it may be messy, it may be rough, it may be imperfect, etc... but for sure, it's yours.

you mentioned that you only draw from imagination... my suggestion is (that is, if you want to improve -don't take it if you don't want it)... be an observer and observe people (being a peeping tom is excused). that.. and lot's of practice.

anyways, of your sig... yaoi-ness eh? neat.
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Old 2004-08-14, 11:02   Link #10
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thanks for the advice asura ^_^ also thanks for the advice from the others, forsaken and puffpuff, oh and duke! hehe

i put another 'rough' one up http://www.deviantart.com/view/9770508/
i will put some more work up which is complete but at the mo alot of that is in a big pile with my art folders and stuff. hehe ^_^
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Old 2004-08-14, 11:20   Link #11
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heh, what a good idea... shoving a knife through a head.. looks like you're into gore-ish stuff..neat.
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Old 2004-08-14, 11:34   Link #12
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^_^ i am. even tho i rarely draw it.. im more into wierdness gore-ish. I have some wierd drawing ill upload today but wont be active for a while, as you may know from my new sig ^_^
thanks for the comment again
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