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Old 2010-03-29, 10:00   Link #24021
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@Allquall: Very nice way of finishing off the story, well done.
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Old 2010-03-29, 11:36   Link #24022
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Arcane Heart chapters 23 and 24 are up on ff.net.

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Old 2010-03-29, 13:52   Link #24023
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I'll see what I can come up with. Maybe I can copy and paste my comment from when you first posted it here...
That's really all I ask for
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Old 2010-03-29, 15:46   Link #24024
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That's really all I ask for
But I'm the one who has to dig back through FFT to find my original comments!

Joking, joking. I'll see what I can come up with tonight when I'm out of class.
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Old 2010-03-29, 16:31   Link #24025
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No problem

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*Pokes poor little chapter 2 of Holding Hands which has gotten no reviews in almost 2 months*

... Am I being subtle enough?

... *Hangs head in shame*
It's more like this for most:

*reads Holding Hands*

*brain short-circuits from WAFFy feelings*

Then they navigate away for their own safety
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Old 2010-03-29, 17:27   Link #24026
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Fic

Here, have some fic.

false light
A false light casts a darker Shadow...

Spoiler for false light ~ chapter 01:


Spoiler for author's notes:


It's on fanfiction.net also: click me.
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Old 2010-03-29, 18:28   Link #24027
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Here, have some fic.

Spoiler for false light ~ chapter 01:

Spoiler for Five paragraphs of commentary:


Quote:
Spoiler for author's notes:
One pure ViCia/Shadows nitpick, although this story is obviously set in your own universe and only uses the general concept so it's a nitpick which is easily dismissed with a handwave: Chrono didn't found the Shadows; indeed, it's established that Gil Graham, Chrono's mentor, was a previous director (though not his immediate predecessor) and that was part of what led Chrono down this route. But that's hardly relevant here; I present it more as a clarification if you'd been intending to present a parallel structure.

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It's on fanfiction.net also: click me.
Pardon me while I go put this on Story Alert...

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Old 2010-03-29, 18:41   Link #24028
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Here, have some fic.

Spoiler for false light ~ chapter 01:


I wish I could say more, but...

Simply, my mind. It is blown away. Completely.

Spoiler for author's notes:


Which reminds me, I still need to dish out that one-shot with Celica, Victor, and Lutecia that I promised you awhile back. Sorry for the delay on that...

It's on fanfiction.net also: click me.
Pardon me while I add this to my Favorites...
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Old 2010-03-29, 19:28   Link #24029
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Chapter 16 - Beginnings


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Old 2010-03-29, 20:37   Link #24030
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Well, it kept being pushed aside by other things, but since people wanted it, I have revised and extended Dependence. I removed some things Satashi had a problem with, and wrote a 2nd part of it based on what Kaijo suggested.

Remember, it's lime scented with mature subject matter and a high squick factor.

Spoiler for Dependence:


Sorry again for offending everyone by not considering the feedback. In the future I shall remember to indicate if a fic I post is a toss away or not. Just remember I appreciate and am happy to recieve any and all kinds of feedback.
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Old 2010-03-29, 21:14   Link #24031
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Well, it kept being pushed aside by other things, but since people wanted it, I have revised and extended Dependence. I removed some things Satashi had a problem with, and wrote a 2nd part of it based on what Kaijo suggested.

Remember, it's lime scented with mature subject matter and a high squick factor.

Spoiler for Dependence:
Spoiler for Snip:
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Old 2010-03-29, 22:10   Link #24032
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Here, have some fic.

Spoiler for false light ~ chapter 01:
I just wanted to mention that I've been hooked. I don't have any other comment right now, but I probably will later. (Dezo had my only one - the Artificial Mage term usage issue)
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Old 2010-03-29, 22:52   Link #24033
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Spoiler for Five paragraphs of commentary:


One pure ViCia/Shadows nitpick, although this story is obviously set in your own universe and only uses the general concept so it's a nitpick which is easily dismissed with a handwave: Chrono didn't found the Shadows; indeed, it's established that Gil Graham, Chrono's mentor, was a previous director (though not his immediate predecessor) and that was part of what led Chrono down this route. But that's hardly relevant here; I present it more as a clarification if you'd been intending to present a parallel structure.

Pardon me while I go put this on Story Alert...
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Pardon me while I add this to my Favorites...
Glad you like it.

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I just wanted to mention that I've been hooked. I don't have any other comment right now, but I probably will later. (Dezo had my only one - the Artificial Mage term usage issue)
Perhaps I can go back and tweak it to more closely match canon if I can figure out that the Coldlight sub was wrong and Artificial Mages and Project F aren't two different lines of research.
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Old 2010-03-30, 00:14   Link #24034
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Ah, Auris' clandestine manipulations are much more fun to write ...and the line between her goals and Hayate's gets blurred even more . I took some liberties with the Shadows' ranking structure, but it shouldn't be anything drastically noticeable (I hope ).

Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4 and Part 5 of Crime Never Sleeps...

Crime Never Sleeps
Part 6

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Old 2010-03-30, 00:39   Link #24035
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Damn, Auris is a real bitch.
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Old 2010-03-30, 06:47   Link #24036
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don't worry, quall. we'll only get on your case if it takes you another year for Name of War. No pressure.
Holy crepes on a hill, I hope it won't take a year! My goal is to be done with the lingerers by the end of June. Then, I'll probably be addressing the serious lack of lesbian westerns. You would think that would be a popular genre in fanfiction, but I can't find many even in non-fanfic community! And Nanoha is badass; thus, she needs a western (and by Nanoha, I mean Hayate. She wears a black hat, if you know what I mean).

tl;dr Can I haz a gay girl cowboi, plz?

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@Allquall: Very nice way of finishing off the story, well done.
Thanks, mate!
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Old 2010-03-30, 09:42   Link #24037
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Ah, Auris' clandestine manipulations are much more fun to write ...and the line between her goals and Hayate's gets blurred even more . I took some liberties with the Shadows' ranking structure, but it shouldn't be anything drastically noticeable (I hope ).

Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4 and Part 5 of Crime Never Sleeps...

Crime Never Sleeps
Part 6

Spoiler for Crime Never Sleeps, part 6:
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Auris, you're a bitch. I don't think even death is kind enough for you.
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Old 2010-03-30, 10:14   Link #24038
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Ah, Auris' clandestine manipulations are much more fun to write ...and the line between her goals and Hayate's gets blurred even more . I took some liberties with the Shadows' ranking structure, but it shouldn't be anything drastically noticeable (I hope ).

Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4 and Part 5 of Crime Never Sleeps...

Crime Never Sleeps
Part 6

Spoiler for Crime Never Sleeps, part 6:
I was wondering why every comment had the same line. Now I understand. Auris, you ARE a real bitch. -.-"

But, something that still bothers me is that everything is going according to Auris plans. It's not like Hayate to let so many openings. At least, I think it's not. *scratches head*
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Old 2010-03-30, 10:16   Link #24039
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Holy crepes on a hill, I hope it won't take a year! My goal is to be done with the lingerers by the end of June. Then, I'll probably be addressing the serious lack of lesbian westerns. You would think that would be a popular genre in fanfiction, but I can't find many even in non-fanfic community! And Nanoha is badass; thus, she needs a western (and by Nanoha, I mean Hayate. She wears a black hat, if you know what I mean).

tl;dr Can I haz a gay girl cowboi, plz?


Thanks, mate!
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Old 2010-03-30, 10:56   Link #24040
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Holy crepes on a hill, I hope it won't take a year! My goal is to be done with the lingerers by the end of June. Then, I'll probably be addressing the serious lack of lesbian westerns. You would think that would be a popular genre in fanfiction, but I can't find many even in non-fanfic community! And Nanoha is badass; thus, she needs a western (and by Nanoha, I mean Hayate. She wears a black hat, if you know what I mean).

tl;dr Can I haz a gay girl cowboi, plz?
Bare Breast Mountain?
Broke Back Mounds?
Baby Got Back Mountain?
Gunfighter Girl Whistlin' Nanoha?
The Naughty Half-Dozen?
Gunfight at the Lesbo Corral?
Westward Hoes?
Nanoha Get Your Gun?
Over the Hills and Through the Valleys?

Edit: Page claim for Lesbo cow girls with guns!

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